Comments received on poems by Garth Rakumakoe
She
Neville said:
a real joy to read Garth .. and quite excellent too sir ..... Neville
November 23rd, 2021 08:01
Neville said:
a real joy to read Garth .. and quite excellent too sir ..... Neville
November 23rd, 2021 08:01
She
L. B. Mek said:
\'It has run the length
of a tomorrow\'s expectations
It has journeyed the detours
of hopes delayed
It has travelled the picturesque miles
and like fine wine
emerged refined, wisdom gains
of disappointments and strife\'..
(glad to know
there\'s still some genuine: Men
around
for me to learn from, thank you
for choosing to share, wise Poet)
a Great write!
(if you\'re free, check out one of my older write\'s
titled:
\'adorned, with their petals of thorns\', on page 6
so you can see my feeble attempt
at writing, similar themes
to what, you so eloquently voiced in your pitch-perfect poem today)
November 23rd, 2021 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
\'It has run the length
of a tomorrow\'s expectations
It has journeyed the detours
of hopes delayed
It has travelled the picturesque miles
and like fine wine
emerged refined, wisdom gains
of disappointments and strife\'..
(glad to know
there\'s still some genuine: Men
around
for me to learn from, thank you
for choosing to share, wise Poet)
a Great write!
(if you\'re free, check out one of my older write\'s
titled:
\'adorned, with their petals of thorns\', on page 6
so you can see my feeble attempt
at writing, similar themes
to what, you so eloquently voiced in your pitch-perfect poem today)
November 23rd, 2021 04:15
She
Fay Slimm. said:
First class writing Garth - full of literary surprises this goes straight into my list of favourites.
November 22nd, 2021 14:32
Fay Slimm. said:
First class writing Garth - full of literary surprises this goes straight into my list of favourites.
November 22nd, 2021 14:32
She
Caring dove said:
Great writing ! 🙂 such an engaging read ..
Really like your words
November 22nd, 2021 13:02
Caring dove said:
Great writing ! 🙂 such an engaging read ..
Really like your words
November 22nd, 2021 13:02
Walls Of Hypocrisy
Neville said:
Firstly, it is such a shame this ever had to be writ in the first place ... in the second .. because it was crying out to be writ .. it is just as well that it was writ so superbly ... I\'m write behind you sir ... N
November 22nd, 2021 02:52
Neville said:
Firstly, it is such a shame this ever had to be writ in the first place ... in the second .. because it was crying out to be writ .. it is just as well that it was writ so superbly ... I\'m write behind you sir ... N
November 22nd, 2021 02:52
Salty Tears
Accidental Poet said:
The way I read this, he\'s grieving the loss of his loved one. And her spirit is always with him wanting him to smile and live on with her memory to brighten each new day. Hopefully he will see her light beside him and smile. 😊
November 21st, 2021 10:15
Accidental Poet said:
The way I read this, he\'s grieving the loss of his loved one. And her spirit is always with him wanting him to smile and live on with her memory to brighten each new day. Hopefully he will see her light beside him and smile. 😊
November 21st, 2021 10:15
Salty Tears
Paul Bell said:
You can feel the pain running through this write. The closing of the curtains end another day, and so it goes on. Is there an end for her. Who knows, it\'s the real story of life in the raw.
November 21st, 2021 05:12
Paul Bell said:
You can feel the pain running through this write. The closing of the curtains end another day, and so it goes on. Is there an end for her. Who knows, it\'s the real story of life in the raw.
November 21st, 2021 05:12
Salty Tears
Neville said:
I have always found the saltier the tears, the more genuine they are ...
This has the makings of an excellent story poem Garth and I am mightily impressed with just how you stimulate my own imagination with so many descriptive words and scenes .. I would personally assign top marks .. but I hope others will now follow in the wake I have created and submit their own thoughts also ..
Neville
November 20th, 2021 18:10
Neville said:
I have always found the saltier the tears, the more genuine they are ...
