Comments received on poems by Mr. Not
Winter Rose
arqios said:
To be unable to quench thirst and to die as a result of seeking relief, that’s tough.
November 16th, 2023 20:05
arqios said:
To be unable to quench thirst and to die as a result of seeking relief, that’s tough.
November 16th, 2023 20:05
Commiting to Music
Bobby O said:
Tangle
Enter twine
Entangle molecular acid
Are you loving , wrestling , or something more ominous?
April 18th, 2023 17:13
Bobby O said:
Tangle
Enter twine
Entangle molecular acid
Are you loving , wrestling , or something more ominous?
April 18th, 2023 17:13
Sad Flowers Die Alone
jarcher54 said:
Very un-haha on its face, but so blatantly so that you turn the sadness into a sort of dark joke. But I do shed a tear for anyone starting to rot...
March 17th, 2023 00:01
jarcher54 said:
Very un-haha on its face, but so blatantly so that you turn the sadness into a sort of dark joke. But I do shed a tear for anyone starting to rot...
March 17th, 2023 00:01
Nature\'s Love
L. B. Mek said:
they call it \'mother tongue\' for a reason
I relate to the feeling, dear poet
thanks for sharing
\'It runs through the blood
through oceans and rivers\'
all made of that same, oneness
that same \'matter\', truly
lovely imagery
January 30th, 2023 04:21
L. B. Mek said:
they call it \'mother tongue\' for a reason
I relate to the feeling, dear poet
thanks for sharing
\'It runs through the blood
through oceans and rivers\'
all made of that same, oneness
that same \'matter\', truly
lovely imagery
January 30th, 2023 04:21
Music Revives
arqios said:
So timely! Last night I had the idea of returning to an old habit of playing some tunes while nodding off to sleep. And early in the morning to do the same to rouse the awareness of the personal cosmos that envelopes us both in our waking and sleeping states. TFS!
January 18th, 2023 21:13
arqios said:
So timely! Last night I had the idea of returning to an old habit of playing some tunes while nodding off to sleep. And early in the morning to do the same to rouse the awareness of the personal cosmos that envelopes us both in our waking and sleeping states. TFS!
January 18th, 2023 21:13
Red, Red Sin
L. B. Mek said:
why sin though?
its natural and so devoid of sin
merely a skin condition
but eh what do i know
hope it regresses soon
my friend used to use some kinda E20 cream I think
but you probably know the best treatments already..
thanks for sharing
January 9th, 2023 04:40
L. B. Mek said:
why sin though?
its natural and so devoid of sin
merely a skin condition
but eh what do i know
hope it regresses soon
my friend used to use some kinda E20 cream I think
but you probably know the best treatments already..
thanks for sharing
January 9th, 2023 04:40
Summer Was Better Here
L. B. Mek said:
this reads nostalgic
without me having experienced this personally
testimony to your wording i think
thanks for sharing
December 23rd, 2022 09:44
L. B. Mek said:
this reads nostalgic
without me having experienced this personally
testimony to your wording i think
thanks for sharing
December 23rd, 2022 09:44
Who am I?
arqios said:
On the fence about taking insults as well. Wondering why they have to be given in the first place. Couldn\'t agree more with the choices in this poem. And it could very well be a specific person or persons.
December 5th, 2022 08:43
arqios said:
On the fence about taking insults as well. Wondering why they have to be given in the first place. Couldn\'t agree more with the choices in this poem. And it could very well be a specific person or persons.
December 5th, 2022 08:43
Self Hate
mvvenkataraman said:
All the hated things are solvable,
We can easily end them one day,
This list contains only trifles,
Please start to tackle them dear!
November 27th, 2022 06:20
mvvenkataraman said:
All the hated things are solvable,
We can easily end them one day,
This list contains only trifles,
Please start to tackle them dear!
November 27th, 2022 06:20
Self Hate
arqios said:
Rant away! I\'ve many a rant most of which are buried somewhere and unsaved. But just this week I had this growing pit to deal with. So for myself an excellent timing for expression.
