Comments received on poems by M. Evermore
Work, Eat, Breathe
L. B. Mek said:
and our reward for surviving
\'we go again!\'
and again, till
one day, we hope
we get to realise
there truly is more meaning
to this living, \'thing\'
lol
(thanks for sharing, so relatable)
November 18th, 2022 06:11
L. B. Mek said:
and our reward for surviving
\'we go again!\'
and again, till
one day, we hope
we get to realise
there truly is more meaning
to this living, \'thing\'
lol
(thanks for sharing, so relatable)
November 18th, 2022 06:11
A Conversation with a Simpleton
Goddess of the Mist said:
Hahaha!! Great, fellow witch!
June 8th, 2022 17:53
Goddess of the Mist said:
Hahaha!! Great, fellow witch!
June 8th, 2022 17:53
Vulnerability
languale said:
Such a beautiful use of language! I really enjoyed reading your poem.
Maybe you want to check on mine too? I\'d be happy if you leave a comment. I\'ts always exiting to know what other people like about your work. :)
June 2nd, 2022 11:11
languale said:
Such a beautiful use of language! I really enjoyed reading your poem.
Maybe you want to check on mine too? I\'d be happy if you leave a comment. I\'ts always exiting to know what other people like about your work. :)
June 2nd, 2022 11:11
Vulnerability
sonnie said:
wow I loved this… it’s the fact that you don’t avoid vulnerability, you just want to be appreciated and reassured when you are vulnerable. beautiful arrangement of words. truly.
May 25th, 2022 23:18
sonnie said:
wow I loved this… it’s the fact that you don’t avoid vulnerability, you just want to be appreciated and reassured when you are vulnerable. beautiful arrangement of words. truly.
May 25th, 2022 23:18
Vulnerability
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, this was so open and delicate. I\'m so sorry to hear you feel this way, sometimes people just don\'t have a \"sensitivity meter\" and ignore other\'s true feelings. I hope you can overcome this though.
May 25th, 2022 12:20
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, this was so open and delicate. I\'m so sorry to hear you feel this way, sometimes people just don\'t have a \"sensitivity meter\" and ignore other\'s true feelings. I hope you can overcome this though.
May 25th, 2022 12:20
Runaway
L. B. Mek said:
there\'s a Hungarian, proverb that goes:
\'running away is a shame, but
It, Is: Useful!\'..
(we must survive, to feel shame
and if we\'re alive n well, enough
to feel shame
then someday soon, maybe
we\'ll be afforded the opportunity
to redeem ourselves, but first
we Must, survive...!)
thank you! for sharing your wisdom
and remining us
we\'re not all, born to be conquering
heroes
and that\'s, Perfectly: Fine!
May 17th, 2022 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
there\'s a Hungarian, proverb that goes:
\'running away is a shame, but
It, Is: Useful!\'..
(we must survive, to feel shame
and if we\'re alive n well, enough
to feel shame
then someday soon, maybe
we\'ll be afforded the opportunity
to redeem ourselves, but first
we Must, survive...!)
thank you! for sharing your wisdom
and remining us
we\'re not all, born to be conquering
heroes
and that\'s, Perfectly: Fine!
May 17th, 2022 04:15
Internal Conflict
Rocky Lagou said:
Talk about it. Especially dealing with depression I can relate to this \"internal conflict.\" We must always fight and keep up the hope. Hope you\'re doing alright.
May 13th, 2022 08:49
Rocky Lagou said:
Talk about it. Especially dealing with depression I can relate to this \"internal conflict.\" We must always fight and keep up the hope. Hope you\'re doing alright.
May 13th, 2022 08:49
And So I Dream
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello M Evermore
this is an amazing read
I love the concept of dreaming
great job! tchau Cassia
May 12th, 2022 14:17
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello M Evermore
this is an amazing read
I love the concept of dreaming
great job! tchau Cassia
May 12th, 2022 14:17
And So I Dream
Rocky Lagou said:
This is wonderful dear poet! I believe all us dreamers are just freedom-seekers. This world deserves better, better than what we\'re giving it right now. Hate and wars are rising as the years pass, and it seems that it\'ll never cease. I hope for days where dreams can become reality.
May 12th, 2022 10:03
Rocky Lagou said:
This is wonderful dear poet! I believe all us dreamers are just freedom-seekers. This world deserves better, better than what we\'re giving it right now. Hate and wars are rising as the years pass, and it seems that it\'ll never cease. I hope for days where dreams can become reality.
May 12th, 2022 10:03
Silence
L. B. Mek said:
\'There are depths to the silence,
That will never be entered,
Will never be found,
Never discovered
An orchestra of unknown instruments
A phantom opera
A mirage of sound
It is everything it is not\'..
Brilliantly, deep dived
and articulated with such impassioned eloquence..
I agree with your theme completely.
In one of my previous scribbles
about the benefits of meditation
I think I inked a line similar to
\'When we can hear, silence
itself
maybe then, we can truly begin
to try and attempt
an understanding of ourselves\'..
thanks for sharing
May 10th, 2022 03:44
L. B. Mek said:
\'There are depths to the silence,
That will never be entered,
Will never be found,
Never discovered
An orchestra of unknown instruments
A phantom opera
A mirage of sound
It is everything it is not\'..
