Comments received on poems by Paul Bell
Sex Addict
Rocky Lagou said:
Erotic and enticing. I love how the refrain is \"as her fingers slid in.\" Probably one of the most hardcore refrains I\'ve ever read. Good job! 😁
February 7th, 2022 13:16
Rocky Lagou said:
Erotic and enticing. I love how the refrain is \"as her fingers slid in.\" Probably one of the most hardcore refrains I\'ve ever read. Good job! 😁
February 7th, 2022 13:16
Calander Girls
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Paul for my first chuckle of the day.
Andy
February 7th, 2022 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Paul for my first chuckle of the day.
Andy
February 7th, 2022 01:33
Calander Girls
Rozina said:
Oh dear! Maybe next year\'s calendar will be better. A good laugh!
February 6th, 2022 05:23
Rozina said:
Oh dear! Maybe next year\'s calendar will be better. A good laugh!
February 6th, 2022 05:23
Assassinated
sorenbarrett said:
Well done,. I was young when it happened and this brought back memories. The ending wrapped it up well by personalizing it and bringing it into the present.
February 5th, 2022 17:21
sorenbarrett said:
Well done,. I was young when it happened and this brought back memories. The ending wrapped it up well by personalizing it and bringing it into the present.
February 5th, 2022 17:21
Love Smoke
Goldfinch60 said:
It is the little things in life that surprise us so much, so often. May that silver lining always be with you.
Andy
February 5th, 2022 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
It is the little things in life that surprise us so much, so often. May that silver lining always be with you.
Andy
February 5th, 2022 01:31
Love Smoke
Rozina said:
Wow. Her face appearing in the 5 smoke rings; and she is the silver lining in the clouds. Wow.
February 4th, 2022 22:53
Rozina said:
Wow. Her face appearing in the 5 smoke rings; and she is the silver lining in the clouds. Wow.
February 4th, 2022 22:53
Love Smoke
Rocky Lagou said:
Lovely poem, I love the line \"It\'s amazing how little things bring you to me.\" It\'s so true, the \"little things\" in life are so often neglected but their impact on the future can be potent. 👍😃
February 4th, 2022 11:23
Rocky Lagou said:
Lovely poem, I love the line \"It\'s amazing how little things bring you to me.\" It\'s so true, the \"little things\" in life are so often neglected but their impact on the future can be potent. 👍😃
February 4th, 2022 11:23
Heaven Sent
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful erotic words Paul. Keep it up. LOL
Andy
February 4th, 2022 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful erotic words Paul. Keep it up. LOL
Andy
February 4th, 2022 01:55
Heaven Sent
Paul Bell said:
For some reason, the site won\'t allow me individual reply\'s, but thanks all for commenting.
February 3rd, 2022 11:18
Paul Bell said:
For some reason, the site won\'t allow me individual reply\'s, but thanks all for commenting.
February 3rd, 2022 11:18
Heaven Sent
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay that was some of the best word play I\'ve seen. \"mother LOAD.\" Oh, you\'re a clever one 😉
February 3rd, 2022 10:06
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay that was some of the best word play I\'ve seen. \"mother LOAD.\" Oh, you\'re a clever one 😉
February 3rd, 2022 10:06
Heaven Sent
L. B. Mek said:
\'he’s hit the spot
Capital G
with love me-nots\'
lol
this be that headrush of intoxicating attraction
maybe even a drop of passion,
fleeting and hollow
it may - be, but years later
when all, is balding
old age spots
and
hunchbacked shuffled steps
these scenes, become
our life\'s trophy memories!
so light that flame
while your fingers, remain steady
your body, thrust\'ingly\' limber
and your Thirst for life, infectious
(a fun read, thanks for sharing
how well you articulate
the distinct, word count
difference
between sex and making love)
February 3rd, 2022 08:41
L. B. Mek said:
\'he’s hit the spot
Capital G
with love me-nots\'
lol
this be that headrush of intoxicating attraction
maybe even a drop of passion,
fleeting and hollow
it may - be, but years later
when all, is balding
old age spots
and
hunchbacked shuffled steps
these scenes, become
our life\'s trophy memories!
so light that flame
while your fingers, remain steady
your body, thrust\'ingly\' limber
and your Thirst for life, infectious
(a fun read, thanks for sharing
how well you articulate
the distinct, word count
difference
between sex and making love)
February 3rd, 2022 08:41
Heaven Sent
dusk arising said:
More tea vicar?
