Comments received on poems by tallisman
The best of times
Raven333 said:
Beautiful poem you got here, of course your flow was on point.. great work!!
August 9th, 2022 16:35
Raven333 said:
Beautiful poem you got here, of course your flow was on point.. great work!!
August 9th, 2022 16:35
I wrote a poem that no one reads
Raven333 said:
Wonderful but yet a little sad write, but another great one!!!
August 9th, 2022 11:32
Raven333 said:
Wonderful but yet a little sad write, but another great one!!!
August 9th, 2022 11:32
I wrote a poem that no one reads
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words tallisman, may the music never stop.
Andy
August 9th, 2022 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words tallisman, may the music never stop.
Andy
August 9th, 2022 00:43
I wrote a poem that no one reads
hzugman said:
Very nice progression. Love to hear that song.
August 8th, 2022 15:16
hzugman said:
Very nice progression. Love to hear that song.
August 8th, 2022 15:16
I wrote a poem that no one reads
Doggerel Dave said:
The agony of it all....all that talent offered to unheeding philistines..... 😊
August 8th, 2022 07:23
Doggerel Dave said:
The agony of it all....all that talent offered to unheeding philistines..... 😊
August 8th, 2022 07:23
I wrote a poem that no one reads
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(maybe over the years
you will read it again
and find all those hidden ingredients, imbued
deep within
all those, miniscule traits in a poem
that make it a mirror of words
than mere ink on a canvas...)
August 8th, 2022 05:01
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(maybe over the years
you will read it again
and find all those hidden ingredients, imbued
deep within
all those, miniscule traits in a poem
that make it a mirror of words
than mere ink on a canvas...)
August 8th, 2022 05:01
Toreador
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write tallisman, maybe the toreador will be reality one day.
Andy
August 8th, 2022 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write tallisman, maybe the toreador will be reality one day.
Andy
August 8th, 2022 00:40
Toreador
Doggerel Dave said:
Thankfully I was able to ignore the bullfighting associations and related to your depiction of the turns life can take - for that, kudos.
August 7th, 2022 19:15
Doggerel Dave said:
Thankfully I was able to ignore the bullfighting associations and related to your depiction of the turns life can take - for that, kudos.
August 7th, 2022 19:15
Toreador
MendedFences27 said:
I like this. It tells of embedded dreams which I think we all have and tells a tender tale of how life can alter the quest for those dreams. I also liked the split in time from dreamer to busy housewife. It simply follows most realities. Altered courses due to necessity. Again, a most enjoyable read. - Phil A.
August 7th, 2022 17:09
MendedFences27 said:
I like this. It tells of embedded dreams which I think we all have and tells a tender tale of how life can alter the quest for those dreams. I also liked the split in time from dreamer to busy housewife. It simply follows most realities. Altered courses due to necessity. Again, a most enjoyable read. - Phil A.
August 7th, 2022 17:09
Toreador
Saxon Crow said:
Love this poem Tallis. Who doesn\'t like a bit of hidden regret. Great stuff
August 7th, 2022 15:51
Saxon Crow said:
Love this poem Tallis. Who doesn\'t like a bit of hidden regret. Great stuff
August 7th, 2022 15:51
Toreador
Bella Shepard said:
Such a wonderful, reflective poem. So often it is the memories of treasured moments that can lift us up, if just for a moment.
August 7th, 2022 13:04
Bella Shepard said:
Such a wonderful, reflective poem. So often it is the memories of treasured moments that can lift us up, if just for a moment.
August 7th, 2022 13:04
Toreador
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Tallisman!!!! I love it! I wonder if bullfighters still exist?!
August 7th, 2022 12:01
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Tallisman!!!! I love it! I wonder if bullfighters still exist?!
August 7th, 2022 12:01
Sea of dreams
Paul Bell said:
Great moral in this poem.
The strife of life, and when we actually realise, life is always the winner
August 7th, 2022 03:30
Paul Bell said:
Great moral in this poem.
The strife of life, and when we actually realise, life is always the winner
August 7th, 2022 03:30
Sea of dreams
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A beautiful analogy of life! At least in my opinion! Love it!! Great write Tallisman!!
August 5th, 2022 15:28
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A beautiful analogy of life! At least in my opinion! Love it!! Great write Tallisman!!
