Comments received on poems by tallisman



Always read the label.
Goldfinch60 said:

That poetry is not so silly Tallisman but full of truths.

Andy

September 25th, 2022 01:32

Pantomime
Mr. Not said:

Beautiful poem, very smooth to read too.

September 16th, 2022 05:17

Pantomime
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful emotive words tallisman but I am sure there is another more stable one out there.

Andy

September 15th, 2022 01:54

Pantomime
tallisman said:

Shamrocker! Hope you ok! Thanks very much!

September 15th, 2022 01:03

Pantomime
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

I can feel the emotion in this Tallisman. Beautiful!

September 14th, 2022 19:51

Pantomime
shaa said:

Spectacular... enjoyed reading this especially the way it flows easily I move from one line to the next without difficulty then the emotions are just flaring

September 14th, 2022 14:51

Pantomime
Raven333 said:

Excellent write my friend, and yes this is why relationships scare me to death because for some reason it always seems to go south..

September 14th, 2022 14:50

Devils bride revisited
Doggerel Dave said:

Revisited? Revisited? No one has the strength energy or foolhardiness to do that, surely?
Great write.

September 11th, 2022 17:33

Devils bride revisited
shaa said:

I enjoyed reading this piece, have to admit I think I\'m a fan of this woman

September 9th, 2022 15:58

The singer and the song
Raven333 said:

Bravo once again my friend, you know it kinda reminded me of my ex.. he was a singer in a band.. LOL

September 9th, 2022 14:36

Devils bride revisited
Bella Shepard said:

I love the wonderful rhyming pattern as I read aloud, it adds to the mystery and spiciness of the piece. It may sound bizarre, but I\'m rooting for her. Great write my friend, beautifully constructed, a fav.

September 9th, 2022 14:28

Devils bride revisited
Raven333 said:

AWESOME!!! I totally needed to read that.. as I read I totally became her, it took me away for that minute. amazing write..

September 9th, 2022 14:24

Devils bride revisited
jarcher54 said:

I do enjoy your spirited rhyming stories! I think I know this woman personally... black lingerie and a devilish tongue! My weaknesses.

September 9th, 2022 02:14

The singer and the song
Doggerel Dave said:

I get it, I think.... words are cheap and easy - But for you? Trust is the key.
I admire the structure and discipline of the piece. Thanks for that.

September 9th, 2022 00:11

The singer and the song
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Wow a song written for a love and a singer who sings just for you, yeah a poet is compatible with a singer. Kudos for the fab rhyming poem, suggesting to the love so poetically and advices, kudos!

Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

September 8th, 2022 14:45

Migraine
tallisman said:

Thank you Bella, fortunately as I got older the bad ones got less and less frequent, though lasted longer when they did happen! As a child I would pass out …actually a blessing..but haven’t that luxury as an adult, something else I guess we grow out of!

September 8th, 2022 00:35

Migraine
Bella Shepard said:

Your graphic description of migraine pain truly depicts what sufferers endure. I cannot imagine what that must be like. I truly wish you better and better days my friend

September 7th, 2022 15:31

Migraine
orchidee said:

A sensitive write T.

September 7th, 2022 02:26

What you going to do about that?
tallisman said:

Thanks DD… it was one of those where I wasn’t sure if my humour would come across ok!

August 30th, 2022 00:15

What you going to do about that?
Doggerel Dave said:

Should be classified as \'humour\' .
So what you gonna do about that?
Good fun. Very much enjoyed by the time I reached the punch line! 🙂

August 29th, 2022 23:02

No gold at the end of a rainbow
Goldfinch60 said:

We must always try and keep going Tallisman.

Andy

August 25th, 2022 01:31

Grannies gang. Revised
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

I hope you are well Tallisman! This was entertaining!

August 20th, 2022 17:44

Devils bride
Goldfinch60 said:

Very intriguing poem tallisman and very well written.

Andy

August 14th, 2022 01:06

Devils bride
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

You had me very intrigued with this one. Very rythmatic! So different from all I have read in your previous work!! Absolutely love it Tallisman!

August 13th, 2022 16:35

Grannies gang. Revised
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a wonderful write tallisman.

We were sitting in a coffee bar the other day and six bikers came in and I swear none of them were below 60 years of age.

Andy

August 11th, 2022 00:48

The best of times
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

I believe with the right person love is for eternity! This is beautiful Tallisman!

August 10th, 2022 13:52

Grannies gang. Revised
tallisman said:

Hmmmmm.like the love island idea, not that I’ve ever watched it!

August 10th, 2022 10:20

Grannies gang. Revised
tallisman said:

What an idea! It wasn’t intended to be ageist but of course it can be seen to be, my apologies, I was going for funny😂 ….

August 10th, 2022 10:17

Sea of dreams
Raven333 said:

I thought it was another great write by you.. just because no feedback don\'t let it get you down my friend..

August 10th, 2022 02:06

The best of times
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Tallisman, that love will last for eternity.

Andy

August 10th, 2022 00:03

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