Comments received on poems by jim56



all the lonely people
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Jim

November 14th, 2024 14:17

snow fun
Caring dove said:

Well upbringing is important .. we need to feel loved enough when we’re children

November 14th, 2024 10:57

snow fun
Caring dove said:

We can have fun with children if we have them .. not just grandchildren ..

November 14th, 2024 10:55

all the lonely people
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Loneliness is a terrible feeling. Indeed, many people suffer from it silently and some do end up stuck in their loneliness. Thank you for expressing this truth so poignantly. 🙏

November 14th, 2024 07:47

all the lonely people
Cassie58 said:

Hello Jim. Your poem today will be relatable to many people. Loneliness is a curse. I’m lucky to still have a house full . My sister is a widow. She makes a point of going for a long walk every day. She meets people on the way. Same ones. Important to get out and about. Have a good Thursday.

November 14th, 2024 07:16

snow fun
sorenbarrett said:

Nostalgic and full of fun memories, a wonderful right Jim

November 13th, 2024 08:19

snow fun
Cassie58 said:

Adults can have fun sledging and playing in the snow too. We did about five years ago with our grandchildren. You brought back many happy memories with this write Jim. Another lovely poem.

November 13th, 2024 06:15

dreamer
Caring dove said:

This makes me think of a little child .. wishing for something nicer .. or inner child feeling safe .. almost makes me feel a bit sad , really . Life isn’t always like ‘ rainbows

November 12th, 2024 16:38

shopping spree
Young Fella said:

Nicely written. Really enjoyed reading these verses.

November 12th, 2024 16:36

dreamer
Caring dove said:

Do you paint your dreams or draw them ? I knew someone who said to me they paint their dreams or something ..

November 12th, 2024 16:35

robin message
Caring dove said:

Or maybe it’s just a friendly Robin …

November 12th, 2024 16:09

never stop believing
Caring dove said:

Well , life shouldn’t be a struggle .. really

November 12th, 2024 16:07

shopping spree
sorenbarrett said:

The blending of commercialism with the true meaning of Christmas, that of peace and love, forgiveness and future hope. Nicely said.

November 12th, 2024 14:36

shopping spree
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

November 12th, 2024 12:21

bottled troubles
Caring dove said:

Yeah if we’re troubled by something or by how we feel .. we should ask for help . Some people don’t bother tho

November 12th, 2024 11:17

grief
Caring dove said:

Well yeah , we can grieve over many things . Sometimes I grieve over the things I’ve missed out on .. or the feeling like I’ve ‘ lost myself ‘ life can be very sad sometimes .

November 12th, 2024 11:15

shopping spree
Cassie58 said:

Christmas is such an exciting time for children, not so much for grown ups. You reminded me here Jim of all the things that I loved best at Christmas as a child. Your second stanza is my favourite. A lovely image laden poem. Hope you are having a good day.

November 12th, 2024 10:42

unconditional love
Caring dove said:

You can care about someone .. doesn’t always mean you should have to accept it when someone treats you wrong ..

November 12th, 2024 09:57

reach out
Caring dove said:

Some people don’t think they have a problem when really they do

November 12th, 2024 09:50

reach out
Caring dove said:

Some people won’t reach out for help even tho they have problems .. sad , really

November 12th, 2024 09:49

miracles
Caring dove said:

Sometimes we wait years for the life we should have had or are meant ti have

November 12th, 2024 09:47

belfast shore
Caring dove said:

Some things are meant ti be .. and some things are just not ‘

November 12th, 2024 09:46

home to ireland
Caring dove said:

Your from Ireland .. it says in another poem your from America ..🤔

November 12th, 2024 06:58

nearly santa time
Caring dove said:

You have grandchildren …....

well some people do .. Christmas is more for kids .. anyway

November 12th, 2024 06:48

cancer bully
Avi said:

I also had cancer

November 11th, 2024 16:23

as we begin to age
Caring dove said:

We are as young or as old as we feel .. Someone may be young but feel old but the ‘ truth ‘ is their young and their still thenselves

November 11th, 2024 16:17

honey i miss you
Caring dove said:

Oh .. you lost someone .. that’s sad …

November 11th, 2024 16:13

want you back
Caring dove said:

Nice writing nice song

November 11th, 2024 16:11

home to ireland
Caring dove said:

Yoir from Ireland .. oh right .

November 11th, 2024 16:09

people write poetry
Caring dove said:

Yeah writing helps sometimes but I’m no longer that interested in posting my poems on here as not many people seem interested in commenting .. joined this site years ago too , I think I’ve got a bit bored of posting poems .

November 11th, 2024 15:41



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