Comments received on poems by tallisman
1969
anita.brooke said:
Such a sad poem - childhood can be so cruel - I hate to think how many children are still going through tough times. I\'m sorry you suffered so badly.
November 14th, 2024 14:16
anita.brooke said:
Such a sad poem - childhood can be so cruel - I hate to think how many children are still going through tough times. I\'m sorry you suffered so badly.
November 14th, 2024 14:16
Strange things happen at sea
tallisman said:
Hi CM, hope all ok? Glad u like it!
October 18th, 2024 13:33
tallisman said:
Hi CM, hope all ok? Glad u like it!
October 18th, 2024 13:33
Strange things happen at sea
Cheeky Missy said:
Sorry, I\'ve been out of the loop and shall likely continue for another day thanks to my insane schedule, but to have missed this beauty is unforgivable. La! How deliciously rendered to effect, conjuring thereby the gripping poignancy of such misadventures until I nearly swoon! Awesome! I love it! Thank you so VERY much for sharing.
October 18th, 2024 11:58
Cheeky Missy said:
Sorry, I\'ve been out of the loop and shall likely continue for another day thanks to my insane schedule, but to have missed this beauty is unforgivable. La! How deliciously rendered to effect, conjuring thereby the gripping poignancy of such misadventures until I nearly swoon! Awesome! I love it! Thank you so VERY much for sharing.
October 18th, 2024 11:58
Paranoid
Doggerel Dave said:
So I present to you a golden oldie (may still be current for all I know) from times past: \"just because you\'re paranoid doesn\'t mean they ain\'t out to get you\"
Good riff I thoroughly enjoyed.
October 17th, 2024 17:20
Doggerel Dave said:
So I present to you a golden oldie (may still be current for all I know) from times past: \"just because you\'re paranoid doesn\'t mean they ain\'t out to get you\"
Good riff I thoroughly enjoyed.
October 17th, 2024 17:20
The sea holds its secrets…
Neville said:
They say stranger things happen at sea, don\'t they .. well you just proved em all correct .. a compelling read throughout .. Aye aye sir from one end to tother :)
October 17th, 2024 13:32
Neville said:
They say stranger things happen at sea, don\'t they .. well you just proved em all correct .. a compelling read throughout .. Aye aye sir from one end to tother :)
October 17th, 2024 13:32
The Eagle and the Wolves
Doggerel Dave said:
Champion effort there, T. That \'s what you were doing while you were away?
Now please don\'t take offense, but I do like your modern stuff better.....
October 16th, 2024 15:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Champion effort there, T. That \'s what you were doing while you were away?
Now please don\'t take offense, but I do like your modern stuff better.....
October 16th, 2024 15:13
The Heist
tallisman said:
Thanks CM… glad you enjoyed it, for some reason I cannot respond to your post!
October 16th, 2024 04:07
tallisman said:
Thanks CM… glad you enjoyed it, for some reason I cannot respond to your post!
October 16th, 2024 04:07
The Heist
Doggerel Dave said:
I can\'t be coming here every day!🙃
Another great yarn, Tallisman.
October 15th, 2024 15:26
Doggerel Dave said:
I can\'t be coming here every day!🙃
Another great yarn, Tallisman.
October 15th, 2024 15:26
The Heist
Cheeky Missy said:
Are you truly allowed to leave me helpless and shaking in laughter?! You\'re a regular riot with this, I declare! My la. Excellently rendered with a gripping poignancy and superb humor, not to mention great imagery. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 15th, 2024 13:20
Cheeky Missy said:
Are you truly allowed to leave me helpless and shaking in laughter?! You\'re a regular riot with this, I declare! My la. Excellently rendered with a gripping poignancy and superb humor, not to mention great imagery. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 15th, 2024 13:20
The Heist
peet said:
Wow. Great piece. Lovely storytelling. Very rarely one gets to read poetic stories.
October 15th, 2024 12:45
peet said:
Wow. Great piece. Lovely storytelling. Very rarely one gets to read poetic stories.
October 15th, 2024 12:45
The sea holds its secrets…
Doggerel Dave said:
If you continue in this fashion T, you will turn me into a cynic, distrustful of the world and its ways......🙃
It was smooth compulsive reading, I was unable to leave until the very end. Great stuff.
October 14th, 2024 15:59
Doggerel Dave said:
If you continue in this fashion T, you will turn me into a cynic, distrustful of the world and its ways......🙃
It was smooth compulsive reading, I was unable to leave until the very end. Great stuff.
October 14th, 2024 15:59
The sea holds its secrets…
tallisman said:
Thanks CM, high praise indeed! Thank you so much.
October 14th, 2024 14:56
tallisman said:
Thanks CM, high praise indeed! Thank you so much.
October 14th, 2024 14:56
The sea holds its secrets…
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, you succeeded again at keeping me riveted and on the proverbial edge of my seat, reading a different perspective on the familiar tale of only one set of footprints in the sand and of guys who fall prey to the worst kind of girls. Wow! I\'m speechless. Awesome! Spectacular. Beautifully rendered with a strikingly haunting poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing! P.S. you made me laugh too, repeatedly to boot.
October 14th, 2024 12:41
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, you succeeded again at keeping me riveted and on the proverbial edge of my seat, reading a different perspective on the familiar tale of only one set of footprints in the sand and of guys who fall prey to the worst kind of girls. Wow! I\'m speechless. Awesome! Spectacular. Beautifully rendered with a strikingly haunting poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing! P.S. you made me laugh too, repeatedly to boot.
