Comments received on poems by DestinysPerspectives
Mind\'s Surface
Caring dove said:
Nice mention of nature .. on the surface of our mind π almost creating a nice lovely feeling in our minds .. one linked to nature
I like your writing.
May 1st, 2022 12:36
Caring dove said:
Nice mention of nature .. on the surface of our mind π almost creating a nice lovely feeling in our minds .. one linked to nature
I like your writing.
May 1st, 2022 12:36
Diamond\'s Shine
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing destiny ! π we all need to shine our inner light ..
April 30th, 2022 12:21
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing destiny ! π we all need to shine our inner light ..
April 30th, 2022 12:21
Diamond\'s Shine
Crowns4Christ said:
This is beautiful destiny, is it about Ruby
April 30th, 2022 12:00
Crowns4Christ said:
This is beautiful destiny, is it about Ruby
April 30th, 2022 12:00
Eight
Crowns4Christ said:
This is so good Destiny, and so true also,our infinity has good too, so much good that they out weigh the bad if we let it
April 29th, 2022 08:52
Crowns4Christ said:
This is so good Destiny, and so true also,our infinity has good too, so much good that they out weigh the bad if we let it
April 29th, 2022 08:52
Home
Distant View said:
Some people have a restless spirit and feel the urge to constantly move on. I\'m not really like that, but I can appreciate the fact that we are all different and we have to find our own destiny in life.
April 26th, 2022 04:59
Distant View said:
Some people have a restless spirit and feel the urge to constantly move on. I\'m not really like that, but I can appreciate the fact that we are all different and we have to find our own destiny in life.
April 26th, 2022 04:59
Home
L. B. Mek said:
a lovely unfurling of your searching thoughts
worded, wonderfully poetic..
(personally, I try and find my peace
from within
and have its embers, ready
to be reignited
whenever, those storms of life
find me..
Home, at least for me
is somewhere, within
we take it with us, wherever
we roam and hover
but
if we can\'t, settle that Home
from within
however serene, our surroundings
we can never
find a place, to feel like Home..)
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
April 26th, 2022 04:39
L. B. Mek said:
a lovely unfurling of your searching thoughts
worded, wonderfully poetic..
(personally, I try and find my peace
from within
and have its embers, ready
to be reignited
whenever, those storms of life
find me..
Home, at least for me
is somewhere, within
we take it with us, wherever
we roam and hover
but
if we can\'t, settle that Home
from within
however serene, our surroundings
we can never
find a place, to feel like Home..)
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
April 26th, 2022 04:39
Beast
Caring dove said:
Itβs never nice to be made me feel small and trampled upon ! A great empowering writing .. I like how you have expressed yourself in this . Nobody has the right to take our light away and make us so sad
April 26th, 2022 00:26
Caring dove said:
Itβs never nice to be made me feel small and trampled upon ! A great empowering writing .. I like how you have expressed yourself in this . Nobody has the right to take our light away and make us so sad
April 26th, 2022 00:26
Home
Caring dove said:
I like your poem destiny .. you know I think home can be many things .. it can even be that safe nice centre in ourselves , finding a place of warmth and acceptance .. or even we can feel at home also with a connection or another person
I especially like your last few lines.. finding peace in the stillness . I love the feeling of β peace
April 26th, 2022 00:07
Caring dove said:
I like your poem destiny .. you know I think home can be many things .. it can even be that safe nice centre in ourselves , finding a place of warmth and acceptance .. or even we can feel at home also with a connection or another person
I especially like your last few lines.. finding peace in the stillness . I love the feeling of β peace
April 26th, 2022 00:07
Home
Nicholas Browning said:
Finding peace in the stillness, eh. Gotta say I enjoyed the read. It\'s got a nice theme to it. What is peace to you if you don\'t mind me asking? And what home is it that you\'re looking for?
April 25th, 2022 23:21
Nicholas Browning said:
Finding peace in the stillness, eh. Gotta say I enjoyed the read. It\'s got a nice theme to it. What is peace to you if you don\'t mind me asking? And what home is it that you\'re looking for?
