Comments received on poems by Sophenia
The same
L. B. Mek said:
people mistake loneliness for solitude
one is a choice , a mindset
the other, a factor of fear in our life
to distil ourselves
from that nurture and nature, debacle
we call a childhood
is our greatest fight in life;
if you\'ve found your path, dear Poet
follow it
and choose wisely
how you overcome its perils, knowing
eventually you\'ll find that better
that innate, you may be able to call
\'home\'
and even if you don\'t make it
you won\'t have any regrets
for you\'ll own
every choice you made!
I wish you all the best
April 3rd, 2023 06:09
L. B. Mek said:
people mistake loneliness for solitude
one is a choice , a mindset
the other, a factor of fear in our life
to distil ourselves
from that nurture and nature, debacle
we call a childhood
is our greatest fight in life;
if you\'ve found your path, dear Poet
follow it
and choose wisely
how you overcome its perils, knowing
eventually you\'ll find that better
that innate, you may be able to call
\'home\'
and even if you don\'t make it
you won\'t have any regrets
for you\'ll own
every choice you made!
I wish you all the best
April 3rd, 2023 06:09
Survival mode
Sage_Roman said:
Glad to hear survival mode has been deactivated. Beautiful poem, I loved every word.
March 15th, 2023 21:14
Sage_Roman said:
Glad to hear survival mode has been deactivated. Beautiful poem, I loved every word.
March 15th, 2023 21:14
Finding connection in the disconnection
ModernPoemLover said:
As a daydreamer and reader, I totally relate, thank you for this amazing poem!
February 20th, 2023 10:28
ModernPoemLover said:
As a daydreamer and reader, I totally relate, thank you for this amazing poem!
February 20th, 2023 10:28
Finding connection in the disconnection
jenny.g said:
I really felt this. Alone is feared by so many people but it can be a place of tranquility. Lovely write.
February 20th, 2023 08:00
jenny.g said:
I really felt this. Alone is feared by so many people but it can be a place of tranquility. Lovely write.
February 20th, 2023 08:00
Finding connection in the disconnection
Doggerel Dave said:
There\'s nothing wrong with being alone - as you rightly point out, you are more yourself when you are not subject to the demands of others. Your attention can be more outward. Alone you can sometimes learn more.
A good solid write I like very much.
February 20th, 2023 07:20
Doggerel Dave said:
There\'s nothing wrong with being alone - as you rightly point out, you are more yourself when you are not subject to the demands of others. Your attention can be more outward. Alone you can sometimes learn more.
A good solid write I like very much.
February 20th, 2023 07:20
Overcoming all my fears
Natalie Gladmir said:
\"I\'ll Overcome Some Day\" should be your motto in life. I\'m sure.
February 19th, 2023 15:54
Natalie Gladmir said:
\"I\'ll Overcome Some Day\" should be your motto in life. I\'m sure.
February 19th, 2023 15:54
What does being happy mean?
rhmn_7 said:
Finding positivity even if it\'s easier not to, so that is happiness...
February 11th, 2023 15:36
rhmn_7 said:
Finding positivity even if it\'s easier not to, so that is happiness...
February 11th, 2023 15:36
What does being happy mean?
Claudia Mortimer said:
I totally resonate with this ❤️
February 11th, 2023 08:42
Claudia Mortimer said:
I totally resonate with this ❤️
February 11th, 2023 08:42
Pushing me away
Myth said:
It is a nice piece .. yeb some lovers act like a ballet dancer. .
February 8th, 2023 05:14
Myth said:
It is a nice piece .. yeb some lovers act like a ballet dancer. .
February 8th, 2023 05:14
The middle
L. B. Mek said:
clear, succinct and poetic
you unearthed a voice
that\'s full of purpose..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(I too am wondering about those 8 rules of love
maybe a prompt for a follow up poem?)
February 6th, 2023 04:53
L. B. Mek said:
clear, succinct and poetic
you unearthed a voice
that\'s full of purpose..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(I too am wondering about those 8 rules of love
maybe a prompt for a follow up poem?)
February 6th, 2023 04:53
The middle
H. Jordan said:
This is really cool! Exactly what I needed to hear!
February 6th, 2023 01:41
H. Jordan said:
This is really cool! Exactly what I needed to hear!
February 6th, 2023 01:41
The middle
tallisman said:
Darn, I was wondering what the eight rules were! Pretty good!
February 5th, 2023 16:37
tallisman said:
Darn, I was wondering what the eight rules were! Pretty good!
February 5th, 2023 16:37
Hiding in the shadows
tallisman said:
Responsibility and growth, we grow into those shoes. You reach a stage where you want to be in them, but at some point you wish you could take them off! Guess it’s an age thing! Good write, Dave.
September 8th, 2022 12:01
tallisman said:
Responsibility and growth, we grow into those shoes. You reach a stage where you want to be in them, but at some point you wish you could take them off! Guess it’s an age thing! Good write, Dave.
September 8th, 2022 12:01
A monkey I would be, wild and free
shaa said:
I want to be a monkey with you 🥲
September 7th, 2022 13:58
shaa said:
I want to be a monkey with you 🥲
September 7th, 2022 13:58
Crying tears of relief
Raven333 said:
Nice poem Sophenia, Before my cry and after I know my family will always be there.
