Comments received on poems by Garth Rakumakoe
Vicissitude
Poetic Licence said:
All our circumstances can change in the blink of an eye, the one thing that cannot change and we are the same in, is death, nicely written and expressed
March 29th, 2025 04:49
Poetic Licence said:
All our circumstances can change in the blink of an eye, the one thing that cannot change and we are the same in, is death, nicely written and expressed
March 29th, 2025 04:49
Vicissitude
sorenbarrett said:
At the most basic level we are all the same and all will die as the ultimate measure of life\'s equality. Differences during life should be acknowledged for what they are and nothing more. Lovely write
March 29th, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
At the most basic level we are all the same and all will die as the ultimate measure of life\'s equality. Differences during life should be acknowledged for what they are and nothing more. Lovely write
March 29th, 2025 04:42
Moments
Poetic Licence said:
A bit of sun on a dark day, when just for a moment life seems ok, enjoyed the read
March 26th, 2025 12:50
Poetic Licence said:
A bit of sun on a dark day, when just for a moment life seems ok, enjoyed the read
March 26th, 2025 12:50
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Rocky Lagou said:
I’ve always felt like an old soul myself, in the sense that I feel like a 70 yr old in the body of a 19 yr old, lol. The way you use the term as a reflection of your roots though, as you so beautifully articulate in this poem, is beyond beautiful. “Time itself had to wait for me” is such a powerful line. I think this poem has given voice to the many who came before you who didn’t have the platform nor opportunity to do so. 🤍
February 2nd, 2025 03:12
Rocky Lagou said:
I’ve always felt like an old soul myself, in the sense that I feel like a 70 yr old in the body of a 19 yr old, lol. The way you use the term as a reflection of your roots though, as you so beautifully articulate in this poem, is beyond beautiful. “Time itself had to wait for me” is such a powerful line. I think this poem has given voice to the many who came before you who didn’t have the platform nor opportunity to do so. 🤍
February 2nd, 2025 03:12
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sorenbarrett said:
Like old furniture old souls are not always valued or recognized for their worth. A beautiful write that holds a bit of sadness
January 25th, 2025 13:52
sorenbarrett said:
Like old furniture old souls are not always valued or recognized for their worth. A beautiful write that holds a bit of sadness
January 25th, 2025 13:52
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Mutley Ravishes said:
\"Living in a new world, with an old soul,\" as Anthony sang it.
I remember finishing reading Lord of the Rings when I was 15. I didn\'t want to live in this world anymore. It is a lonely era.
Powerful write!
January 25th, 2025 06:21
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"Living in a new world, with an old soul,\" as Anthony sang it.
I remember finishing reading Lord of the Rings when I was 15. I didn\'t want to live in this world anymore. It is a lonely era.
Powerful write!
January 25th, 2025 06:21
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sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphors in this poem the analogies are solid and most applicable. Carefully chosen wording helps with the power of this poem, Old soul indeed.
January 25th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphors in this poem the analogies are solid and most applicable. Carefully chosen wording helps with the power of this poem, Old soul indeed.
January 25th, 2025 04:10
My Favorite Things
Poetic Licence said:
A reminder we just need the simple things in life to be happy and create memory`s, enjoyed the read
December 13th, 2024 17:33
Poetic Licence said:
A reminder we just need the simple things in life to be happy and create memory`s, enjoyed the read
December 13th, 2024 17:33
My Favorite Things
Parisab said:
“Classical paintings
under the everyday sun”
This poem has such a gentle undercurrent! It’s special when men pen lovely words.
December 13th, 2024 15:42
Parisab said:
“Classical paintings
under the everyday sun”
This poem has such a gentle undercurrent! It’s special when men pen lovely words.
December 13th, 2024 15:42
My Favorite Things
SharonMoemise said:
If memories were gold...this poem just made me realize that we Can re-live those carefree times even in this age of technology and everything artificial . Life is as natural and as pure as we live it. Great poem
December 13th, 2024 15:30
SharonMoemise said:
If memories were gold...this poem just made me realize that we Can re-live those carefree times even in this age of technology and everything artificial . Life is as natural and as pure as we live it. Great poem
December 13th, 2024 15:30
Principles
Poetic Licence said:
Many a true word said in this well written poem, i enjoyed the read
December 5th, 2024 16:48
Poetic Licence said:
Many a true word said in this well written poem, i enjoyed the read
December 5th, 2024 16:48
My People Are Down
Teddy.15 said:
Such a wonderful atmosphere in this, chilling and loving my kind of place. 🌹
December 2nd, 2024 05:14
Teddy.15 said:
Such a wonderful atmosphere in this, chilling and loving my kind of place. 🌹
December 2nd, 2024 05:14
To Tshepang
SharonMoemise said:
Absolutely beautiful poem. Here\'s to a very happy little one. Thanks for sharing Garth
November 16th, 2024 06:46
SharonMoemise said:
Absolutely beautiful poem. Here\'s to a very happy little one. Thanks for sharing Garth
November 16th, 2024 06:46
Pisces Child
SharonMoemise said:
Brilliant piece. Apt way
embracing that part of who you are.
November 16th, 2024 06:41
SharonMoemise said:
Brilliant piece. Apt way
embracing that part of who you are.
November 16th, 2024 06:41
Naked People
jarcher54 said:
You are truly a poet after my own naked heart! PS I never wear shoes except at weddings and funerals... sometimes.
November 13th, 2024 00:34
jarcher54 said:
You are truly a poet after my own naked heart! PS I never wear shoes except at weddings and funerals... sometimes.
November 13th, 2024 00:34
Unrequited Siblinghood
jarcher54 said:
Siblings... a vivid image, but exactly whose cord are they using, theirs or yours? Luckily my many brothers abstained from attempted murder, though they do break my heart sometimes. I get it, brother, I get it.
November 11th, 2024 01:53
jarcher54 said:
Siblings... a vivid image, but exactly whose cord are they using, theirs or yours? Luckily my many brothers abstained from attempted murder, though they do break my heart sometimes. I get it, brother, I get it.
November 11th, 2024 01:53
When Death Clamors The Skin
SharonMoemise said:
Beautifully written in all its sadness. Thank you for sharing
November 9th, 2024 16:23
SharonMoemise said:
Beautifully written in all its sadness. Thank you for sharing
November 9th, 2024 16:23
Pisces Child
Alan R said:
Can’t help but draw parallels to my insomnia and being a pisces. A clear wisdom on facing our demons.
November 4th, 2024 07:26
Alan R said:
Can’t help but draw parallels to my insomnia and being a pisces. A clear wisdom on facing our demons.
November 4th, 2024 07:26
Naked People
ScrapsnScribbles said:
I flat out love this message, best articulation I have heard. Thank you.
October 8th, 2024 20:20
ScrapsnScribbles said:
I flat out love this message, best articulation I have heard. Thank you.
October 8th, 2024 20:20
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