This has the makings of an excellent story poem Garth and I am mightily impressed with just how you stimulate my own imagination with so many descriptive words and scenes .. I would personally assign top marks .. but I hope others will now follow in the wake I have created and submit their own thoughts also ..
Neville
November 20th, 2021 18:10
Walls Of Hypocrisy
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Garth. So many people will not accept others into their lives for many reasons. One day I hope that ALL will be seen with respect in our world.
Andy
November 20th, 2021 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Garth. So many people will not accept others into their lives for many reasons. One day I hope that ALL will be seen with respect in our world.
Andy
November 20th, 2021 01:47
Walls Of Hypocrisy
spilleronsheet said:
Such a powerful stand you took with fully supportive words
What a powerful poetry
And the title so apt “Walls of hypocrisy”
Well penned dear poet
Keep writing and sharing
November 19th, 2021 15:00
spilleronsheet said:
Such a powerful stand you took with fully supportive words
What a powerful poetry
And the title so apt “Walls of hypocrisy”
Well penned dear poet
Keep writing and sharing
November 19th, 2021 15:00
Walls Of Hypocrisy
Caring dove said:
I especially like the verse before the last … a really engaging read tho .., I like this ) nicely expressed poem and interesting to read
November 19th, 2021 09:38
Caring dove said:
I especially like the verse before the last … a really engaging read tho .., I like this ) nicely expressed poem and interesting to read
November 19th, 2021 09:38
The Mothers We Lost
Neville said:
an impressive and well justified dedication my friend .. beautiful in its very own write .............. Neville
November 18th, 2021 13:57
Neville said:
an impressive and well justified dedication my friend .. beautiful in its very own write .............. Neville
November 18th, 2021 13:57
The Mothers We Lost
Paul Bell said:
We walk in shoes of mothers.
Sometimes you feel a bit grown up when parents die, but still value the advice they would have given you when times were tough.
November 18th, 2021 10:26
Paul Bell said:
We walk in shoes of mothers.
Sometimes you feel a bit grown up when parents die, but still value the advice they would have given you when times were tough.
November 18th, 2021 10:26
The Mothers We Lost
Fay Slimm. said:
Your title drew my attention as it surmounted the worded tribute to mothers who tried their very best to leave us with memories which nothing else could replace. A compelling read dear friend.
November 18th, 2021 09:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Your title drew my attention as it surmounted the worded tribute to mothers who tried their very best to leave us with memories which nothing else could replace. A compelling read dear friend.
November 18th, 2021 09:40
Dove In A Cathedral
Neville said:
You paint a very pretty & vivid picture with the tools of your craft dear poet ..
All Good Things, to you & yours sir ..
Neville
November 16th, 2021 12:31
Neville said:
You paint a very pretty & vivid picture with the tools of your craft dear poet ..
All Good Things, to you & yours sir ..
Neville
November 16th, 2021 12:31
Dove In A Cathedral
Paul Bell said:
A beautiful woman has come into view, and the world is now a better place.
November 16th, 2021 11:30
Paul Bell said:
A beautiful woman has come into view, and the world is now a better place.
November 16th, 2021 11:30
Dove In A Cathedral
Fay Slimm. said:
A most tender and poetically beautiful confession of love that surely no lady could ever refuse.
November 16th, 2021 08:20
Fay Slimm. said:
A most tender and poetically beautiful confession of love that surely no lady could ever refuse.
November 16th, 2021 08:20
Dove In A Cathedral
L. B. Mek said:
love the imagery, not quite sure I\'ve grasped the meaning fully
bust still, a wonderful read
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
November 16th, 2021 07:22
L. B. Mek said:
love the imagery, not quite sure I\'ve grasped the meaning fully
bust still, a wonderful read
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
November 16th, 2021 07:22
Dove In A Cathedral
Job Welime said:
I like this ending\'I am but a dove
You are the Cathedral
and I adore you dearly\'
November 16th, 2021 06:36
Job Welime said:
I like this ending\'I am but a dove
You are the Cathedral
and I adore you dearly\'
November 16th, 2021 06:36
Dove In A Cathedral
Caring dove said:
So lovely ! This is just beautiful , I had to favourite this 🙂
Doves are such peaceful looking birds
I love your choice of words
November 16th, 2021 06:11
Caring dove said:
So lovely ! This is just beautiful , I had to favourite this 🙂
Doves are such peaceful looking birds
I love your choice of words
November 16th, 2021 06:11
The Wind Knows
Paul Bell said:
I suppose this could be a poem about expression. The human and the wind at that time pushing through the day fighting the obstacles in the way.
