Comments received on poems by Cheyenne Smith
A Dysfunctional Spider Web
Thoughtless said:
It is a hard road to hoe, as we say here in the States.
Once, a philosophy professor remarked, \"To eighteen, it\'s uphill and downhill after that.\" That can apply to life and love.
March 12th, 2024 17:00
Thoughtless said:
It is a hard road to hoe, as we say here in the States.
Once, a philosophy professor remarked, \"To eighteen, it\'s uphill and downhill after that.\" That can apply to life and love.
March 12th, 2024 17:00
The Rainbow in the Sky 🌈
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
To stand out and be seen like the rainbow with a nice light .
Nice writing
Especially like these lines
My life used to be like an immense rainstorm until I helped it become an angelic rainbow in a sublime blue sky
March 8th, 2023 13:03
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
To stand out and be seen like the rainbow with a nice light .
Nice writing
Especially like these lines
My life used to be like an immense rainstorm until I helped it become an angelic rainbow in a sublime blue sky
March 8th, 2023 13:03
I Will Win This War
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
This is something I can relate to. Well written. From the heart and real. Thank you for sharing.
June 24th, 2022 11:32
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
This is something I can relate to. Well written. From the heart and real. Thank you for sharing.
June 24th, 2022 11:32
Easier Said Than Done
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow I love this piece! I totally understand where you\'re coming from. The doubt and feeling like an outcast is very relatable. 💖
February 17th, 2022 12:06
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow I love this piece! I totally understand where you\'re coming from. The doubt and feeling like an outcast is very relatable. 💖
February 17th, 2022 12:06
Live To Die
L. B. Mek said:
questing for the right questions
is the first step, in gripping
a threshold moment
to those corridors, of life
where you\'re not just, walking
towards a bleak horizon
introspection
sheds light, upon our mind\'s darkest
thought\'s
and by doing-so, gifts us an opportunity
to find that glint of hope
buried, beneath our shadows
of doubt..
so question! and pave your life\' path
to impenetrable: Worth!
\'sing loud: sing proud!\'
Fight, fight for your rewards
in this fleetingly, wondrous life
you\'re, currently sleep walking
through...
February 4th, 2022 06:54
L. B. Mek said:
questing for the right questions
is the first step, in gripping
a threshold moment
to those corridors, of life
where you\'re not just, walking
towards a bleak horizon
introspection
sheds light, upon our mind\'s darkest
thought\'s
and by doing-so, gifts us an opportunity
to find that glint of hope
buried, beneath our shadows
of doubt..
so question! and pave your life\' path
to impenetrable: Worth!
\'sing loud: sing proud!\'
Fight, fight for your rewards
in this fleetingly, wondrous life
you\'re, currently sleep walking
through...
February 4th, 2022 06:54
Battling the Hurricane
Goldfinch60 said:
That rainbow will be there but when ever you are helping others you must always have time for yourself as that is where your strength will come from to help you help others. Those moments for yourself are so very precious in your life.
Andy
January 23rd, 2022 05:04
Goldfinch60 said:
That rainbow will be there but when ever you are helping others you must always have time for yourself as that is where your strength will come from to help you help others. Those moments for yourself are so very precious in your life.
Andy
January 23rd, 2022 05:04
Battling the Hurricane
pearlsofdew22 said:
Beautiful words, focus on the rainbow at the end of the tunnel , keep writing x
January 23rd, 2022 04:43
pearlsofdew22 said:
Beautiful words, focus on the rainbow at the end of the tunnel , keep writing x
January 23rd, 2022 04:43
Agree To Disagree
L. B. Mek said:
really well thought out
and insightfully argued,
thanks for sharing such a positive message
December 13th, 2021 04:11
L. B. Mek said:
really well thought out
and insightfully argued,
thanks for sharing such a positive message
December 13th, 2021 04:11
Sparkly Fairy Dust
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Not everybody has to agree or even like each other … but that doesn’t mean we have to be unkind .
Nice words .. here 🙂 we all need peace but sometimes theirs so much conflict between people … and unkindness
November 29th, 2021 02:22
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Not everybody has to agree or even like each other … but that doesn’t mean we have to be unkind .
