Comments received on poems by Bella Shepard
My Life On Earth
LIZ said:
Awwww so beautiful! I love the rhyme!!! 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡 Nature always helps!!
October 9th, 2023 08:51
LIZ said:
Awwww so beautiful! I love the rhyme!!! 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡 Nature always helps!!
October 9th, 2023 08:51
The Flicker of Life
L. B. Mek said:
so, so true!
illuminatingly succinct
a great shorty, dear Poet
October 9th, 2023 01:52
L. B. Mek said:
so, so true!
illuminatingly succinct
a great shorty, dear Poet
October 9th, 2023 01:52
The Flicker of Life
SureshG said:
In cosmological time, we are still attached to the umbilical cord -
a fascinating read
October 8th, 2023 20:40
SureshG said:
In cosmological time, we are still attached to the umbilical cord -
a fascinating read
October 8th, 2023 20:40
The Flicker of Life
rhmn_7 said:
In the grand scheme of things we occupy only a short moment, your words always have a punch to it Bella!
October 8th, 2023 04:44
rhmn_7 said:
In the grand scheme of things we occupy only a short moment, your words always have a punch to it Bella!
October 8th, 2023 04:44
The Flicker of Life
Teddy.15 said:
Oh my dear Bella, you got the best ever senryu, I\'d say you are an inspiration. ❤️
October 7th, 2023 12:29
Teddy.15 said:
Oh my dear Bella, you got the best ever senryu, I\'d say you are an inspiration. ❤️
October 7th, 2023 12:29
The Flicker of Life
Neville said:
Yes, how indeed he gasped, having found this little gem after waiting so long for it ..
tis perfect Bella absolutely flawless .. Neville
October 7th, 2023 12:26
Neville said:
Yes, how indeed he gasped, having found this little gem after waiting so long for it ..
tis perfect Bella absolutely flawless .. Neville
October 7th, 2023 12:26
Swan Lake
L. B. Mek said:
\'All faded from her fragile mind\'
\'The legs to heaven once did climb
In her mind mark perfect time
And having reached the final act
The lovers perish in a pact\'
\'In vacant eyes a feeble light\'
!Brilliant!
(I am so glad I found this
This is curated with such care
Sensitive ink, imbuing empathy
In every syllable, lavish poetry
Painting a life\'s legacy for all
To witness and to offer
A special individual a little jolt
To help inspire one last pirouette)
October 6th, 2023 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'All faded from her fragile mind\'
\'The legs to heaven once did climb
In her mind mark perfect time
And having reached the final act
The lovers perish in a pact\'
\'In vacant eyes a feeble light\'
!Brilliant!
(I am so glad I found this
This is curated with such care
Sensitive ink, imbuing empathy
In every syllable, lavish poetry
Painting a life\'s legacy for all
To witness and to offer
A special individual a little jolt
To help inspire one last pirouette)
October 6th, 2023 05:09
Mamma\'s Winter Coat
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Aww a lovely poem flowimg so smoothly and awesomely rhymed woww! I too recall my mom\'s coat only it wasn\'t furry. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
October 4th, 2023 05:22
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Aww a lovely poem flowimg so smoothly and awesomely rhymed woww! I too recall my mom\'s coat only it wasn\'t furry. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
October 4th, 2023 05:22
Mamma\'s Winter Coat
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
so vivid, such clarity, effortless accessibility
(you would give Proust and his madeleine
a good run for their money)
I bow to your superior talent
dear cherished friend
and most admired Poet
(captured that child in your poetic voice so well)
September 22nd, 2023 03:11
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
so vivid, such clarity, effortless accessibility
(you would give Proust and his madeleine
a good run for their money)
I bow to your superior talent
dear cherished friend
and most admired Poet
(captured that child in your poetic voice so well)
September 22nd, 2023 03:11
Mamma\'s Winter Coat
MendedFences27 said:
Such a loving memory. It always seems to be the very small things in life that we remember most.
