Comments received on poems by tallisman
Road trip
Justa_Geezer said:
What a wonderful story within the poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it, loves young dream ! The only reason I can see for wantig to be turning back the clock would be to start your journey at Lands End, stopping off at Gretna Green to wed over the anvil, on your way to completing your journey to John\'O Groats !
July 12th, 2022 11:12
Justa_Geezer said:
What a wonderful story within the poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it, loves young dream ! The only reason I can see for wantig to be turning back the clock would be to start your journey at Lands End, stopping off at Gretna Green to wed over the anvil, on your way to completing your journey to John\'O Groats !
July 12th, 2022 11:12
Road trip
Justa_Geezer said:
What a wonderful story within the poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it, loves young dream ! The only reason I can see for wantig to be turning back the clock would be to start your journey at Lands End, stopping off at Gretna Green to wed over the anvil, on your way to completing your journey to John\'O Groats !
July 12th, 2022 11:10
Justa_Geezer said:
What a wonderful story within the poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it, loves young dream ! The only reason I can see for wantig to be turning back the clock would be to start your journey at Lands End, stopping off at Gretna Green to wed over the anvil, on your way to completing your journey to John\'O Groats !
July 12th, 2022 11:10
Road trip
tallisman said:
Thanks Raven,, glad you enjoyed it , my friend. Would that we could turn back the clock!
July 11th, 2022 00:32
tallisman said:
Thanks Raven,, glad you enjoyed it , my friend. Would that we could turn back the clock!
July 11th, 2022 00:32
A Darkness in the heart
Raven333 said:
I loved this poem like many of yours. It is sad though how love always seems to change one way or the other. Another great one my friend.
July 10th, 2022 15:54
Raven333 said:
I loved this poem like many of yours. It is sad though how love always seems to change one way or the other. Another great one my friend.
July 10th, 2022 15:54
Road trip
Raven333 said:
What a great poem about love and how it started. kinda took me back myself. Great write..
July 10th, 2022 15:46
Raven333 said:
What a great poem about love and how it started. kinda took me back myself. Great write..
July 10th, 2022 15:46
Road trip
Bella Shepard said:
Friendship that blossoms into love, what could be better? This poem has such a sweet, gentle nature. I loved every line.
July 10th, 2022 13:53
Bella Shepard said:
Friendship that blossoms into love, what could be better? This poem has such a sweet, gentle nature. I loved every line.
July 10th, 2022 13:53
A Darkness in the heart
sadkw33n said:
Great job writing this one! But then again, your poems are always lovely. You\'ve constructed some beautiful lines in this and the theme is very sweet. Nicely done!
July 9th, 2022 19:35
sadkw33n said:
Great job writing this one! But then again, your poems are always lovely. You\'ve constructed some beautiful lines in this and the theme is very sweet. Nicely done!
July 9th, 2022 19:35
A Darkness in the heart
MDStone said:
I enjoyed reading. Good writing! Thanks for sharing.
July 9th, 2022 14:34
MDStone said:
I enjoyed reading. Good writing! Thanks for sharing.
July 9th, 2022 14:34
A Darkness in the heart
Bella Shepard said:
I love the symmetry and rhyming structure of this poem. The conundrum of love in beautiful, flowing lines. Well done!
July 9th, 2022 11:44
Bella Shepard said:
I love the symmetry and rhyming structure of this poem. The conundrum of love in beautiful, flowing lines. Well done!
July 9th, 2022 11:44
A Darkness in the heart
Kim12 said:
Great poem. Nice rhyme.
\'Maybe it’s the world that our love denied
Maybe we were just an anomaly
That the fates have rectified
I’ve been giving this some reflection
I would do anything to retain
Even a fraction of that affection\'
These lines are my favourite!
July 9th, 2022 06:45
Kim12 said:
Great poem. Nice rhyme.
\'Maybe it’s the world that our love denied
Maybe we were just an anomaly
That the fates have rectified
I’ve been giving this some reflection
I would do anything to retain
Even a fraction of that affection\'
These lines are my favourite!
July 9th, 2022 06:45
A Darkness in the heart
orchidee said:
Ooohh, turn a light on! lol.
Oops, sorry to wreck the atmosphere of the poem!
July 9th, 2022 06:15
orchidee said:
Ooohh, turn a light on! lol.
Oops, sorry to wreck the atmosphere of the poem!
July 9th, 2022 06:15
A Darkness in the heart
JudyStella said:
I love the structure and the ryhme! And I love this line,
We fitted together like a hand in a glove
Lovely poem!
July 9th, 2022 04:42
JudyStella said:
I love the structure and the ryhme! And I love this line,
We fitted together like a hand in a glove
Lovely poem!
July 9th, 2022 04:42
Where the hell is it!
sadkw33n said:
And that\'s exactly why i love reading your work when I\'ve got time😊
July 8th, 2022 14:31
sadkw33n said:
And that\'s exactly why i love reading your work when I\'ve got time😊
July 8th, 2022 14:31
Where the hell is it!
