Comments received on poems by Garth Rakumakoe
Self-estranged Commoners
James Alexander said:
Truthful insight of today\'s society. Trust used to be a given along with civility. Picked up many a stranded traveler in my youth without apprehension. Well done.
November 9th, 2021 10:23
James Alexander said:
Truthful insight of today\'s society. Trust used to be a given along with civility. Picked up many a stranded traveler in my youth without apprehension. Well done.
November 9th, 2021 10:23
The Fallen Birds Of Jamaica Bay
Paul Bell said:
Is there nothing man won\'t consume.
Got a feeling, Mother nature is getting a bit sick of us now.
November 8th, 2021 13:03
Paul Bell said:
Is there nothing man won\'t consume.
Got a feeling, Mother nature is getting a bit sick of us now.
November 8th, 2021 13:03
The Fallen Birds Of Jamaica Bay
L. B. Mek said:
an important write!
anything to reduce
our custom built cocoon of indifference
is a welcome, opportunity for personal growth
for those, who take the opportunity to heed
the wisdom in such insightful, poetry..
thank you! for choosing to share dear poet
November 8th, 2021 07:41
L. B. Mek said:
an important write!
anything to reduce
our custom built cocoon of indifference
is a welcome, opportunity for personal growth
for those, who take the opportunity to heed
the wisdom in such insightful, poetry..
thank you! for choosing to share dear poet
November 8th, 2021 07:41
The Fallen Birds Of Jamaica Bay
dusk arising said:
A sad tale indeed. But there\'s a message one can read apart from the obvious one.
The birds will not learn as a species to avoid flight paths, they will persist in their instinctive behaviour and perish, maybe to extinction.
Let us apply that to humanity and it\'s environment dilemma. Shall we learn and adapt or pursue our greedy instinct to it\'s inevitable end?
November 8th, 2021 07:35
dusk arising said:
A sad tale indeed. But there\'s a message one can read apart from the obvious one.
The birds will not learn as a species to avoid flight paths, they will persist in their instinctive behaviour and perish, maybe to extinction.
Let us apply that to humanity and it\'s environment dilemma. Shall we learn and adapt or pursue our greedy instinct to it\'s inevitable end?
November 8th, 2021 07:35
The Fallen Birds Of Jamaica Bay
Lorna said:
I don\'t think we\'re long for this world so it will heal without us...........Chernobyl did...... the animals are thriving in spite of radiation. Your poem is beautifully done.....
November 8th, 2021 05:46
Lorna said:
I don\'t think we\'re long for this world so it will heal without us...........Chernobyl did...... the animals are thriving in spite of radiation. Your poem is beautifully done.....
November 8th, 2021 05:46
The Fallen Birds Of Jamaica Bay
orchidee said:
A Case of \'All is OK, until man turns up and mucks it up\' Doh!
November 8th, 2021 05:32
orchidee said:
A Case of \'All is OK, until man turns up and mucks it up\' Doh!
November 8th, 2021 05:32
Fortitude
SharonMoemise said:
The sensory details in the imagery brings your works to life, Garth. Wonderfully done. I can almost feel the chaos erupting as you describe it. The makings of a great poet. Keep it up 👌👌
November 7th, 2021 11:51
SharonMoemise said:
The sensory details in the imagery brings your works to life, Garth. Wonderfully done. I can almost feel the chaos erupting as you describe it. The makings of a great poet. Keep it up 👌👌
November 7th, 2021 11:51
A Morning In Autumn
SharonMoemise said:
Refreshing! I love how you capture the scenery, the feeling ...I think I\'d like to go on that walk on a Morning in Autumn. Great writing.
November 7th, 2021 11:40
SharonMoemise said:
Refreshing! I love how you capture the scenery, the feeling ...I think I\'d like to go on that walk on a Morning in Autumn. Great writing.
November 7th, 2021 11:40
Dear Music
SharonMoemise said:
An absolutely stunning piece, Garth. Your love for music is evident in the way you penned this piece, and your love for poetry is shown in the way your words just flow through this piece...From the soul.
November 7th, 2021 11:35
SharonMoemise said:
An absolutely stunning piece, Garth. Your love for music is evident in the way you penned this piece, and your love for poetry is shown in the way your words just flow through this piece...From the soul.
November 7th, 2021 11:35
Fortitude
Eugene S. said:
Wow! Truly epic with depth and beautiful prose. I can hear it spoken as an opening to a great story. Well done!
November 7th, 2021 10:22
Eugene S. said:
Wow! Truly epic with depth and beautiful prose. I can hear it spoken as an opening to a great story. Well done!
