Comments received on poems by tallisman
Play the game
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Yes!!!!! Grab that pen! Would love to see your new work! This touched my heart. I lost another dear friend to cancer yesterday; the line that reads “what makes us happy can make us sad” holds true at the moment. Thank you Tallisman.
August 2nd, 2022 05:29
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Yes!!!!! Grab that pen! Would love to see your new work! This touched my heart. I lost another dear friend to cancer yesterday; the line that reads “what makes us happy can make us sad” holds true at the moment. Thank you Tallisman.
August 2nd, 2022 05:29
Play the game
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
\'our choices, are yet
unmade..
and control, an illusion
we\'ve yet
to repent!\'
August 2nd, 2022 04:38
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
\'our choices, are yet
unmade..
and control, an illusion
we\'ve yet
to repent!\'
August 2nd, 2022 04:38
Play the game
Goldfinch60 said:
True words tallisman, we must always look forward in our lives the wonder of our future is still ahead of us.
Andy
August 2nd, 2022 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
True words tallisman, we must always look forward in our lives the wonder of our future is still ahead of us.
Andy
August 2nd, 2022 01:10
Destined.
Bella Shepard said:
Whimsical, witty, all around fun. I always love a good zinger at the end. Kudos my friend!
July 31st, 2022 11:05
Bella Shepard said:
Whimsical, witty, all around fun. I always love a good zinger at the end. Kudos my friend!
July 31st, 2022 11:05
Destined.
tallisman said:
Maybe tomorrow.! Glad you liked it It’s always good to find a light hearted one to write!
July 31st, 2022 10:59
tallisman said:
Maybe tomorrow.! Glad you liked it It’s always good to find a light hearted one to write!
July 31st, 2022 10:59
Destined.
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
If not today; when? Beautiful poem Tallisman!
July 31st, 2022 08:42
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
If not today; when? Beautiful poem Tallisman!
July 31st, 2022 08:42
Destined.
Justa_Geezer said:
Lovely poem Talisman, a good write and a nice chuckle at the end !
July 31st, 2022 04:59
Justa_Geezer said:
Lovely poem Talisman, a good write and a nice chuckle at the end !
July 31st, 2022 04:59
Why doesnt the sun rise anymore
Bella Shepard said:
This is so beautifully written. Loss and grief, we experience it and, somehow live through it. The traces are there, perhaps softened a bit with time, but always a part of us, to remind us of how wonderful what we had was. Wishing you good memories and comfort.
July 30th, 2022 13:52
Bella Shepard said:
This is so beautifully written. Loss and grief, we experience it and, somehow live through it. The traces are there, perhaps softened a bit with time, but always a part of us, to remind us of how wonderful what we had was. Wishing you good memories and comfort.
July 30th, 2022 13:52
Why doesnt the sun rise anymore
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Tallisman you bring tears to my eyes with such heart felt words. I don’t think it would be possible if it weren’t relatable on some level. I hope you’re in a good place now; I hope you know how important you are.
July 30th, 2022 07:56
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Tallisman you bring tears to my eyes with such heart felt words. I don’t think it would be possible if it weren’t relatable on some level. I hope you’re in a good place now; I hope you know how important you are.
July 30th, 2022 07:56
Unrequited
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Very deep and emotional! Brought a lump to my throat.
July 29th, 2022 14:32
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Very deep and emotional! Brought a lump to my throat.
July 29th, 2022 14:32
Unrequited
KRWonder said:
Feel proud of your poems, especially if they are like this one! Such a vividly expressed art here, I really enjoyed the flow and rhythm you have going on. Thanks for posting this to share with us once more!
July 29th, 2022 08:15
KRWonder said:
Feel proud of your poems, especially if they are like this one! Such a vividly expressed art here, I really enjoyed the flow and rhythm you have going on. Thanks for posting this to share with us once more!
July 29th, 2022 08:15
Unrequited
L. B. Mek said:
anything that comes easy
lacks, that endurance to last
I have found in life, ergo
if it takes you going back n forth
a hundred times
to feel, like you\'re in the right
frame of mind, to voice yourself
and your art
as best you can.. then that\'s perfectly fine!
in-fact, it makes your work
that much more precious
thank you! for choosing to share
but don\'t struggle alone
make a community with those you trust
let them ease the weight of your
struggles, if you need them
stay Strong! dear cherished Poet
write for yourself, fck anyone else
without you
these works would never have existed
take comfort in that!
