Comments received on poems by jim56



homeless
Dan Williams said:

California, one state, has fully a third of the homeless in this country. Maybe you could mail this to this Newsome clown..

August 1st, 2024 00:20

homeless
Doggerel Dave said:

Hear hear, Jim.

July 31st, 2024 07:34

homeless
Cassie58 said:

It can happen to anyone Jim. Circumstances can change quickly. Compassion needed, it may not be a cure but it must help a little. Happy Wednesday.

July 31st, 2024 07:28

homeless
sorenbarrett said:

True indeed a poem that needs attention and has to be sead and read.

July 31st, 2024 06:32

lonely people
Cassie58 said:

Hello Jim. Loneliness is such a curse. A poem which has a universal feel to it. So many people wanting a little company. You have penned this beautifully. Happy Tuesday.

July 30th, 2024 06:56

lonely people
sorenbarrett said:

We are social animals and need others around us. Nicely written

July 30th, 2024 06:39

lonely people
2781 said:

That\'s old fashioned community

July 30th, 2024 06:01

a nature thankyou
Cassie58 said:

Such an uplifting write Jim, with lovely imagery. A fine poem. This hot weather is exhausting. Not much gardening being done. Being lazy lol.

July 29th, 2024 21:41

a nature thankyou
sorenbarrett said:

I feel this poem it fits very well with my disposition. Loved it

July 29th, 2024 09:57

dogs can be a friend
Cassie58 said:

My dog Solo loves me unconditionally. She is an old lady now. It will be a sad day when she passes. She asks for nothing and all she wants to do is cuddle up cosy. I love your poem Jim. Hope your day has been a good one.

July 28th, 2024 15:57

dogs can be a friend
sorenbarrett said:

Have had dogs before and it seems that their love and loyalty exceeds that of man. Nicely done

July 28th, 2024 06:07

another day
Cassie58 said:

Each new day creates new opportunities. Hi Jim. Hope you are having a good weekend and you have spent time in your garden. All the best to you. I enjoyed your lines.

July 27th, 2024 13:52

another day
sorenbarrett said:

And so is the cycle of life. They seem to melt one into the next. Yet each has its memories. Nicely worded

July 27th, 2024 06:40

bird of prey
sorenbarrett said:

This paints a familiar picture from younger days and feels very peaceful. Lovely

July 26th, 2024 05:04

we all need someone
orchidee said:

A true write Jim.

July 25th, 2024 14:16

we all need someone
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed we all do being social animals some of us more than others. Nicely written

July 25th, 2024 05:31

washing day
Tony36 said:

Great write

July 24th, 2024 07:13

washing day
sorenbarrett said:

Been there done that. There needs to be another line about it starting to rain and taking them in only to have the sun come back out again. Fun read

July 24th, 2024 06:06

is it really there
Mase ♪ said:

What a question! Do we know?
Other religions believe there god is just as real as we believe ours is? Do we know?
Good write Jim, sounds amazing!

July 23rd, 2024 20:30

is it really there
sorenbarrett said:

A common question nicely put to verse. The flow is smooth and it seems to roll of the tongue as it is read.

July 23rd, 2024 05:46

real love
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Jim.

July 22nd, 2024 06:41

sunshine happiness
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work.

July 20th, 2024 23:33

sunshine happiness
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Jim

July 20th, 2024 17:34

sunshine happiness
Cassie58 said:

Your lovely poem sums up a beautiful sunny day yesterday. It was short lived. Today is cloudy Jim. At least there is no rain. Enjoy the day.

July 20th, 2024 12:26

rhytthm of the rain
Dan Williams said:

The world has a shortage of optimists, thanks for this effort.

July 19th, 2024 23:56

country living
Cassie58 said:

Enjoyed the imagery Jim. So nice to live in the country. Hope you have had a good day.

July 19th, 2024 15:59

country living
sorenbarrett said:

A great message with rhyme and one that I echo. Great imagery.

July 19th, 2024 05:08

rhytthm of the rain
Cassie58 said:

Drawn in by your first line Jim. Remembered the song, listen to the rhythm of the falling rain. A lovely 60’s number. Rain drops remind me of tears, but we all need the rain fall to allow the crops to flourish. It is a beautiful day today. I hope you are smiling.

July 18th, 2024 10:04

rhytthm of the rain
sorenbarrett said:

Always loved the rain but like tears enough is enough whether joy or sadness a change is always welcome/ Good write

July 18th, 2024 05:14

natures view
Cassie58 said:

Your poem is rich in imagery Jim. Nature is a very special part of my life. I find it spiritually enriching and I like writing about it too. Hope you are having a grand Wednesday. I enjoyed my visit here.

July 17th, 2024 12:00



« Return to the profile of jim56