Comments received on poems by tallisman
Searching for a question…(Acrostic)
Raven333 said:
OK, you ask how can your heart break again. Well how can your heart break again when it was already broken?? If am wrong, am sorry... But tell me!!
July 27th, 2022 04:00
Raven333 said:
OK, you ask how can your heart break again. Well how can your heart break again when it was already broken?? If am wrong, am sorry... But tell me!!
July 27th, 2022 04:00
Searching for a question…(Acrostic)
dusk arising said:
Our hearts do not die emotionally i believe, but having soaked up a lot of pain, they need healing times.
In all probability, a healed heart is a wiser heart, a more caring and understanding heart.
The sun arises anew each day
July 26th, 2022 17:22
dusk arising said:
Our hearts do not die emotionally i believe, but having soaked up a lot of pain, they need healing times.
In all probability, a healed heart is a wiser heart, a more caring and understanding heart.
The sun arises anew each day
July 26th, 2022 17:22
Searching for a question…(Acrostic)
Raven333 said:
You know my friend, I could read YOUR poems all day. Great job!!
July 26th, 2022 16:47
Raven333 said:
You know my friend, I could read YOUR poems all day. Great job!!
July 26th, 2022 16:47
Haiku
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful things come in small packages, as does this poem. Being a lover of roses I find this charming.
July 25th, 2022 15:21
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful things come in small packages, as does this poem. Being a lover of roses I find this charming.
July 25th, 2022 15:21
Watching the world go by —- [ villanelle ]
Raven333 said:
Another great write, but I was so sad reading it. Then again am a grown woman watching the world go by..
July 25th, 2022 11:11
Raven333 said:
Another great write, but I was so sad reading it. Then again am a grown woman watching the world go by..
July 25th, 2022 11:11
Haiku
Justa_Geezer said:
Would be a perfect 5-7-5 haiku if you put THEY in frony of Shrivel. Nice one ! https://www.haikusyllablecounter.com/
July 25th, 2022 10:23
Justa_Geezer said:
Would be a perfect 5-7-5 haiku if you put THEY in frony of Shrivel. Nice one ! https://www.haikusyllablecounter.com/
July 25th, 2022 10:23
Haiku
L. B. Mek said:
\'Shrivel and die *too* soon\'..
Haiku, is best served
simple and elegant
accessible and eloquent
and this, ticks all the boxes
for me..
thank you! dear Poet
July 25th, 2022 03:43
L. B. Mek said:
\'Shrivel and die *too* soon\'..
Haiku, is best served
simple and elegant
accessible and eloquent
and this, ticks all the boxes
for me..
thank you! dear Poet
July 25th, 2022 03:43
Watching the world go by —- [ villanelle ]
Goldfinch60 said:
Good experiment Tallisman.
Andy
July 25th, 2022 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Good experiment Tallisman.
Andy
July 25th, 2022 00:16
Break the chain…
Raven333 said:
I liked it although it was a little scary but I can not deny that I have felt that way to.
July 23rd, 2022 23:46
Raven333 said:
I liked it although it was a little scary but I can not deny that I have felt that way to.
July 23rd, 2022 23:46
Break the chain…
Bella Shepard said:
Wow! Raw, laying it all on the line, all or nothing thinking, cognitive distortion, very dangerous. Scary, gives me goosebumps, but you\'ve described this disorder so well. Good write!
July 23rd, 2022 16:03
Bella Shepard said:
Wow! Raw, laying it all on the line, all or nothing thinking, cognitive distortion, very dangerous. Scary, gives me goosebumps, but you\'ve described this disorder so well. Good write!
July 23rd, 2022 16:03
Break the chain…
tallisman said:
Hi Lollly, I see myself as a storyteller! Don’t worry… thanks for reading!😊
July 23rd, 2022 12:18
tallisman said:
Hi Lollly, I see myself as a storyteller! Don’t worry… thanks for reading!😊
July 23rd, 2022 12:18
Break the chain…
lalalaEulalie said:
A little terrifying but raw and relatable. Many very pretty verses throughout. I hope this is not a recent pain you are sharing. Either way, she\'s not worth it. 💔💞
July 23rd, 2022 10:57
lalalaEulalie said:
A little terrifying but raw and relatable. Many very pretty verses throughout. I hope this is not a recent pain you are sharing. Either way, she\'s not worth it. 💔💞
July 23rd, 2022 10:57
Blood on the water
Raven333 said:
Another great one tallisman, taking one\'s life is a very personal sad thing. knowing that the person feels like thats their only choice.