August 5th, 2022 15:28
Sea of dreams
L. B. Mek said:
it level of detail makes this such a vivid read
(Daedalus, can finally find peace
reading this)..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
such a lovely write
August 5th, 2022 02:55
L. B. Mek said:
it level of detail makes this such a vivid read
(Daedalus, can finally find peace
reading this)..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
such a lovely write
August 5th, 2022 02:55
The Beacon
Bella Shepard said:
The nature of death is incomprehensible. We know from a young age that things die, we accept that we will die, we even plan for it, and yet we can\'t really understand it. What a thought provoking write my friend!
August 4th, 2022 14:30
Bella Shepard said:
The nature of death is incomprehensible. We know from a young age that things die, we accept that we will die, we even plan for it, and yet we can\'t really understand it. What a thought provoking write my friend!
August 4th, 2022 14:30
Love out of time
Accidental Poet said:
A story I can well appreciate tallisman. Very well penned. 👍
August 4th, 2022 06:09
Accidental Poet said:
A story I can well appreciate tallisman. Very well penned. 👍
August 4th, 2022 06:09
The Beacon
L. B. Mek said:
today in the news, there\'s a story
of a how a guy survived all night
in the sea with an overturn boat
by making an air bubble;
fate, is a harsh judge of a life\'s worth sometimes
while some
make miracles happen, clumsily
others
trip and break their neck, and dead...
(thanks for sharing, dear poet
another wonderfully emotive read
sorry I took it to a rather bleak and callous
place, in my comments
sadly my cynicism gets in the way
at times)
August 4th, 2022 03:53
L. B. Mek said:
today in the news, there\'s a story
of a how a guy survived all night
in the sea with an overturn boat
by making an air bubble;
fate, is a harsh judge of a life\'s worth sometimes
while some
make miracles happen, clumsily
others
trip and break their neck, and dead...
(thanks for sharing, dear poet
another wonderfully emotive read
sorry I took it to a rather bleak and callous
place, in my comments
sadly my cynicism gets in the way
at times)
August 4th, 2022 03:53
The Beacon
Raven333 said:
OMG. Yet another GREAT write. You got me scared thinking about death. I don\'t even want to think about it. You got something special my friend!!
August 4th, 2022 02:13
Raven333 said:
OMG. Yet another GREAT write. You got me scared thinking about death. I don\'t even want to think about it. You got something special my friend!!
August 4th, 2022 02:13
Love out of time
Bella Shepard said:
This is such a sweet and tender poem of love that is never lost. You have given me a smile for the whole day. Beautiful write!
August 3rd, 2022 12:23
Bella Shepard said:
This is such a sweet and tender poem of love that is never lost. You have given me a smile for the whole day. Beautiful write!
August 3rd, 2022 12:23
Love out of time
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Love is powerful Tallisman. My first time reading and I will read it again and again! Never will it get old. Beautiful !
August 3rd, 2022 10:14
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Love is powerful Tallisman. My first time reading and I will read it again and again! Never will it get old. Beautiful !
August 3rd, 2022 10:14
Love out of time
KRWonder said:
What a beautiful story, poignant and so engaging, I really enjoyed this piece, thanks for sharing!
August 3rd, 2022 09:45
KRWonder said:
What a beautiful story, poignant and so engaging, I really enjoyed this piece, thanks for sharing!
August 3rd, 2022 09:45
Love out of time
Raven333 said:
What a delight my friend, As I was reading it was like I was also watching a movie. So well written and descriptive!!!
August 3rd, 2022 01:45
Raven333 said:
What a delight my friend, As I was reading it was like I was also watching a movie. So well written and descriptive!!!
August 3rd, 2022 01:45
Love out of time
arqios said:
Good reinstatement. Sometimes they need to be pulled out of circulation and at a suitable time be reinstated. Well done on this one!
August 3rd, 2022 01:09
arqios said:
Good reinstatement. Sometimes they need to be pulled out of circulation and at a suitable time be reinstated. Well done on this one!
August 3rd, 2022 01:09
Love out of time
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write tallisman, I do not say this often but this will go into my favourites.
Love is so very strong in many lives.
Andy
August 3rd, 2022 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write tallisman, I do not say this often but this will go into my favourites.
Love is so very strong in many lives.
Andy
August 3rd, 2022 01:09
Play the game
Raven333 said:
Awesome poem!!! Really enjoyed the read, it was true and so well written. Oh yeah, I thought the flow of it was excellent!!
August 2nd, 2022 14:55
Raven333 said:
Awesome poem!!! Really enjoyed the read, it was true and so well written. Oh yeah, I thought the flow of it was excellent!!
August 2nd, 2022 14:55
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