Comments received on poems by Garth Rakumakoe
From My Bubble, Many A Time
Rozina said:
Really enjoyed your poem. It\'s very relatable.
May 15th, 2022 20:38
Rozina said:
Really enjoyed your poem. It\'s very relatable.
May 15th, 2022 20:38
From My Bubble, Many A Time
Caring dove said:
I really like your writing Garth 🙂 it really can be difficult to remain calm sometimes .. with certain people but we can learn it I guess . And sometimes the best thing we can do with certain people or show them that we’re still kind . You sound a bit like an empath.. and sensitive , something I can relate to
Great writing so nicely expressed
May 15th, 2022 08:54
Caring dove said:
I really like your writing Garth 🙂 it really can be difficult to remain calm sometimes .. with certain people but we can learn it I guess . And sometimes the best thing we can do with certain people or show them that we’re still kind . You sound a bit like an empath.. and sensitive , something I can relate to
Great writing so nicely expressed
May 15th, 2022 08:54
Dry Red
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Oh thank you so very much, Sharon. I am deeply humbled. Please accept my gratitude. 😇🙏
April 26th, 2022 16:17
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Oh thank you so very much, Sharon. I am deeply humbled. Please accept my gratitude. 😇🙏
April 26th, 2022 16:17
Dry Red
SharonMoemise said:
Your ability to express yourself never ceases to amaze. In every poem you\'ve published here, I tend to lose myself in the subtlety and almost profound way you have of describing even the simplest of things that immediately translates to beauty. I am a fan of your work.
April 25th, 2022 05:11
SharonMoemise said:
Your ability to express yourself never ceases to amaze. In every poem you\'ve published here, I tend to lose myself in the subtlety and almost profound way you have of describing even the simplest of things that immediately translates to beauty. I am a fan of your work.
April 25th, 2022 05:11
Dry Red
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I am well and safe vb. I hope the same for you. Thank you so very much for the kind visit. It is much appreciated 🙏.
April 22nd, 2022 15:11
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I am well and safe vb. I hope the same for you. Thank you so very much for the kind visit. It is much appreciated 🙏.
April 22nd, 2022 15:11
Dry Red
Caring dove said:
Just amazing .. beautifully expressed 🙂🙂 really one of my favourites from you . I hope your ok . Take care
April 22nd, 2022 15:04
Caring dove said:
Just amazing .. beautifully expressed 🙂🙂 really one of my favourites from you . I hope your ok . Take care
April 22nd, 2022 15:04
Dry Red
Rocky Lagou said:
Hey! This is a glorious display. Been missing you on MPS not gonna lie. I\'ll be real with you, you truly have a marvelous poetic capacity that\'s unqiue to you. The poem \"Tree of Identity\" was just one of the many that got me hooked to your wonders. In this particular one I really enjoy your shrewd wording, you honestly have a large vocab. I feel music could be an underlying theme, and love is at the surface of your words. Very well done!
April 22nd, 2022 12:16
Rocky Lagou said:
Hey! This is a glorious display. Been missing you on MPS not gonna lie. I\'ll be real with you, you truly have a marvelous poetic capacity that\'s unqiue to you. The poem \"Tree of Identity\" was just one of the many that got me hooked to your wonders. In this particular one I really enjoy your shrewd wording, you honestly have a large vocab. I feel music could be an underlying theme, and love is at the surface of your words. Very well done!
April 22nd, 2022 12:16
Who Among Us?
dean langmuir said:
Nice write,I think mother earths heart is broke alittle,certainly dissapointed in our ways,thanks ,take care
March 20th, 2022 19:26
dean langmuir said:
Nice write,I think mother earths heart is broke alittle,certainly dissapointed in our ways,thanks ,take care
March 20th, 2022 19:26
Dry Red
sophin said:
a great work...seems to track an adventure across a land that exists on the other side of dreams...i wish i could express my appreciation for this poem in other ways than these, but i cannot find the right words. thank you for sharing.
March 19th, 2022 20:31
sophin said:
a great work...seems to track an adventure across a land that exists on the other side of dreams...i wish i could express my appreciation for this poem in other ways than these, but i cannot find the right words. thank you for sharing.
March 19th, 2022 20:31
Love Is A Language
L. B. Mek said:
\'for written by many
yet felt by the few, love\'..
how well these lines encapsulate
the discord
between our poetic portrayal, of love
and the real thing, that few of us
get to experience..
so much passion, you invoke
utilising such accessible wording..
a great read!
thank you for choosing to share
dear empathetic Poet
(sorry but I have been missing your posts lately
so had to trace back and read your last few..
hope you don\'t mind)
March 3rd, 2022 04:14
L. B. Mek said:
\'for written by many
yet felt by the few, love\'..
how well these lines encapsulate
the discord
between our poetic portrayal, of love
and the real thing, that few of us
get to experience..
so much passion, you invoke
utilising such accessible wording..
a great read!
thank you for choosing to share
dear empathetic Poet
(sorry but I have been missing your posts lately
so had to trace back and read your last few..
hope you don\'t mind)
March 3rd, 2022 04:14
Need I?
L. B. Mek said:
so well written!
Empathy and wisdom
distilled, relatable
with such poetic integrity..
Brilliant!
March 3rd, 2022 04:05
L. B. Mek said:
so well written!