November 27th, 2022 04:32
arqios said:
Rant away! I\'ve many a rant most of which are buried somewhere and unsaved. But just this week I had this growing pit to deal with. So for myself an excellent timing for expression.
November 27th, 2022 04:32
Self Hate
orchidee said:
If I was being flippant, I would say \'Oh, just a bad hair day!\' Oops!
You\'re as good as anyone else :)
November 27th, 2022 03:04
orchidee said:
If I was being flippant, I would say \'Oh, just a bad hair day!\' Oops!
You\'re as good as anyone else :)
November 27th, 2022 03:04
Thoughts
arqios said:
That is quite a dilemma there. As with other things that humans produce - thoughts and words need to be expressed in some form or other. And that spiraling effect tends to be for other people a bit of a bother.
November 18th, 2022 07:45
arqios said:
That is quite a dilemma there. As with other things that humans produce - thoughts and words need to be expressed in some form or other. And that spiraling effect tends to be for other people a bit of a bother.
November 18th, 2022 07:45
Thoughts
L. B. Mek said:
(and thus, our forefathers insightfully recognised
the less spoken, showcased more wisdom
than those who puked their words, like
how they come across their thoughts
unfiltered, raw and incoherent...)
I read, relate and learn
thanks for sharing, dear poet
November 18th, 2022 06:36
L. B. Mek said:
(and thus, our forefathers insightfully recognised
the less spoken, showcased more wisdom
than those who puked their words, like
how they come across their thoughts
unfiltered, raw and incoherent...)
I read, relate and learn
thanks for sharing, dear poet
November 18th, 2022 06:36
Accusations
arqios said:
Excellent rhyme with a barb to whom itself a barb presents.
November 4th, 2022 03:58
arqios said:
Excellent rhyme with a barb to whom itself a barb presents.
November 4th, 2022 03:58
Rotting Teeth, Unwashed skin
arqios said:
That is one discreet gift and comfort of poetry. I can also relate with much of these lines, many of our physical ailments can disfigure us on the inside. I used to always wear long sleeves even in the heat of the hottest summer because of a damaged self image and actual physical challenges, whether it be weight or skin condition.
November 2nd, 2022 09:59
arqios said:
That is one discreet gift and comfort of poetry. I can also relate with much of these lines, many of our physical ailments can disfigure us on the inside. I used to always wear long sleeves even in the heat of the hottest summer because of a damaged self image and actual physical challenges, whether it be weight or skin condition.
November 2nd, 2022 09:59
Come to the End of the Road
arqios said:
That has a very end of the line feeling to it! Shivers, what a sound!
October 28th, 2022 21:22
arqios said:
That has a very end of the line feeling to it! Shivers, what a sound!
October 28th, 2022 21:22
Pain is Blue
arqios said:
It’s a living pain when they move on while you as yet haven’t began to make sense of it all. Deeply relatable.
October 22nd, 2022 12:39
arqios said:
It’s a living pain when they move on while you as yet haven’t began to make sense of it all. Deeply relatable.
October 22nd, 2022 12:39
Leaving You
arqios said:
The sadness makes it difficult. It can get so bad that changing schools, jobs and even towns may be helpful for a time, a new scene for a new dream.
October 4th, 2022 05:20
arqios said:
The sadness makes it difficult. It can get so bad that changing schools, jobs and even towns may be helpful for a time, a new scene for a new dream.
October 4th, 2022 05:20
Leaving You
darknessandlight said:
I feel this on so many levels. You definitely need to do what is best for you. Being in that situation truly sucks
September 28th, 2022 18:51
darknessandlight said:
I feel this on so many levels. You definitely need to do what is best for you. Being in that situation truly sucks
September 28th, 2022 18:51
Leaving You
Manny Jordan said:
I can\'t absolutely relate with your poem. We\'ve all felt that way.
September 28th, 2022 08:05
Manny Jordan said:
I can\'t absolutely relate with your poem. We\'ve all felt that way.
September 28th, 2022 08:05
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