July 19th, 2022 17:57
Raven333 said:
Another great one tallisman, taking one\'s life is a very personal sad thing. knowing that the person feels like thats their only choice.
July 19th, 2022 17:57
Blood on the water
tallisman said:
Hi Judy nice to see you again!nthanks for that!
July 19th, 2022 15:26
tallisman said:
Hi Judy nice to see you again!nthanks for that!
July 19th, 2022 15:26
Blood on the water
JudyStella said:
Wonderful! It’s incredible how you bring out the idea without much effort! Love the dark imagery! You bring out her emotions and her mindset so well! Good one!
July 19th, 2022 13:44
JudyStella said:
Wonderful! It’s incredible how you bring out the idea without much effort! Love the dark imagery! You bring out her emotions and her mindset so well! Good one!
July 19th, 2022 13:44
Blood on the water
L. B. Mek said:
\'... and all the while
those drooling, Sharks
gather ...\'
(Brilliant!)
July 19th, 2022 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
\'... and all the while
those drooling, Sharks
gather ...\'
(Brilliant!)
July 19th, 2022 04:51
Blood on the water
tallisman said:
Thanks Teddy, I would love to know the back story to this one!
July 19th, 2022 00:56
tallisman said:
Thanks Teddy, I would love to know the back story to this one!
July 19th, 2022 00:56
Natures dance
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, an important message!
\'we were gifted a disco globe
of a planet
and we\'ve gone and drained it
of its shine...\'
(thanks for sharing, dear poet
such a timely, write
and a wonderful metaphor)
July 18th, 2022 03:31
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, an important message!
\'we were gifted a disco globe
of a planet
and we\'ve gone and drained it
of its shine...\'
(thanks for sharing, dear poet
such a timely, write
and a wonderful metaphor)
July 18th, 2022 03:31
Natures dance
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic ending! All of life is a dance for sure, thank you for sharing
July 18th, 2022 01:07
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic ending! All of life is a dance for sure, thank you for sharing
July 18th, 2022 01:07
Circles in the sand
Raven333 said:
Great poem my friend, sometimes I feel like am going in circles. good rhyme!!
July 17th, 2022 05:35
Raven333 said:
Great poem my friend, sometimes I feel like am going in circles. good rhyme!!
July 17th, 2022 05:35
Circles in the sand
tallisman said:
I’m impressed you all figured it out! Thanks for reading!
July 16th, 2022 14:03
tallisman said:
I’m impressed you all figured it out! Thanks for reading!
July 16th, 2022 14:03
Circles in the sand
Bella Shepard said:
Fires burning, drought, mother natures violent outbursts, I think she\'s trying to tell us something. Your last 6 lines speak volumes. Well done!
July 16th, 2022 13:11
Bella Shepard said:
Fires burning, drought, mother natures violent outbursts, I think she\'s trying to tell us something. Your last 6 lines speak volumes. Well done!
July 16th, 2022 13:11
Intermission
Raven333 said:
Loved it, for some reason it made me smile. But my friend you have to get over the writers block..
July 14th, 2022 13:46
Raven333 said:
Loved it, for some reason it made me smile. But my friend you have to get over the writers block..
July 14th, 2022 13:46
Intermission
Bella Shepard said:
Take care dear poet. Been there, had it, recovered, completely get it, and its good to share those feelings.
July 14th, 2022 12:31
Bella Shepard said:
Take care dear poet. Been there, had it, recovered, completely get it, and its good to share those feelings.
July 14th, 2022 12:31
Intermission
L. B. Mek said:
I see no difference
between lockdown or now
between those with jabs
and those, who opted out
covid, as rabid
in those around me
as it has ever been..
beggars the question
why the fuck
did we have to bring the world
to a stand still
and cost people 2 years
from their ephemerally, precious
life!?
(thanks for sharing, dear poet)
July 14th, 2022 01:20
L. B. Mek said:
I see no difference
between lockdown or now
between those with jabs
and those, who opted out
covid, as rabid
in those around me
as it has ever been..
beggars the question
why the fuck
did we have to bring the world
to a stand still
and cost people 2 years
from their ephemerally, precious
life!?
(thanks for sharing, dear poet)
July 14th, 2022 01:20
Road trip
sadkw33n said:
Sweetest poem I\'ve read. Loved it! You did a great job on this one too! I\'m hoping to see more.
July 13th, 2022 17:02
sadkw33n said:
Sweetest poem I\'ve read. Loved it! You did a great job on this one too! I\'m hoping to see more.
July 13th, 2022 17:02
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