November 15th, 2021 12:31
Paul Bell said:
I suppose this could be a poem about expression. The human and the wind at that time pushing through the day fighting the obstacles in the way.
November 15th, 2021 12:31
The Wind Knows
Caring dove said:
Very good ) I liked the read .., interesting and engaging , 🙂
November 15th, 2021 12:06
Caring dove said:
Very good ) I liked the read .., interesting and engaging , 🙂
November 15th, 2021 12:06
The Wind Knows
L. B. Mek said:
\'of hearts\' feeble whispers
or is it a victory to deceit?
Throughout the chapters of ages
the wind has told
all prophecies of time
To us it is better acquainted
better than you and I\'..
simply Brilliant,
like Dusk complimented, this is such a free flowing rhythmic write
a decadently sumptuous
poetic, reading experience
(what a gift
thank you, dear Poet)
November 15th, 2021 08:26
L. B. Mek said:
\'of hearts\' feeble whispers
or is it a victory to deceit?
Throughout the chapters of ages
the wind has told
all prophecies of time
To us it is better acquainted
better than you and I\'..
simply Brilliant,
like Dusk complimented, this is such a free flowing rhythmic write
a decadently sumptuous
poetic, reading experience
(what a gift
thank you, dear Poet)
November 15th, 2021 08:26
The Wind Knows
dusk arising said:
The wind shields a flame LOL ... you got carried away there .... and no wonder, this is a wonderful flowing poem which catches the imagination and lifts memories of each well painted scene. Good one.
November 15th, 2021 07:20
dusk arising said:
The wind shields a flame LOL ... you got carried away there .... and no wonder, this is a wonderful flowing poem which catches the imagination and lifts memories of each well painted scene. Good one.
November 15th, 2021 07:20
Today Makes Daddy Proud
Neville said:
What\'s not to like .. perfectly poemed & posted my friend .......................... 10/10 & then some ........................ N
November 12th, 2021 16:21
Neville said:
What\'s not to like .. perfectly poemed & posted my friend .......................... 10/10 & then some ........................ N
November 12th, 2021 16:21
Today Makes Daddy Proud
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh how I agree that any tomorrows ought to be She - - - your verse well portrays the mistakes made by He with battles and fighting for greedy gain - - well writ this appeal Garth for more power to the nurturers.
November 12th, 2021 10:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh how I agree that any tomorrows ought to be She - - - your verse well portrays the mistakes made by He with battles and fighting for greedy gain - - well writ this appeal Garth for more power to the nurturers.
November 12th, 2021 10:07
The Abstract Mind Sees
Paul Bell said:
Abstract. It\'s a great way to look at life. If you don\'t like particular parts, you think your way to a different path.
I think that\'s what the old masters do.
Never managed it myself.
November 10th, 2021 14:08
Paul Bell said:
Abstract. It\'s a great way to look at life. If you don\'t like particular parts, you think your way to a different path.
I think that\'s what the old masters do.
Never managed it myself.
November 10th, 2021 14:08
Depopulation
spilleronsheet said:
Great one dear poet
Looking at stars gives a calmness inside
In the vast universe, we are nothing but a spec of dirt
And so well you planted the sky wearing the dark robe of night
With mention of Orion and auroras
Such a beautiful scene caught the pair of eyes
November 9th, 2021 13:40
spilleronsheet said:
Great one dear poet
Looking at stars gives a calmness inside
In the vast universe, we are nothing but a spec of dirt
And so well you planted the sky wearing the dark robe of night
With mention of Orion and auroras
Such a beautiful scene caught the pair of eyes
November 9th, 2021 13:40
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