Comments received on poems by Garth Rakumakoe



Need I?
Rocky Lagou said:

Wow. This was written so elegantly. โ€œItโ€™s better to lose one minute of your life than your life in one minute\" Time is often neglected and we don\'t cherish life as much as we ought to. After the passing of my mother I learned to appreciate every aspect of life more. Bravo to you Garth! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ’–

February 14th, 2022 09:42

Need I?
๐Ÿคs.zaynab.kamoonpuri๐ŸŒท๐Ÿฆ๐Ÿ˜ฝ said:

An interesting poem well written and i liked the first stanza and your word choice rhrou. Kudos!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

And
Happy valentines day, poets.

February 14th, 2022 06:00

Need I?
Goldfinch60 said:

Each moment we live is most precious and we must savour every one of them.

Andy

February 13th, 2022 01:40

Need I?
Rozina said:

Wow! You are right. Time is flying past so every moment is precious. Powerful message.

February 12th, 2022 22:16

Need I?
Fay Slimm. said:

Such force in your words of reminders to \"hug the clock\" and further to be more aware of precious days passing. A fine write Garth and one to keep for poets like me to read over and over again.

February 12th, 2022 08:32

Need I?
Paul Bell said:

The black Mariah in Britain is slightly different. I recall being chased by the black Mariah, and they were always driven by the police. You never wanted to be caught by the black Mariah police.

February 12th, 2022 07:17

Need I?
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Time is so important and precious . An interesting well expressed writing ..



February 12th, 2022 04:18

Tree Of Identity
Rozina said:

Great lines indeed.

February 9th, 2022 05:41

Tree Of Identity
Jay-Lee Jane said:

a powerful write :)

February 8th, 2022 23:09

Tree Of Identity
Rocky Lagou said:

Wow. Great poem! Identity is such an elusive thing for some people and it could be hard to get a grip on it. Nicely written!

February 8th, 2022 13:59

The Truth About The Truth
Rocky Lagou said:

Preach! People are walking around blind to the inhumanity. ๐Ÿ™Œ

February 3rd, 2022 10:41

The Truth About The Truth
Rozina said:

Powerful lines indeed. Enjoyed reading this poem.

February 3rd, 2022 00:37

The Truth About The Truth
FallenAngel1๐Ÿ•Š said:

The only thing I know that truly tells the truth is numbers. 2+2=4. It always has and always will. Anyone who tries to dispute this,is a mad man๐Ÿ˜œ That\'s the beauty of numbers,they never lie. Great read Garth,a real thinker. And,..I\'m not a writer. I don\'t know anything about proper writing like an author does,but for what it\'s worth,I\'d say this is some pretty outstanding writing. Cheers๐ŸปโœŒ๏ธ๐Ÿ•Š

February 2nd, 2022 20:03

I Need A Light
Rocky Lagou said:

Yes, yes, YES!

February 2nd, 2022 14:08

I Need A Light
Poetic Dan said:

I loved this more than you\'ll ever know as I try to go down to 0.30g a day! Well at least in every roll...again such brilliance

January 8th, 2022 12:32

I Need A Light
kitty the naughty poet said:

flint keeps going on my light lol
great poem I really enjoyed it. thanks for sharing

January 8th, 2022 05:46

I Need A Light
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

I like your poems

I like how you have expressed yourself . Sometimes all we want to do is be that light .. when we are not .. and sometimes we simply are that light for ourselves and others ๐Ÿ™‚

A great poem ))

January 8th, 2022 03:25

I Need A Light
Goldfinch60 said:

I am sure that that light is always with you Garth.

Andy

January 8th, 2022 01:52

I Need A Light
A Boy With Roses said:

\"Better yet, strike me a match
for my wayward ways
Bring me to my knees
by candle light, that I may heed\"
โ™ฅ

January 7th, 2022 15:14

I Need A Light
FallenAngel1๐Ÿ•Š said:

Matches? I ain\'t got no matches. I don\'t need no stinking matches lol๐Ÿ˜‹ In case your scratching your head,it\'s a parody of a old Humphrey Bogart film called The Treasure of the Sierra Madre. In the scene it actually badges๐Ÿ˜œ But on a more serious note;great words of inspiration here Garth,and with much passion๐Ÿ˜€โœŒ๏ธ๐ŸŒŸ๐Ÿ•Š

January 7th, 2022 14:23

Sittin\' On The Dock Of The Bay
spilleronsheet said:

The apt words for a beautiful portrait
So well stringed and crafted
Thanks for sharing dear poet

January 7th, 2022 01:56

Sittin\' On The Dock Of The Bay
Goldfinch60 said:

Super words Garth, That portrait will always be within your mind.

Andy

January 7th, 2022 01:24

Sittin\' On The Dock Of The Bay
Paul Bell said:

Sad reflective write.
It\'s strange how water can bring such emotion to the fore. Maybe it\'s the journey the water senses in us.
Good place to be, mind you, and the song ain\'t half bad.

January 6th, 2022 14:11

Sittin\' On The Dock Of The Bay
FallenAngel1๐Ÿ•Š said:

Great read Garth. It\'s good to see you back,hope your Christmas was as magical as your talented muse,happy new year๐ŸŽ‰๐Ÿ’ฅ๐Ÿพ๐Ÿค—โœŒ๏ธ๐Ÿ•Š

January 6th, 2022 09:09

Sittin\' On The Dock Of The Bay
L. B. Mek said:

an escape in words
a wonderful treat,
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
and Happy New Year!

January 6th, 2022 05:44

Sittin\' On The Dock Of The Bay
Rozina said:

Lovely lines. A very pretty scene in front of me.

January 6th, 2022 04:51

Sittin\' On The Dock Of The Bay
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

And happy new year ๐Ÿ™‚

January 6th, 2022 04:01

Sittin\' On The Dock Of The Bay
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Truly lovely ! Such a beautiful poem ..,

Makes me think of the Otis redding song .. on the dock of the bay

nicely expressed.

January 6th, 2022 04:00

Love Seasons Of Two
SharonMoemise said:

Breathless...

January 4th, 2022 14:53

Inside Out
SharonMoemise said:

I continue to applaud you. From the day you started publishing, you deliver wonderful poetry. Another great read, Garth

January 4th, 2022 14:49

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