Comments received on poems by Garth Rakumakoe
Dove In A Cathedral
Caring dove said:
So lovely ! This is just beautiful , I had to favourite this 🙂
Doves are such peaceful looking birds
I love your choice of words
November 16th, 2021 06:11
Caring dove said:
So lovely ! This is just beautiful , I had to favourite this 🙂
Doves are such peaceful looking birds
I love your choice of words
November 16th, 2021 06:11
The Wind Knows
Paul Bell said:
I suppose this could be a poem about expression. The human and the wind at that time pushing through the day fighting the obstacles in the way.
November 15th, 2021 12:31
Paul Bell said:
I suppose this could be a poem about expression. The human and the wind at that time pushing through the day fighting the obstacles in the way.
November 15th, 2021 12:31
The Wind Knows
Caring dove said:
Very good ) I liked the read .., interesting and engaging , 🙂
November 15th, 2021 12:06
Caring dove said:
Very good ) I liked the read .., interesting and engaging , 🙂
November 15th, 2021 12:06
The Wind Knows
L. B. Mek said:
\'of hearts\' feeble whispers
or is it a victory to deceit?
Throughout the chapters of ages
the wind has told
all prophecies of time
To us it is better acquainted
better than you and I\'..
simply Brilliant,
like Dusk complimented, this is such a free flowing rhythmic write
a decadently sumptuous
poetic, reading experience
(what a gift
thank you, dear Poet)
November 15th, 2021 08:26
L. B. Mek said:
\'of hearts\' feeble whispers
or is it a victory to deceit?
Throughout the chapters of ages
the wind has told
all prophecies of time
To us it is better acquainted
better than you and I\'..
simply Brilliant,
like Dusk complimented, this is such a free flowing rhythmic write
a decadently sumptuous
poetic, reading experience
(what a gift
thank you, dear Poet)
November 15th, 2021 08:26
The Wind Knows
dusk arising said:
The wind shields a flame LOL ... you got carried away there .... and no wonder, this is a wonderful flowing poem which catches the imagination and lifts memories of each well painted scene. Good one.
November 15th, 2021 07:20
dusk arising said:
The wind shields a flame LOL ... you got carried away there .... and no wonder, this is a wonderful flowing poem which catches the imagination and lifts memories of each well painted scene. Good one.
November 15th, 2021 07:20
Today Makes Daddy Proud
Neville said:
What\'s not to like .. perfectly poemed & posted my friend .......................... 10/10 & then some ........................ N
November 12th, 2021 16:21
Neville said:
What\'s not to like .. perfectly poemed & posted my friend .......................... 10/10 & then some ........................ N
November 12th, 2021 16:21
Today Makes Daddy Proud
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh how I agree that any tomorrows ought to be She - - - your verse well portrays the mistakes made by He with battles and fighting for greedy gain - - well writ this appeal Garth for more power to the nurturers.
November 12th, 2021 10:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh how I agree that any tomorrows ought to be She - - - your verse well portrays the mistakes made by He with battles and fighting for greedy gain - - well writ this appeal Garth for more power to the nurturers.
November 12th, 2021 10:07
The Abstract Mind Sees
Paul Bell said:
Abstract. It\'s a great way to look at life. If you don\'t like particular parts, you think your way to a different path.
I think that\'s what the old masters do.
Never managed it myself.
November 10th, 2021 14:08
Paul Bell said:
Abstract. It\'s a great way to look at life. If you don\'t like particular parts, you think your way to a different path.
I think that\'s what the old masters do.
Never managed it myself.
November 10th, 2021 14:08
Depopulation
spilleronsheet said:
Great one dear poet
Looking at stars gives a calmness inside
In the vast universe, we are nothing but a spec of dirt
And so well you planted the sky wearing the dark robe of night
With mention of Orion and auroras
Such a beautiful scene caught the pair of eyes
November 9th, 2021 13:40
spilleronsheet said:
Great one dear poet
Looking at stars gives a calmness inside
In the vast universe, we are nothing but a spec of dirt
And so well you planted the sky wearing the dark robe of night
With mention of Orion and auroras
Such a beautiful scene caught the pair of eyes
November 9th, 2021 13:40
Self-estranged Commoners
James Alexander said:
Truthful insight of today\'s society. Trust used to be a given along with civility. Picked up many a stranded traveler in my youth without apprehension. Well done.
November 9th, 2021 10:23
James Alexander said:
Truthful insight of today\'s society. Trust used to be a given along with civility. Picked up many a stranded traveler in my youth without apprehension. Well done.
November 9th, 2021 10:23
The Fallen Birds Of Jamaica Bay
Paul Bell said:
Is there nothing man won\'t consume.
Got a feeling, Mother nature is getting a bit sick of us now.
November 8th, 2021 13:03
Paul Bell said:
Is there nothing man won\'t consume.
Got a feeling, Mother nature is getting a bit sick of us now.
November 8th, 2021 13:03
The Fallen Birds Of Jamaica Bay
L. B. Mek said:
an important write!
anything to reduce
our custom built cocoon of indifference
is a welcome, opportunity for personal growth
for those, who take the opportunity to heed
the wisdom in such insightful, poetry..
thank you! for choosing to share dear poet
November 8th, 2021 07:41
L. B. Mek said:
an important write!
anything to reduce
our custom built cocoon of indifference
is a welcome, opportunity for personal growth
for those, who take the opportunity to heed
the wisdom in such insightful, poetry..
thank you! for choosing to share dear poet
November 8th, 2021 07:41
The Fallen Birds Of Jamaica Bay
dusk arising said:
A sad tale indeed. But there\'s a message one can read apart from the obvious one.