Brilliantly, deep dived
and articulated with such impassioned eloquence..
I agree with your theme completely.
In one of my previous scribbles
about the benefits of meditation
I think I inked a line similar to
\'When we can hear, silence
itself
maybe then, we can truly begin
to try and attempt
an understanding of ourselves\'..
thanks for sharing
May 10th, 2022 03:44
Silence
Natalia B. Odair said:
Beautiful, simply beautiful. Lovely poem, thank for sharing it with us!!
May 9th, 2022 13:42
Natalia B. Odair said:
Beautiful, simply beautiful. Lovely poem, thank for sharing it with us!!
May 9th, 2022 13:42
Nightfall
Nicholas Browning said:
A much enjoyed read. Reminded me of clockwork under the moon.
May 5th, 2022 20:10
Nicholas Browning said:
A much enjoyed read. Reminded me of clockwork under the moon.
May 5th, 2022 20:10
I See You
Zoia Siena said:
Very familiar state to me. Beautiful poetry. Thank you for sharing🌹
April 27th, 2022 15:28
Zoia Siena said:
Very familiar state to me. Beautiful poetry. Thank you for sharing🌹
April 27th, 2022 15:28
I See You
Rocky Lagou said:
An adoring sight! I love the imagery of color you made prominent in this one. It felt vivid and alive!
April 27th, 2022 09:01
Rocky Lagou said:
An adoring sight! I love the imagery of color you made prominent in this one. It felt vivid and alive!
April 27th, 2022 09:01
I See You
Christina8 said:
I think you did a great job on this, your imagery is great. Very nice!
April 27th, 2022 08:20
Christina8 said:
I think you did a great job on this, your imagery is great. Very nice!
April 27th, 2022 08:20
A Poem of Myself
Nicholas Browning said:
This poem addresses something that I\'ve struggled with for many years of my life. Since I was young, I lived while asking myself if I deserved what I received. If something good happened, if something bad happened. Do I deserve to be happy? Do I deserve to suffer by intentionally or unintentionally hurting someone else? In the middle of the beginning of this quandary, I saw an anime once that said \"There\'s something in this world that we can\'t prove exists. Many people want it, but very few ever find it. The reason why it\'s so difficult to find is because the thing you want the most is the thing you will never have\". It took many more years to understand what it meant. Love, life, guilt, death; happiness, despair, loneliness, belonging, salvation. I placed my beliefs in other people and let their satisfaction and happiness carry my own, but soon learned that wasn\'t a good way to live. Long story short, you\'ve gone out of your way to question many things that people fear. You\'ve looked inside the \"Self\" and came back out with new knowledge and understanding. It\'s impressive to see. I agree with Rocky about this being one hell of an introduction. All the best,
Welcome to MPS.
April 25th, 2022 23:40
Nicholas Browning said:
This poem addresses something that I\'ve struggled with for many years of my life. Since I was young, I lived while asking myself if I deserved what I received. If something good happened, if something bad happened. Do I deserve to be happy? Do I deserve to suffer by intentionally or unintentionally hurting someone else? In the middle of the beginning of this quandary, I saw an anime once that said \"There\'s something in this world that we can\'t prove exists. Many people want it, but very few ever find it. The reason why it\'s so difficult to find is because the thing you want the most is the thing you will never have\". It took many more years to understand what it meant. Love, life, guilt, death; happiness, despair, loneliness, belonging, salvation. I placed my beliefs in other people and let their satisfaction and happiness carry my own, but soon learned that wasn\'t a good way to live. Long story short, you\'ve gone out of your way to question many things that people fear. You\'ve looked inside the \"Self\" and came back out with new knowledge and understanding. It\'s impressive to see. I agree with Rocky about this being one hell of an introduction. All the best,
Welcome to MPS.
April 25th, 2022 23:40
A Poem of Myself
Rocky Lagou said:
And this right here... is quite the entrance to MPS my dear. I literally adore your words, it eptimomizes the human mind and the intracies intertwined. All those nuances of \"being\" and \"not being\" and love and all the complicatedness of life is very finely summed up in this glory. That line, \"Homesick for something unreal, unreachable, and unattainable\" rings so true. I feel many times we\'re searching for an intangible bliss that just isn\'t real. Your repition in the line, \"It is not, it is not, it is not\" also really ties in that \"overwhelmed\" tone that you\'re conveying. Thank you.
April 25th, 2022 12:40
Rocky Lagou said:
And this right here... is quite the entrance to MPS my dear. I literally adore your words, it eptimomizes the human mind and the intracies intertwined. All those nuances of \"being\" and \"not being\" and love and all the complicatedness of life is very finely summed up in this glory. That line, \"Homesick for something unreal, unreachable, and unattainable\" rings so true. I feel many times we\'re searching for an intangible bliss that just isn\'t real. Your repition in the line, \"It is not, it is not, it is not\" also really ties in that \"overwhelmed\" tone that you\'re conveying. Thank you.
April 25th, 2022 12:40
