Comments received on poems by tallisman



Lost in the light
Doggerel Dave said:

Thanks for your return, T. (And for me a rhymer always wins the day)
A relationship seen through a least a couple of broken mirrors.
Any hopes?

February 3rd, 2024 01:05

Broken
Doggerel Dave said:

What\'s up, Tallisman? Where are you?

Distance is a good healer.

Let\'s see you back here. You are missed....

February 1st, 2024 21:57

Eagles sing a requiem
Doggerel Dave said:

The bonds that can exist between friends; the loss. Only mountains could frame its height and depth.
Strong one, Tallisman.

December 20th, 2023 19:06

Broken
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive words Tallisman, I hope all gets well.

Andy

November 26th, 2023 02:11

They lie beneath
Doggerel Dave said:

Definitely worth it\'s place in War Poetry - Owen and Sassoon would welcome you I believe.

November 16th, 2023 06:42

Bad poetry
Doggerel Dave said:

You deserve a response here, Tallisman. Thanks for the prompt. A moral tale well worth sticking up on a poetry site.

November 16th, 2023 06:29

The Song
tallisman said:

You are sweet to say so! So glad you like it!

October 27th, 2023 15:18

The Song
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

As always; your words capture my soul! Beautiful write Tallisman

October 27th, 2023 05:47

They lie beneath
tallisman said:

It’s good to be back! Always good to talk to you😊,. Love your inspirational writing!

October 24th, 2023 00:22

They lie beneath
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

I have missed your work my friend! So happy to see you here again!!

October 23rd, 2023 19:12

They lie beneath
2781 said:

Yep.

October 23rd, 2023 01:32

Eagles sing a requiem
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful. Filled with powerful imagery. Great use of rhyme, not forced. Great job.

October 23rd, 2023 00:19

Bad poetry
rhmn_7 said:

This isn\'t bad poetry but a nice one.

October 22nd, 2023 08:51

Bad poetry
2781 said:

You talkin to me?

October 21st, 2023 01:59

Bad poetry
tallisman said:

Thankyou!

October 21st, 2023 01:35

Bad poetry
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent

October 21st, 2023 01:11

Death in disguise
Chris Duffy said:

I think this is me now . Brilliant !

June 29th, 2023 21:37

Consumed
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

The rhythm and rhyme blend so perfectly!

June 21st, 2023 14:31

Death in disguise
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

I hope you never met such a woman. Would be sad to think my favorite poet is not as happy as I believe.

June 21st, 2023 14:29

Why
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

Beautiful Tallisman!

June 21st, 2023 14:27

Why
tallisman said:

Thankyou LB, your comments always lift me!

June 16th, 2023 17:39

Why
L. B. Mek said:

great flow, tight wordplay schemes
reflects how much effort you put in
and a relatable, poetic voice
a great write!
thanks for sharing dear poet
\'Icicles crawling down his spine
To freeze the heart within

Why does the blackbird sing
When all around it dull and grey
He finds no joy in anything
Least of all another day

Why does his broken heart
Plead for another chance\'
hope\'s unyielding embers
a beautifully poetic refrain

June 16th, 2023 04:30

Death in disguise
2781 said:

That\'s really well written.
Sounds like another nightmare.

June 14th, 2023 01:49

Consumed
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Ah sad, jilted love causing suicidal ferlings or self harm is saddening but not so uncommon.
A geeat poem expressed superbly wow! Kudos!!

Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

May 26th, 2023 06:32

Child of my youth
tallisman said:

Shamrocker, thanks! Good to hear from you! Hope you are well…

April 16th, 2023 14:14

Child of my youth
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

Tallisman!!! A heart touching write!

April 16th, 2023 06:22

Consumed
2781 said:

He was a murderer from the beginning, and abode not in the truth, for the truth was not in him. When he speaks a lie, he speaks of his own: for he is a liar, and the father of it.

April 14th, 2023 17:59

Consumed
David Wakeling said:

This is well written.Certainly a good depiction of the modern relationship.I like the rhyme

April 14th, 2023 16:17

The Rocking chair
Goldfinch60 said:

People are always there in memory when you see those chairs of the past.

Andy

April 14th, 2023 00:44

Fly in a storm
tallisman said:

Thanks Eugene!

April 12th, 2023 13:29

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