\'Where *our* minds can meet
Build sandcastles in the sand
Sweep you off your feet
You always keep a distance
It’s pulling at my heart
It’s like your living in a trance\'
July 29th, 2022 03:46
L. B. Mek said:
anything that comes easy
lacks, that endurance to last
I have found in life, ergo
if it takes you going back n forth
a hundred times
to feel, like you\'re in the right
frame of mind, to voice yourself
and your art
as best you can.. then that\'s perfectly fine!
in-fact, it makes your work
that much more precious
thank you! for choosing to share
but don\'t struggle alone
make a community with those you trust
let them ease the weight of your
struggles, if you need them
stay Strong! dear cherished Poet
write for yourself, fck anyone else
without you
these works would never have existed
take comfort in that!
\'Where *our* minds can meet
Build sandcastles in the sand
Sweep you off your feet
You always keep a distance
It’s pulling at my heart
It’s like your living in a trance\'
July 29th, 2022 03:46
Unrequited
dusk arising said:
For me, a poet\'s personal sensitivites showing through in the poetry they write is what makes the difference between a game played with words and meaningful poetry. We have to be sensitive beasts to communicate on a certain level through our craft which does, of course, have it\'s downsides just as you point out. I know only too well about periods where all i can do is look back through my old stuff and re-post it because inspiration or confidence has wained when it comes to creating new stuff.
But, if it was a good read first time around then it still is in my book.
July 29th, 2022 02:44
dusk arising said:
For me, a poet\'s personal sensitivites showing through in the poetry they write is what makes the difference between a game played with words and meaningful poetry. We have to be sensitive beasts to communicate on a certain level through our craft which does, of course, have it\'s downsides just as you point out. I know only too well about periods where all i can do is look back through my old stuff and re-post it because inspiration or confidence has wained when it comes to creating new stuff.
But, if it was a good read first time around then it still is in my book.
July 29th, 2022 02:44
Not gonna turn out well…
tallisman said:
The highest praise possible, I thank you Shamrocker 😁
July 29th, 2022 00:27
tallisman said:
The highest praise possible, I thank you Shamrocker 😁
July 29th, 2022 00:27
Passion
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Love is work. Love is falling in love over and over again. Thank you for this!
July 28th, 2022 14:36
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Love is work. Love is falling in love over and over again. Thank you for this!
July 28th, 2022 14:36
Melody of life
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
I felt the pain in this. I’m so sorry.
July 28th, 2022 14:33
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
I felt the pain in this. I’m so sorry.
July 28th, 2022 14:33
Not gonna turn out well…
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Mistakes are part of life. Not a life sentence. Tallisman your work should be in books!
July 28th, 2022 14:28
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Mistakes are part of life. Not a life sentence. Tallisman your work should be in books!
July 28th, 2022 14:28
Crying out for hope
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
What do I say? You have a way of writing that relates to others and helps them feel less alone. Thank you so much for sharing this?
July 28th, 2022 14:22
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
What do I say? You have a way of writing that relates to others and helps them feel less alone. Thank you so much for sharing this?
July 28th, 2022 14:22
Where the hell is it!
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Ha ha ha! Hope now you have it!
July 28th, 2022 14:15
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Ha ha ha! Hope now you have it!
July 28th, 2022 14:15
Road trip
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Thoroughly enjoyed this! So happy to hear a love like this still exists!
July 28th, 2022 14:13
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Thoroughly enjoyed this! So happy to hear a love like this still exists!
July 28th, 2022 14:13
Haiku
Jayasree said:
So short but filled with so much beauty it tugs at your heart. Loved it. I can picture it so clearly, petals all around the rose bush.
July 28th, 2022 02:23
Jayasree said:
So short but filled with so much beauty it tugs at your heart. Loved it. I can picture it so clearly, petals all around the rose bush.
July 28th, 2022 02:23
A Darkness in the heart
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
There are no words to express how this made me feel.
July 27th, 2022 15:49
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
There are no words to express how this made me feel.
July 27th, 2022 15:49
Break the chain…
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
So relatable. Felt the emotions in this. Well written.
July 27th, 2022 15:48
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
So relatable. Felt the emotions in this. Well written.
July 27th, 2022 15:48
Searching for a question…(Acrostic)
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Where is the love! This intrigued me!
July 27th, 2022 15:45
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Where is the love! This intrigued me!
July 27th, 2022 15:45
Searching for a question…(Acrostic)
hzugman said:
Neat poem and neat acrostic. Didn\'t spot it.
July 27th, 2022 15:26
hzugman said:
Neat poem and neat acrostic. Didn\'t spot it.
July 27th, 2022 15:26
Searching for a question…(Acrostic)
Raven333 said:
OMG!!! WHERE IS THE LOVE... That is awesome. I wonder if I could do something like that. I don\'t know though. Am not all there really... LOL
July 27th, 2022 11:34
Raven333 said:
OMG!!! WHERE IS THE LOVE... That is awesome. I wonder if I could do something like that. I don\'t know though. Am not all there really... LOL
July 27th, 2022 11:34
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