Comments received on poems by arqios
ode to the broken dream
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios, may our dreams be filled with joy and love.
Andy
November 27th, 2024 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words arqios, may our dreams be filled with joy and love.
Andy
November 27th, 2024 02:11
ode to the broken dream
Dan Williams said:
Be thankful you have relatively sedate dream awakenings. Mine can be reactive, often accompanied by screams and cursing. Nice write.
November 27th, 2024 00:50
Dan Williams said:
Be thankful you have relatively sedate dream awakenings. Mine can be reactive, often accompanied by screams and cursing. Nice write.
November 27th, 2024 00:50
near or far of love
Dan Williams said:
I can\'t help but see you said true love \"should\" always pull through. Not convinced?
November 27th, 2024 00:43
Dan Williams said:
I can\'t help but see you said true love \"should\" always pull through. Not convinced?
November 27th, 2024 00:43
ode to the broken dream
Bobby O said:
Pointy ears and lingering bc and hope and dreams all in a concise piece where every word drives home. I liked it
November 26th, 2024 22:09
Bobby O said:
Pointy ears and lingering bc and hope and dreams all in a concise piece where every word drives home. I liked it
November 26th, 2024 22:09
ode to the broken dream
Doggerel Dave said:
The rich quality of the dream I remember seems to fade gently, but the underlying mood or feeling lingers longer.
A sonnet I found quite personal to me and felt satisfied after.
November 26th, 2024 19:12
Doggerel Dave said:
The rich quality of the dream I remember seems to fade gently, but the underlying mood or feeling lingers longer.
A sonnet I found quite personal to me and felt satisfied after.
November 26th, 2024 19:12
The Beauty of a Kiss
Cassie58 said:
Really lovely expression in this Triolet. The rhyme is so subtle it is barely noticed.
Well done.
November 26th, 2024 18:28
Cassie58 said:
Really lovely expression in this Triolet. The rhyme is so subtle it is barely noticed.
Well done.
November 26th, 2024 18:28
The Beauty of a Kiss
Caring dove said:
Gentle and lovely writing . I liked this )
November 26th, 2024 17:20
Caring dove said:
Gentle and lovely writing . I liked this )
November 26th, 2024 17:20
ode to the broken dream
Neville said:
methinks, if this is a sonnet, then it is a very good sonnet .. methinks
November 26th, 2024 10:49
Neville said:
methinks, if this is a sonnet, then it is a very good sonnet .. methinks
November 26th, 2024 10:49
ode to the broken dream
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful sonnet on dreams, my friend. We still don\'t know a whole lot about the mind and dreams are both a known, universal phenomenon and a mystery all at the same time! Loved this poem and its an easy fave. Well done, friend! 🌹👏
November 26th, 2024 10:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful sonnet on dreams, my friend. We still don\'t know a whole lot about the mind and dreams are both a known, universal phenomenon and a mystery all at the same time! Loved this poem and its an easy fave. Well done, friend! 🌹👏
November 26th, 2024 10:46
ode to the broken dream
sorenbarrett said:
Buried in this beautiful complex rhyme scheme lies the metaphor of life itself under the covers of dreams and this life is a dream itself at least so said Poe In his poem, a dream within a dream. The flow of this poem is quite classic, and it is polished with internal rhyme. Most beautiful poem.
November 26th, 2024 06:35
sorenbarrett said:
Buried in this beautiful complex rhyme scheme lies the metaphor of life itself under the covers of dreams and this life is a dream itself at least so said Poe In his poem, a dream within a dream. The flow of this poem is quite classic, and it is polished with internal rhyme. Most beautiful poem.
November 26th, 2024 06:35
near or far of love
Goldfinch60 said:
True love does always pull you through arqios as it has for me in all my long life.
Andy
November 26th, 2024 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
True love does always pull you through arqios as it has for me in all my long life.
Andy
November 26th, 2024 02:47
ashes from your urn
NafisaSB said:
may his soul rest in peace. beautiful eulogy
November 26th, 2024 00:21
NafisaSB said:
may his soul rest in peace. beautiful eulogy
November 26th, 2024 00:21
near or far of love
rin said:
I thought it was a poem that could only be written with a delicate descriptive ability. And yet, it makes a powerful appeal to love. It is amazing!
November 25th, 2024 21:35
rin said:
I thought it was a poem that could only be written with a delicate descriptive ability. And yet, it makes a powerful appeal to love. It is amazing!
November 25th, 2024 21:35
near or far of love
David Wakeling said:
All I know about relationships is that they all fail sooner or later. Anyway this is a very close look at a heart in turmoil.It\'s why I live alone.
November 25th, 2024 21:22
David Wakeling said:
All I know about relationships is that they all fail sooner or later. Anyway this is a very close look at a heart in turmoil.It\'s why I live alone.
