Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Paralyzed
L. B. Mek said:
beneath your poetic mastery
of rhythmically pleasing, wordplay
exists, some deep - deep veracity
to that true distilled state, of most
unsuccessful relationships..
wonderfully executed, a great read
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 31st, 2022 02:35
L. B. Mek said:
beneath your poetic mastery
of rhythmically pleasing, wordplay
exists, some deep - deep veracity
to that true distilled state, of most
unsuccessful relationships..
wonderfully executed, a great read
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 31st, 2022 02:35
Paralyzed
Christina8 said:
Sorry about the circumstances but great poem! Hope things get better.
March 30th, 2022 17:45
Christina8 said:
Sorry about the circumstances but great poem! Hope things get better.
March 30th, 2022 17:45
Paralyzed
dusk arising said:
Its gotta be said
this pleased my head
once it was read
i was well fed
Nice one
March 30th, 2022 17:40
dusk arising said:
Its gotta be said
this pleased my head
once it was read
i was well fed
Nice one
March 30th, 2022 17:40
Sheep
dusk arising said:
Often people become fixed in a way of believing because those around them share a certain view. To think outside that train of thought can become frightening for them. In the case of religions it is often child induced fear which has been instilled in them.
March 29th, 2022 17:57
dusk arising said:
Often people become fixed in a way of believing because those around them share a certain view. To think outside that train of thought can become frightening for them. In the case of religions it is often child induced fear which has been instilled in them.
March 29th, 2022 17:57
Sheep
Rocky Lagou said:
Zamm! I feel this is directed to Christians, and possibly religion in general, as inferred by the title. But honestly you spoke some truth though. I love the way you challenged morality in this one and I like your brazen tone.
March 29th, 2022 13:17
Rocky Lagou said:
Zamm! I feel this is directed to Christians, and possibly religion in general, as inferred by the title. But honestly you spoke some truth though. I love the way you challenged morality in this one and I like your brazen tone.
March 29th, 2022 13:17
Perspective
Crowns4Christ said:
I like this,a bit confusing at first but it all makes sense when you think about it
March 28th, 2022 16:31
Crowns4Christ said:
I like this,a bit confusing at first but it all makes sense when you think about it
March 28th, 2022 16:31
Perspective
Bella Shepard said:
Question; does the whole perspective change if you\'re left handed? This was such fun, kudos for keeping it all straight, I think.
March 28th, 2022 16:15
Bella Shepard said:
Question; does the whole perspective change if you\'re left handed? This was such fun, kudos for keeping it all straight, I think.
March 28th, 2022 16:15
Perspective
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes. Your perspective, or your \"attitude\" towards life will really alter everything around you. It\'s powerful and we must always stay firm in our beings and our worth.
March 28th, 2022 13:26
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes. Your perspective, or your \"attitude\" towards life will really alter everything around you. It\'s powerful and we must always stay firm in our beings and our worth.
March 28th, 2022 13:26
Perspective
dusk arising said:
This is a great play with words and fearing a headache i gave up trying to figure it all out.
On reflection, if i turned around and looked over my shoulder would i have the right to feel i\'d been left behind?
March 28th, 2022 13:25
dusk arising said:
This is a great play with words and fearing a headache i gave up trying to figure it all out.
On reflection, if i turned around and looked over my shoulder would i have the right to feel i\'d been left behind?
March 28th, 2022 13:25
Saudade
Rocky Lagou said:
This was wonderful, I can definitely relate to that sensation. Also my father is Brazilian so when I read the title I was like \"Yes!\" Normally I hear it used like \"I miss you.\" But it can also be taken like a wistful yearning. Well done!
March 28th, 2022 13:19
Rocky Lagou said:
This was wonderful, I can definitely relate to that sensation. Also my father is Brazilian so when I read the title I was like \"Yes!\" Normally I hear it used like \"I miss you.\" But it can also be taken like a wistful yearning. Well done!
March 28th, 2022 13:19
Saudade
Bella Shepard said:
A beautiful poem that I can easily relate to. The older I get, the deeper I feel all the life I\'ve lived through those memories. I also wonder where did all that life go, and did I really do all those things. Yes dear friend, we did.
March 26th, 2022 15:52
Bella Shepard said:
A beautiful poem that I can easily relate to. The older I get, the deeper I feel all the life I\'ve lived through those memories. I also wonder where did all that life go, and did I really do all those things. Yes dear friend, we did.
March 26th, 2022 15:52
Lost Innocence
Bella Shepard said:
2 lines, 14 words, limitless thoughts for those who read them. Always enjoyable, thank you.
March 25th, 2022 12:34
Bella Shepard said:
2 lines, 14 words, limitless thoughts for those who read them. Always enjoyable, thank you.
March 25th, 2022 12:34
Lost Innocence
dusk arising said:
My grandchildren have just had their fourth and eighth birthdays. I found myself wondering what will be the childhood memories which will stay with them long into their adult years. I doubt I shall figure there as covid kept us apart and still does much to my displeasure.
That\'s where your two lines took me today. Bring on tomorrow.
March 25th, 2022 07:27
dusk arising said:
My grandchildren have just had their fourth and eighth birthdays. I found myself wondering what will be the childhood memories which will stay with them long into their adult years. I doubt I shall figure there as covid kept us apart and still does much to my displeasure.
That\'s where your two lines took me today. Bring on tomorrow.
March 25th, 2022 07:27
Lost Innocence
L. B. Mek said:
yup, with each breath
we cherish
we accumulate distance
from
us at our, \'blank canvas\'
best...