Empathy and wisdom
distilled, relatable
with such poetic integrity..
Brilliant!
March 3rd, 2022 04:05
Tree Of Identity
L. B. Mek said:
... to walk upon
and pave a path, of your own!
(these reads so, sincere
I can relate to having a duality of faith
in one household
where cultural traditions, sit
like stranded water
on that oil of structured religion..
a great write! and really like these lines:)
\'your words I hear there’s no need
to scold I’m a deep thinker that feels
how such empty miseducated portraits
yearn for newly educated souls\'
March 3rd, 2022 04:01
L. B. Mek said:
... to walk upon
and pave a path, of your own!
(these reads so, sincere
I can relate to having a duality of faith
in one household
where cultural traditions, sit
like stranded water
on that oil of structured religion..
a great write! and really like these lines:)
\'your words I hear there’s no need
to scold I’m a deep thinker that feels
how such empty miseducated portraits
yearn for newly educated souls\'
March 3rd, 2022 04:01
Love Is A Language
Vamsi Sudha said:
What a beautiful feel of the poem !! love is the only language your pot plant knows
Lovely poem !!
March 2nd, 2022 00:30
Vamsi Sudha said:
What a beautiful feel of the poem !! love is the only language your pot plant knows
Lovely poem !!
March 2nd, 2022 00:30
Love Is A Language
Rozina said:
Yes so true. I speak to my plants everyday! They’re doing pretty well!
March 1st, 2022 18:24
Rozina said:
Yes so true. I speak to my plants everyday! They’re doing pretty well!
March 1st, 2022 18:24
Need I?
SharonMoemise said:
Very well written, Garth. To be able to find enlightenment in a poem so sad, makes this a great read, penned with even greater skill. Well done, sir
February 17th, 2022 08:26
SharonMoemise said:
Very well written, Garth. To be able to find enlightenment in a poem so sad, makes this a great read, penned with even greater skill. Well done, sir
February 17th, 2022 08:26
Need I?
AuburnScribbler said:
This poem is masterfully constructed Garth, the flow is very much like the journey going through the streets.
I\'ve always thought that the most precious commodity a human can possess, is time, not money, thus, your poem is a clear reminder for all of us; to treasure time more.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
February 14th, 2022 12:22
AuburnScribbler said:
This poem is masterfully constructed Garth, the flow is very much like the journey going through the streets.
I\'ve always thought that the most precious commodity a human can possess, is time, not money, thus, your poem is a clear reminder for all of us; to treasure time more.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
February 14th, 2022 12:22
Need I?
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. This was written so elegantly. “It’s better to lose one minute of your life than your life in one minute\" Time is often neglected and we don\'t cherish life as much as we ought to. After the passing of my mother I learned to appreciate every aspect of life more. Bravo to you Garth! 👍💖
February 14th, 2022 09:42
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. This was written so elegantly. “It’s better to lose one minute of your life than your life in one minute\" Time is often neglected and we don\'t cherish life as much as we ought to. After the passing of my mother I learned to appreciate every aspect of life more. Bravo to you Garth! 👍💖
February 14th, 2022 09:42
Need I?
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
An interesting poem well written and i liked the first stanza and your word choice rhrou. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
And
Happy valentines day, poets.
February 14th, 2022 06:00
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
An interesting poem well written and i liked the first stanza and your word choice rhrou. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
And
Happy valentines day, poets.
February 14th, 2022 06:00
Need I?
Goldfinch60 said:
Each moment we live is most precious and we must savour every one of them.
Andy
February 13th, 2022 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Each moment we live is most precious and we must savour every one of them.
Andy
February 13th, 2022 01:40
Need I?
Rozina said:
Wow! You are right. Time is flying past so every moment is precious. Powerful message.
February 12th, 2022 22:16
Rozina said:
Wow! You are right. Time is flying past so every moment is precious. Powerful message.
February 12th, 2022 22:16
Need I?
Fay Slimm. said:
Such force in your words of reminders to \"hug the clock\" and further to be more aware of precious days passing. A fine write Garth and one to keep for poets like me to read over and over again.
February 12th, 2022 08:32
Fay Slimm. said:
Such force in your words of reminders to \"hug the clock\" and further to be more aware of precious days passing. A fine write Garth and one to keep for poets like me to read over and over again.
February 12th, 2022 08:32
Need I?
Paul Bell said:
The black Mariah in Britain is slightly different. I recall being chased by the black Mariah, and they were always driven by the police. You never wanted to be caught by the black Mariah police.
February 12th, 2022 07:17
Paul Bell said:
The black Mariah in Britain is slightly different. I recall being chased by the black Mariah, and they were always driven by the police. You never wanted to be caught by the black Mariah police.
February 12th, 2022 07:17
Need I?
Caring dove said:
Time is so important and precious . An interesting well expressed writing ..
February 12th, 2022 04:18
Caring dove said:
Time is so important and precious . An interesting well expressed writing ..
February 12th, 2022 04:18
Tree Of Identity
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. Great poem! Identity is such an elusive thing for some people and it could be hard to get a grip on it. Nicely written!
February 8th, 2022 13:59
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. Great poem! Identity is such an elusive thing for some people and it could be hard to get a grip on it. Nicely written!
February 8th, 2022 13:59
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