Comments received on poems by Garth Rakumakoe
To Tshepang
SharonMoemise said:
Absolutely beautiful poem. Here\'s to a very happy little one. Thanks for sharing Garth
November 16th, 2024 06:46
SharonMoemise said:
Absolutely beautiful poem. Here\'s to a very happy little one. Thanks for sharing Garth
November 16th, 2024 06:46
Pisces Child
SharonMoemise said:
Brilliant piece. Apt way
embracing that part of who you are.
November 16th, 2024 06:41
SharonMoemise said:
Brilliant piece. Apt way
embracing that part of who you are.
November 16th, 2024 06:41
Naked People
jarcher54 said:
You are truly a poet after my own naked heart! PS I never wear shoes except at weddings and funerals... sometimes.
November 13th, 2024 00:34
jarcher54 said:
You are truly a poet after my own naked heart! PS I never wear shoes except at weddings and funerals... sometimes.
November 13th, 2024 00:34
Unrequited Siblinghood
jarcher54 said:
Siblings... a vivid image, but exactly whose cord are they using, theirs or yours? Luckily my many brothers abstained from attempted murder, though they do break my heart sometimes. I get it, brother, I get it.
November 11th, 2024 01:53
jarcher54 said:
Siblings... a vivid image, but exactly whose cord are they using, theirs or yours? Luckily my many brothers abstained from attempted murder, though they do break my heart sometimes. I get it, brother, I get it.
November 11th, 2024 01:53
When Death Clamors The Skin
SharonMoemise said:
Beautifully written in all its sadness. Thank you for sharing
November 9th, 2024 16:23
SharonMoemise said:
Beautifully written in all its sadness. Thank you for sharing
November 9th, 2024 16:23
Pisces Child
Alan R said:
Canβt help but draw parallels to my insomnia and being a pisces. A clear wisdom on facing our demons.
November 4th, 2024 07:26
Alan R said:
Canβt help but draw parallels to my insomnia and being a pisces. A clear wisdom on facing our demons.
November 4th, 2024 07:26
Naked People
Garth Rakumakoe said:
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October 12th, 2024 09:25
Garth Rakumakoe said:
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October 12th, 2024 09:25
Naked People
ScrapsnScribbles said:
I flat out love this message, best articulation I have heard. Thank you.
October 8th, 2024 20:20
ScrapsnScribbles said:
I flat out love this message, best articulation I have heard. Thank you.
October 8th, 2024 20:20
The So-Called Free World
Lorenz said:
Welcome to the enchanted world of free zombies !
October 1st, 2024 11:27
Lorenz said:
Welcome to the enchanted world of free zombies !
October 1st, 2024 11:27
Grandma\'s Cooking
Rocky Lagou said:
I swear you do not have a single miss!
I love this poem so mucchhhh. The description of a grandma\'s pure love, and the way you sort of snapped the reader back to reality with the cooking that\'s taking place at the end, ugh it\'s just so good.
I suddenly miss my Cuban abuela\'s warm embrace, she lives in Miami and I\'m up here near Atlanta :,(
September 4th, 2024 22:45
Rocky Lagou said:
I swear you do not have a single miss!
I love this poem so mucchhhh. The description of a grandma\'s pure love, and the way you sort of snapped the reader back to reality with the cooking that\'s taking place at the end, ugh it\'s just so good.
I suddenly miss my Cuban abuela\'s warm embrace, she lives in Miami and I\'m up here near Atlanta :,(
September 4th, 2024 22:45
Raw Emotion
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it is all these things and much more. Lovely
August 27th, 2024 12:54
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it is all these things and much more. Lovely
August 27th, 2024 12:54
The Smell Of Rain
SharonMoemise said:
Beautiful poem. I like the earthiness of your writing. So natural, awakening and makes for a marvelous read.
August 27th, 2024 10:08
SharonMoemise said:
Beautiful poem. I like the earthiness of your writing. So natural, awakening and makes for a marvelous read.
August 27th, 2024 10:08
The Smell Of Rain
sorenbarrett said:
So beautiful and tender a thought and well expressed
August 26th, 2024 09:33
sorenbarrett said:
So beautiful and tender a thought and well expressed
August 26th, 2024 09:33
Foreigner
Doggerel Dave said:
Such a window into the experience of so many removed from their own language, culture and understandings with the added βbonusβ of sometime racism and contempt.
You present great insight here.
August 20th, 2024 18:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Such a window into the experience of so many removed from their own language, culture and understandings with the added βbonusβ of sometime racism and contempt.
You present great insight here.
August 20th, 2024 18:34
Foreigner
sorenbarrett said:
Treated as such only by the ignorant. We all belong to the same planet. I hear the alienation in this piece and it breaks my heart.
August 20th, 2024 10:25
sorenbarrett said:
Treated as such only by the ignorant. We all belong to the same planet. I hear the alienation in this piece and it breaks my heart.
August 20th, 2024 10:25
When A Man Cries
sorenbarrett said:
Full of emotion this poem breaths the norms of society on its expression. Men do cry if not outwardly inwardly. All humans have emotions. Nicely written
August 17th, 2024 07:11
sorenbarrett said:
Full of emotion this poem breaths the norms of society on its expression. Men do cry if not outwardly inwardly. All humans have emotions. Nicely written
August 17th, 2024 07:11
Gypsy
sorenbarrett said:
Creative thought in this write. A fun read but with a deeper meaning that what others say or even what we believe does not make it so. Nice
August 6th, 2024 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
Creative thought in this write. A fun read but with a deeper meaning that what others say or even what we believe does not make it so. Nice
August 6th, 2024 05:33
Family Secrets
Parisab said:
Words revealing of the hidden and closed off Family Secrets-like the chilling and stone -cold imagery β¦
July 27th, 2024 18:28
Parisab said:
Words revealing of the hidden and closed off Family Secrets-like the chilling and stone -cold imagery β¦
July 27th, 2024 18:28
Tin Cups And Shacks
sorenbarrett said:
Well put I have tried all and would have to agree. The tin cup with a little rum. lemon and sugar makes it even better. This poem takes me to another place and since it moves me emotionally I consider it art.
July 26th, 2024 12:05
sorenbarrett said:
Well put I have tried all and would have to agree. The tin cup with a little rum. lemon and sugar makes it even better. This poem takes me to another place and since it moves me emotionally I consider it art.
July 26th, 2024 12:05
Family Secrets
sorenbarrett said:
Those \"taboo fingers\" are always tucked away in \"cold stone\" not to be disturbed. Great imagery
July 26th, 2024 05:43
sorenbarrett said:
Those \"taboo fingers\" are always tucked away in \"cold stone\" not to be disturbed. Great imagery
July 26th, 2024 05:43
The Coo Of The Dusk Dove
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor in this piece is very nice and the wording is well chosen. It lays a path for the reader through beautiful and peaceful images taking him to the desired destination. Brilliant!
July 23rd, 2024 05:43
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor in this piece is very nice and the wording is well chosen. It lays a path for the reader through beautiful and peaceful images taking him to the desired destination. Brilliant!
July 23rd, 2024 05:43
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