Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
We cut roses
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
You know KP well - last verse, first line! lol.
She says I\'m the thorn between two roses - to change the picture round!
April 27th, 2024 09:42
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
You know KP well - last verse, first line! lol.
She says I\'m the thorn between two roses - to change the picture round!
April 27th, 2024 09:42
We cut roses
Cassie58 said:
So beautiful. Cut fresh or even in decay there is beauty. This poem sent me traveling to times in the past and people long gone. Such lovely memories you gave me with a vase of roses. No thorns at all.
April 27th, 2024 07:10
Cassie58 said:
So beautiful. Cut fresh or even in decay there is beauty. This poem sent me traveling to times in the past and people long gone. Such lovely memories you gave me with a vase of roses. No thorns at all.
April 27th, 2024 07:10
We cut roses
Teddy.15 said:
Absolutely beautiful personally roses dead or dried I do love. Your metaphor is fabulous and brings death it\'s splendour. ๐น
April 27th, 2024 06:02
Teddy.15 said:
Absolutely beautiful personally roses dead or dried I do love. Your metaphor is fabulous and brings death it\'s splendour. ๐น
April 27th, 2024 06:02
Raising water
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
Ahh, sooooo - Verse 1, line 2 - you know my current state in marriage with KP?! lol.
April 25th, 2024 11:45
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
Ahh, sooooo - Verse 1, line 2 - you know my current state in marriage with KP?! lol.
April 25th, 2024 11:45
Raising water
Teddy.15 said:
My dear sorrenbarret I feel as if I\'m reading a last goodbye before an operation, I say this because it brought back the very feelings I had just 3 years ago. I hope I\'m wrong though. ๐น
April 25th, 2024 09:58
Teddy.15 said:
My dear sorrenbarret I feel as if I\'m reading a last goodbye before an operation, I say this because it brought back the very feelings I had just 3 years ago. I hope I\'m wrong though. ๐น
April 25th, 2024 09:58
Raising water
Doggerel Dave said:
Do you really believe there\'s relief from that kind of extreme psychic pain, Soren?
Rich write.
April 25th, 2024 07:04
Doggerel Dave said:
Do you really believe there\'s relief from that kind of extreme psychic pain, Soren?
Rich write.
April 25th, 2024 07:04
Sans disgrace
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful strong metaphors here sorenbarrett. Give me an eagle any day of the week. Three perfectly penned stanzas. Have a happy Wednesday.
April 24th, 2024 08:43
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful strong metaphors here sorenbarrett. Give me an eagle any day of the week. Three perfectly penned stanzas. Have a happy Wednesday.
April 24th, 2024 08:43
Safe inside
Goldfinch60 said:
That tranquility can be within us all soren.
Andy
April 24th, 2024 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
That tranquility can be within us all soren.
Andy
April 24th, 2024 01:52
Safe inside
Teddy.15 said:
Fabulous loved your last stanza, palpitations reading this. ๐น
April 24th, 2024 01:13
Teddy.15 said:
Fabulous loved your last stanza, palpitations reading this. ๐น
April 24th, 2024 01:13
Safe inside
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'d be offended if it wasn\'t so close to the truth, Soren. Conclusion redeeming.
April 23rd, 2024 20:31
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'d be offended if it wasn\'t so close to the truth, Soren. Conclusion redeeming.
April 23rd, 2024 20:31
Safe inside
orchidee said:
Ahh, so you know how KP will look in 40 years time. No make it 4 years, years time! lol. Can\'t tell with the botox on.
April 23rd, 2024 10:22
orchidee said:
Ahh, so you know how KP will look in 40 years time. No make it 4 years, years time! lol. Can\'t tell with the botox on.
April 23rd, 2024 10:22
Wounds of the dead
Goldfinch60 said:
Those bad things remembered can be put in a box within your mind soren.
Andy
April 23rd, 2024 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Those bad things remembered can be put in a box within your mind soren.
Andy
April 23rd, 2024 01:26
Wounds of the dead
Teddy.15 said:
I find myself leaning heavily towards regret, wow your imagery is completely visual, your pain your guilt caged in your very rib cage ouch, brilliant sorrenbarret just brilliant. ๐น
April 22nd, 2024 07:40
Teddy.15 said:
I find myself leaning heavily towards regret, wow your imagery is completely visual, your pain your guilt caged in your very rib cage ouch, brilliant sorrenbarret just brilliant. ๐น
April 22nd, 2024 07:40
Wounds of the dead
orchidee said:
Ahh good, how did you know this is my daily life with KP?! lol.
April 22nd, 2024 05:15
orchidee said:
Ahh good, how did you know this is my daily life with KP?! lol.
April 22nd, 2024 05:15
Poems of smoke
Teddy.15 said:
I could see and feel and smell this poem you certainly are a wonderful poet. ๐น
April 21st, 2024 16:00
Teddy.15 said:
I could see and feel and smell this poem you certainly are a wonderful poet. ๐น
April 21st, 2024 16:00
Poems of smoke
2781 said:
Could this, could be that?
I don\'t want to guess
Because I don\'t know the facts.
April 21st, 2024 03:27
2781 said:
Could this, could be that?
I don\'t want to guess
Because I don\'t know the facts.
April 21st, 2024 03:27
Have you?
Goldfinch60 said:
Our senses can become confused at times soren but all we see, feel, hear, touch and taste can bring so many differing wonders to us. Good write..
Andy
April 21st, 2024 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Our senses can become confused at times soren but all we see, feel, hear, touch and taste can bring so many differing wonders to us. Good write..
Andy
April 21st, 2024 01:21
Have you?
Teddy.15 said:
Life has many surprises and emotional sticks to hit us with, and yes I\'ve seen and felt many of these. Fabulous fabulous ๐น
April 20th, 2024 08:32
Teddy.15 said:
Life has many surprises and emotional sticks to hit us with, and yes I\'ve seen and felt many of these. Fabulous fabulous ๐น
April 20th, 2024 08:32
Have you?
orchidee said:
Aww, why\'s it only dead poets that seem to be famous?
Are we dead? Not sure? Was we alive last time we checked?!
April 20th, 2024 06:43
orchidee said:
Aww, why\'s it only dead poets that seem to be famous?
Are we dead? Not sure? Was we alive last time we checked?!
April 20th, 2024 06:43
Diamonds of reason
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren may those diamonds shower you with love.
Andy
April 20th, 2024 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words soren may those diamonds shower you with love.
Andy
April 20th, 2024 01:24
Diamonds of reason
Bella Shepard said:
Illusion or dilillusion of love? Either way a pearl of a poem.
April 19th, 2024 06:32
Bella Shepard said:
Illusion or dilillusion of love? Either way a pearl of a poem.
April 19th, 2024 06:32
Diamonds of reason
Neville said:
this is a real gem sorenbarrett a real ๐for sure ..
April 19th, 2024 06:18
Neville said:
this is a real gem sorenbarrett a real ๐for sure ..
April 19th, 2024 06:18
Diamonds of reason
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
KP wants diamonds now. She don\'t care if they\'re reasonable or unreasonable. Doh! lol.
Only certain folk understand my mad ravings, since being (imaginary) married to KP.
April 19th, 2024 04:49
orchidee said:
Good write SB.
KP wants diamonds now. She don\'t care if they\'re reasonable or unreasonable. Doh! lol.
Only certain folk understand my mad ravings, since being (imaginary) married to KP.
April 19th, 2024 04:49
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