Comments received on poems by dean langmuir
A poemy short story
dean langmuir said:
Thank you Rocky as always for the comments, I think as poets we become a medium when we allow the poem to write itself, you are very good at that, take care, poet on,keep singing
January 18th, 2023 10:24
dean langmuir said:
Thank you Rocky as always for the comments, I think as poets we become a medium when we allow the poem to write itself, you are very good at that, take care, poet on,keep singing
January 18th, 2023 10:24
A poemy short story
Rocky Lagou said:
This is some top-notch poetry, Dean!!!
I am literally swallowed by your words and I can\'t help but feel engulfed in this world that you painted.
This is my new gay love song on repeat!!!
\"We will live both lives
We will arrange this to be true\"
AHHHH, my Lord, your words are literally so graceful.
I love this contrast between yourself and your lover. Whilst you seem to be seasoned in all things climatic and tropical, your lover has \"not yet seen / nor felt snow beneath his feet / or the retreat of summer into fall.\"
It\'s like you are depicting yourself as a medium through which your lover can gain new knowledge and insight.
Thank you for this poem dear poet.
January 17th, 2023 14:12
Rocky Lagou said:
This is some top-notch poetry, Dean!!!
I am literally swallowed by your words and I can\'t help but feel engulfed in this world that you painted.
This is my new gay love song on repeat!!!
\"We will live both lives
We will arrange this to be true\"
AHHHH, my Lord, your words are literally so graceful.
I love this contrast between yourself and your lover. Whilst you seem to be seasoned in all things climatic and tropical, your lover has \"not yet seen / nor felt snow beneath his feet / or the retreat of summer into fall.\"
It\'s like you are depicting yourself as a medium through which your lover can gain new knowledge and insight.
Thank you for this poem dear poet.
January 17th, 2023 14:12
-Symphonic sadness-
Neville said:
If I was able to award you full marks, then I most surely would .. brevitas superbus sir ............... Neville
August 22nd, 2022 05:13
Neville said:
If I was able to award you full marks, then I most surely would .. brevitas superbus sir ............... Neville
August 22nd, 2022 05:13
-Symphonic sadness-
Fay Slimm. said:
The title drew my close attention to this poignant lament dean - - you capture the music of sadness so well in this tellng nine-liner.
August 16th, 2022 16:56
Fay Slimm. said:
The title drew my close attention to this poignant lament dean - - you capture the music of sadness so well in this tellng nine-liner.
August 16th, 2022 16:56
-I wept-
L. B. Mek said:
(that cathartic release;
where we commune or empathise
so strongly, we loose a part of ourselves
to that moment or to that
which impacted us so strongly
and it may take us a lifetime, to recognise
what part of us, needed
such repressed feeling\'s, to be expressed
but, still
as the raindrops nurture life in our world
so do our tears, nurture
growth
within us...)
just such a succinct and powerful read
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 4th, 2022 02:54
L. B. Mek said:
(that cathartic release;
where we commune or empathise
so strongly, we loose a part of ourselves
to that moment or to that
which impacted us so strongly
and it may take us a lifetime, to recognise
what part of us, needed
such repressed feeling\'s, to be expressed
but, still
as the raindrops nurture life in our world
so do our tears, nurture
growth
within us...)
just such a succinct and powerful read
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 4th, 2022 02:54
-me and my pen-
Neville said:
existentialism rules OK .. ink well spent sir & truly ................. Neville
August 3rd, 2022 02:11
Neville said:
existentialism rules OK .. ink well spent sir & truly ................. Neville
August 3rd, 2022 02:11
-me and my pen-
Goldfinch60 said:
Many times we seem to wait for a response but they do come.
Andy
August 3rd, 2022 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Many times we seem to wait for a response but they do come.
Andy
August 3rd, 2022 01:06
-Silent Flame-
Bella Shepard said:
I just love the analogy, so beautifully worded. Such a thoughtful write my friend!
July 25th, 2022 09:01
Bella Shepard said:
I just love the analogy, so beautifully worded. Such a thoughtful write my friend!
July 25th, 2022 09:01
-Eloquently influenced-
L. B. Mek said:
simply Beautiful, dear Poet
I couldn\'t help but try
and poetically reply
with these
little scribbled words below
thanks for sharing!
(like a fluttering leaf, we glide
to and from, at the mercy
of fate\'s, whim
yet, knowingly we still entrust
ourselves to be sculpted
and perfected, by those
who caress our existence
with their guiding presence
for
when we eventually, lay
on that inevitable, dirt pillow
we\'ll know
that which was gifted to us
as our life\'s
brush strokes of eloquence
we allowed
to make Art of our cherished
life...)
June 16th, 2022 03:38
L. B. Mek said:
simply Beautiful, dear Poet
I couldn\'t help but try
and poetically reply
with these
little scribbled words below
thanks for sharing!
(like a fluttering leaf, we glide
to and from, at the mercy
of fate\'s, whim
yet, knowingly we still entrust
ourselves to be sculpted
and perfected, by those
who caress our existence
with their guiding presence
for
when we eventually, lay
on that inevitable, dirt pillow
we\'ll know
that which was gifted to us
as our life\'s
brush strokes of eloquence
we allowed
to make Art of our cherished
life...)
