Comments received on poems by tallisman
Not gonna turn out well…
hzugman said:
Hey Tallisman. Nice short story in poem form. The moral (at least as i see it) is that youthful foolishness can (and often) does result in lifelong sadness. Still that same foolishness is often necessary for growth and individualism (if that\'s a word). So ultimately we are all involved is this crapshoot.
July 4th, 2022 05:15
hzugman said:
Hey Tallisman. Nice short story in poem form. The moral (at least as i see it) is that youthful foolishness can (and often) does result in lifelong sadness. Still that same foolishness is often necessary for growth and individualism (if that\'s a word). So ultimately we are all involved is this crapshoot.
July 4th, 2022 05:15
Not gonna turn out well…
L. B. Mek said:
(yes, I too
am painfully familiar
with such tale\'s
of warped, youthful vehemence
as a pathway to a lifetime
of irreversible, consequence..)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 4th, 2022 03:18
L. B. Mek said:
(yes, I too
am painfully familiar
with such tale\'s
of warped, youthful vehemence
as a pathway to a lifetime
of irreversible, consequence..)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 4th, 2022 03:18
Not gonna turn out well…
Doggerel Dave said:
Well crafted piece, Tallisman.
Maybe this says more about me than the content, but I found that very amusing....
July 3rd, 2022 19:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Well crafted piece, Tallisman.
Maybe this says more about me than the content, but I found that very amusing....
July 3rd, 2022 19:42
Melody of life
Goldfinch60 said:
One always wonders what would have been if something had not happened but you do have those treasured memories.
Andy
July 2nd, 2022 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
One always wonders what would have been if something had not happened but you do have those treasured memories.
Andy
July 2nd, 2022 01:03
Melody of life
Hollow Enigma said:
Hey not here to relate and idk about the other side, thank you for sharing. I feel privileged to hear about love like this.
July 1st, 2022 00:31
Hollow Enigma said:
Hey not here to relate and idk about the other side, thank you for sharing. I feel privileged to hear about love like this.
July 1st, 2022 00:31
When all is said and done
Raven333 said:
Loved your poem, and I agree words can burn your soul.
June 30th, 2022 20:37
Raven333 said:
Loved your poem, and I agree words can burn your soul.
June 30th, 2022 20:37
When all is said and done
L. B. Mek said:
a Brilliant! life-Affriming
message
full of humility\'s
graceful, wisdom
and
utilised, empathy\'s
\'never-Too-Late\'
sincerity...
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
\'Some things are inexcusable
Even angels would fear to tread
I’m here to apologise
But I know I can’t be forgiven
I can see the answer in your eyes
And my soul is riven\'
June 30th, 2022 05:40
L. B. Mek said:
a Brilliant! life-Affriming
message
full of humility\'s
graceful, wisdom
and
utilised, empathy\'s
\'never-Too-Late\'
sincerity...
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
\'Some things are inexcusable
Even angels would fear to tread
I’m here to apologise
But I know I can’t be forgiven
I can see the answer in your eyes
And my soul is riven\'
June 30th, 2022 05:40
When all is said and done
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Tallisman but we can get through these sad times and move on into a brighter future.
Andy
June 30th, 2022 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Tallisman but we can get through these sad times and move on into a brighter future.
Andy
June 30th, 2022 00:51
Blood moon
Raven333 said:
Nice poem, I thought you nicely wrote it and the rhyming was very good,
June 29th, 2022 18:41
Raven333 said:
Nice poem, I thought you nicely wrote it and the rhyming was very good,
June 29th, 2022 18:41
Blood moon
arqios said:
Let’s agree to blame the blood moon for that 🤣 Thanks for sharing!
June 29th, 2022 02:20
arqios said:
Let’s agree to blame the blood moon for that 🤣 Thanks for sharing!
June 29th, 2022 02:20
Blood moon
JudyStella said:
Rhiannon, the sky bleeds red
Tell me where I have offended?
I like this line, it feels like you feel responsible for a natural occurrence that is not in your power to control. I don’t know why but I thought of a toxic relationship and guilt tripping 😅
June 29th, 2022 01:04
JudyStella said:
Rhiannon, the sky bleeds red
Tell me where I have offended?
I like this line, it feels like you feel responsible for a natural occurrence that is not in your power to control. I don’t know why but I thought of a toxic relationship and guilt tripping 😅
June 29th, 2022 01:04
Passion
sadkw33n said:
That was beautiful! That\'s why it\'s always a pleasure to read your poems. Wonderfully done and very well constructed. Great job!
June 28th, 2022 06:22
sadkw33n said:
That was beautiful! That\'s why it\'s always a pleasure to read your poems. Wonderfully done and very well constructed. Great job!
June 28th, 2022 06:22
Midnight hour
Raven333 said:
really enjoyed, had a lot of emotions and I felt love. it was well written
June 27th, 2022 18:06
Raven333 said:
really enjoyed, had a lot of emotions and I felt love. it was well written
June 27th, 2022 18:06
Passion
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful passionate words Tallisman, that love will always be remembered.
Andy
June 26th, 2022 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful passionate words Tallisman, that love will always be remembered.
Andy
June 26th, 2022 00:55
Passion
Raven333 said:
nice poem, as I was reading I could imagine this guy sitting on a bed thinking this out. what I did about this poem was that he never said his love died. that is very important. nice read
June 25th, 2022 23:54
Raven333 said:
nice poem, as I was reading I could imagine this guy sitting on a bed thinking this out. what I did about this poem was that he never said his love died. that is very important. nice read
June 25th, 2022 23:54
Passion
dusk arising said:
Reading between the lines I guess he knows where the passion went and how it was enjoyed mutually. Now, though content, he wishes he had the verve of younger times... and how their bodies were.
Enjoyed reading this. I found a man\'s contentment in there.
June 25th, 2022 15:05
dusk arising said:
Reading between the lines I guess he knows where the passion went and how it was enjoyed mutually. Now, though content, he wishes he had the verve of younger times... and how their bodies were.
Enjoyed reading this. I found a man\'s contentment in there.
June 25th, 2022 15:05
Midnight hour
sadkw33n said:
I really liked this one. I can relate a little. You did a great job writing it. Well done! Always a pleasure to read your poems.
June 25th, 2022 00:52
sadkw33n said:
I really liked this one. I can relate a little. You did a great job writing it. Well done! Always a pleasure to read your poems.
June 25th, 2022 00:52
Midnight hour
AL17 said:
I love this so much! Definitely one of my favourites. It\'s so beautifully written.
Thank you for this.
June 24th, 2022 16:05
AL17 said:
I love this so much! Definitely one of my favourites. It\'s so beautifully written.
Thank you for this.
June 24th, 2022 16:05
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