Comments received on poems by dean langmuir



-A Poet knows-
Rocky Lagou said:

Wow. I love the shortness of this piece and it\'s message. I feel this one is a metapoetic piece and it rings true to every poet. We aren\'t ever 100% sure if our writes will \"take off\" like we intended.

April 11th, 2022 08:49

-remnants of sapphire-
Dahlia said:

profound words you have weaved here poet
enjoyed
Dahlia

April 10th, 2022 15:39

-remnants of sapphire-
Bella Shepard said:

Beautiful blue, a color that for me evokes moods, feelings. Such lovely imagery. Good write!

April 10th, 2022 12:41

-remnants of sapphire-
orchidee said:

Good write Dean.

April 10th, 2022 05:15

-Colored Words-
aburmeister said:

This is so creative and such an important message! Brilliant!

April 9th, 2022 19:26

Write your own Story(1st sonnet)
aburmeister said:

Very nice! Interesting, uplifting and unique! Thank you!

April 9th, 2022 19:22

-enlightenment-
Dahlia said:

excellently worded, sounds of truth
great job poet
Dahlia

April 9th, 2022 11:44

-enlightenment-
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

A nicely expressed writing ) interesting words . I’m assuming enlightenment is similar to an awakening ?

April 9th, 2022 06:51

=showering with lilacs=
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely feel to your words 🙂a beautiful poem

April 8th, 2022 13:07

-Colored Words-
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

We can always try to fill emptiness .. I like how you have expressed yourself in this .. a really nice writing )

April 8th, 2022 13:05

-emitting blue-
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

I really like this ! Good way with words .. flows nicely

April 8th, 2022 13:02

-emitting blue-
Bella Shepard said:

Love the cadence, it flows beautifully like the music. A lovely write!

April 8th, 2022 12:56

-Colored Words-
Crowns4Christ said:

Interesting, I like this

April 7th, 2022 15:43

-Colored Words-
Dahlia said:

this flows beautifully, enjoyed
Dahlia

April 7th, 2022 13:14

-Colored Words-
Bella Shepard said:

In this age, the beauty of silence seems to be lost in the pollution of noise. We don\'t seem to understand that it is a natural condition, and we should nurture it for our own well mental being. You have captured this so well, a lovely poem that is taken to heart.

April 7th, 2022 09:27

Write your own Story(1st sonnet)
orchidee said:

Good write Dean.

April 6th, 2022 13:12

Write your own Story(1st sonnet)
Dahlia said:

beautifully penned
aren\'t we all a Pandora\'s box
enjoyed
Dahlia

April 6th, 2022 12:52

Write your own Story(1st sonnet)
Bella Shepard said:

I just got a book of Shakespeare\'s sonnets from the library, I had never read one before. I am beginning to understand the framework and flow and I love what you have written. We truly can be very different people, depending on the point of view.

April 6th, 2022 11:46

=showering with lilacs=
Bella Shepard said:

You present such a vivid picture , I can feel the rain and smell the lilacs. A beautiful piece.

April 5th, 2022 15:19

=showering with lilacs=
Dahlia said:

beautiful imagery you\'ve presented here poet...enjoyed...Dahlia

April 5th, 2022 11:26

=showering with lilacs=
Christina8 said:

As you can see from my picture here, I love lilacs to the nth degree, your poem about a lilac grove was heaven! Our lilacs don\'t bloom til late May but I can smell them! Thank you for this!

April 5th, 2022 08:46

=showering with lilacs=
Rocky Lagou said:

May I shower with you? (I say that in the non-creepiest manner possible) No but seriously, I love your expression. These short bundles of imagery and emotion are fantastic.

April 5th, 2022 08:43

=showering with lilacs=
sorenbarrett said:

Such a vivid sense of beauty in the visual and olfactory as well as tactile. The wording itself was wonderful. Loved it

April 5th, 2022 08:09

-the picture hangs a wall-
Rocky Lagou said:

Wow this is quite profound. I mean normally it\'d be the other way around, a picture is hung on a wall, but I think I\'m grasping the metaphor. I assume this \"picture\" is a person being hung on a \"gallow\" for a reason I can\'t seem to pinpoint exactly, but I love your creativity. Really well done!

April 4th, 2022 12:40

-the picture hangs a wall-
Bella Shepard said:

Intriguing, and I love thinking about this one. Perhaps complementary in meaning between the picture and the wall? I have the thought for the day, thank you.

April 4th, 2022 10:46

-the picture hangs a wall-
L. B. Mek said:

\'paling, is sad state
for our iconic, hope\'s
especially, those
we once framed and hanged
with such assured, fervour
in those frail, walls
of our hearts...\'
an intriguing read
thanks for sharing, dear poet

April 4th, 2022 06:49

-The Arrange of Art-
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words Dean, art in its many forms is so wonderful.

Andy

April 4th, 2022 00:19

-The Arrange of Art-
Crowns4Christ said:

Most people don\'t consider poetry a work of art, I beg to differ, beautifully written Dean

April 3rd, 2022 15:42

-The Arrange of Art-
Bella Shepard said:

I love this gentle and elegant poem. Art is intertwined in so many ways, and seems to come from the same source no matter what the medium. Beautifully written.

April 3rd, 2022 12:29

-The Arrange of Art-
sorenbarrett said:

Wonderfully expressed a great thought

April 3rd, 2022 12:08

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