Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Memory the cruelest reward
Bella Shepard said:

Painful memories always seem to overshadow the happy ones, how perverse. And yet the reason is there in our brain, how can you fight that. The imagery of this poem is painful yet compelling, even the font you\'ve chosen seems to bring an added dimension. Extreordinary write!

May 11th, 2024 13:39

Memory the cruelest reward
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

May 11th, 2024 09:44

Memory the cruelest reward
Teddy.15 said:

I once new someone who ate all the peanuts on the table but her gran had sucked the chocolate off first. LoL ah your imagery, I\'m not a fan of flies nor in my honey sweet and sour all rolled into one. ๐Ÿคฃ Gorgeous poetry. ๐ŸŒน

May 11th, 2024 03:46

Frankenstein\'s temple
Goldfinch60 said:

Super words soren, I wonder if we can get into that temple. LOL

Andy

May 11th, 2024 01:13

Frankenstein\'s temple
Doggerel Dave said:

The great pivot in your piece - culture certainly has much to answer for. Only solution: interrogate at all times.
A well painted picture, Soren.


May 10th, 2024 20:12

Frankenstein\'s temple
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work. Poignant and alive.

May 10th, 2024 10:44

Frankenstein\'s temple
Teddy.15 said:

The outside is not all it seems, stunning in poetic verse as ever. ๐ŸŒน

May 10th, 2024 02:20

Frankenstein\'s temple
orchidee said:

Ahh, rather like KP\'s Temple! lol.

May 10th, 2024 01:57

Frankenstein\'s temple
2781 said:

I wonder if the locks been picked?

May 10th, 2024 01:49

Tree of knowledge
Goldfinch60 said:

It may be believed by many that God causes death but in my microsecond on this world it is nothing in the never ending spirit of my life.

Andy

May 10th, 2024 01:09

Tree of knowledge
Teddy.15 said:

Magnificent imagery dear sorrenbarret. Going back to the beginning, and may I be so bold to state that it\'s a different end for each of us as God means different things to each of us. Your title is perfect.

Beautifully poetic as always. ๐ŸŒน

May 9th, 2024 14:05

Tree of knowledge
orchidee said:

A fine write SB.

May 9th, 2024 12:23

Phases
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

May 8th, 2024 09:12

Phases
Teddy.15 said:

Beautifully crafted dear sorrenbarret, phases, they start they day we are born, and as I learn each day they continue. If we are not left just with rubble by the end then we have achieved a lot. ๐ŸŒน

May 8th, 2024 05:17

Phases
orchidee said:

Good write SB.
KP\'s a battered wreck - or she will be when her botox melts! lol.

May 8th, 2024 04:03

Life
Goldfinch60 said:

That life\'s breath is with us all and will be everlasting soren.

Andy

May 8th, 2024 01:47

Life
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

May 7th, 2024 11:23

Life
Alan R said:

Beautiful

May 7th, 2024 09:11

Life
orchidee said:

Since when was KP alive? She might be a mummified botox statue by now. lol.

May 7th, 2024 07:49

Life
Doggerel Dave said:

There really cannot be any end to it, but who knows what that process is (if any).

May 7th, 2024 05:54

Darkness
Goldfinch60 said:

Every day we go into a new dimension soren.

Andy

May 7th, 2024 01:06

Darkness
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

May 6th, 2024 12:30

Darkness
Teddy.15 said:

Most inspiring and terrifying too, let\'s hope that new dimension is a good thing. ๐ŸŒน

May 6th, 2024 09:25

Giving
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

May 5th, 2024 09:38

Rats
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write soren.

Andy

May 5th, 2024 01:20

Rats
Teddy.15 said:

lol oh this imagery, it\'s a bit like this in my house! Not the rodent but the comedy ๐Ÿคฃ Fabulous. ๐ŸŒน

May 4th, 2024 12:47

Rats
GenXer Shamrocker โ˜˜๏ธ said:

lol ๐Ÿ˜‚

May 4th, 2024 09:07

Rats
orchidee said:

Yes, I remember our wedding night -KP slept in the cat basket, and the cat slept on the bed! lol.

May 4th, 2024 08:32

Rats
Doggerel Dave said:

๐Ÿ˜‚๐ŸคฃThat\'s wot I calls a great story, Soren. I can relate to that full on without, thankfully having had the experience. The domestic/relational dynamic is good value unto itself.

May 4th, 2024 05:31

Places I call home
Teddy.15 said:

You certainly do call it home, so much to offer. Great fun to read this dear sorrenbarret ๐ŸŒน

May 4th, 2024 02:31



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