This poem brought back a picture of the wingback chair I would sit in when very young. A very pleasant memory. thank you for that, - Phil A.
September 18th, 2023 21:53
MendedFences27 said:
Such a loving memory. It always seems to be the very small things in life that we remember most.
This poem brought back a picture of the wingback chair I would sit in when very young. A very pleasant memory. thank you for that, - Phil A.
September 18th, 2023 21:53
Mamma\'s Winter Coat
Pop64 said:
Absolutely beautiful and perfect in every way! Fantastic memory, imagery, rhyme and flow, just perfect!
September 18th, 2023 05:51
Pop64 said:
Absolutely beautiful and perfect in every way! Fantastic memory, imagery, rhyme and flow, just perfect!
September 18th, 2023 05:51
Mamma\'s Winter Coat
Goldfinch60 said:
Those childhood memories are so wonderful in our lives Bella.
Andy
September 18th, 2023 02:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Those childhood memories are so wonderful in our lives Bella.
Andy
September 18th, 2023 02:02
Mamma\'s Winter Coat
Neville said:
made me think of my Fathers old jacket ..
I didn\'t need to squeeze a tear from my eyes while reading .. they came from out of nowhere all on their own ..
this is a magnificently crafted poem Bella that truly took me on a far too brief journey back in time .. and for that alone, I thank you .. Neville
September 18th, 2023 01:13
Neville said:
made me think of my Fathers old jacket ..
I didn\'t need to squeeze a tear from my eyes while reading .. they came from out of nowhere all on their own ..
this is a magnificently crafted poem Bella that truly took me on a far too brief journey back in time .. and for that alone, I thank you .. Neville
September 18th, 2023 01:13
Mamma\'s Winter Coat
LIZ said:
Oh my God Bella!!! This is beautiful!!!!! Mommy\'s hug!!!!! Loved it!!!
September 18th, 2023 00:26
LIZ said:
Oh my God Bella!!! This is beautiful!!!!! Mommy\'s hug!!!!! Loved it!!!
September 18th, 2023 00:26
Mamma\'s Winter Coat
LIZ said:
Oh my God Bella!!! This is beautiful!!!!! Mommy\'s hug!!!!! Loved it!!!
September 18th, 2023 00:26
LIZ said:
Oh my God Bella!!! This is beautiful!!!!! Mommy\'s hug!!!!! Loved it!!!
September 18th, 2023 00:26
Mamma\'s Winter Coat
Doggerel Dave said:
Nostalgia - so rich I almost felt I knew that coat and would be looking out for it every time I visit a charity shop from now on. (It\'s where I get most of my clothing - but don\'t tell anyone).
For me, a large wing back chair...Thanks for the smooth ride - it really drew me in, Bella.
September 17th, 2023 21:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Nostalgia - so rich I almost felt I knew that coat and would be looking out for it every time I visit a charity shop from now on. (It\'s where I get most of my clothing - but don\'t tell anyone).
For me, a large wing back chair...Thanks for the smooth ride - it really drew me in, Bella.
September 17th, 2023 21:36
Mamma\'s Winter Coat
Christina8 said:
A great poem and a wonderful memory. Thank you for sharing with us! Such powerful imagery. And I remember what it was like to have a mom.
September 17th, 2023 14:22
Christina8 said:
A great poem and a wonderful memory. Thank you for sharing with us! Such powerful imagery. And I remember what it was like to have a mom.
September 17th, 2023 14:22
Mamma\'s Winter Coat
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful memory and metaphor of how we look to the strength and comfort of the past; our mother, that took away all of our fears and gave us a vote of confidence that we wish we could still feel today.. A touching and poignant poem.
September 17th, 2023 11:45
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful memory and metaphor of how we look to the strength and comfort of the past; our mother, that took away all of our fears and gave us a vote of confidence that we wish we could still feel today.. A touching and poignant poem.