Yep, you certainly cracked it, that\'s the final parts of the art of seduction in poetic form. Really well expressed too.
February 3rd, 2022 06:21
dusk arising said:
More tea vicar?
Yep, you certainly cracked it, that\'s the final parts of the art of seduction in poetic form. Really well expressed too.
February 3rd, 2022 06:21
Got The Tattoo
Rocky Lagou said:
I love the conversational style of this, makes me feel like a stranger witnessing. 💖
February 2nd, 2022 14:14
Rocky Lagou said:
I love the conversational style of this, makes me feel like a stranger witnessing. 💖
February 2nd, 2022 14:14
Got The Tattoo
spilleronsheet said:
This is one so good
A happy ending love tale
Butterflies running in my tummy
So fluttery felt
Very good one dear Paul
I am behind Mek in the line
February 1st, 2022 12:48
spilleronsheet said:
This is one so good
A happy ending love tale
Butterflies running in my tummy
So fluttery felt
Very good one dear Paul
I am behind Mek in the line
February 1st, 2022 12:48
Got The Tattoo
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
when you get your book published, be sure to let me know
I\'ll be first in line, my friend
(metaphorically that is, I\'m a man
so
that whole, \'first in line\' is a bit of a stretch;
but the sentiment
that\'s me being 100% and wholeheartedly, sincere!)
lol
February 1st, 2022 07:01
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
when you get your book published, be sure to let me know
I\'ll be first in line, my friend
(metaphorically that is, I\'m a man
so
that whole, \'first in line\' is a bit of a stretch;
but the sentiment
that\'s me being 100% and wholeheartedly, sincere!)
lol
February 1st, 2022 07:01
The Sleepy Hollow
spilleronsheet said:
This was too deep and teary
Totally the emotions of breaking is heart wrenching
And those for the kids even more
January 30th, 2022 13:06
spilleronsheet said:
This was too deep and teary
Totally the emotions of breaking is heart wrenching
And those for the kids even more
January 30th, 2022 13:06
The Sleepy Hollow
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
A heartbreaking write Paul. Divorce is hardest on children😢 I remember it,and I\'m living proof.🍻✌️🕊
January 30th, 2022 11:45
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
A heartbreaking write Paul. Divorce is hardest on children😢 I remember it,and I\'m living proof.🍻✌️🕊
January 30th, 2022 11:45
Assassinated
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Paul, these tragedies of the past are still brought to our minds.
Andy
January 30th, 2022 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Paul, these tragedies of the past are still brought to our minds.
Andy
January 30th, 2022 01:27
Assassinated
spilleronsheet said:
So well penned
Felt like reading thriller novel
Maybe entered the Baker Street
Voila will Sherlock appear….well crafted dear Paul…so vivid
January 29th, 2022 12:15
spilleronsheet said:
So well penned
Felt like reading thriller novel
Maybe entered the Baker Street
Voila will Sherlock appear….well crafted dear Paul…so vivid
January 29th, 2022 12:15
Assassinated
MDStone said:
Brilliantly written for the present to remind us of a significant time past.
January 29th, 2022 09:11
MDStone said:
Brilliantly written for the present to remind us of a significant time past.
January 29th, 2022 09:11
Assassinated
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
So true Paul. And it seems like Kennedy and John Lennon are the two most popular when it comes to those two questions. Good write today🍻✌️
January 29th, 2022 08:34
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
So true Paul. And it seems like Kennedy and John Lennon are the two most popular when it comes to those two questions. Good write today🍻✌️
January 29th, 2022 08:34
Assassinated
Rozina said:
This is so true - when Kennedy and other famous people were killed, that question came up - where were you, what were you doing at the time? Unforgettable events. A vivid scene with the newspaper in the wind.
January 29th, 2022 08:13
Rozina said:
This is so true - when Kennedy and other famous people were killed, that question came up - where were you, what were you doing at the time? Unforgettable events. A vivid scene with the newspaper in the wind.
January 29th, 2022 08:13
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