April 25th, 2022 23:21
Beast
Crowns4Christ said:
It terrible isn\'t it, when somebody hates that you are a strong woman and they feel the need to beat you down to nothing, I have literally been beat, choked so that I passed out,it was my stepdad, He hated that I was so strong growing up, even now,but I am a strong woman, God makes us strong for a reason, that reason being that He knows how our life will go and made us strong so that we can endure it all, and rise up to do the job that He has for us, that is why Ruby is a survivor and endured plenty,but her time to rise will truly be a sight to behold, I think of the song,Overcomer by mandisa
April 23rd, 2022 16:44
Crowns4Christ said:
It terrible isn\'t it, when somebody hates that you are a strong woman and they feel the need to beat you down to nothing, I have literally been beat, choked so that I passed out,it was my stepdad, He hated that I was so strong growing up, even now,but I am a strong woman, God makes us strong for a reason, that reason being that He knows how our life will go and made us strong so that we can endure it all, and rise up to do the job that He has for us, that is why Ruby is a survivor and endured plenty,but her time to rise will truly be a sight to behold, I think of the song,Overcomer by mandisa
April 23rd, 2022 16:44
Detours
Crowns4Christ said:
So right, detours are something of a mystery,we never know what or who we will find when our lives turn that inevitable corner that we all round, the most memorable detour in my life is God leading me here to MPS, I met my husband here as I have great friends, I love everyone on MPS, some might not agree with my perspective or way of writing,but that\'s ok, I love you all, thank you for this special detour and impacting my life in a beautiful way
April 22nd, 2022 11:33
Crowns4Christ said:
So right, detours are something of a mystery,we never know what or who we will find when our lives turn that inevitable corner that we all round, the most memorable detour in my life is God leading me here to MPS, I met my husband here as I have great friends, I love everyone on MPS, some might not agree with my perspective or way of writing,but that\'s ok, I love you all, thank you for this special detour and impacting my life in a beautiful way
April 22nd, 2022 11:33
Detours
Rocky Lagou said:
\"I don\'t want to lye here in wasted potential\" I feel you speak to so many with these words. A lot of us, I\'m sure, feel so ready and \"ripe\" yet we often lack the resources or oppurtunity to shine. A great and thought-provoking piece!
April 22nd, 2022 08:20
Rocky Lagou said:
\"I don\'t want to lye here in wasted potential\" I feel you speak to so many with these words. A lot of us, I\'m sure, feel so ready and \"ripe\" yet we often lack the resources or oppurtunity to shine. A great and thought-provoking piece!
April 22nd, 2022 08:20
Detours
L. B. Mek said:
all that\'s left, is voices
in our sand footsteps
voices we ignore, cause we know
to listen, is to fall
in that sandpit of cyclical, regret
so we march on, onwards
awaiting our life\'s, promised oasis..
(what a wonderfully searching write
a great read! thank you)
April 22nd, 2022 04:53
L. B. Mek said:
all that\'s left, is voices
in our sand footsteps
voices we ignore, cause we know
to listen, is to fall
in that sandpit of cyclical, regret
so we march on, onwards
awaiting our life\'s, promised oasis..
(what a wonderfully searching write
a great read! thank you)
April 22nd, 2022 04:53
Story of a Broken Heart
Crowns4Christ said:
Aw destiny this is so sad, and definitely not worth your tears, anyone like that doesn\'t deserve a beautiful woman like you, someone will come along that deserves your love and tears, I believe it,chin up girl, you\'ll be pleasantly surprised by how this will happen, I was
April 21st, 2022 14:10
Crowns4Christ said:
Aw destiny this is so sad, and definitely not worth your tears, anyone like that doesn\'t deserve a beautiful woman like you, someone will come along that deserves your love and tears, I believe it,chin up girl, you\'ll be pleasantly surprised by how this will happen, I was
April 21st, 2022 14:10
One
Dahlia said:
and i\'m praying with you on this one
Yes and Yes to all you\'ve conveyed on
this amazing writing πβπ
April 18th, 2022 23:04
Dahlia said:
and i\'m praying with you on this one
Yes and Yes to all you\'ve conveyed on
this amazing writing πβπ
April 18th, 2022 23:04
Gust of Anxiety
Dahlia said:
I like the comparison of gust of wind/ gust of anxiety, & how the eye of the storm is the center, once aware one flows rational! YES! π
April 18th, 2022 22:59
Dahlia said:
I like the comparison of gust of wind/ gust of anxiety, & how the eye of the storm is the center, once aware one flows rational! YES! π
April 18th, 2022 22:59
All That She Lost
Dahlia said:
beautifully crafted I love the whole concept, very relatable and those closing lines are lovely!
