Comments received on poems by Bella Shepard



Moonlight
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good words by your granddaughter Bella, I too love the moon.

Andy

July 15th, 2024 01:20

Moonlight
Accidental Poet said:

I wondered why I hadn\'t seen much from you lately Bella. But welcome back, you and your granddaughter both have a common talent and it\'s nice to see that. I enjoy the Sun at Sunrise and at Sunset when the golden hour is the gateway between day and night. The Moon goes so well with the starlit night. Both days and nights are wonderfully beautiful. I agree though that the heat has been a bit too much though. Alas, it is Summertime. I\'m not a Winter person. 😎

July 14th, 2024 20:27

Moonlight
Doggerel Dave said:

Great work by your granddaughter, Bella. Now both you and she should get out and appreciate the moon while you can, as do I. for pretty soon it is all going to get dug up! 😜
Relieved to see you back on board, now with some poetry and exchanges I can relate to? Stay well, please.


July 14th, 2024 17:38

Moonlight
Neville said:



Absolutely delightful .. & she\'s clearly a chip off the old block

July 14th, 2024 14:54

Moonlight
orchidee said:

A fine write Bella by your grand-daughter. There\'s not a lot of moonlight to see at this Summer season in the UK just now, but we\'ve passed the Longest Day now.
Half way to Ch...... Can\'t say the word until December or Goldfinch will shoot me! lol.

July 14th, 2024 14:03

Moonlight
sorenbarrett said:

I too like the night especially on a moonlit night. Great imagery and a great flow with a message that deserves hearing.

July 14th, 2024 13:32

Moonlight
Teddy.15 said:

Wow, this is so reflective and emotional in poetic verse. Your granddaughter certainly has the talent of her grandmother 🌹

July 14th, 2024 13:17

Moonlight
Tony36 said:

Beautiful

July 14th, 2024 12:41

Moonlight
aDarkerMind said:

very enjoyable indeed Bella.

loved every line.

July 14th, 2024 11:39

Crisis of Perception
aDarkerMind said:

a poem I can truely relate to...
and felt every word.
if only I know where to look.

June 18th, 2024 13:58

Crisis of Perception
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and poignant. Great work.

June 17th, 2024 10:19

Crisis of Perception
Neville said:

I find it extraordinary that besides myself, there is at least one other here on earth who thinks and feels and behaves in a very similar way to me .. and if that were not a magical realisation in itself .. to have them write about their experiences and perceptions in such an appreciable way makes the reading of it outstandingly cosmic and likewise awesome .. and then some .. bravo Bella .. Neville

June 15th, 2024 11:01

Crisis of Perception
sorenbarrett said:

This is an amazing write in several different ways. First I loved the subtle reinforcement of perspective by the introduction of the the thumb as artists use it to gain perspective but in double entendre it is used to hitch a ride. Yes a ride to understanding and perspective (how great is that?) The metaphor of darkness and star light is clear as is the reference to distance to gain perspective. The becoming one with the universe is a type of enlightenment as is the realization that perspective is temporary, A truly inspiring and masterful write Bella

June 13th, 2024 05:27

Crisis of Perception
Teddy.15 said:

What journey your imagery and emotion is wonderful dear Bella, lost inside. Brilliant 🌹

June 13th, 2024 02:33

Crisis of Perception
orchidee said:

We seem to see our littleness more when it\'s night-time and dark. Though I suppose we could also look at the daytime sky.
Maybe seeing the night stars help us to recall the vastness more.
\'Come see the stars, KP said to me\'. \'Dang it, you woke me up\', I replied! lol.

June 13th, 2024 01:55

Crisis of Perception
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Bella and so veruy true,we are just a speck in the Universe.

Andy

June 13th, 2024 01:44

Crisis of Perception
Doggerel Dave said:

Hey Bella – glad to see you back!
My contemplation re the vastness of our universe and the true meaning of infinity first occurred in my mid-teens, when I eventually ended in some kind of mild (but disturbing) dissociative state which in turn led me to concentrate on the here and now.
At this part of my life cycle I am able to visit once more in much the way you have described in your great little piece which reached out to me. For that many thanks.

PS: Bonus info (only obliquely connected), try this for size:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Arthur_Stace#Eternity_script

Arthur Stace certainly left his mark on Sydney!


June 12th, 2024 17:13

Please
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

An appealing lovely dancing poem, a bouncy waltzing read itself. Kudos!

Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

May 14th, 2024 14:40

Please
sorenbarrett said:

I love waltzes preferring a fast Viennese waltz where the whirling becomes almost maniacal and one is lost in the rhythm and swirl. This plea for a dance makes my feet start to move and my body twirl. But then a slow waltz like this is so romantic and somehow lifts even tired legs effortlessly. Beautiful Bella or should I say Bella beautiful?

May 11th, 2024 13:51

Please
Neville said:


If only I lived a bit nearer, you bet I would twirl you and just as you ask ..

until the next time, just know that I\'m but a holla away .. Neville 🤍


May 11th, 2024 13:21

Please
Accidental Poet said:

I\'m not much of a dancer, and I don\'t know Brahms, but I do know what you mean here in your beautiful poem Bella. 🌹

May 11th, 2024 09:36

Please
Doggerel Dave said:

Beautiful Brahms!
It is in the dance. If only I could dance on forever (or just for a short time!). It cleans the mind out, Bella….. But I don’t have to tell you this because it’s all in your poem, oh so well expressed.


May 10th, 2024 19:44

Please
Teddy.15 said:

So very special, may your mojo always be right next to you my dear Bella. 💜

May 10th, 2024 15:22

Colonoscopy
sorenbarrett said:

I never expected a Haiku of such depth, the naked truth revealing inner depths. I hope it came out all right. lol Wow Bella I love your sense of humor.

April 27th, 2024 12:12

Colonoscopy
Neville said:



Ouch .. be sure you are not alone .. I\'ve had two too .. Neville

April 27th, 2024 02:53

Colonoscopy
Doggerel Dave said:

Apologies, Bella – I’ve just had a flash back – memory safely buried until now. I did have a colonoscopy way back when I was somewhere between 14 and 18 (middle to late 1950’s). Vowed never again – and I haven’t.
About to rebury…. ⛏ (wot no emoji shovel? 🥹)


April 21st, 2024 00:30

Colonoscopy
Teddy.15 said:

😂 hilarious dear Bella, I bet you are glad to see the back of it. 🤭 Biggest of hugs 🤗

April 20th, 2024 08:28

Colonoscopy
orchidee said:

Yes, good wishes, Bella.

April 20th, 2024 02:24

Colonoscopy
Goldfinch60 said:

I hope all is well Bella, I too have been there!

Andy

April 20th, 2024 01:44

Colonoscopy
Accidental Poet said:

Hope all is ok Bella. 😉

April 19th, 2024 19:20

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