Comments received on poems by tallisman
Eagles sing a requiem
Doggerel Dave said:
The bonds that can exist between friends; the loss. Only mountains could frame its height and depth.
Strong one, Tallisman.
December 20th, 2023 19:06
Doggerel Dave said:
The bonds that can exist between friends; the loss. Only mountains could frame its height and depth.
Strong one, Tallisman.
December 20th, 2023 19:06
Broken
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Tallisman, I hope all gets well.
Andy
November 26th, 2023 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Tallisman, I hope all gets well.
Andy
November 26th, 2023 02:11
They lie beneath
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely worth it\'s place in War Poetry - Owen and Sassoon would welcome you I believe.
November 16th, 2023 06:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely worth it\'s place in War Poetry - Owen and Sassoon would welcome you I believe.
November 16th, 2023 06:42
Bad poetry
Doggerel Dave said:
You deserve a response here, Tallisman. Thanks for the prompt. A moral tale well worth sticking up on a poetry site.
November 16th, 2023 06:29
Doggerel Dave said:
You deserve a response here, Tallisman. Thanks for the prompt. A moral tale well worth sticking up on a poetry site.
November 16th, 2023 06:29
The Song
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
As always; your words capture my soul! Beautiful write Tallisman
October 27th, 2023 05:47
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
As always; your words capture my soul! Beautiful write Tallisman
October 27th, 2023 05:47
They lie beneath
tallisman said:
It’s good to be back! Always good to talk to you😊,. Love your inspirational writing!
October 24th, 2023 00:22
tallisman said:
It’s good to be back! Always good to talk to you😊,. Love your inspirational writing!
October 24th, 2023 00:22
They lie beneath
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
I have missed your work my friend! So happy to see you here again!!
October 23rd, 2023 19:12
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
I have missed your work my friend! So happy to see you here again!!
October 23rd, 2023 19:12
Eagles sing a requiem
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. Filled with powerful imagery. Great use of rhyme, not forced. Great job.
October 23rd, 2023 00:19
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. Filled with powerful imagery. Great use of rhyme, not forced. Great job.
October 23rd, 2023 00:19
Death in disguise
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
I hope you never met such a woman. Would be sad to think my favorite poet is not as happy as I believe.
June 21st, 2023 14:29
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
I hope you never met such a woman. Would be sad to think my favorite poet is not as happy as I believe.
June 21st, 2023 14:29
Why
L. B. Mek said:
great flow, tight wordplay schemes
reflects how much effort you put in
and a relatable, poetic voice
a great write!
thanks for sharing dear poet
\'Icicles crawling down his spine
To freeze the heart within
Why does the blackbird sing
When all around it dull and grey
He finds no joy in anything
Least of all another day
Why does his broken heart
Plead for another chance\'
hope\'s unyielding embers
a beautifully poetic refrain
June 16th, 2023 04:30
L. B. Mek said:
great flow, tight wordplay schemes
reflects how much effort you put in
and a relatable, poetic voice
a great write!
thanks for sharing dear poet
\'Icicles crawling down his spine
To freeze the heart within
Why does the blackbird sing
When all around it dull and grey
He finds no joy in anything
Least of all another day
Why does his broken heart
Plead for another chance\'
hope\'s unyielding embers
a beautifully poetic refrain
June 16th, 2023 04:30
Death in disguise
2781 said:
That\'s really well written.
Sounds like another nightmare.
June 14th, 2023 01:49
2781 said:
That\'s really well written.
Sounds like another nightmare.
June 14th, 2023 01:49
Consumed
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Ah sad, jilted love causing suicidal ferlings or self harm is saddening but not so uncommon.
A geeat poem expressed superbly wow! Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
May 26th, 2023 06:32
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Ah sad, jilted love causing suicidal ferlings or self harm is saddening but not so uncommon.
A geeat poem expressed superbly wow! Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
May 26th, 2023 06:32
Child of my youth
tallisman said:
Shamrocker, thanks! Good to hear from you! Hope you are well…
April 16th, 2023 14:14
tallisman said:
Shamrocker, thanks! Good to hear from you! Hope you are well…
April 16th, 2023 14:14
Child of my youth
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Tallisman!!! A heart touching write!
April 16th, 2023 06:22
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Tallisman!!! A heart touching write!
April 16th, 2023 06:22
Consumed
2781 said:
He was a murderer from the beginning, and abode not in the truth, for the truth was not in him. When he speaks a lie, he speaks of his own: for he is a liar, and the father of it.
April 14th, 2023 17:59
2781 said:
He was a murderer from the beginning, and abode not in the truth, for the truth was not in him. When he speaks a lie, he speaks of his own: for he is a liar, and the father of it.
April 14th, 2023 17:59
Consumed
David Wakeling said:
This is well written.Certainly a good depiction of the modern relationship.I like the rhyme
April 14th, 2023 16:17
David Wakeling said:
This is well written.Certainly a good depiction of the modern relationship.I like the rhyme
April 14th, 2023 16:17
The Rocking chair
Goldfinch60 said:
People are always there in memory when you see those chairs of the past.
Andy
April 14th, 2023 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
People are always there in memory when you see those chairs of the past.
Andy
April 14th, 2023 00:44
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