April 18th, 2022 22:49
Dahlia said:
beautifully crafted I love the whole concept, very relatable and those closing lines are lovely!
April 18th, 2022 22:49
Warfare
Crowns4Christ said:
So true,we do wage war within ourselves, about self image and wrong or right,we abuse our bodies intentionally for some, unintentionally for others we don\'t realize that we only have one shot at life, one chance to do things right one body to preserve as long as we can, this poem really makes a person think,
April 18th, 2022 19:53
Crowns4Christ said:
So true,we do wage war within ourselves, about self image and wrong or right,we abuse our bodies intentionally for some, unintentionally for others we don\'t realize that we only have one shot at life, one chance to do things right one body to preserve as long as we can, this poem really makes a person think,
April 18th, 2022 19:53
Love\'s Tattoo
Neville said:
I am seriously glad that I found this page ... and am more than happy to leave my mark here too ..
a succinct & very much to the point little gem .............. Neville
April 18th, 2022 03:11
Neville said:
I am seriously glad that I found this page ... and am more than happy to leave my mark here too ..
a succinct & very much to the point little gem .............. Neville
April 18th, 2022 03:11
Walking A Straight Line
Caring dove said:
Great writing , destiny )) I like the flow to this .. nicely expressed
April 17th, 2022 15:32
Caring dove said:
Great writing , destiny )) I like the flow to this .. nicely expressed
April 17th, 2022 15:32
Middle
Crowns4Christ said:
Made
In
Destiny\'s
Deserving
Lovely
Everafter
Great job,you are way more than you realize,you are loved by God and using His gift to speak your truth,you can be anything you want to be
April 15th, 2022 22:22
Crowns4Christ said:
Made
In
Destiny\'s
Deserving
Lovely
Everafter
Great job,you are way more than you realize,you are loved by God and using His gift to speak your truth,you can be anything you want to be
April 15th, 2022 22:22
Moments of Peace
Rocky Lagou said:
A sweet and lovely poem. What we love and what we create will be our legacy, and everything we fought for will be worth it!
April 14th, 2022 12:20
Rocky Lagou said:
A sweet and lovely poem. What we love and what we create will be our legacy, and everything we fought for will be worth it!
April 14th, 2022 12:20
Walking A Straight Line
Crowns4Christ said:
Good for you destiny, everyone must break free of the circles
April 13th, 2022 13:55
Crowns4Christ said:
Good for you destiny, everyone must break free of the circles
April 13th, 2022 13:55
Mirror
Crowns4Christ said:
Isn\'t it funny how our own opinion of ourselves is based on how other people see us, when the truth in the matter is,our perception of ourselves should be reflected by how God see us
April 11th, 2022 14:59
Crowns4Christ said:
Isn\'t it funny how our own opinion of ourselves is based on how other people see us, when the truth in the matter is,our perception of ourselves should be reflected by how God see us
April 11th, 2022 14:59
Mirror
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes! I love the mirror analogy to describe how we perceive ourselves. It\'s true though, we often get caught up with inhibition and low self-esteem. Great message!
April 11th, 2022 09:20
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes! I love the mirror analogy to describe how we perceive ourselves. It\'s true though, we often get caught up with inhibition and low self-esteem. Great message!
April 11th, 2022 09:20
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