November 7th, 2021 10:22
A Morning In Autumn
Lorna said:
Loved this walk....... I could smell the crisp air.
November 6th, 2021 09:30
Lorna said:
Loved this walk....... I could smell the crisp air.
November 6th, 2021 09:30
A Morning In Autumn
Caring dove said:
Such a beautiful read 🙂 love this … nicely expressed
November 6th, 2021 03:23
Caring dove said:
Such a beautiful read 🙂 love this … nicely expressed
November 6th, 2021 03:23
A Morning In Autumn
Paul Bell said:
Always think autumn is telling us to prepare. It sure is slow down time of year, and maybe reflection time. The colours are marvellous, mind you.
November 5th, 2021 12:37
Paul Bell said:
Always think autumn is telling us to prepare. It sure is slow down time of year, and maybe reflection time. The colours are marvellous, mind you.
November 5th, 2021 12:37
A Morning In Autumn
Fay Slimm. said:
Autumn compared with care from a loved one - what could be better and you phrase it so well Garth - thank you for sharing.
November 5th, 2021 09:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Autumn compared with care from a loved one - what could be better and you phrase it so well Garth - thank you for sharing.
November 5th, 2021 09:12
A Morning In Autumn
Saxon Crow said:
Really enjoyed this Garth. What a nice walk to go on. Faved
November 5th, 2021 08:51
Saxon Crow said:
Really enjoyed this Garth. What a nice walk to go on. Faved
November 5th, 2021 08:51
Self-estranged Commoners
Paul Bell said:
I think the last trust was the Police.
That basically leaves no one now.
November 4th, 2021 09:14
Paul Bell said:
I think the last trust was the Police.
That basically leaves no one now.
November 4th, 2021 09:14
Self-estranged Commoners
L. B. Mek said:
\'self-estranged\'
what a brilliant wording of introspection excavated, meaning
identifying those self-impeding, traits
that go-on, to warp and curate
our as-yet, unwritten fate...
(Brilliant!
thanks for choosing to share)
November 4th, 2021 05:11
L. B. Mek said:
\'self-estranged\'
what a brilliant wording of introspection excavated, meaning
identifying those self-impeding, traits
that go-on, to warp and curate
our as-yet, unwritten fate...
(Brilliant!
thanks for choosing to share)
November 4th, 2021 05:11
Self-estranged Commoners
Goldfinch60 said:
There is a great deal of truth in your words Garth, it is such a shame that trust is becoming eroded from our lives.
Andy
November 4th, 2021 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
There is a great deal of truth in your words Garth, it is such a shame that trust is becoming eroded from our lives.
Andy
November 4th, 2021 02:23
Dear Music
Paul Bell said:
No music, no life, though I think this poem takes us on a deeper journey.
You have a rare gift for words.
November 3rd, 2021 13:06
Paul Bell said:
No music, no life, though I think this poem takes us on a deeper journey.
You have a rare gift for words.
November 3rd, 2021 13:06
Out Of This World
Neville said:
Phew ... hotter than a supernova .. dont let Mr. O anywhere near this page ........................................ N
November 3rd, 2021 09:32
Neville said:
Phew ... hotter than a supernova .. dont let Mr. O anywhere near this page ........................................ N
November 3rd, 2021 09:32
Dear Music
Neville said:
A very impressive poem my new found literary friend & a super introduction to your poetic portfolio .. I feel sure I shall be lured back to future posts ... Neville
November 3rd, 2021 08:59
Neville said:
A very impressive poem my new found literary friend & a super introduction to your poetic portfolio .. I feel sure I shall be lured back to future posts ... Neville
November 3rd, 2021 08:59
I Wrote Of You
SharonMoemise said:
Love your writing style. Carefree, yet deep. It makes one want to read more. Very well written :-)
November 3rd, 2021 04:23
SharonMoemise said:
Love your writing style. Carefree, yet deep. It makes one want to read more. Very well written :-)
November 3rd, 2021 04:23
Out Of This World
dusk arising said:
TGhe beauty of love at day\'s beginning. Sustenance.
October 30th, 2021 00:21
dusk arising said:
TGhe beauty of love at day\'s beginning. Sustenance.
October 30th, 2021 00:21
I Wrote Of You
L. B. Mek said:
we must dream, to find our aim
we must aim, so as to aspire
then maybe, Hope: may finally deliver...
thanks for sharing
October 29th, 2021 06:05
L. B. Mek said:
we must dream, to find our aim
we must aim, so as to aspire
then maybe, Hope: may finally deliver...
thanks for sharing
October 29th, 2021 06:05
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