Comments received on poems by tallisman
1969
Doggerel Dave said:
Hunted around for an appropriate response, but couldn\'t find one - plenty of empathy, but no words.
Stay safe.
October 10th, 2024 16:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Hunted around for an appropriate response, but couldn\'t find one - plenty of empathy, but no words.
Stay safe.
October 10th, 2024 16:25
Vivamus, moriendum est.
Cheeky Missy said:
Your username was one of my favorites in Sir Walter Scot\'s Waverly series. That being said, this is downright lovely, with subtly deeper implications just below the tantalizing surface. Fascinatingly rendered in seeming forthright simplicity, it\'s beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
October 10th, 2024 15:44
Cheeky Missy said:
Your username was one of my favorites in Sir Walter Scot\'s Waverly series. That being said, this is downright lovely, with subtly deeper implications just below the tantalizing surface. Fascinatingly rendered in seeming forthright simplicity, it\'s beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
October 10th, 2024 15:44
1969
Doggerel Dave said:
Great to see you back, Tallisman.
As a \'tribute\' to the Troubles, that will take some beating. It has a visceral immediacy about it.
\'Sorry - but I have to ask: based on actual experience, or imaginative interpretation?
October 9th, 2024 23:49
Doggerel Dave said:
Great to see you back, Tallisman.
As a \'tribute\' to the Troubles, that will take some beating. It has a visceral immediacy about it.
\'Sorry - but I have to ask: based on actual experience, or imaginative interpretation?
October 9th, 2024 23:49
1969
Cheeky Missy said:
Goodnight! I\'m favoriting this to keep it, not because it is lovely or charming but graphically tendered as a memento to what they want none to know or remember. Beautifully rendered with ghastly poignancy and haunting imagery in testament to being Irish. Thank you for sharing. It makes my blood begin to boil.
October 9th, 2024 18:45
Cheeky Missy said:
Goodnight! I\'m favoriting this to keep it, not because it is lovely or charming but graphically tendered as a memento to what they want none to know or remember. Beautifully rendered with ghastly poignancy and haunting imagery in testament to being Irish. Thank you for sharing. It makes my blood begin to boil.
October 9th, 2024 18:45
1969
peet said:
Wow !! What a way to capture the changing times in Ireland. Lovely lines there.
October 9th, 2024 12:32
peet said:
Wow !! What a way to capture the changing times in Ireland. Lovely lines there.
October 9th, 2024 12:32
Lost in the light
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for your return, T. (And for me a rhymer always wins the day)
A relationship seen through a least a couple of broken mirrors.
Any hopes?
February 3rd, 2024 01:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for your return, T. (And for me a rhymer always wins the day)
A relationship seen through a least a couple of broken mirrors.
Any hopes?
February 3rd, 2024 01:05
Broken
Doggerel Dave said:
What\'s up, Tallisman? Where are you?
Distance is a good healer.
Let\'s see you back here. You are missed....
February 1st, 2024 21:57
Doggerel Dave said:
What\'s up, Tallisman? Where are you?
Distance is a good healer.
Let\'s see you back here. You are missed....
February 1st, 2024 21:57
Eagles sing a requiem
Doggerel Dave said:
The bonds that can exist between friends; the loss. Only mountains could frame its height and depth.
Strong one, Tallisman.
December 20th, 2023 19:06
Doggerel Dave said:
The bonds that can exist between friends; the loss. Only mountains could frame its height and depth.
Strong one, Tallisman.
December 20th, 2023 19:06
Broken
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Tallisman, I hope all gets well.
Andy
November 26th, 2023 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Tallisman, I hope all gets well.
Andy
November 26th, 2023 02:11
They lie beneath
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely worth it\'s place in War Poetry - Owen and Sassoon would welcome you I believe.
November 16th, 2023 06:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely worth it\'s place in War Poetry - Owen and Sassoon would welcome you I believe.
November 16th, 2023 06:42
Bad poetry
Doggerel Dave said:
You deserve a response here, Tallisman. Thanks for the prompt. A moral tale well worth sticking up on a poetry site.
November 16th, 2023 06:29
Doggerel Dave said:
You deserve a response here, Tallisman. Thanks for the prompt. A moral tale well worth sticking up on a poetry site.
November 16th, 2023 06:29
The Song
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
As always; your words capture my soul! Beautiful write Tallisman
October 27th, 2023 05:47
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
As always; your words capture my soul! Beautiful write Tallisman
October 27th, 2023 05:47
They lie beneath
tallisman said:
It’s good to be back! Always good to talk to you😊,. Love your inspirational writing!
October 24th, 2023 00:22
tallisman said:
It’s good to be back! Always good to talk to you😊,. Love your inspirational writing!
October 24th, 2023 00:22
They lie beneath
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
I have missed your work my friend! So happy to see you here again!!
October 23rd, 2023 19:12
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
I have missed your work my friend! So happy to see you here again!!
October 23rd, 2023 19:12
Eagles sing a requiem
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. Filled with powerful imagery. Great use of rhyme, not forced. Great job.
October 23rd, 2023 00:19
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. Filled with powerful imagery. Great use of rhyme, not forced. Great job.
October 23rd, 2023 00:19
Death in disguise
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
I hope you never met such a woman. Would be sad to think my favorite poet is not as happy as I believe.
June 21st, 2023 14:29
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
I hope you never met such a woman. Would be sad to think my favorite poet is not as happy as I believe.
June 21st, 2023 14:29
Why
L. B. Mek said:
great flow, tight wordplay schemes
reflects how much effort you put in
and a relatable, poetic voice
a great write!
thanks for sharing dear poet
\'Icicles crawling down his spine
To freeze the heart within
Why does the blackbird sing
When all around it dull and grey
He finds no joy in anything
Least of all another day
Why does his broken heart
Plead for another chance\'
hope\'s unyielding embers
a beautifully poetic refrain
June 16th, 2023 04:30
L. B. Mek said:
great flow, tight wordplay schemes
reflects how much effort you put in
and a relatable, poetic voice
a great write!
thanks for sharing dear poet
\'Icicles crawling down his spine
To freeze the heart within
Why does the blackbird sing
When all around it dull and grey
He finds no joy in anything
Least of all another day
Why does his broken heart
Plead for another chance\'
hope\'s unyielding embers
a beautifully poetic refrain
June 16th, 2023 04:30
Death in disguise
2781 said:
That\'s really well written.
Sounds like another nightmare.
June 14th, 2023 01:49
2781 said:
That\'s really well written.
Sounds like another nightmare.
June 14th, 2023 01:49
Consumed
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Ah sad, jilted love causing suicidal ferlings or self harm is saddening but not so uncommon.
A geeat poem expressed superbly wow! Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
May 26th, 2023 06:32
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Ah sad, jilted love causing suicidal ferlings or self harm is saddening but not so uncommon.
A geeat poem expressed superbly wow! Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
May 26th, 2023 06:32
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