The birds will not learn as a species to avoid flight paths, they will persist in their instinctive behaviour and perish, maybe to extinction.
Let us apply that to humanity and it\'s environment dilemma. Shall we learn and adapt or pursue our greedy instinct to it\'s inevitable end?
November 8th, 2021 07:35
dusk arising said:
A sad tale indeed. But there\'s a message one can read apart from the obvious one.
The birds will not learn as a species to avoid flight paths, they will persist in their instinctive behaviour and perish, maybe to extinction.
Let us apply that to humanity and it\'s environment dilemma. Shall we learn and adapt or pursue our greedy instinct to it\'s inevitable end?
November 8th, 2021 07:35
The Fallen Birds Of Jamaica Bay
Lorna said:
I don\'t think we\'re long for this world so it will heal without us...........Chernobyl did...... the animals are thriving in spite of radiation. Your poem is beautifully done.....
November 8th, 2021 05:46
Lorna said:
I don\'t think we\'re long for this world so it will heal without us...........Chernobyl did...... the animals are thriving in spite of radiation. Your poem is beautifully done.....
November 8th, 2021 05:46
The Fallen Birds Of Jamaica Bay
orchidee said:
A Case of \'All is OK, until man turns up and mucks it up\' Doh!
November 8th, 2021 05:32
orchidee said:
A Case of \'All is OK, until man turns up and mucks it up\' Doh!
November 8th, 2021 05:32
Fortitude
SharonMoemise said:
The sensory details in the imagery brings your works to life, Garth. Wonderfully done. I can almost feel the chaos erupting as you describe it. The makings of a great poet. Keep it up 👌👌
November 7th, 2021 11:51
SharonMoemise said:
The sensory details in the imagery brings your works to life, Garth. Wonderfully done. I can almost feel the chaos erupting as you describe it. The makings of a great poet. Keep it up 👌👌
November 7th, 2021 11:51
A Morning In Autumn
SharonMoemise said:
Refreshing! I love how you capture the scenery, the feeling ...I think I\'d like to go on that walk on a Morning in Autumn. Great writing.
November 7th, 2021 11:40
SharonMoemise said:
Refreshing! I love how you capture the scenery, the feeling ...I think I\'d like to go on that walk on a Morning in Autumn. Great writing.
November 7th, 2021 11:40
Dear Music
SharonMoemise said:
An absolutely stunning piece, Garth. Your love for music is evident in the way you penned this piece, and your love for poetry is shown in the way your words just flow through this piece...From the soul.
November 7th, 2021 11:35
SharonMoemise said:
An absolutely stunning piece, Garth. Your love for music is evident in the way you penned this piece, and your love for poetry is shown in the way your words just flow through this piece...From the soul.
November 7th, 2021 11:35
Fortitude
Eugene S. said:
Wow! Truly epic with depth and beautiful prose. I can hear it spoken as an opening to a great story. Well done!
November 7th, 2021 10:22
Eugene S. said:
Wow! Truly epic with depth and beautiful prose. I can hear it spoken as an opening to a great story. Well done!
November 7th, 2021 10:22
A Morning In Autumn
Lorna said:
Loved this walk....... I could smell the crisp air.
November 6th, 2021 09:30
Lorna said:
Loved this walk....... I could smell the crisp air.
November 6th, 2021 09:30
A Morning In Autumn
Caring dove said:
Such a beautiful read 🙂 love this … nicely expressed
November 6th, 2021 03:23
Caring dove said:
Such a beautiful read 🙂 love this … nicely expressed
November 6th, 2021 03:23
A Morning In Autumn
Paul Bell said:
Always think autumn is telling us to prepare. It sure is slow down time of year, and maybe reflection time. The colours are marvellous, mind you.
November 5th, 2021 12:37
Paul Bell said:
Always think autumn is telling us to prepare. It sure is slow down time of year, and maybe reflection time. The colours are marvellous, mind you.
November 5th, 2021 12:37
A Morning In Autumn
Fay Slimm. said:
Autumn compared with care from a loved one - what could be better and you phrase it so well Garth - thank you for sharing.
November 5th, 2021 09:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Autumn compared with care from a loved one - what could be better and you phrase it so well Garth - thank you for sharing.
November 5th, 2021 09:12
A Morning In Autumn
Saxon Crow said:
Really enjoyed this Garth. What a nice walk to go on. Faved
November 5th, 2021 08:51
Saxon Crow said:
Really enjoyed this Garth. What a nice walk to go on. Faved
November 5th, 2021 08:51
Self-estranged Commoners
Paul Bell said:
I think the last trust was the Police.
That basically leaves no one now.
November 4th, 2021 09:14
Paul Bell said:
I think the last trust was the Police.
That basically leaves no one now.
November 4th, 2021 09:14
Self-estranged Commoners
L. B. Mek said:
\'self-estranged\'
what a brilliant wording of introspection excavated, meaning
identifying those self-impeding, traits
that go-on, to warp and curate
our as-yet, unwritten fate...
(Brilliant!
thanks for choosing to share)
November 4th, 2021 05:11
L. B. Mek said:
\'self-estranged\'
what a brilliant wording of introspection excavated, meaning
identifying those self-impeding, traits
that go-on, to warp and curate
our as-yet, unwritten fate...
(Brilliant!
thanks for choosing to share)
November 4th, 2021 05:11
Self-estranged Commoners
Goldfinch60 said:
There is a great deal of truth in your words Garth, it is such a shame that trust is becoming eroded from our lives.
Andy
November 4th, 2021 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
There is a great deal of truth in your words Garth, it is such a shame that trust is becoming eroded from our lives.
Andy
November 4th, 2021 02:23
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