Comments received on poems by Vaughn Walker
You or not at all
L. B. Mek said:
this is relatable and raw
thanks for sharing, dear poet
November 21st, 2022 04:28
L. B. Mek said:
this is relatable and raw
thanks for sharing, dear poet
November 21st, 2022 04:28
Today
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Well said in this fab poem yeah! Kudos for this muse!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
November 6th, 2022 09:20
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Well said in this fab poem yeah! Kudos for this muse!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
November 6th, 2022 09:20
Dead Roses
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yayy prolonging the life of wilting roses may be better than plucking fresh red ones as those die faster. A fab poem, lovely to read. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
June 25th, 2022 05:46
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yayy prolonging the life of wilting roses may be better than plucking fresh red ones as those die faster. A fab poem, lovely to read. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
June 25th, 2022 05:46
Dead Roses
Vaughn Walker said:
Such a good idea. Also, what could have a been a happier ending to the poem 😊
June 25th, 2022 05:24
Vaughn Walker said:
Such a good idea. Also, what could have a been a happier ending to the poem 😊
June 25th, 2022 05:24
Dead Roses
arqios said:
When the roses begin to wilt, the wife fishes them out to save them from gravity, ties an elastic band around the stems and hangs them upside down to dry. Thanks for sharing.
June 25th, 2022 04:40
arqios said:
When the roses begin to wilt, the wife fishes them out to save them from gravity, ties an elastic band around the stems and hangs them upside down to dry. Thanks for sharing.
June 25th, 2022 04:40
Open Your Eyes
arqios said:
The severity of this need is so immense. Thanks for sharing.
June 21st, 2022 07:49
arqios said:
The severity of this need is so immense. Thanks for sharing.
June 21st, 2022 07:49
Never Looking Up
arqios said:
Here\'s to ending all that \'feet looking,\' thanks for sharing.
June 20th, 2022 16:18
arqios said:
Here\'s to ending all that \'feet looking,\' thanks for sharing.
June 20th, 2022 16:18
Never Looking Up
dusk arising said:
You\'re so right. Looking at their feet or dashing around, missing so much.
Maybe it\'s something that rewards us as the years mount up.
June 20th, 2022 10:58
dusk arising said:
You\'re so right. Looking at their feet or dashing around, missing so much.
Maybe it\'s something that rewards us as the years mount up.
June 20th, 2022 10:58
Walking Through the Wood
L. B. Mek said:
so true! an important message
and
empoweringly Powerful poetry
thanks for sharing, dear poet
June 20th, 2022 04:25
L. B. Mek said:
so true! an important message
and
empoweringly Powerful poetry
thanks for sharing, dear poet
June 20th, 2022 04:25
Walking Through the Wood
Vaughn Walker said:
Thank you for the kind words Cryptic.
June 19th, 2022 20:54
Vaughn Walker said:
Thank you for the kind words Cryptic.
June 19th, 2022 20:54
Walking Through the Wood
arqios said:
What a wonderful poem of introspection backlit by the fascinating wooded imagery. A truly pleasurable and meaningful read. Thanks for sharing, Vaughn. /Rik.
June 19th, 2022 20:31
arqios said:
What a wonderful poem of introspection backlit by the fascinating wooded imagery. A truly pleasurable and meaningful read. Thanks for sharing, Vaughn. /Rik.
June 19th, 2022 20:31
The Knights Castle
L. B. Mek said:
we covet, our neighbours
and
equate worth, by their measure
then
seek, to realise it for ourselves
greed
feeds ambition\'s dreams
reality, warps our yearned
dreams
into nightmares of blinkered
self-belief
success, affirms our choices
transmogrifies
our perspectives and moral
boundaries
till, what we think becomes
Truth
and so we begin, to sink - in
quicksand
of Pride and endless thirst, for
more
of anything n everything, because
\'We\'
become, fate
that realised reality all-consuming
wilful: conceit....