July 17th, 2022 12:30
Raven333 said:
Nice poem Sophenia, Before my cry and after I know my family will always be there.
July 17th, 2022 12:30
Stay strong
tallisman said:
I hope you do too, and may your wishes become true!
July 12th, 2022 00:43
tallisman said:
I hope you do too, and may your wishes become true!
July 12th, 2022 00:43
An ode to the magic within
L. B. Mek said:
so, so relatable
what an empowering message
thank you! for choosing to share
dear Poet
June 21st, 2022 03:22
L. B. Mek said:
so, so relatable
what an empowering message
thank you! for choosing to share
dear Poet
June 21st, 2022 03:22
An ode to the magic within
dusk arising said:
\"With every ending there is also a new beginning\" could so easily be the anthem of the road to positive thinking.
Well done for fighting through your struggles to once again feel that magical thing that keeps us going on to wherever.
Your words today say so much. It is good to see you here again sharing this bug we all have, this compulsion to write from the heart.
June 20th, 2022 10:54
dusk arising said:
\"With every ending there is also a new beginning\" could so easily be the anthem of the road to positive thinking.
Well done for fighting through your struggles to once again feel that magical thing that keeps us going on to wherever.
Your words today say so much. It is good to see you here again sharing this bug we all have, this compulsion to write from the heart.
June 20th, 2022 10:54
Be unique and they will admire
Pocev_Gjoshe said:
If you dont follow a rule,
In their eyes you are cruel .
If you are unique,
You can be admired
But you can be also fired.
I Face it every Day,
Should i adapte or do it my way?
May 26th, 2022 14:32
Pocev_Gjoshe said:
If you dont follow a rule,
In their eyes you are cruel .
If you are unique,
You can be admired
But you can be also fired.
I Face it every Day,
Should i adapte or do it my way?
May 26th, 2022 14:32
To Heal The Hurt
dusk arising said:
A very moving piece for anyone with more than a few years under their belt. I think I may have touched upon a similar vein in my post today.
Stay well.
May 9th, 2022 04:11
dusk arising said:
A very moving piece for anyone with more than a few years under their belt. I think I may have touched upon a similar vein in my post today.
Stay well.
May 9th, 2022 04:11
Be fearless
Christina8 said:
So as someone with panic disorder, this poem title was screaming out for me to read.\"Don\'t be afraid Be fearless\" are words to live by. Its a beautiful song. Whether sunny or dreary every day ought to be a great day, right? Great job dear poet!!
April 25th, 2022 07:45
Christina8 said:
So as someone with panic disorder, this poem title was screaming out for me to read.\"Don\'t be afraid Be fearless\" are words to live by. Its a beautiful song. Whether sunny or dreary every day ought to be a great day, right? Great job dear poet!!
April 25th, 2022 07:45
Be fearless
L. B. Mek said:
It inspired me
to try out, the very Ted exercise
that inspired you, only
using your beautiful Poem, as my source...
how about this, pitiful effort
dear Poet:
(\'Today,
Is a great day!
Love what you do
Three hundred voices
Bringing joy in the sky
Don\'t be afraid
Little darling
Dance all night
Roses are red
Shining fearless and bright
Spreading love
Be fearless\'...)
Please
forgive me, I meant no disrespect
by rearranging
your beautiful work..
thank you! for sharing your song
and gifting me, that inspiration
to try something
so brazenly and egotistically
creative..
April 25th, 2022 07:18
L. B. Mek said:
It inspired me
to try out, the very Ted exercise
that inspired you, only
using your beautiful Poem, as my source...
how about this, pitiful effort
dear Poet:
(\'Today,
Is a great day!
Love what you do
Three hundred voices
Bringing joy in the sky
Don\'t be afraid
Little darling
Dance all night
Roses are red
Shining fearless and bright
Spreading love
Be fearless\'...)
Please
forgive me, I meant no disrespect
by rearranging
your beautiful work..
thank you! for sharing your song
and gifting me, that inspiration
to try something
so brazenly and egotistically
creative..
April 25th, 2022 07:18
Let the change in
L. B. Mek said:
\'more power to you!\'
if you\'re not hurting anyone
then \'Do You!\'
soar free, struggle heartily
let it be by your hands and choices
you realise the limits of possibility
never, from being stunted
by other\'s, toxic presence in your life
or that poisonous self-doubt, infesting
your every step, with fear\'s - regret!
All the best! dear poet
may fate be kind and your horizon\'s
ever bright!
April 22nd, 2022 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
\'more power to you!\'
if you\'re not hurting anyone
then \'Do You!\'
soar free, struggle heartily
let it be by your hands and choices
you realise the limits of possibility
never, from being stunted
by other\'s, toxic presence in your life
or that poisonous self-doubt, infesting
your every step, with fear\'s - regret!
All the best! dear poet
may fate be kind and your horizon\'s
ever bright!
April 22nd, 2022 05:15
Let the change in
dusk arising said:
Wonderful watershed poetry. A time for grasping those reins and moving on. Our past will stay with us as a part of our character but we are more than our past.
I feel I should be wishing you the very best of success in the life ahead of you.
April 22nd, 2022 05:12
dusk arising said:
Wonderful watershed poetry. A time for grasping those reins and moving on. Our past will stay with us as a part of our character but we are more than our past.
I feel I should be wishing you the very best of success in the life ahead of you.
April 22nd, 2022 05:12
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