Comments received on poems by Mr. Not
Winter Nights
vicecream said:
“All sounds wrapped in wool” the PERFECT description of that snow-silencing phenomenon。love this poem
January 12th, 2025 08:25
vicecream said:
“All sounds wrapped in wool” the PERFECT description of that snow-silencing phenomenon。love this poem
January 12th, 2025 08:25
Winter Nights
arqios said:
Your poetry speaks, and your abilities are fluid, improving with every once of effort and time put into it. Your perseverance and self-reflection are symptoms of growth and development; encouraging us to keep going as well! Indeed it shall be a good year. 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 7th, 2025 06:25
arqios said:
Your poetry speaks, and your abilities are fluid, improving with every once of effort and time put into it. Your perseverance and self-reflection are symptoms of growth and development; encouraging us to keep going as well! Indeed it shall be a good year. 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 7th, 2025 06:25
Winter Nights
Cassie58 said:
This is no low effort poem. It is visually stunning and created a calm in me. Quite lovely. Thank you.
January 7th, 2025 00:46
Cassie58 said:
This is no low effort poem. It is visually stunning and created a calm in me. Quite lovely. Thank you.
January 7th, 2025 00:46
Winter Nights
TobaniNataiella said:
A stroll in the peaceful nights free to contemplate, enjoyed the read
January 6th, 2025 16:44
TobaniNataiella said:
A stroll in the peaceful nights free to contemplate, enjoyed the read
January 6th, 2025 16:44
Words in Vain
arqios said:
That type of interaction/person can be superbly annoying!
December 9th, 2024 20:36
arqios said:
That type of interaction/person can be superbly annoying!
December 9th, 2024 20:36
Winter Rose
arqios said:
To be unable to quench thirst and to die as a result of seeking relief, that’s tough.
November 16th, 2023 20:05
arqios said:
To be unable to quench thirst and to die as a result of seeking relief, that’s tough.
November 16th, 2023 20:05
Commiting to Music
Bobby O said:
Tangle
Enter twine
Entangle molecular acid
Are you loving , wrestling , or something more ominous?
April 18th, 2023 17:13
Bobby O said:
Tangle
Enter twine
Entangle molecular acid
Are you loving , wrestling , or something more ominous?
April 18th, 2023 17:13
Sad Flowers Die Alone
jarcher54 said:
Very un-haha on its face, but so blatantly so that you turn the sadness into a sort of dark joke. But I do shed a tear for anyone starting to rot...
March 17th, 2023 00:01
jarcher54 said:
Very un-haha on its face, but so blatantly so that you turn the sadness into a sort of dark joke. But I do shed a tear for anyone starting to rot...
March 17th, 2023 00:01
Nature\'s Love
L. B. Mek said:
they call it \'mother tongue\' for a reason
I relate to the feeling, dear poet
thanks for sharing
\'It runs through the blood
through oceans and rivers\'
all made of that same, oneness
that same \'matter\', truly
lovely imagery
January 30th, 2023 04:21
L. B. Mek said:
they call it \'mother tongue\' for a reason
I relate to the feeling, dear poet
thanks for sharing
\'It runs through the blood
through oceans and rivers\'
all made of that same, oneness
that same \'matter\', truly
lovely imagery
January 30th, 2023 04:21
Music Revives
arqios said:
So timely! Last night I had the idea of returning to an old habit of playing some tunes while nodding off to sleep. And early in the morning to do the same to rouse the awareness of the personal cosmos that envelopes us both in our waking and sleeping states. TFS!
January 18th, 2023 21:13
arqios said:
So timely! Last night I had the idea of returning to an old habit of playing some tunes while nodding off to sleep. And early in the morning to do the same to rouse the awareness of the personal cosmos that envelopes us both in our waking and sleeping states. TFS!
January 18th, 2023 21:13
Red, Red Sin
L. B. Mek said:
why sin though?
its natural and so devoid of sin
merely a skin condition
but eh what do i know
hope it regresses soon
my friend used to use some kinda E20 cream I think
but you probably know the best treatments already..
thanks for sharing
January 9th, 2023 04:40
L. B. Mek said:
why sin though?
its natural and so devoid of sin
merely a skin condition
but eh what do i know
hope it regresses soon
my friend used to use some kinda E20 cream I think
but you probably know the best treatments already..
thanks for sharing
January 9th, 2023 04:40
Summer Was Better Here
L. B. Mek said:
this reads nostalgic
without me having experienced this personally
testimony to your wording i think
thanks for sharing
December 23rd, 2022 09:44
L. B. Mek said:
this reads nostalgic
without me having experienced this personally
testimony to your wording i think
thanks for sharing
December 23rd, 2022 09:44
Who am I?
arqios said:
On the fence about taking insults as well. Wondering why they have to be given in the first place. Couldn\'t agree more with the choices in this poem. And it could very well be a specific person or persons.
December 5th, 2022 08:43
arqios said:
On the fence about taking insults as well. Wondering why they have to be given in the first place. Couldn\'t agree more with the choices in this poem. And it could very well be a specific person or persons.
December 5th, 2022 08:43
Self Hate
mvvenkataraman said:
All the hated things are solvable,
We can easily end them one day,
This list contains only trifles,
Please start to tackle them dear!
November 27th, 2022 06:20
mvvenkataraman said:
All the hated things are solvable,
We can easily end them one day,
This list contains only trifles,
Please start to tackle them dear!
November 27th, 2022 06:20
Self Hate
arqios said:
Rant away! I\'ve many a rant most of which are buried somewhere and unsaved. But just this week I had this growing pit to deal with. So for myself an excellent timing for expression.
November 27th, 2022 04:32
arqios said:
Rant away! I\'ve many a rant most of which are buried somewhere and unsaved. But just this week I had this growing pit to deal with. So for myself an excellent timing for expression.
November 27th, 2022 04:32
Self Hate
orchidee said:
If I was being flippant, I would say \'Oh, just a bad hair day!\' Oops!
You\'re as good as anyone else :)
November 27th, 2022 03:04
orchidee said:
If I was being flippant, I would say \'Oh, just a bad hair day!\' Oops!
You\'re as good as anyone else :)
November 27th, 2022 03:04
Thoughts
arqios said:
That is quite a dilemma there. As with other things that humans produce - thoughts and words need to be expressed in some form or other. And that spiraling effect tends to be for other people a bit of a bother.
November 18th, 2022 07:45
arqios said:
That is quite a dilemma there. As with other things that humans produce - thoughts and words need to be expressed in some form or other. And that spiraling effect tends to be for other people a bit of a bother.
November 18th, 2022 07:45
Thoughts
L. B. Mek said:
(and thus, our forefathers insightfully recognised
the less spoken, showcased more wisdom
than those who puked their words, like
how they come across their thoughts
unfiltered, raw and incoherent...)
I read, relate and learn
thanks for sharing, dear poet
November 18th, 2022 06:36
L. B. Mek said:
(and thus, our forefathers insightfully recognised
the less spoken, showcased more wisdom
than those who puked their words, like
how they come across their thoughts
unfiltered, raw and incoherent...)
I read, relate and learn
thanks for sharing, dear poet
November 18th, 2022 06:36
Accusations
arqios said:
Excellent rhyme with a barb to whom itself a barb presents.
November 4th, 2022 03:58
arqios said:
Excellent rhyme with a barb to whom itself a barb presents.
November 4th, 2022 03:58
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