Comments received on poems by dean langmuir



-Symphonic sadness-
Teddy.15 said:

This is beautiful. πŸ’–

August 26th, 2022 15:11

-Symphonic sadness-
Neville said:


If I was able to award you full marks, then I most surely would .. brevitas superbus sir ............... Neville


August 22nd, 2022 05:13

-Symphonic sadness-
Fay Slimm. said:

The title drew my close attention to this poignant lament dean - - you capture the music of sadness so well in this tellng nine-liner.

August 16th, 2022 16:56

-I wept-
L. B. Mek said:

(that cathartic release;
where we commune or empathise
so strongly, we loose a part of ourselves
to that moment or to that
which impacted us so strongly
and it may take us a lifetime, to recognise
what part of us, needed
such repressed feeling\'s, to be expressed
but, still
as the raindrops nurture life in our world
so do our tears, nurture
growth
within us...)
just such a succinct and powerful read
thanks for sharing, dear poet


August 4th, 2022 02:54

-me and my pen-
Neville said:



existentialism rules OK .. ink well spent sir & truly ................. Neville

August 3rd, 2022 02:11

-me and my pen-
Goldfinch60 said:

Many times we seem to wait for a response but they do come.

Andy

August 3rd, 2022 01:06

-intention-
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!

August 1st, 2022 02:39

-Silent Flame-
Bella Shepard said:

I just love the analogy, so beautifully worded. Such a thoughtful write my friend!

July 25th, 2022 09:01

-Eloquently influenced-
L. B. Mek said:

simply Beautiful, dear Poet
I couldn\'t help but try
and poetically reply
with these
little scribbled words below
thanks for sharing!
(like a fluttering leaf, we glide
to and from, at the mercy
of fate\'s, whim
yet, knowingly we still entrust
ourselves to be sculpted
and perfected, by those
who caress our existence
with their guiding presence
for
when we eventually, lay
on that inevitable, dirt pillow
we\'ll know
that which was gifted to us
as our life\'s
brush strokes of eloquence
we allowed
to make Art of our cherished
life...)

June 16th, 2022 03:38

Father-Son
crypticbard said:

That tension and balance when we have teenage children, with this I can relate. That they are enabled to thrive as their unique selves is a cherished goal and challenge. A very real poem. Thanks for sharing. /Rik.

June 9th, 2022 16:51

Father-Son
dean langmuir said:

Thanks Lb,you take care.

June 9th, 2022 05:29

Father-Son
L. B. Mek said:

Amen!
simply Beautiful, dear Poet
thank you

June 9th, 2022 03:38

-The Heart-
languale said:

I like this!
Maybe if you want to, you could check my poem called \"about dreams\" aswell πŸ™‚ let me know what you think about it!

June 2nd, 2022 08:43

-The Heart-
L. B. Mek said:

so true, a wonderful message
as reminder for us All
to appreciate those smaller, mercy\'s
we\'re afforded in our lives..
thanks for sharing, dear poet

June 2nd, 2022 03:16

-Souls walking by-
dean langmuir said:

Thanks LB always nice to hear from you,take care.

May 16th, 2022 19:57

-Souls walking by-
L. B. Mek said:

(yup, how many
of those we walk past, daily
can offer us
that potential, for that yearned-for
connection
our distanced, societal
co-existence
insures, we\'ll never get
to contemplate..)
a relatable read, dear poet
thanks for sharing



May 16th, 2022 04:59

-Sung with passion-
crypticbard said:

It is something like this when you hear someone before the sound of their voice reaches your ears/mind.

May 12th, 2022 22:15

-Colored Words-
crypticbard said:

An excellent and clever poem! One worth emulating, at some stage. Almost Sator squarish in design. Thanks for sharing. /Rik.

May 11th, 2022 07:16

-A Poet knows-
crypticbard said:

And neither do we but as we read we find out that they do really fly! Awesome read. Very clever. Much fun! Thanks for sharing. /Rik.

May 10th, 2022 08:16

-run or stay-
dean langmuir said:

Thank you S,chaotic thoughts is right,you take care.

April 13th, 2022 13:05

-run or stay-
spilleronsheet said:

Well worded dear Poet
Many a times I may stay
But few runaway
Abandon I lay with my own chaotic thoughts in trail….

April 13th, 2022 09:06

-run or stay-
Rozina said:

Some do some don\'t I guess. Nice lines indeed.

April 12th, 2022 18:10

-run or stay-
Pearcemelville ε…Žζ• said:

simple and shared by all
making your poem effective
With some there is
a good vibe but

April 12th, 2022 14:45

-run or stay-
dean langmuir said:

Hi Teddy,I try not think bad of anyone also,but I have a couple times in life where every sense in my body said say Hi then move on,most people stay when they meet me.you have a good day.

April 12th, 2022 10:32

-run or stay-
Teddy.15 said:

lol I like to say I run when the red lights flash in my mind but I can also say that I\'m a push-over and don\'t like to think bad.of others , usually though looking back I should have run. lol 🀣 a great subject πŸ’–

Should I be running from you Dean? 🀣

April 12th, 2022 10:09

-run or stay-
Neville said:


very often they are gone before I can ask the







:)


April 12th, 2022 09:45

-A Poet knows-
Neville said:



brevitas succinctus superbus sir :)

April 12th, 2022 01:59

-A Poet knows-
dean langmuir said:

Thank you Blue,I hope for that also,take care

April 11th, 2022 17:09

-A Poet knows-
blue orchid said:

So true,we have no idea how our work will be interpreted or perceived,we just hope to inspire others to share their hearts or change their mind, that is all that I can hope for, great piece Dean

April 11th, 2022 15:02

-A Poet knows-
dean langmuir said:

Thanks for reading Rocky,it always feels good if there\'s a flutter,you take care.

April 11th, 2022 09:40

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