June 16th, 2022 03:38
Father-Son
arqios said:
That tension and balance when we have teenage children, with this I can relate. That they are enabled to thrive as their unique selves is a cherished goal and challenge. A very real poem. Thanks for sharing. /Rik.
June 9th, 2022 16:51
arqios said:
That tension and balance when we have teenage children, with this I can relate. That they are enabled to thrive as their unique selves is a cherished goal and challenge. A very real poem. Thanks for sharing. /Rik.
June 9th, 2022 16:51
-The Heart-
languale said:
I like this!
Maybe if you want to, you could check my poem called \"about dreams\" aswell 🙂 let me know what you think about it!
June 2nd, 2022 08:43
languale said:
I like this!
Maybe if you want to, you could check my poem called \"about dreams\" aswell 🙂 let me know what you think about it!
June 2nd, 2022 08:43
-The Heart-
L. B. Mek said:
so true, a wonderful message
as reminder for us All
to appreciate those smaller, mercy\'s
we\'re afforded in our lives..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
June 2nd, 2022 03:16
L. B. Mek said:
so true, a wonderful message
as reminder for us All
to appreciate those smaller, mercy\'s
we\'re afforded in our lives..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
June 2nd, 2022 03:16
-Souls walking by-
dean langmuir said:
Thanks LB always nice to hear from you,take care.
May 16th, 2022 19:57
dean langmuir said:
Thanks LB always nice to hear from you,take care.
May 16th, 2022 19:57
-Souls walking by-
L. B. Mek said:
(yup, how many
of those we walk past, daily
can offer us
that potential, for that yearned-for
connection
our distanced, societal
co-existence
insures, we\'ll never get
to contemplate..)
a relatable read, dear poet
thanks for sharing
May 16th, 2022 04:59
L. B. Mek said:
(yup, how many
of those we walk past, daily
can offer us
that potential, for that yearned-for
connection
our distanced, societal
co-existence
insures, we\'ll never get
to contemplate..)
a relatable read, dear poet
thanks for sharing
May 16th, 2022 04:59
-Sung with passion-
arqios said:
It is something like this when you hear someone before the sound of their voice reaches your ears/mind.
May 12th, 2022 22:15
arqios said:
It is something like this when you hear someone before the sound of their voice reaches your ears/mind.
May 12th, 2022 22:15
-Colored Words-
arqios said:
An excellent and clever poem! One worth emulating, at some stage. Almost Sator squarish in design. Thanks for sharing. /Rik.
May 11th, 2022 07:16
arqios said:
An excellent and clever poem! One worth emulating, at some stage. Almost Sator squarish in design. Thanks for sharing. /Rik.
May 11th, 2022 07:16
-A Poet knows-
arqios said:
And neither do we but as we read we find out that they do really fly! Awesome read. Very clever. Much fun! Thanks for sharing. /Rik.
May 10th, 2022 08:16
arqios said:
And neither do we but as we read we find out that they do really fly! Awesome read. Very clever. Much fun! Thanks for sharing. /Rik.
May 10th, 2022 08:16
-run or stay-
dean langmuir said:
Thank you S,chaotic thoughts is right,you take care.
April 13th, 2022 13:05
dean langmuir said:
Thank you S,chaotic thoughts is right,you take care.
April 13th, 2022 13:05
-run or stay-
spilleronsheet said:
Well worded dear Poet
Many a times I may stay
But few runaway
Abandon I lay with my own chaotic thoughts in trail….
April 13th, 2022 09:06
spilleronsheet said:
Well worded dear Poet
Many a times I may stay
But few runaway
Abandon I lay with my own chaotic thoughts in trail….
April 13th, 2022 09:06
-run or stay-
Pearcemelville 兎敏 said:
simple and shared by all
making your poem effective
With some there is
a good vibe but
April 12th, 2022 14:45
Pearcemelville 兎敏 said:
simple and shared by all
making your poem effective
With some there is
a good vibe but
April 12th, 2022 14:45
-run or stay-
dean langmuir said:
Hi Teddy,I try not think bad of anyone also,but I have a couple times in life where every sense in my body said say Hi then move on,most people stay when they meet me.you have a good day.
April 12th, 2022 10:32
dean langmuir said:
Hi Teddy,I try not think bad of anyone also,but I have a couple times in life where every sense in my body said say Hi then move on,most people stay when they meet me.you have a good day.
April 12th, 2022 10:32
-A Poet knows-
dean langmuir said:
Thank you Blue,I hope for that also,take care
April 11th, 2022 17:09
dean langmuir said:
Thank you Blue,I hope for that also,take care
April 11th, 2022 17:09
-A Poet knows-
Crowns4Christ said:
So true,we have no idea how our work will be interpreted or perceived,we just hope to inspire others to share their hearts or change their mind, that is all that I can hope for, great piece Dean
April 11th, 2022 15:02
Crowns4Christ said:
So true,we have no idea how our work will be interpreted or perceived,we just hope to inspire others to share their hearts or change their mind, that is all that I can hope for, great piece Dean
April 11th, 2022 15:02
-A Poet knows-
dean langmuir said:
Thanks for reading Rocky,it always feels good if there\'s a flutter,you take care.
April 11th, 2022 09:40
dean langmuir said:
Thanks for reading Rocky,it always feels good if there\'s a flutter,you take care.
April 11th, 2022 09:40
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