Comments received on poems by Bella Shepard
Reality
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Bella, we learn new things all the time.
Andy
July 26th, 2025 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Bella, we learn new things all the time.
Andy
July 26th, 2025 01:19
Reality
Friendship said:
Your poem is an exploration of human perception and the intricate relationship between reality, the mind, and the psyche. The poem suggests that reality is subjective, experienced through individual perception, and emphasizes that understanding oneself is a lifelong journey.
July 25th, 2025 18:19
Friendship said:
Your poem is an exploration of human perception and the intricate relationship between reality, the mind, and the psyche. The poem suggests that reality is subjective, experienced through individual perception, and emphasizes that understanding oneself is a lifelong journey.
July 25th, 2025 18:19
Reality
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A very thoughtful and reflective piece, Bella. The inward turn toward perception and psyche gives it depth, and that final line...fro real! Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2025 12:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A very thoughtful and reflective piece, Bella. The inward turn toward perception and psyche gives it depth, and that final line...fro real! Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2025 12:09
Reality
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of the complexities of our long journey, how we see or not see things, how we interpret sometimes wrongly, and the consequences of our actions we rightly or wrongly decide to take, enjoyed the read
July 25th, 2025 10:50
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of the complexities of our long journey, how we see or not see things, how we interpret sometimes wrongly, and the consequences of our actions we rightly or wrongly decide to take, enjoyed the read
July 25th, 2025 10:50
Reality
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply psychological this poem begins with sensation, perception, interpretation, to reaction. mistaken perception, misunderstood may lead to unexpected reactions and such chaos is difficult to comprehend from the outside. People and their actions so difficult to predict a life long effort and still not even close. A lovely write Bella and a fave
July 25th, 2025 09:33
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply psychological this poem begins with sensation, perception, interpretation, to reaction. mistaken perception, misunderstood may lead to unexpected reactions and such chaos is difficult to comprehend from the outside. People and their actions so difficult to predict a life long effort and still not even close. A lovely write Bella and a fave
July 25th, 2025 09:33
Reality
orchidee said:
Good write B, though KP of course says SHE is the only reality! She would say that. lol.
July 25th, 2025 09:25
orchidee said:
Good write B, though KP of course says SHE is the only reality! She would say that. lol.
July 25th, 2025 09:25
You Are
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Bella, there’s real clarity in this poem. No overreach, no extras... just truth laid down. That final line doesn’t blink..the \"will\" in that line hits as it should: with certainty. Beautifully powerful in its brevity and impact. 🌹👏 A fave, my friend.
July 24th, 2025 07:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Bella, there’s real clarity in this poem. No overreach, no extras... just truth laid down. That final line doesn’t blink..the \"will\" in that line hits as it should: with certainty. Beautifully powerful in its brevity and impact. 🌹👏 A fave, my friend.
July 24th, 2025 07:43
Lost
ElizabethMoroz said:
Very clever contrasting imagery and metaphor. Clever work, well done. Elizabeth
July 24th, 2025 06:11
ElizabethMoroz said:
Very clever contrasting imagery and metaphor. Clever work, well done. Elizabeth
July 24th, 2025 06:11
You Are
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Bella, my page is very nearly filled now.
Andy
July 24th, 2025 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Bella, my page is very nearly filled now.
Andy
July 24th, 2025 01:50
You Are
sorenbarrett said:
Truth in a few lines Bella. And in some peoples books it written in black and white I prefer color myself. Loved it Bella
July 23rd, 2025 11:11
sorenbarrett said:
Truth in a few lines Bella. And in some peoples books it written in black and white I prefer color myself. Loved it Bella
July 23rd, 2025 11:11
You Are
Poetic Licence said:
Maybe short but that is so true and beautiful, just up to us to fill the page up, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 09:58
Poetic Licence said:
Maybe short but that is so true and beautiful, just up to us to fill the page up, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 09:58
You Are
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Bella,
Wisdom personified in a single breath of verse. It\'s really beautiful. Very well done, my friend.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
July 23rd, 2025 08:55
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Bella,
Wisdom personified in a single breath of verse. It\'s really beautiful. Very well done, my friend.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
July 23rd, 2025 08:55
Lost
Friendship said:
the poem \"Lost\" revolves around the disconnect between potential and reality. It illustrates the struggles of an individual who possesses various faculties—eyes, ears, hands, mouth, feet, heart, soul, and mind—but fails to utilize them in a meaningful or fulfilling way. The poem conveys a sense of unfulfilled potential and existential despair.
July 23rd, 2025 07:23
Friendship said:
the poem \"Lost\" revolves around the disconnect between potential and reality. It illustrates the struggles of an individual who possesses various faculties—eyes, ears, hands, mouth, feet, heart, soul, and mind—but fails to utilize them in a meaningful or fulfilling way. The poem conveys a sense of unfulfilled potential and existential despair.
