Comments received on poems by tallisman
My bathroom upgrade
š¤s.zaynab.kamoonpuriš·š¦š½ said:
Ha ha an entertaining plumbing story poem fantastic on humour. Plumbers really overcharge sometime ah. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
November 6th, 2022 07:41
š¤s.zaynab.kamoonpuriš·š¦š½ said:
Ha ha an entertaining plumbing story poem fantastic on humour. Plumbers really overcharge sometime ah. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
November 6th, 2022 07:41
My bathroom upgrade
dusk arising said:
As a plumbing and heating man recently retired due to ill health and with a bathroom much in need of a facelift/update, you poem really struck home here.
A really entertaining piece and into my favourites too.
October 20th, 2022 10:03
dusk arising said:
As a plumbing and heating man recently retired due to ill health and with a bathroom much in need of a facelift/update, you poem really struck home here.
A really entertaining piece and into my favourites too.
October 20th, 2022 10:03
My bathroom upgrade
Doggerel Dave said:
Calm -stagger to your desk - tickle them keys - Prof Google to the rescue.
Alt strategy - third magnetic sticker from the left on fridge,
Above all, do not ruin your manicure.
I speak from hard experience.
Write got it in technicolor
October 20th, 2022 05:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Calm -stagger to your desk - tickle them keys - Prof Google to the rescue.
Alt strategy - third magnetic sticker from the left on fridge,
Above all, do not ruin your manicure.
I speak from hard experience.
Write got it in technicolor
October 20th, 2022 05:44
Love you soā¦
tallisman said:
Hello Shamrock, hope all good with you! Thanks for dropping by on both sites, really appreciate your kind comments!
October 15th, 2022 15:12
tallisman said:
Hello Shamrock, hope all good with you! Thanks for dropping by on both sites, really appreciate your kind comments!
October 15th, 2022 15:12
Love you soā¦
GenXer Shamrocker āļø said:
Couldnāt have said it better!
October 15th, 2022 13:25
GenXer Shamrocker āļø said:
Couldnāt have said it better!
October 15th, 2022 13:25
Goodbye
GenXer Shamrocker āļø said:
Never ever stop writing.!! Youāre one of my favorites!
October 15th, 2022 13:23
GenXer Shamrocker āļø said:
Never ever stop writing.!! Youāre one of my favorites!
October 15th, 2022 13:23
Into the fireā¦
Doggerel Dave said:
I get a sinking feeling just reading this. The inevitability of it all. Powerful stuff tallisman. Thanks.
October 13th, 2022 17:36
Doggerel Dave said:
I get a sinking feeling just reading this. The inevitability of it all. Powerful stuff tallisman. Thanks.
October 13th, 2022 17:36
Into the fireā¦
lalalaEulalie said:
I really appreciated the passion and eroticism in this. Human nature and our inevitable fate!
Very beautiful piece!
October 13th, 2022 13:50
lalalaEulalie said:
I really appreciated the passion and eroticism in this. Human nature and our inevitable fate!
Very beautiful piece!
October 13th, 2022 13:50
Goodbye
Doggerel Dave said:
Tallisman: Apologies for the first paragraph of my first entry above. No call for that.
Please stay.
October 11th, 2022 00:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Tallisman: Apologies for the first paragraph of my first entry above. No call for that.
Please stay.
October 11th, 2022 00:57
Goodbye
Thekkinkkattil said:
I am you fan so don\'t go away
Your poem has made my day
October 10th, 2022 09:31
Thekkinkkattil said:
I am you fan so don\'t go away
Your poem has made my day
October 10th, 2022 09:31
Goodbye
Doggerel Dave said:
Do not depart. Iām a rhymer. If you havenāt discovered that already, your head is further up your fundamental canal than I thought. (Although Iām probably not important enough to venture within your horizon).
Sole purpose of my intervention was to discourage a dynamic at MPS currently manifested by yourself, which forbids any response which is not laudatory praise. Pathetic.
What you effectively did by your deletion was to censor Teddyās argument which (despite some difficulties Iāve had with her in the past - now buried) was coherent and reasonable. So restore It.
And stay on.
October 10th, 2022 03:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Do not depart. Iām a rhymer. If you havenāt discovered that already, your head is further up your fundamental canal than I thought. (Although Iām probably not important enough to venture within your horizon).
Sole purpose of my intervention was to discourage a dynamic at MPS currently manifested by yourself, which forbids any response which is not laudatory praise. Pathetic.