Nice words .. here 🙂 we all need peace but sometimes theirs so much conflict between people … and unkindness
November 29th, 2021 02:22
Sparkly Fairy Dust
spilleronsheet said:
Nice one dear writer
The intriguing questions
And the much needed oozing out positivity
Well said dear poet
Really liked the ending lines
November 28th, 2021 11:54
spilleronsheet said:
Nice one dear writer
The intriguing questions
And the much needed oozing out positivity
Well said dear poet
Really liked the ending lines
November 28th, 2021 11:54
We Were Only Youths
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that one day you will have that glass of champagne together Chyenne.
Andy
November 23rd, 2021 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that one day you will have that glass of champagne together Chyenne.
Andy
November 23rd, 2021 02:21
We Were Only Youths
spilleronsheet said:
This poetry of yours
Paints a scene of mine
Had a soul who was never apart
Yet we departed on our own ways
Dear poet your starting lines with the tooth decay touched me inside
Well crafted dear poet
November 22nd, 2021 08:16
spilleronsheet said:
This poetry of yours
Paints a scene of mine
Had a soul who was never apart
Yet we departed on our own ways
Dear poet your starting lines with the tooth decay touched me inside
Well crafted dear poet
November 22nd, 2021 08:16
We Were Only Youths
L. B. Mek said:
\'Full of a high level of ignorance
We were only youths
We also were showing a large amount of innocence
Towards the end came many home truths
You know they say that ignorance is bliss
What we did have is something I tend to reminisce\'
such a relatable depiction, of friendship\'s fleeting connections..
a great read, thanks for sharing
(there is a song by the eternally iridescent Aaliyah, titled
\'I miss you\'
and while, her lyrics - lend
to friendship, entwined
within youthful love,
I can\'t help but relate
that same
intensity of longing, for a connection
that was once, everything
in your life;
something I empathise with
far, too easily
for it, to be healthy)
November 22nd, 2021 08:02
L. B. Mek said:
\'Full of a high level of ignorance
We were only youths
We also were showing a large amount of innocence
Towards the end came many home truths
You know they say that ignorance is bliss
What we did have is something I tend to reminisce\'
such a relatable depiction, of friendship\'s fleeting connections..
a great read, thanks for sharing
(there is a song by the eternally iridescent Aaliyah, titled
\'I miss you\'
and while, her lyrics - lend
to friendship, entwined
within youthful love,
I can\'t help but relate
that same
intensity of longing, for a connection
that was once, everything
in your life;
something I empathise with
far, too easily
for it, to be healthy)
November 22nd, 2021 08:02
Climbing the Mountains
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong words Cheyenne, in life you should never give up as your life is before you, it will have it s ups and downs but the ups far outweigh the downs. Life is wonderful.
Andy
November 20th, 2021 03:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong words Cheyenne, in life you should never give up as your life is before you, it will have it s ups and downs but the ups far outweigh the downs. Life is wonderful.
Andy
November 20th, 2021 03:16
A New Chapter
Goldfinch60 said:
May that happiness gleam forever Cheyenne.
https://youtu.be/T9Jcs45GhxU
Andy
November 20th, 2021 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
May that happiness gleam forever Cheyenne.
https://youtu.be/T9Jcs45GhxU
Andy
November 20th, 2021 01:53
A Feeling of Betrayal
spilleronsheet said:
Powerful message…a pain of betrayal unfortunately lasts long…hope nobody breaks your trust anymore…best of luck dear poet…
November 12th, 2021 13:32
spilleronsheet said:
Powerful message…a pain of betrayal unfortunately lasts long…hope nobody breaks your trust anymore…best of luck dear poet…
November 12th, 2021 13:32
A Feeling of Betrayal
L. B. Mek said:
manners and respect?
been a long time since I heard those words: enough said!
November 12th, 2021 06:15
L. B. Mek said:
manners and respect?
been a long time since I heard those words: enough said!
November 12th, 2021 06:15
Sparkling Passion
L. B. Mek said:
reads like a wonderfully sincere dedication, maybe for an anniversary or some other memorable occasion..
thanks for sharing
November 12th, 2021 05:16
L. B. Mek said:
reads like a wonderfully sincere dedication, maybe for an anniversary or some other memorable occasion..
thanks for sharing
November 12th, 2021 05:16
Rose Tinted Shades
spilleronsheet said:
Well the line resonates
And so true my dear friend
I am happy you could come out
Cause it’s hellish with such thoughts
The pressure shaped the carbon created a rare diamond
And that diamond is you dear poet
November 9th, 2021 13:27
spilleronsheet said:
Well the line resonates
And so true my dear friend
I am happy you could come out
Cause it’s hellish with such thoughts
The pressure shaped the carbon created a rare diamond
And that diamond is you dear poet
November 9th, 2021 13:27
Rose Tinted Shades
Paul Bell said:
I actually think if you thrust a child into this consumer, tech world, you start from an insane point of view.