July 23rd, 2025 07:23
Lost
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Disuse or misuse of gifts this seens to be about in a fine superb poem wow! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
July 22nd, 2025 08:40
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Disuse or misuse of gifts this seens to be about in a fine superb poem wow! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
July 22nd, 2025 08:40
Lost
Cheeky Missy said:
Contradictions excellently woven in a tapestry of chagrin, painfully familiar to all, more or less, in one way or another, rendered beautifully with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 21st, 2025 21:32
Cheeky Missy said:
Contradictions excellently woven in a tapestry of chagrin, painfully familiar to all, more or less, in one way or another, rendered beautifully with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 21st, 2025 21:32
Lost
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Bella, this one delivers in a slow collapse…each line peeling away something raw. The repetition isn’t just rhythm...it’s weight. “Potential that was, but never fulfilled”… that line hit me the hardest, because we are all potential unfulfilled in one way or another. You didn’t just write about loss..you embodied it. Beautifully done. 🌹👏 A fave from me.
July 21st, 2025 08:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Bella, this one delivers in a slow collapse…each line peeling away something raw. The repetition isn’t just rhythm...it’s weight. “Potential that was, but never fulfilled”… that line hit me the hardest, because we are all potential unfulfilled in one way or another. You didn’t just write about loss..you embodied it. Beautifully done. 🌹👏 A fave from me.
July 21st, 2025 08:13
Lost
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Bella,
The first half of the verse reads like laziness succumbing to voluntary ignorance and then as one reads on there is a feeling of loss, abandonment, a soul left out in the cold, as it were struggling to a bitter end. A splendid poem in many ways and one that will linger on in the reader\'s mind. Thank you very much for this one.
Fond regards,
Tony.
July 21st, 2025 06:54
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Bella,
The first half of the verse reads like laziness succumbing to voluntary ignorance and then as one reads on there is a feeling of loss, abandonment, a soul left out in the cold, as it were struggling to a bitter end. A splendid poem in many ways and one that will linger on in the reader\'s mind. Thank you very much for this one.
Fond regards,
Tony.
July 21st, 2025 06:54
Lost
Goldfinch60 said:
Each day we awake Bella is a wonderful day in our lives.
Andy
July 21st, 2025 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Each day we awake Bella is a wonderful day in our lives.
Andy
July 21st, 2025 01:16
Lost
Poetic Licence said:
We are as humans giving the tools to do so much better and be more kinder and caring to our fellow human beings and to ourselves. As this highlights we waste those opportunities and never realize the full potential that is out there, really enjoyed the read
July 20th, 2025 17:17
Poetic Licence said:
We are as humans giving the tools to do so much better and be more kinder and caring to our fellow human beings and to ourselves. As this highlights we waste those opportunities and never realize the full potential that is out there, really enjoyed the read
July 20th, 2025 17:17
Lost
sorenbarrett said:
Would, could, should, might, wished, wanted words that never were satisfied, that never came to being. Well spoken in this poem of effort never expended, things never realized. Well done Bella and a fave
July 20th, 2025 15:20
sorenbarrett said:
Would, could, should, might, wished, wanted words that never were satisfied, that never came to being. Well spoken in this poem of effort never expended, things never realized. Well done Bella and a fave
July 20th, 2025 15:20
Put It Away
RSM0812 said:
This reminds me of my temper. Its much better at bay. Lol. Nice write.
July 18th, 2025 07:21
RSM0812 said:
This reminds me of my temper. Its much better at bay. Lol. Nice write.
July 18th, 2025 07:21
Put It Away
Cheeky Missy said:
Preach it! Excellently rendered in disarming simplicity with a forceful thrust and haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 16th, 2025 13:08
Cheeky Missy said:
Preach it! Excellently rendered in disarming simplicity with a forceful thrust and haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 16th, 2025 13:08
Put It Away
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent...I like the simple style you use to covey the theme.
July 16th, 2025 10:36
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent...I like the simple style you use to covey the theme.
July 16th, 2025 10:36
Put It Away
Goldfinch60 said:
But the pleasant thoughts will always overwhelm the bad ones Bella.
Andy
July 14th, 2025 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
But the pleasant thoughts will always overwhelm the bad ones Bella.
Andy
July 14th, 2025 02:25
Put It Away
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The restraint in this hits harder than shouting ever could. That quiet repetition...“put it away”...carries so much unspoken weight. It’s the kind of hurt that sticks around and haunts because it’s been lived too many times. Beautifully done, Bella. 🌹👏
July 13th, 2025 20:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The restraint in this hits harder than shouting ever could. That quiet repetition...“put it away”...carries so much unspoken weight. It’s the kind of hurt that sticks around and haunts because it’s been lived too many times. Beautifully done, Bella. 🌹👏
July 13th, 2025 20:33
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