Comments received on poems by tallisman
Child of my youth
tallisman said:
Shamrocker, thanks! Good to hear from you! Hope you are well…
April 16th, 2023 14:14
tallisman said:
Shamrocker, thanks! Good to hear from you! Hope you are well…
April 16th, 2023 14:14
Child of my youth
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Tallisman!!! A heart touching write!
April 16th, 2023 06:22
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Tallisman!!! A heart touching write!
April 16th, 2023 06:22
Consumed
2781 said:
He was a murderer from the beginning, and abode not in the truth, for the truth was not in him. When he speaks a lie, he speaks of his own: for he is a liar, and the father of it.
April 14th, 2023 17:59
2781 said:
He was a murderer from the beginning, and abode not in the truth, for the truth was not in him. When he speaks a lie, he speaks of his own: for he is a liar, and the father of it.
April 14th, 2023 17:59
Consumed
David Wakeling said:
This is well written.Certainly a good depiction of the modern relationship.I like the rhyme
April 14th, 2023 16:17
David Wakeling said:
This is well written.Certainly a good depiction of the modern relationship.I like the rhyme
April 14th, 2023 16:17
The Rocking chair
Goldfinch60 said:
People are always there in memory when you see those chairs of the past.
Andy
April 14th, 2023 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
People are always there in memory when you see those chairs of the past.
Andy
April 14th, 2023 00:44
The Fall
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely one for believers, or at least a connecting reference to this material, Tallisman...... Next one please 😇!!!
April 1st, 2023 16:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely one for believers, or at least a connecting reference to this material, Tallisman...... Next one please 😇!!!
April 1st, 2023 16:57
The Fall
2781 said:
MYSTERY, BABYLON THE GREAT, THE MOTHER OF HARLOTS AND ABOMINATIONS OF THE EARTH.
April 1st, 2023 05:30
2781 said:
MYSTERY, BABYLON THE GREAT, THE MOTHER OF HARLOTS AND ABOMINATIONS OF THE EARTH.
April 1st, 2023 05:30
Invisible
Doggerel Dave said:
Not a topic I normally give much consideration to here, Tallisman. However in your hands this is a different matter....
A well rendered portrait of the subject of your attention, your feelings towards, and last but not least, the wish expressed that she will find, perhaps love one day even if it does not involve you.
Well spoken of.
March 31st, 2023 18:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Not a topic I normally give much consideration to here, Tallisman. However in your hands this is a different matter....
A well rendered portrait of the subject of your attention, your feelings towards, and last but not least, the wish expressed that she will find, perhaps love one day even if it does not involve you.
Well spoken of.
March 31st, 2023 18:41
Invisible
L. B. Mek said:
sincere words, I hope they bridge
a path, to that better you deserve
thanks for sharing
March 31st, 2023 04:37
L. B. Mek said:
sincere words, I hope they bridge
a path, to that better you deserve
thanks for sharing
March 31st, 2023 04:37
Child of my youth
sadkw33n said:
A masterpiece if you ask me. You delivered the concept beautifully. Thanks for sharing, you\'re a great poet.
March 29th, 2023 06:29
sadkw33n said:
A masterpiece if you ask me. You delivered the concept beautifully. Thanks for sharing, you\'re a great poet.
March 29th, 2023 06:29
Endings
Doggerel Dave said:
I admire this v. much, Tallisman. Well structured with a truth or two embedded within the main message.
No further comment - it stands solidly on its own foundations.
March 13th, 2023 19:33
Doggerel Dave said:
I admire this v. much, Tallisman. Well structured with a truth or two embedded within the main message.
No further comment - it stands solidly on its own foundations.
March 13th, 2023 19:33
Child of my youth
Chris Duffy said:
Lovely piece my friend. Right up my street in the rhyme and feel . Luvverly write!
February 14th, 2023 23:33
Chris Duffy said:
Lovely piece my friend. Right up my street in the rhyme and feel . Luvverly write!