Hollow Enigma said:
It was just friggin here. I dont remember throwing it
July 8th, 2022 13:59
Hollow Enigma said:
It was just friggin here. I dont remember throwing it
July 8th, 2022 13:59
Where the hell is it!
Justa_Geezer said:
opining or opinioning ? Enjoyed it anyway.
July 8th, 2022 08:39
Justa_Geezer said:
opining or opinioning ? Enjoyed it anyway.
July 8th, 2022 08:39
Where the hell is it!
Blueledge said:
Happens to me all the time lately.
Keys mainly.
Don\'t think it\'s dementia cus I still know what they\'re for.
July 8th, 2022 00:01
Blueledge said:
Happens to me all the time lately.
Keys mainly.
Don\'t think it\'s dementia cus I still know what they\'re for.
July 8th, 2022 00:01
Crying out for hope
spilleronsheet said:
This is inked, dipped with reality
Those tears rolled over
As if words were relaying pictures of life
So well penned dear poet…
July 6th, 2022 07:56
spilleronsheet said:
This is inked, dipped with reality
Those tears rolled over
As if words were relaying pictures of life
So well penned dear poet…
July 6th, 2022 07:56
Crying out for hope
tallisman said:
Hi Raven, I’m glad you both liked it, depression is a terrible thing and it affects not just the afflicted but all close to them. It is also so hard for people to understand or know how to help.
Thank you for this wonderful review! Stay well and safe!
July 6th, 2022 00:41
tallisman said:
Hi Raven, I’m glad you both liked it, depression is a terrible thing and it affects not just the afflicted but all close to them. It is also so hard for people to understand or know how to help.
Thank you for this wonderful review! Stay well and safe!
July 6th, 2022 00:41
Crying out for hope
Raven333 said:
Oh Wow, Another great one to put in your books. I actually read this one to my daughter and she was blown away. She was like.. that sounds like me. LOL This poem was so very well written and the flow was GREAT.
July 5th, 2022 23:37
Raven333 said:
Oh Wow, Another great one to put in your books. I actually read this one to my daughter and she was blown away. She was like.. that sounds like me. LOL This poem was so very well written and the flow was GREAT.
July 5th, 2022 23:37
Not gonna turn out well…
JudyStella said:
Well pieced! Love this narrative style!! I love how you took that flashback and connected to the present so effortlessly! Also the imagery of the car speeding! So cinematic!!
July 5th, 2022 10:34
JudyStella said:
Well pieced! Love this narrative style!! I love how you took that flashback and connected to the present so effortlessly! Also the imagery of the car speeding! So cinematic!!
July 5th, 2022 10:34
Crying out for hope
JudyStella said:
I love this! The manner in which the voices are portrayed is so accurate! Plus the questioning of perceptions and balancing unstably. Very accurate!
July 5th, 2022 10:15
JudyStella said:
I love this! The manner in which the voices are portrayed is so accurate! Plus the questioning of perceptions and balancing unstably. Very accurate!
July 5th, 2022 10:15
Crying out for hope
L. B. Mek said:
so well written, dear Poet
yet
such a sobering theme
still
we can but hope
a path to escape
can
become a reality, someday soon
for all those, trapped
like she
July 5th, 2022 04:25
L. B. Mek said:
so well written, dear Poet
yet
such a sobering theme
still
we can but hope
a path to escape
can
become a reality, someday soon
for all those, trapped
like she
July 5th, 2022 04:25
Not gonna turn out well…
Raven333 said:
What a great poem, it took me from the first stage of this man all the way to the end. Really nice flow in this write
July 4th, 2022 14:03
Raven333 said:
What a great poem, it took me from the first stage of this man all the way to the end. Really nice flow in this write
July 4th, 2022 14:03
Not gonna turn out well…
hzugman said:
Hey Tallisman. Nice short story in poem form. The moral (at least as i see it) is that youthful foolishness can (and often) does result in lifelong sadness. Still that same foolishness is often necessary for growth and individualism (if that\'s a word). So ultimately we are all involved is this crapshoot.
July 4th, 2022 05:15
hzugman said:
Hey Tallisman. Nice short story in poem form. The moral (at least as i see it) is that youthful foolishness can (and often) does result in lifelong sadness. Still that same foolishness is often necessary for growth and individualism (if that\'s a word). So ultimately we are all involved is this crapshoot.
July 4th, 2022 05:15
Not gonna turn out well…
L. B. Mek said:
(yes, I too
am painfully familiar
with such tale\'s
of warped, youthful vehemence
as a pathway to a lifetime
of irreversible, consequence..)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 4th, 2022 03:18
L. B. Mek said:
(yes, I too
am painfully familiar
with such tale\'s
of warped, youthful vehemence
as a pathway to a lifetime
of irreversible, consequence..)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 4th, 2022 03:18
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