At some point we all find our path, good or bad.
November 9th, 2021 05:47
Paul Bell said:
I actually think if you thrust a child into this consumer, tech world, you start from an insane point of view.
At some point we all find our path, good or bad.
November 9th, 2021 05:47
🔥 The Eternal Flame 🔥
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Timeless. Just as the memory it commemorates. Well sculptured, from the heart. Thank you.
November 3rd, 2021 05:03
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Timeless. Just as the memory it commemorates. Well sculptured, from the heart. Thank you.
November 3rd, 2021 05:03
🔥 The Eternal Flame 🔥
spilleronsheet said:
How well you expressed the past with a remember ace of true accord and at the same time inspired
So true eternal flame shall never extinguish
November 3rd, 2021 02:33
spilleronsheet said:
How well you expressed the past with a remember ace of true accord and at the same time inspired
So true eternal flame shall never extinguish
November 3rd, 2021 02:33
🔥 The Eternal Flame 🔥
Goldfinch60 said:
That eternal flame will be alight forever in the minds of those who remember that sad day.
Fine words Cheyenne.
Andy
November 3rd, 2021 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
That eternal flame will be alight forever in the minds of those who remember that sad day.
Fine words Cheyenne.
Andy
November 3rd, 2021 01:54
Dreaming
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Cheyenne, smiling can be contagious, if we smile at people and they smile back it could bring the world to a wonderful place.
Andy
https://youtu.be/ZhAh2SppdMk
November 3rd, 2021 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Cheyenne, smiling can be contagious, if we smile at people and they smile back it could bring the world to a wonderful place.
Andy
https://youtu.be/ZhAh2SppdMk
November 3rd, 2021 01:24
Dreaming
spilleronsheet said:
Every line gives me hope
Thank you dear poet
Loved these lines of your -
“I aspire to inspire
Helping people to believe they are more precious than sapphire
Zero-knowledge of what lies ahead
My next chapter is still unread
Currently, it feels like you’re trapped in a trial
If you walk around with a smile
You’ll surpass that mile
The wait will be worthwhile”
Such a beautiful message
I aspire to inspire and I truly hope the wait will be worthwhile
Finally the patience will bear the sweetest fruits beside
November 2nd, 2021 09:29
spilleronsheet said:
Every line gives me hope
Thank you dear poet
Loved these lines of your -
“I aspire to inspire
Helping people to believe they are more precious than sapphire
Zero-knowledge of what lies ahead
My next chapter is still unread
Currently, it feels like you’re trapped in a trial
If you walk around with a smile
You’ll surpass that mile
The wait will be worthwhile”
Such a beautiful message
I aspire to inspire and I truly hope the wait will be worthwhile
Finally the patience will bear the sweetest fruits beside
November 2nd, 2021 09:29
Dreaming
dusk arising said:
Don\'t rush away from now, this moment. It\'s precious and will take you to tomorrow anyway.
November 2nd, 2021 06:17
dusk arising said:
Don\'t rush away from now, this moment. It\'s precious and will take you to tomorrow anyway.
November 2nd, 2021 06:17
Dreaming
L. B. Mek said:
love the positivity, such an invigorating read!
thanks for sharing
November 2nd, 2021 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
love the positivity, such an invigorating read!
thanks for sharing
November 2nd, 2021 05:37
Believe 💫
Goldfinch60 said:
That grey cloud has been dispersed and your strength has brought light to you life that will always be with you Cheyanne.
Andy
November 1st, 2021 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
That grey cloud has been dispersed and your strength has brought light to you life that will always be with you Cheyanne.
Andy
November 1st, 2021 00:49
Believe 💫
dusk arising said:
Welcome out from under that cloud to the world of living life\'s reality. Plenty would live your life for you with their expectations and boundaries they wish to ensnare you with. Step away - you are a child of the universe and as individual as every star in the night sky.... shine, shine with all the light you can find in yourself.
November 1st, 2021 00:00
dusk arising said:
Welcome out from under that cloud to the world of living life\'s reality. Plenty would live your life for you with their expectations and boundaries they wish to ensnare you with. Step away - you are a child of the universe and as individual as every star in the night sky.... shine, shine with all the light you can find in yourself.
November 1st, 2021 00:00
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