February 14th, 2023 23:33
The River
charles69 said:
This is a beautiful, tragic poem that employs very artistically , words and rhymes and imagery
rain is such a powerful symbol
you use this and other symbols masterfully
If this poem is about you I hope there will be a good outcome soon
\"there was never a road that didn\'t turn\"
If you get time please read my poem \"Beyonce\" and let me know how you think and feel about this use of poetry
thanks for a great poem, although tragic
February 9th, 2023 16:28
charles69 said:
This is a beautiful, tragic poem that employs very artistically , words and rhymes and imagery
rain is such a powerful symbol
you use this and other symbols masterfully
If this poem is about you I hope there will be a good outcome soon
\"there was never a road that didn\'t turn\"
If you get time please read my poem \"Beyonce\" and let me know how you think and feel about this use of poetry
thanks for a great poem, although tragic
February 9th, 2023 16:28
Child of my youth
L. B. Mek said:
(that you\'re looking
is testimony, enough
most
can barely look themselves
in the eye, fearing
a reappearance, a glimpse
of that youth they idolise
unwilling
to accept the lies, they feed
with a warping of their past..
a trick to life, is insuring
we fight to keep alive, that remnant
essence of gaiety and youth
in our hearts, there-in
dwells our veracity of worth
our grace, our dreams and hopes
our fuel for persevering
all those obstacles that yet await..)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 6th, 2023 05:44
L. B. Mek said:
(that you\'re looking
is testimony, enough
most
can barely look themselves
in the eye, fearing
a reappearance, a glimpse
of that youth they idolise
unwilling
to accept the lies, they feed
with a warping of their past..
a trick to life, is insuring
we fight to keep alive, that remnant
essence of gaiety and youth
in our hearts, there-in
dwells our veracity of worth
our grace, our dreams and hopes
our fuel for persevering
all those obstacles that yet await..)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
February 6th, 2023 05:44
Child of my youth
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Tallisman, I often look in the mirror and see my father looking back at me.
Andy
February 6th, 2023 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Tallisman, I often look in the mirror and see my father looking back at me.
Andy
February 6th, 2023 02:19
Child of my youth
Doggerel Dave said:
Just give the image an empathic smile - works wonders. 🙂
\'Tis however a truthful write; describes something we all have to find our own way through, I suppose.
February 6th, 2023 01:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Just give the image an empathic smile - works wonders. 🙂
\'Tis however a truthful write; describes something we all have to find our own way through, I suppose.
February 6th, 2023 01:41
The Song
Doggerel Dave said:
A masterly construction, T. It ultimately mattered little whether I believed - your words transcended all that, and I was in the moment.
February 3rd, 2023 07:14
Doggerel Dave said:
A masterly construction, T. It ultimately mattered little whether I believed - your words transcended all that, and I was in the moment.
February 3rd, 2023 07:14
The Song
L. B. Mek said:
devoid of any theological alignment
I can still appreciate these wonderful rhymes
thanks for sharing, great flow
February 3rd, 2023 05:59
L. B. Mek said:
devoid of any theological alignment
I can still appreciate these wonderful rhymes
thanks for sharing, great flow
February 3rd, 2023 05:59
Intracerebral
Bella Shepard said:
Such a compelling picture you paint of schizophrenia. It\'s so difficult to understand what lurks in the minds of those afflicted, the torture they endure in essentially an altered universe. My dad was bipolar, mental illness is one of the hardest to understand. Thank you for this awareness!
February 2nd, 2023 14:19
Bella Shepard said:
Such a compelling picture you paint of schizophrenia. It\'s so difficult to understand what lurks in the minds of those afflicted, the torture they endure in essentially an altered universe. My dad was bipolar, mental illness is one of the hardest to understand. Thank you for this awareness!
February 2nd, 2023 14:19
Back seats
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks T. For me that was an honest appraisal of a certain short period of my life in all its complexity, achieved with truth, lightness and humour.
January 15th, 2023 17:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks T. For me that was an honest appraisal of a certain short period of my life in all its complexity, achieved with truth, lightness and humour.
January 15th, 2023 17:01
« Return to the profile of tallisman