(so clever
thanks for sharing)
March 25th, 2022 06:43
L. B. Mek said:
yup, with each breath
we cherish
we accumulate distance
from
us at our, \'blank canvas\'
best...
(so clever
thanks for sharing)
March 25th, 2022 06:43
Love and Loyalty
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet, wonderful symmetry, so pleasing to the eye in its composition, yet tugging at heart strings. It flows beautifully from one line to the next.You inextricably link the two most important things that a relationship should be based on. A wonderful read!
March 24th, 2022 08:54
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet, wonderful symmetry, so pleasing to the eye in its composition, yet tugging at heart strings. It flows beautifully from one line to the next.You inextricably link the two most important things that a relationship should be based on. A wonderful read!
March 24th, 2022 08:54
Matrimony
Bella Shepard said:
Love this take on matrimony, done with tongue in cheek. Gave me a chuckle. After 52 years of marriage it comes down to figuring out what makes your better half tick. Surprising the power you can wield with a little psychology. Guess I\'ve spilled the beans.
March 23rd, 2022 14:29
Bella Shepard said:
Love this take on matrimony, done with tongue in cheek. Gave me a chuckle. After 52 years of marriage it comes down to figuring out what makes your better half tick. Surprising the power you can wield with a little psychology. Guess I\'ve spilled the beans.
March 23rd, 2022 14:29
Bitter sweet
Bella Shepard said:
This poem evokes so many feelings. We tend to ruminate on the past, for better or worse, and sometimes simply owning it is all we can do. Often the most meaningful things can be said with a brevity of words. Thank you for your words.
March 22nd, 2022 12:57
Bella Shepard said:
This poem evokes so many feelings. We tend to ruminate on the past, for better or worse, and sometimes simply owning it is all we can do. Often the most meaningful things can be said with a brevity of words. Thank you for your words.
March 22nd, 2022 12:57
Where all things meet
Arvy said:
“ one thread in the fabric of the universe” so genius and ethereal. Beautiful write!
March 22nd, 2022 12:19
Arvy said:
“ one thread in the fabric of the universe” so genius and ethereal. Beautiful write!
March 22nd, 2022 12:19
Bitter sweet
Arvy said:
Those lines really hit home, love the darkness in this one, gives it that force of reality. Brief yet deep, good write dear sorenbarrett
March 22nd, 2022 12:10
Arvy said:
Those lines really hit home, love the darkness in this one, gives it that force of reality. Brief yet deep, good write dear sorenbarrett
March 22nd, 2022 12:10
Where all things meet
dusk arising said:
Ah yes, isn\'t the human mind incredible to create romatic associations with the scientific realities all around us - the moon, the stars, rainbows - the fall of a shadow, the call of the wild.
Where would we poets be without this inspirational spark.
Great piece of poetry. I love it when a piece makes me reflect upon some things we take for granted - well I do anyway.
March 21st, 2022 19:06
dusk arising said:
Ah yes, isn\'t the human mind incredible to create romatic associations with the scientific realities all around us - the moon, the stars, rainbows - the fall of a shadow, the call of the wild.
Where would we poets be without this inspirational spark.
Great piece of poetry. I love it when a piece makes me reflect upon some things we take for granted - well I do anyway.
March 21st, 2022 19:06
Where all things meet
Bella Shepard said:
All I can do is take a deep breath and exhale slowly, as I take in the depth of your words. How do body, soul, mind come together to form us thinking, feeling human beings? It\'s always a puzzle to me.
March 21st, 2022 13:47
Bella Shepard said:
All I can do is take a deep breath and exhale slowly, as I take in the depth of your words. How do body, soul, mind come together to form us thinking, feeling human beings? It\'s always a puzzle to me.
March 21st, 2022 13:47
Knowledge pours through the northern doors
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this was a journey. I love all these mythological and biblical allusion. It was so intense and intriguing and the final lines were a statement. \"I am that I am\" 💖
March 18th, 2022 09:36
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this was a journey. I love all these mythological and biblical allusion. It was so intense and intriguing and the final lines were a statement. \"I am that I am\" 💖
March 18th, 2022 09:36
Where the heart is
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful poem! Mother\'s always say the wisest things.
March 17th, 2022 13:21
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful poem! Mother\'s always say the wisest things.
March 17th, 2022 13:21
Where the heart is
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully expressed! A beautiful short poem. Last line says a lot. great job!!
March 17th, 2022 10:05
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully expressed! A beautiful short poem. Last line says a lot. great job!!
March 17th, 2022 10:05
Where the heart is
dusk arising said:
Nice one because to appreciate your poem you have to see more than it\'s face value. The key is of course the last line.
It\'s all about love. Love the world and love being a part of it. It is our home.
March 17th, 2022 09:16
dusk arising said:
Nice one because to appreciate your poem you have to see more than it\'s face value. The key is of course the last line.
It\'s all about love. Love the world and love being a part of it. It is our home.
March 17th, 2022 09:16
Where the heart is
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you so much for your review and comment. I know that it is a touchy subject now days but men is used as a generic term for mankind in this sense.
March 17th, 2022 09:15
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you so much for your review and comment. I know that it is a touchy subject now days but men is used as a generic term for mankind in this sense.
March 17th, 2022 09:15
Where the heart is
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes. This is so nice. It does continue to be a \"man\'s world\" but you can pave yourself a bright future. We must fight for equality and freedom. Well done!
March 17th, 2022 09:12
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes. This is so nice. It does continue to be a \"man\'s world\" but you can pave yourself a bright future. We must fight for equality and freedom. Well done!
March 17th, 2022 09:12
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