Comments received on poems by hzugman
I\'m hungry
sorenbarrett said:
Greed fuels the fires of capitalism and drives the nation\'s economy. Greed starts in each individual and there are few that don\'t contain it. A lovely write
May 15th, 2025 05:15
sorenbarrett said:
Greed fuels the fires of capitalism and drives the nation\'s economy. Greed starts in each individual and there are few that don\'t contain it. A lovely write
May 15th, 2025 05:15
Oh you smart-assed worms
RSM0812 said:
Very imaginative. Short and sweet. Great write.
May 12th, 2025 07:48
RSM0812 said:
Very imaginative. Short and sweet. Great write.
May 12th, 2025 07:48
The big guy\'s pissed
RSM0812 said:
Great write. Good point. Thank God for being forgiving. We will get another chance... and another... and...
May 8th, 2025 06:15
RSM0812 said:
Great write. Good point. Thank God for being forgiving. We will get another chance... and another... and...
May 8th, 2025 06:15
Share the wealth not the misery
Poetic Licence said:
A very profound and wise write, nicely done
May 7th, 2025 09:50
Poetic Licence said:
A very profound and wise write, nicely done
May 7th, 2025 09:50
Share the wealth not the misery
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for a piece of wisdom well said in poetic form.
May 7th, 2025 09:28
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for a piece of wisdom well said in poetic form.
May 7th, 2025 09:28
The big guy\'s pissed
Poetic Licence said:
A very poignant write, the question is can it be fixed and will we be allowed to do that, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 02:01
Poetic Licence said:
A very poignant write, the question is can it be fixed and will we be allowed to do that, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 02:01
The big guy\'s pissed
NinjaGirl said:
I imagine Him as broken-hearted...underneath all the anger is hurt and sadness. Good write!
May 6th, 2025 18:43
NinjaGirl said:
I imagine Him as broken-hearted...underneath all the anger is hurt and sadness. Good write!
May 6th, 2025 18:43
Am I Dreaming?
Salvia.S said:
It’s a thought-provoking way of questioning what’s real, suggesting that maybe dreams feel more genuine than reality itself.
Well written!!
May 4th, 2025 09:11
Salvia.S said:
It’s a thought-provoking way of questioning what’s real, suggesting that maybe dreams feel more genuine than reality itself.
Well written!!
May 4th, 2025 09:11
Want love?
jarcher54 said:
You just slay me!! Here you had me transported into deep ponderings... then the last line!
May 2nd, 2025 21:17
jarcher54 said:
You just slay me!! Here you had me transported into deep ponderings... then the last line!
May 2nd, 2025 21:17
Am I Dreaming?
sorenbarrett said:
That thought I have had before and then I wondered am I dreaming I\'m awake or awake remembering a dream? A fun read
May 2nd, 2025 09:53
sorenbarrett said:
That thought I have had before and then I wondered am I dreaming I\'m awake or awake remembering a dream? A fun read
May 2nd, 2025 09:53
Predator and Prey
vicecream said:
This very thing i have spent so much of my life wrestling with, pondering, trying to find what’s right, where’s the balance, how do we live without causing n harm when we must eat to live? Plant or animal it’s still life.. i still don’t have answers..
April 29th, 2025 19:04
vicecream said:
This very thing i have spent so much of my life wrestling with, pondering, trying to find what’s right, where’s the balance, how do we live without causing n harm when we must eat to live? Plant or animal it’s still life.. i still don’t have answers..
April 29th, 2025 19:04
My girl
sorenbarrett said:
Not much for overly sweetened things this one seems special and the cleverness of it gains a fave
April 28th, 2025 10:08
sorenbarrett said:
Not much for overly sweetened things this one seems special and the cleverness of it gains a fave
April 28th, 2025 10:08
Predator and Prey
Dan Williams said:
Bravo. Simple still accurate and timely. Humans; Bah.
April 27th, 2025 00:33
Dan Williams said:
Bravo. Simple still accurate and timely. Humans; Bah.
April 27th, 2025 00:33
Predator and Prey
Cheeky Missy said:
Dearest me! Now you\'ll chide me for killing mosquitoes? I\'m not even adroit enough to pull off poetic justice with them. Since the LORD God gave the animals to man for food after the flood, what shall we do? Beautifully rendered with an excellent twist. Thank you for sharing.
April 25th, 2025 17:37
Cheeky Missy said:
Dearest me! Now you\'ll chide me for killing mosquitoes? I\'m not even adroit enough to pull off poetic justice with them. Since the LORD God gave the animals to man for food after the flood, what shall we do? Beautifully rendered with an excellent twist. Thank you for sharing.
April 25th, 2025 17:37
Predator and Prey
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the message and so nicely said in rhyme with so few words
April 25th, 2025 14:15
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the message and so nicely said in rhyme with so few words
April 25th, 2025 14:15
Sorting it out
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, if you do not use the contraction you have options since \"is not\" has easy rhymes, you know? Especially in this age of literal bots. Prettily rendered. Thank you for sharing.
April 19th, 2025 22:11
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, if you do not use the contraction you have options since \"is not\" has easy rhymes, you know? Especially in this age of literal bots. Prettily rendered. Thank you for sharing.
April 19th, 2025 22:11
Sorting it out
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem and not much rhymes with isn\'t except byzant an old coin. Great write
April 19th, 2025 11:38
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem and not much rhymes with isn\'t except byzant an old coin. Great write
April 19th, 2025 11:38
If God ever married
orchidee said:
I probably can\'t get away with this, in these days of equality - But what can a man never understand? Answer: A woman\'s mind! lol.
April 13th, 2025 02:56
orchidee said:
I probably can\'t get away with this, in these days of equality - But what can a man never understand? Answer: A woman\'s mind! lol.
April 13th, 2025 02:56
If God ever married
Mutley Ravishes said:
What if God has been married countless times?!
April 13th, 2025 00:22
Mutley Ravishes said:
What if God has been married countless times?!
April 13th, 2025 00:22
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