What you effectively did by your deletion was to censor Teddyās argument which (despite some difficulties Iāve had with her in the past - now buried) was coherent and reasonable. So restore It.
And stay on.
October 10th, 2022 03:46
Waiting for you
arqios said:
That is always a wait worth going through, no matter the outcome. Exhibits a competency for living and hoping. Thanks for sharing.
October 10th, 2022 01:14
arqios said:
That is always a wait worth going through, no matter the outcome. Exhibits a competency for living and hoping. Thanks for sharing.
October 10th, 2022 01:14
Goodbye
arqios said:
I for one am an advocate of both and most poetry types and with your permission the following which I have already posted in another site is another response (also a poor example of a joke) :
\'rimesky a\'course ah could\'ve\'
a keen Reader once retorted
of poetic art reported
metre and rhyme a poet makes
lack thereof are artists\' mistakes
Non-rhymers are not quite preferred
only rhythmic rhymes could be heard
(apologies no toes meant to be stepped on or opinions crossed)
October 10th, 2022 00:55
arqios said:
I for one am an advocate of both and most poetry types and with your permission the following which I have already posted in another site is another response (also a poor example of a joke) :
\'rimesky a\'course ah could\'ve\'
a keen Reader once retorted
of poetic art reported
metre and rhyme a poet makes
lack thereof are artists\' mistakes
Non-rhymers are not quite preferred
only rhythmic rhymes could be heard
(apologies no toes meant to be stepped on or opinions crossed)
October 10th, 2022 00:55
Waiting for you
Doggerel Dave said:
Worthwhile expending energy in a response when it might disappear tomorrow?
October 9th, 2022 17:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Worthwhile expending energy in a response when it might disappear tomorrow?
October 9th, 2022 17:43
The Teddy Challenge
Doggerel Dave said:
Not reinstated your \"controversial\' piece yet then? š
October 8th, 2022 23:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Not reinstated your \"controversial\' piece yet then? š
October 8th, 2022 23:45
The Teddy Challenge
Goldfinch60 said:
There is no way your poem upset me Tallisman, it is a shame that you removed it, poetry has so many forms and they can all be appreciated by all.
Andy
October 7th, 2022 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
There is no way your poem upset me Tallisman, it is a shame that you removed it, poetry has so many forms and they can all be appreciated by all.
Andy
October 7th, 2022 01:31
The Teddy Challenge
Doggerel Dave said:
Ok - but why did you delete it? Is this place a wet place where all contrary views are out of place? Re-place it, otherwise I for one have no place to go....\"OK - bugger off \" comes from the chorus....
Look wot you dun now, Teddy. LOL.
October 6th, 2022 05:12
Doggerel Dave said:
Ok - but why did you delete it? Is this place a wet place where all contrary views are out of place? Re-place it, otherwise I for one have no place to go....\"OK - bugger off \" comes from the chorus....
Look wot you dun now, Teddy. LOL.
October 6th, 2022 05:12
The Teddy Challenge
arqios said:
Good stuff. Now we\'re all on the same page in poetic harmony!
October 6th, 2022 03:23
arqios said:
Good stuff. Now we\'re all on the same page in poetic harmony!
October 6th, 2022 03:23
Always read the label.
Raven333 said:
LOL, I loved it.. I would advise to read the label. nice share
September 26th, 2022 06:05
Raven333 said:
LOL, I loved it.. I would advise to read the label. nice share
September 26th, 2022 06:05
He said, he saidā¦
Raven333 said:
Really great write my friend, and you bring up so much emotion and truth to wonder... and I to believe that this is hell cause it has to be, the evil that we see is to insane....
September 26th, 2022 06:02
Raven333 said:
Really great write my friend, and you bring up so much emotion and truth to wonder... and I to believe that this is hell cause it has to be, the evil that we see is to insane....
September 26th, 2022 06:02
He said, he saidā¦
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words Tallisman and so true, organised religion is a farce and will only confuse reality.
Andy
September 26th, 2022 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words Tallisman and so true, organised religion is a farce and will only confuse reality.
Andy
September 26th, 2022 00:55
He said, he saidā¦
shaa said:
I enjoyed reading this had to create two voices in my head š felt like a deep dialogue and my voice was the third
September 25th, 2022 11:50
shaa said:
I enjoyed reading this had to create two voices in my head š felt like a deep dialogue and my voice was the third
September 25th, 2022 11:50
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