Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Darker than black
rebellion_in_sanity said:

I had a strange sensation of experiencing something which was raw and primitive yet artistic and eerily beautiful. Please do correct me if I missed the essence of the poem.

August 10th, 2024 06:07

Old fashioned political correctness
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words soren.

Andy

August 10th, 2024 01:23

One in all, all in one
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good words soren but I am sure that light will get brighter.

Andy

August 10th, 2024 01:09

Old fashioned political correctness
Dan Williams said:

Being kind of hard on the vultures dogs, pigs and chickens, eh? The message stands though.

August 9th, 2024 23:43

One in all, all in one
Dan Williams said:

Are you cranking out these gems every day? Amazing.

August 9th, 2024 23:33

One in all, all in one
Thad Wilk said:

Terrific poem
thought provoking
and true all the above! šŸ¤”
Sugar and salt,
a great
possibility when
It comes to love! ā¤ļø
Awesome read indeed, much enjoyed!
Best regards āœŒļø Thad

August 9th, 2024 22:03

One in all, all in one
Doggerel Dave said:

I think that\'s definitely chemistry. Or perhaps complementary. A well polished little gem, Soren.

August 9th, 2024 21:22

One in all, all in one
Cassie58 said:

Left and Right, two wings of the same bird. I saw this quote today. Your poem reminded me. Also opposites attract. Really like what you have penned here.

August 9th, 2024 20:35

One in all, all in one
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:

Great poem Soren, it really makes you think.

August 9th, 2024 15:41

One in all, all in one
2781 said:

The last line grabs me.

August 9th, 2024 10:05

Old fashioned political correctness
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

August 9th, 2024 09:35

Old fashioned political correctness
Teddy.15 said:

This is wonderful and I would never call you anything but a rose 🌹 such a wonderful peice of philosophy and wisdom. 🌹

August 9th, 2024 09:16

Old fashioned political correctness
Doggerel Dave said:

Soren, Soren, Soren – you know this is not what the whole debate, loosely labeled ā€˜Political Correctness’ by those who do not like the original idea is about.
So the concept that language shapes our attitudes, the way a culture places its elements is long debated.
The most simple and obvious example (which should lead you to determine which side you are on) is that of ā€˜Chairman’: Argument – term excludes in people’s minds women from the role. Response from the other side (that you?) ā€˜Nah, rubbish- but if you must, we will use the term ā€˜Chairperson’ so we can continue to keep up our conservative backlash intact’.
For my money, ā€˜Chair’ would have done the job. (That’s me!)




August 9th, 2024 07:11

Old fashioned political correctness
2781 said:

It took me time to work out it was not my problem, unless I was the abuser.

August 9th, 2024 06:38

Old fashioned political correctness
Neville said:



sound advice reads like this .. šŸ˜ŽšŸ‘

August 9th, 2024 06:07

Old fashioned political correctness
John Prophet said:

So true, well written.

August 9th, 2024 05:46

Old fashioned political correctness
Mutley Ravishes said:

Thanks for the reminder, Soren!

August 9th, 2024 05:17

Old fashioned political correctness
Cassie58 said:

Sticks and stones will break my bones but names will never hurt me. Learned that at a very early age in primary school Soren. Sadly too many these days appear to like the sticks and stones. We are living in a world of conflict. Poetry makes it so much better. Yours is a joy to read.

August 9th, 2024 04:24

One in all, all in one
Tom Dylan said:

A fine write. Works on so many levels.

August 9th, 2024 03:39

One in all, all in one
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work. Powerful.

August 8th, 2024 19:36

One in all, all in one
Neville said:



.. its a jungle out here .. it aint a melting pot no more .. tis lovely ..

August 8th, 2024 14:01

One in all, all in one
orchidee said:

The title sounds a tad Musketeer-ish! lol.

August 8th, 2024 11:58

One small voice
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:

since regularly receiving kudos (from you) for my postings, I thought to browse some poems of yours, which no matter if a smattering of lines pack a punch.

August 8th, 2024 10:21

One in all, all in one
Tony36 said:

L9ve it

August 8th, 2024 09:53

One in all, all in one
Teddy.15 said:

Soulmates till the end. I\'m salt and my husband is sugar, that\'s what I believe anyway or maybe he is the salt depends on the day. This is sadly profoundly beautiful. 🌹

August 8th, 2024 09:13

One in all, all in one
Jerry Reynolds said:

A fine write, SB. Great imagery made me think.

August 8th, 2024 08:44

Life is what you make it
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write soren showing the opposites in life.

Andy

August 8th, 2024 01:29

Life is what you make it
Dan Williams said:

Will you marry me?

August 8th, 2024 00:12

Life is what you make it
HolesInMyJeans said:

That was a pleasure to read. Easy flow of words. You’re one of the few whose poems are delightfully thought out for the reader. Well done.

August 7th, 2024 19:46

Life is what you make it
Bella Shepard said:

The analogy of each stanza is outstanding, as is the superb rhyming pattern that pulls it all together into a masterclass. The message is powerful.

August 7th, 2024 15:20



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