Love Is A Language
L. B. Mek said:

\'for written by many
yet felt by the few, love\'..
how well these lines encapsulate
the discord
between our poetic portrayal, of love
and the real thing, that few of us
get to experience..
so much passion, you invoke
utilising such accessible wording..
a great read!
thank you for choosing to share
dear empathetic Poet
(sorry but I have been missing your posts lately
so had to trace back and read your last few..
hope you don\'t mind)

March 3rd, 2022 04:14

Tree Of Identity
L. B. Mek said:

... to walk upon
and pave a path, of your own!
(these reads so, sincere
I can relate to having a duality of faith
in one household
where cultural traditions, sit
like stranded water
on that oil of structured religion..
a great write! and really like these lines:)
\'your words I hear there’s no need
to scold I’m a deep thinker that feels
how such empty miseducated portraits
yearn for newly educated souls\'


March 3rd, 2022 04:01

Love Is A Language
Vamsi Sudha said:

What a beautiful feel of the poem !! love is the only language your pot plant knows

Lovely poem !!

March 2nd, 2022 00:30

Love Is A Language
Caring dove said:

Really like this ! Lovely poem ))

March 1st, 2022 15:57

Need I?
AuburnScribbler said:

This poem is masterfully constructed Garth, the flow is very much like the journey going through the streets.

I\'ve always thought that the most precious commodity a human can possess, is time, not money, thus, your poem is a clear reminder for all of us; to treasure time more.

Bravo, and I hope that all is well!

February 14th, 2022 12:22

Need I?
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

An interesting poem well written and i liked the first stanza and your word choice rhrou. Kudos!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

And
Happy valentines day, poets.

February 14th, 2022 06:00

Need I?
Rozina said:

Wow! You are right. Time is flying past so every moment is precious. Powerful message.

February 12th, 2022 22:16

Need I?
Paul Bell said:

The black Mariah in Britain is slightly different. I recall being chased by the black Mariah, and they were always driven by the police. You never wanted to be caught by the black Mariah police.

February 12th, 2022 07:17

Tree Of Identity
Rozina said:

Great lines indeed.

February 9th, 2022 05:41

Tree Of Identity
Rocky Lagou said:

Wow. Great poem! Identity is such an elusive thing for some people and it could be hard to get a grip on it. Nicely written!

February 8th, 2022 13:59

I Need A Light
Poetic Dan said:

I loved this more than you\'ll ever know as I try to go down to 0.30g a day! Well at least in every roll...again such brilliance

January 8th, 2022 12:32

I Need A Light
Caring dove said:

I like your poems

I like how you have expressed yourself . Sometimes all we want to do is be that light .. when we are not .. and sometimes we simply are that light for ourselves and others 🙂

A great poem ))

January 8th, 2022 03:25

I Need A Light
A Boy With Roses said:

\"Better yet, strike me a match
for my wayward ways
Bring me to my knees
by candle light, that I may heed\"
♥

January 7th, 2022 15:14

Sittin\' On The Dock Of The Bay
spilleronsheet said:

The apt words for a beautiful portrait
So well stringed and crafted
Thanks for sharing dear poet

January 7th, 2022 01:56

Sittin\' On The Dock Of The Bay
Paul Bell said:

Sad reflective write.
It\'s strange how water can bring such emotion to the fore. Maybe it\'s the journey the water senses in us.
Good place to be, mind you, and the song ain\'t half bad.

January 6th, 2022 14:11