September 17th, 2023 11:45
Mamma\'s Winter Coat
Parisab said:
Bella. you described these forever memories so gently and lovingly-her warmth and protection must feel so near-
September 17th, 2023 10:21
Parisab said:
Bella. you described these forever memories so gently and lovingly-her warmth and protection must feel so near-
September 17th, 2023 10:21
Mamma\'s Winter Coat
Teddy.15 said:
Well of course this is a wonderful poem, a beautiful scene hiding inside your mom\'s coat superbly written and left me smiling from ear to ear dear Bella. Dolly Parton\'s coat of many colours also came to mind. I adore that song she also wrote it for her mom. 💖
September 17th, 2023 10:00
Teddy.15 said:
Well of course this is a wonderful poem, a beautiful scene hiding inside your mom\'s coat superbly written and left me smiling from ear to ear dear Bella. Dolly Parton\'s coat of many colours also came to mind. I adore that song she also wrote it for her mom. 💖
September 17th, 2023 10:00
My Little Fantasy
L. B. Mek said:
(love your tonality
in this subtle droplet of wisdom
thank you! kind Poet)
yes, this is one of my coping methods
I will save a fantasy
or a song, or a movie, a book
anything
because I know when life
throws
those blind sided, punches n slaps
I\'m gonna need them
to help me hide and survive
till I can rise again, shake it off
and smile bright
September 15th, 2023 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
(love your tonality
in this subtle droplet of wisdom
thank you! kind Poet)
yes, this is one of my coping methods
I will save a fantasy
or a song, or a movie, a book
anything
because I know when life
throws
those blind sided, punches n slaps
I\'m gonna need them
to help me hide and survive
till I can rise again, shake it off
and smile bright
September 15th, 2023 05:37
My Little Fantasy
Neville said:
one can only imagine .. in the wake of a wish .. and wonder slow .. delightful in its brevity dear Bella .. Neville
September 15th, 2023 01:21
Neville said:
one can only imagine .. in the wake of a wish .. and wonder slow .. delightful in its brevity dear Bella .. Neville
September 15th, 2023 01:21
My Little Fantasy
sorenbarrett said:
Bella this is such a wonderful thought and piece of advice. We advise people to save their money for a rainy day but seldom are we told that it is just as important, if not more so, important to save emotional profit for those days as well. Loved this piece Bella
September 14th, 2023 17:25
sorenbarrett said:
Bella this is such a wonderful thought and piece of advice. We advise people to save their money for a rainy day but seldom are we told that it is just as important, if not more so, important to save emotional profit for those days as well. Loved this piece Bella
September 14th, 2023 17:25
Memories
Pop64 said:
While a beautifully formatted and flowing read, it contains the maudlin ideal of memories, how we might lose them and how we can gain them and treat them. A treat for the reader, but a sad truth for he or she suffering from this dilemma.
September 13th, 2023 13:46
Pop64 said:
While a beautifully formatted and flowing read, it contains the maudlin ideal of memories, how we might lose them and how we can gain them and treat them. A treat for the reader, but a sad truth for he or she suffering from this dilemma.
September 13th, 2023 13:46
My Little Fantasy
Pop64 said:
Fantasies are marvelous as they let us all indulge in more often those things we cannot have or are taboo. Yet, serve to provide a happiness when needed or wanted. Beautifully expressed.
September 13th, 2023 07:50
Pop64 said:
Fantasies are marvelous as they let us all indulge in more often those things we cannot have or are taboo. Yet, serve to provide a happiness when needed or wanted. Beautifully expressed.
September 13th, 2023 07:50
My Little Fantasy
orchidee said:
Best not tell me it. I might swoon! heehee.
I\'m in fantasy land with KP. Doh!
September 12th, 2023 01:38
orchidee said:
Best not tell me it. I might swoon! heehee.
I\'m in fantasy land with KP. Doh!
September 12th, 2023 01:38
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