(then
some, kid
makes sandcastles, with
our, failures
end!)
a knight\'s tale, foretold
as it unfolds
June 16th, 2022 04:44
L. B. Mek said:
we covet, our neighbours
and
equate worth, by their measure
then
seek, to realise it for ourselves
greed
feeds ambition\'s dreams
reality, warps our yearned
dreams
into nightmares of blinkered
self-belief
success, affirms our choices
transmogrifies
our perspectives and moral
boundaries
till, what we think becomes
Truth
and so we begin, to sink - in
quicksand
of Pride and endless thirst, for
more
of anything n everything, because
\'We\'
become, fate
that realised reality all-consuming
wilful: conceit....
(then
some, kid
makes sandcastles, with
our, failures
end!)
a knight\'s tale, foretold
as it unfolds
June 16th, 2022 04:44
The Knights Castle
arqios said:
The power of knighthood is the chink in every knight\'s armour. It has always been so, so much that Launcelot has been the epitome of this innate weakness. So true. Thanks for sharing.
June 15th, 2022 22:33
arqios said:
The power of knighthood is the chink in every knight\'s armour. It has always been so, so much that Launcelot has been the epitome of this innate weakness. So true. Thanks for sharing.
June 15th, 2022 22:33
Evenfall
arqios said:
The image that stays with me are the fireflies that have begun to speak! Thanks for sharing.
June 15th, 2022 00:16
arqios said:
The image that stays with me are the fireflies that have begun to speak! Thanks for sharing.
June 15th, 2022 00:16
Dawn It Breaks Everyday
L. B. Mek said:
life-affirmingly: Beautiful!
thank you, dear Poet
June 14th, 2022 02:48
L. B. Mek said:
life-affirmingly: Beautiful!
thank you, dear Poet
June 14th, 2022 02:48
Little White Pills
arqios said:
Or the flat side of the blade. The numbness resulting from meds does not help the mind, the awareness of which this poem speaks. And the aim indeed, yes the aim, sets our minds and awareness and kickstarts the process. Thanks for sharing..
June 6th, 2022 05:30
arqios said:
Or the flat side of the blade. The numbness resulting from meds does not help the mind, the awareness of which this poem speaks. And the aim indeed, yes the aim, sets our minds and awareness and kickstarts the process. Thanks for sharing..
June 6th, 2022 05:30
Little White Pills
orchidee said:
Have the blunt edge of the blade if I was you.
June 6th, 2022 01:59
orchidee said:
Have the blunt edge of the blade if I was you.
June 6th, 2022 01:59
Preacher
orchidee said:
Happy Birthday Vaughn there, I see!
Good write. It is only some American preachers that go \'over the top\'? I\'m in the UK.
May 31st, 2022 01:53
orchidee said:
Happy Birthday Vaughn there, I see!
Good write. It is only some American preachers that go \'over the top\'? I\'m in the UK.
May 31st, 2022 01:53
Holding Hands With a Stranger
Vaughn Walker said:
That means a lot. Thank you cryptic.
May 30th, 2022 05:54
Vaughn Walker said:
That means a lot. Thank you cryptic.
May 30th, 2022 05:54
Holding Hands With a Stranger
arqios said:
A very moving piece to read. thanks for sharing.
May 30th, 2022 05:50
arqios said:
A very moving piece to read. thanks for sharing.
May 30th, 2022 05:50
Cry Wolf
JudyStella said:
As they dissect you.
To reveal your inadequacies.
Felt this verse. Most family occasions end up with me feeling worthless, can relate.
May 28th, 2022 14:54
JudyStella said:
As they dissect you.
To reveal your inadequacies.
Felt this verse. Most family occasions end up with me feeling worthless, can relate.
May 28th, 2022 14:54
A Father Passes
Kim12 said:
Powerful raw write. Full of emotions, thank you for sharing this piece. I also lost my dad, something you never get over but learn to live with. :)
May 27th, 2022 16:36
Kim12 said:
Powerful raw write. Full of emotions, thank you for sharing this piece. I also lost my dad, something you never get over but learn to live with. :)
May 27th, 2022 16:36
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