October 14th, 2024 12:41
Obsession
tallisman said:
Thanks C M, glad you liked it…. The next one will not be so macabre! Thanks for reading…
October 13th, 2024 13:48
tallisman said:
Thanks C M, glad you liked it…. The next one will not be so macabre! Thanks for reading…
October 13th, 2024 13:48
Obsession
Cheeky Missy said:
If nothing else, after successfully keeping me riveted despite the length and trend to be macabre, this ghastly beauty sent me chasing down the movie it dredged up thereby. Excellently rendered with a timely haunting sense of Death, imagery to suit and a poignancy which put me on the edge of my seat, this is erm, charming. Thank you for sharing.
October 13th, 2024 13:00
Cheeky Missy said:
If nothing else, after successfully keeping me riveted despite the length and trend to be macabre, this ghastly beauty sent me chasing down the movie it dredged up thereby. Excellently rendered with a timely haunting sense of Death, imagery to suit and a poignancy which put me on the edge of my seat, this is erm, charming. Thank you for sharing.
October 13th, 2024 13:00
Again and again…
tallisman said:
Thanks Dave, appreciate your feedback and comment!
October 11th, 2024 16:48
tallisman said:
Thanks Dave, appreciate your feedback and comment!
October 11th, 2024 16:48
Again and again…
Doggerel Dave said:
Sinister given a tribute in some very rich poetry. A tale well told.
Faving this for the construction rhyme and flow, mate.
October 11th, 2024 16:23
Doggerel Dave said:
Sinister given a tribute in some very rich poetry. A tale well told.
Faving this for the construction rhyme and flow, mate.
October 11th, 2024 16:23
Again and again…
sorenbarrett said:
I loved how this poem leaves the reader to imagin the outcome of each step the forshadowing and the back and forth in this dark poem of passion. It reminds me of the song by Nick Cave and the bad seed \"where the wild roses grow\" Dark and haunting
October 11th, 2024 14:15
sorenbarrett said:
I loved how this poem leaves the reader to imagin the outcome of each step the forshadowing and the back and forth in this dark poem of passion. It reminds me of the song by Nick Cave and the bad seed \"where the wild roses grow\" Dark and haunting
October 11th, 2024 14:15
Again and again…
peet said:
Emotions well captured. Deep lines and very well penned.
October 11th, 2024 13:35
peet said:
Emotions well captured. Deep lines and very well penned.
October 11th, 2024 13:35
1969
Doggerel Dave said:
Hunted around for an appropriate response, but couldn\'t find one - plenty of empathy, but no words.
Stay safe.
October 10th, 2024 16:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Hunted around for an appropriate response, but couldn\'t find one - plenty of empathy, but no words.
Stay safe.
October 10th, 2024 16:25
Vivamus, moriendum est.
Cheeky Missy said:
Your username was one of my favorites in Sir Walter Scot\'s Waverly series. That being said, this is downright lovely, with subtly deeper implications just below the tantalizing surface. Fascinatingly rendered in seeming forthright simplicity, it\'s beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
October 10th, 2024 15:44
Cheeky Missy said:
Your username was one of my favorites in Sir Walter Scot\'s Waverly series. That being said, this is downright lovely, with subtly deeper implications just below the tantalizing surface. Fascinatingly rendered in seeming forthright simplicity, it\'s beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
October 10th, 2024 15:44
1969
Doggerel Dave said:
Great to see you back, Tallisman.
As a \'tribute\' to the Troubles, that will take some beating. It has a visceral immediacy about it.
\'Sorry - but I have to ask: based on actual experience, or imaginative interpretation?
October 9th, 2024 23:49
Doggerel Dave said:
Great to see you back, Tallisman.
As a \'tribute\' to the Troubles, that will take some beating. It has a visceral immediacy about it.
\'Sorry - but I have to ask: based on actual experience, or imaginative interpretation?
October 9th, 2024 23:49
1969
Cheeky Missy said:
Goodnight! I\'m favoriting this to keep it, not because it is lovely or charming but graphically tendered as a memento to what they want none to know or remember. Beautifully rendered with ghastly poignancy and haunting imagery in testament to being Irish. Thank you for sharing. It makes my blood begin to boil.
October 9th, 2024 18:45
Cheeky Missy said:
Goodnight! I\'m favoriting this to keep it, not because it is lovely or charming but graphically tendered as a memento to what they want none to know or remember. Beautifully rendered with ghastly poignancy and haunting imagery in testament to being Irish. Thank you for sharing. It makes my blood begin to boil.
October 9th, 2024 18:45
1969
peet said:
Wow !! What a way to capture the changing times in Ireland. Lovely lines there.
October 9th, 2024 12:32
peet said:
Wow !! What a way to capture the changing times in Ireland. Lovely lines there.
October 9th, 2024 12:32
Lost in the light
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for your return, T. (And for me a rhymer always wins the day)
A relationship seen through a least a couple of broken mirrors.
Any hopes?
February 3rd, 2024 01:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for your return, T. (And for me a rhymer always wins the day)
A relationship seen through a least a couple of broken mirrors.
Any hopes?
February 3rd, 2024 01:05
Broken
Doggerel Dave said:
What\'s up, Tallisman? Where are you?
Distance is a good healer.
Let\'s see you back here. You are missed....
February 1st, 2024 21:57
Doggerel Dave said:
What\'s up, Tallisman? Where are you?
Distance is a good healer.
Let\'s see you back here. You are missed....
February 1st, 2024 21:57
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