November 25th, 2024 21:22
near or far of love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah. It\'s all Nev\'s fault. Of course! Him and his dubble dares! LOL! After reading the comments below, I do hope Nev provides the narrative details. I am fascinated! As for the poem, well done my friend! 🌹👏
November 25th, 2024 08:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah. It\'s all Nev\'s fault. Of course! Him and his dubble dares! LOL! After reading the comments below, I do hope Nev provides the narrative details. I am fascinated! As for the poem, well done my friend! 🌹👏
November 25th, 2024 08:45
near or far of love
Doggerel Dave said:
Either/or... there\'s a dearth of information online, and I\'m not paying Amazon (aaah) a hundred plus dollars to satisfy my interest.. so could either of you please provide a little more detail...
November 25th, 2024 08:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Either/or... there\'s a dearth of information online, and I\'m not paying Amazon (aaah) a hundred plus dollars to satisfy my interest.. so could either of you please provide a little more detail...
November 25th, 2024 08:13
near or far of love
Neville said:
I shall neva dubble dare you again squire .. enjoy to the hilt .. 😎👍
November 25th, 2024 07:07
Neville said:
I shall neva dubble dare you again squire .. enjoy to the hilt .. 😎👍
November 25th, 2024 07:07
near or far of love
sorenbarrett said:
What are those relationships that are so merged that one cannot tell where one ends in the other begins or in fact if they are not just the same person with a shadow. Most interesting poem.
November 25th, 2024 05:39
sorenbarrett said:
What are those relationships that are so merged that one cannot tell where one ends in the other begins or in fact if they are not just the same person with a shadow. Most interesting poem.
November 25th, 2024 05:39
“Play It Again, Sam”
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words arqios, I wrote about this back in August this year, the Poem is called \"Here’s Looking At You.\"
November 25th, 2024 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words arqios, I wrote about this back in August this year, the Poem is called \"Here’s Looking At You.\"
November 25th, 2024 02:51
“Play It Again, Sam”
Kevin Hulme said:
Bogart had some ‘Cool’ lines in that film. To go through life in a ‘Tuxedo’ and be that good .
Good Poem.
November 24th, 2024 16:02
Kevin Hulme said:
Bogart had some ‘Cool’ lines in that film. To go through life in a ‘Tuxedo’ and be that good .
Good Poem.
November 24th, 2024 16:02
“Play It Again, Sam”
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the film, and can see ol’ Humphrey and Ingrid. Also, love this poem. Well done! ❤️
November 24th, 2024 15:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the film, and can see ol’ Humphrey and Ingrid. Also, love this poem. Well done! ❤️
November 24th, 2024 15:51
“Play It Again, Sam”
orchidee said:
Some say he did not say \'Sam\' in it - did he say it?
November 24th, 2024 13:09
orchidee said:
Some say he did not say \'Sam\' in it - did he say it?
November 24th, 2024 13:09
“Play It Again, Sam”
Neville said:
Come back Bogie all is forgiven .. they just don\'t make em like that anymore .. bloomin well penned again sir .. 😎👍
November 24th, 2024 13:05
Neville said:
Come back Bogie all is forgiven .. they just don\'t make em like that anymore .. bloomin well penned again sir .. 😎👍
November 24th, 2024 13:05
“Play It Again, Sam”
rin said:
Cool words colored with love and music. That kind of life and alcohol may have a causal relationship.
November 24th, 2024 12:17
rin said:
Cool words colored with love and music. That kind of life and alcohol may have a causal relationship.
November 24th, 2024 12:17
“Play It Again, Sam”
sorenbarrett said:
I always love Casablanca as well as Bogart and Bacall. I have seen that movie many times and it is one of my favorite love stories. It’s theme seems close to that of a tale of two cities where true love is in giving up have a relationship for someone else’s happiness.
November 24th, 2024 07:15
sorenbarrett said:
I always love Casablanca as well as Bogart and Bacall. I have seen that movie many times and it is one of my favorite love stories. It’s theme seems close to that of a tale of two cities where true love is in giving up have a relationship for someone else’s happiness.
November 24th, 2024 07:15
“Play It Again, Sam”
David Wakeling said:
Of all the Poetry joints in all the sites in the world this poem had to come to this one. I\'m glad it did.This a wonderful tribute to the greatest movie of all time Casablanca. I like the rhyme. Well done
November 24th, 2024 05:42
David Wakeling said:
Of all the Poetry joints in all the sites in the world this poem had to come to this one. I\'m glad it did.This a wonderful tribute to the greatest movie of all time Casablanca. I like the rhyme. Well done
November 24th, 2024 05:42
“Play It Again, Sam”
Doggerel Dave said:
A fitting tribute to a movie in most of our memories... Oh Ingrid (sigh) - adolescent yearnings....
November 24th, 2024 05:29
Doggerel Dave said:
A fitting tribute to a movie in most of our memories... Oh Ingrid (sigh) - adolescent yearnings....
November 24th, 2024 05:29
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