Comments received on poems by DestinysPerspectives



The Love I Want
Crowns4Christ said:

That love exists,you just have to ask for it and believe that you will get it,
Not all people are selfserving

April 10th, 2022 22:38

All That She Lost
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Such an empowering confident writing .. nicely expressed poem

April 10th, 2022 14:26

The Love I Want
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

I love how you mention the four elements .. earth , air , fire and water .. it is so important to be grounded and stable in life , even in love I guess . We have to feel secure and safe ..

A great poem πŸ™‚

April 10th, 2022 14:23

Land of Abundance
AuburnScribbler said:

A masterfully defiant write here DestinysPerspectives.

You definitely deliver the messages of both self trust and self confidence, in an emphatically potent tone, that is a heartwarming reminder, that although things have been lost, what we will find; when we re-build, will be even stronger.

Bravo, and I hope that all is well!

April 5th, 2022 11:16

All That She Lost
blessednloved said:

Beautiful write I enjoyed it!

April 1st, 2022 08:41

All That She Lost
L. B. Mek said:

we feel so small at times
our frames, dwarfed
as-if we\'re being circled - out
by cruel happenstance
or that ill-intent, flickering
within inflamed eyes, of those
we relied upon, for hope...
(a brave write
an important message
thanks for sharing, dear poet
loved your controlled tempo
and wording)

April 1st, 2022 05:19

Forward Focus
Dahlia said:

Beautifully written & true
an enjoyable read...
Dahlia

March 31st, 2022 10:20

Forward Focus
Rocky Lagou said:

Yes! Such a beautiful and optimistic message. We must always continue forward in life and truly try to embrace every moment. Very well done and I love the analogy you used to convey the poem. πŸ’–

March 31st, 2022 10:15

Forward Focus
L. B. Mek said:

\'I don’t look down, I don’t look backward, and I don’t look up.
I don’t focus on the people ahead of me who are rushing to the top.
I just focus on the sounds of nature all around me.
I just focus on the breathing sounds matching the beats of my heart.\'
(for me the title of this write
will always be:
\'When you boldly, own
whatever Faith, system
you Choose
to empower, that meaningful
worth
in, your life!\')
such a great message!
thanks for sharing

March 31st, 2022 04:39

Forward Focus
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely poem ) to listen to the sounds of nature

March 31st, 2022 01:21

Family Tradition
Crowns4Christ said:

Sadly many \"families\"are like this, thank you for sharing

March 27th, 2022 15:46

Worth
dean langmuir said:

Good one,giving richs to the wrong,great relatable line,poem on.

March 26th, 2022 17:44

Worth
dean langmuir said:



March 26th, 2022 17:40

Worth
dusk arising said:

Self knowledge and self worth are the finest gifts one can have. To have fought life\'s battles and finally realise these gifts is to know their true value.

Speak your mind in your chosen words not those regurgitated by others.

March 26th, 2022 15:27

Worth
Crowns4Christ said:

Good for you, great write

March 26th, 2022 13:30

Temperance
Rocky Lagou said:

Yes! I love this development of character. Very potent is delivery. Good work! πŸ’–

February 23rd, 2022 09:34

Pain
Rocky Lagou said:

Amen! What a message! People really expect for everyone to experience pain the same way and like to but titles on what is and what isn\'t \"pain.\" Great job! πŸ‘

February 16th, 2022 11:23

Grave Digger
Rocky Lagou said:

Wow! Lovely poem! The line \"traded the shovel for a pen\" was so symbolic of passing on from a deceased loved one, especially for us poets. Good job on this piece! πŸ’–πŸ‘

February 14th, 2022 09:53

Shower
Palebluecardigan said:

Beautiful expression of your thoughts!

February 12th, 2022 02:50

Shower
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true DP, there are ways of easing pain, even for just a moment.

Andy

February 12th, 2022 02:19

Fatal Attraction
Rocky Lagou said:

Life is so precious. Thanks for this amazing work! You wrote it well and imagery used is splendid. πŸ‘

February 10th, 2022 14:04

Fatal Attraction
L. B. Mek said:

empowering, and an important message
that its never too late, once
realisation is awakened
that salvaging of a life\'s, worth
can always be achieved..
a memorable read, thanks for sharing

February 10th, 2022 05:35

War Drums
dusk arising said:

I\'m really taken with this piece of poetry both in it\'s composition and message. Nice one!

February 2nd, 2022 06:48

Empathic Ones
L. B. Mek said:

an intriguing read, thanks for sharing

February 1st, 2022 06:32

Empathic Ones
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely writing .. sometimes we have to walk through darkness to see the light .. sometimes

February 1st, 2022 04:08

Fallen Petals
25anderh said:

wow, nicee

January 31st, 2022 12:15

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