Comments received on poems by hzugman
Gentle persuasion
Poetic Licence said:
A great write, the one\'s that are forced always end up weaker, if it flows naturally it will appear more honest, genuine and have more emotion, clevet write, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 12:07
Poetic Licence said:
A great write, the one\'s that are forced always end up weaker, if it flows naturally it will appear more honest, genuine and have more emotion, clevet write, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 12:07
Gentle persuasion
sorenbarrett said:
Oh yes so true poetry like love can not be forced, it can be faked but it comes through. Very nice
July 23rd, 2025 11:40
sorenbarrett said:
Oh yes so true poetry like love can not be forced, it can be faked but it comes through. Very nice
July 23rd, 2025 11:40
Gentle persuasion
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha, you remind me of the other night last week when I and two other poetesses were hanging out, tis very true, which I wish more artists understood. Inspiration is akin to a horse: you can try to force it to little or no avail; or you can give the horse his head and see where he takes you. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a fun poignancy.
July 23rd, 2025 11:12
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha, you remind me of the other night last week when I and two other poetesses were hanging out, tis very true, which I wish more artists understood. Inspiration is akin to a horse: you can try to force it to little or no avail; or you can give the horse his head and see where he takes you. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a fun poignancy.
July 23rd, 2025 11:12
The stories we tell ourselves
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
An interesting poem, most poems are fiction but i usually write true real experiences and reality. Kudos for this poem!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
July 22nd, 2025 08:05
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
An interesting poem, most poems are fiction but i usually write true real experiences and reality. Kudos for this poem!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
July 22nd, 2025 08:05
The stories we tell ourselves
Poetic Licence said:
What we need is people to understand we are wrong and singing a false song, not sure that\'s going to happen, nicely expressed and written, enjoyed the read
July 21st, 2025 17:47
Poetic Licence said:
What we need is people to understand we are wrong and singing a false song, not sure that\'s going to happen, nicely expressed and written, enjoyed the read
July 21st, 2025 17:47
The stories we tell ourselves
sorenbarrett said:
Mind provoking and if we are lucky we will understand. Nice work
July 20th, 2025 20:11
sorenbarrett said:
Mind provoking and if we are lucky we will understand. Nice work
July 20th, 2025 20:11
Permission to thrive
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write that hits the nail on the head, give yourself permission, enjoyed the read
July 18th, 2025 12:03
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write that hits the nail on the head, give yourself permission, enjoyed the read
July 18th, 2025 12:03
Permission to thrive
sorenbarrett said:
A deeply philosophical write that is so true. Wonderful and a fave
July 18th, 2025 11:43
sorenbarrett said:
A deeply philosophical write that is so true. Wonderful and a fave
July 18th, 2025 11:43
Are you really happy --- really?
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s all you need to know in four short lines, lovely write, enjoyed the read
July 7th, 2025 20:57
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s all you need to know in four short lines, lovely write, enjoyed the read
July 7th, 2025 20:57
Are you really happy --- really?
sorenbarrett said:
Wisdom in four lines with rhyme nicely done
July 7th, 2025 16:25
sorenbarrett said:
Wisdom in four lines with rhyme nicely done
July 7th, 2025 16:25
True or False
Poetic Licence said:
Becoming an increasingly difficult task and they say technology is a good thing, not in this fase, accurate and enjoyable read
July 1st, 2025 14:10
Poetic Licence said:
Becoming an increasingly difficult task and they say technology is a good thing, not in this fase, accurate and enjoyable read
July 1st, 2025 14:10
True or False
sorenbarrett said:
Sifting the grain from the chaff finding the truth from false stories is quite a task. Well written
July 1st, 2025 13:25
sorenbarrett said:
Sifting the grain from the chaff finding the truth from false stories is quite a task. Well written
July 1st, 2025 13:25
I\'m through
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of saying it as it is, enjoyed the read
June 9th, 2025 12:17
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of saying it as it is, enjoyed the read
June 9th, 2025 12:17
I\'m through
sorenbarrett said:
I\'m with you. Society too soft needs a chill of cold water telling it as it is and not pretending. Lovely
June 9th, 2025 11:25
sorenbarrett said:
I\'m with you. Society too soft needs a chill of cold water telling it as it is and not pretending. Lovely
June 9th, 2025 11:25
Too much!
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is what I call short and a full example of what it is about it deserves a fave for its cleverness
June 8th, 2025 10:06
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is what I call short and a full example of what it is about it deserves a fave for its cleverness
June 8th, 2025 10:06
One step at a time
Muse of Calliope said:
This poem has a very positive message; thank you for this well-written reminder to strive for progress rather than perfection. Have a blessed day! 😊
June 7th, 2025 16:13
Muse of Calliope said:
This poem has a very positive message; thank you for this well-written reminder to strive for progress rather than perfection. Have a blessed day! 😊
June 7th, 2025 16:13
One step at a time
Poetic Licence said:
Getting better is achievable, perfection is not, nicely expressed, enjoyed the read
June 7th, 2025 11:05
Poetic Licence said:
Getting better is achievable, perfection is not, nicely expressed, enjoyed the read
June 7th, 2025 11:05
One step at a time
sorenbarrett said:
Progression not perfection. Short but nicely said this poem speaks truth in few words.
June 7th, 2025 09:04
sorenbarrett said:
Progression not perfection. Short but nicely said this poem speaks truth in few words.
June 7th, 2025 09:04
Focus
Poetic Licence said:
Focus your attention on the now, not your dreams or past, sound advice in this write, enjoyed the read
June 4th, 2025 13:19
Poetic Licence said:
Focus your attention on the now, not your dreams or past, sound advice in this write, enjoyed the read
June 4th, 2025 13:19
Focus
sorenbarrett said:
Great poem with good advice for anyone not just a kid. Loved the idea though since experience usually has good advice.
June 4th, 2025 10:18
sorenbarrett said:
Great poem with good advice for anyone not just a kid. Loved the idea though since experience usually has good advice.
June 4th, 2025 10:18
Pick and choose
sorenbarrett said:
Differences often make for the best unity. A lovely write
June 2nd, 2025 15:31
sorenbarrett said:
Differences often make for the best unity. A lovely write
June 2nd, 2025 15:31
Peek-a-boo
Poetic Licence said:
This is so true, not enough take the time to do this or understand the importance of it, enjoyed the read
May 28th, 2025 12:36
Poetic Licence said:
This is so true, not enough take the time to do this or understand the importance of it, enjoyed the read
May 28th, 2025 12:36
Try this
Poetic Licence said:
A very positive write which I know is right, but I struggle to achieve that way of thinking, nicely crafted and expressed
May 26th, 2025 16:28
Poetic Licence said:
A very positive write which I know is right, but I struggle to achieve that way of thinking, nicely crafted and expressed
May 26th, 2025 16:28
Try this
sorenbarrett said:
A most positive view that I have tried to assume for many years now. Loved it
May 26th, 2025 14:46
sorenbarrett said:
A most positive view that I have tried to assume for many years now. Loved it
May 26th, 2025 14:46
Thank you!
Poetic Licence said:
That is a lovely write, contentment better than perfection, then we always have room for improvement, Enjoyed the read
May 26th, 2025 12:03
Poetic Licence said:
That is a lovely write, contentment better than perfection, then we always have room for improvement, Enjoyed the read
May 26th, 2025 12:03
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