Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie
Quantum mechanics of an old man
RL Randall said:
My ego is undressing, but it’s not in the total nude, that would be rude, can’t ignore the living, This line is so true for those of us that are growing old. This was a very good read for me.
July 26th, 2022 04:55
RL Randall said:
My ego is undressing, but it’s not in the total nude, that would be rude, can’t ignore the living, This line is so true for those of us that are growing old. This was a very good read for me.
July 26th, 2022 04:55
Quantum mechanics of an old man
L. B. Mek said:
what a seamless example
of \'stream of consciousness\'
poetry
so much to unpack, such a challenging read
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 26th, 2022 04:21
L. B. Mek said:
what a seamless example
of \'stream of consciousness\'
poetry
so much to unpack, such a challenging read
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 26th, 2022 04:21
Mister Purple got flash
Raven333 said:
You know I do believe I have known a few of these. nice write, loved the rhyme.
July 23rd, 2022 23:52
Raven333 said:
You know I do believe I have known a few of these. nice write, loved the rhyme.
July 23rd, 2022 23:52
Is ole head where he’s suppose to be.
L. B. Mek said:
may, those who deserve it
be rewarded
with all the Peace, they seek!
(a thought provoking read
wonderful rhyme schemes
and even better flow
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
July 22nd, 2022 05:28
L. B. Mek said:
may, those who deserve it
be rewarded
with all the Peace, they seek!
(a thought provoking read
wonderful rhyme schemes
and even better flow
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
July 22nd, 2022 05:28
Give up the tapes
L. B. Mek said:
i see an analogy, here
only, in my imagination
tapes be votes and taxes
and the government
be the ones wielding, covid
like a weapon
on its own citizens..
(as-ever
I choose to search for the deeper
wisdom, in your insightful poetry)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 21st, 2022 02:12
L. B. Mek said:
i see an analogy, here
only, in my imagination
tapes be votes and taxes
and the government
be the ones wielding, covid
like a weapon
on its own citizens..
(as-ever
I choose to search for the deeper
wisdom, in your insightful poetry)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 21st, 2022 02:12
Give up the tapes
evenwheniLie said:
It’s good to hit that funny bone sometimes! LOL
July 21st, 2022 02:07
evenwheniLie said:
It’s good to hit that funny bone sometimes! LOL
July 21st, 2022 02:07
Give up the tapes
Raven333 said:
LOL, I loved it!!! It put a smile on my face. I thought that was a great read.
July 21st, 2022 01:40
Raven333 said:
LOL, I loved it!!! It put a smile on my face. I thought that was a great read.
July 21st, 2022 01:40
Halo joe
Raven333 said:
LOL, another good one, I liked how you talked about Joe. I think I can identify. we all have them Joe\'s..
July 19th, 2022 17:50
Raven333 said:
LOL, another good one, I liked how you talked about Joe. I think I can identify. we all have them Joe\'s..
July 19th, 2022 17:50
Halo joe
evenwheniLie said:
As always I’m glad you enjoyed the poem, and yes I had to put a light on the dubious believers Bible touting frauds.
July 19th, 2022 12:10
evenwheniLie said:
As always I’m glad you enjoyed the poem, and yes I had to put a light on the dubious believers Bible touting frauds.
July 19th, 2022 12:10
Halo joe
L. B. Mek said:
(theology, would be much more
palatable
if those \'devoted\' believer\'s
could find enough, belief
to keep it all to, themselves
and let
the rest of us, simply - be)
I don\'t really get \'saving lives\'
to gain your way into a heaven
with such a high, entry price
surely, the guards at the door
will see through, all that
duplicitous, self-serving heroics
surely...
(thanks for sharing, dear poet)
July 19th, 2022 05:54
L. B. Mek said:
(theology, would be much more
palatable
if those \'devoted\' believer\'s
could find enough, belief
to keep it all to, themselves
and let
the rest of us, simply - be)
I don\'t really get \'saving lives\'
to gain your way into a heaven
with such a high, entry price
surely, the guards at the door
will see through, all that
duplicitous, self-serving heroics
surely...
(thanks for sharing, dear poet)
July 19th, 2022 05:54
Run African run
Doggerel Dave said:
As usual, you\'ve given me a perspective on a matter I haven\'t thought much about before.
Thank you.
July 18th, 2022 08:08
Doggerel Dave said:
As usual, you\'ve given me a perspective on a matter I haven\'t thought much about before.
Thank you.
July 18th, 2022 08:08
large mirror on my wall
L. B. Mek said:
we have rivers before mirrors
and Narcissus\'s myth
before, selfies..
we, think
our generation\'s, aspirations
are unique
but that feeling of removed - connections
with that sense of self, is a theme
that\'s been prevalent
since the beginning of time..
so i think
it\'s ok, if sometimes
we look for more
and hope, for something magical
to grace our lives..
(sorry for waffling on
but I connected with your words
and couldn\'t help myself)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
July 18th, 2022 02:47
L. B. Mek said:
we have rivers before mirrors
and Narcissus\'s myth
before, selfies..
we, think
our generation\'s, aspirations
are unique
but that feeling of removed - connections
with that sense of self, is a theme
that\'s been prevalent
since the beginning of time..
so i think
it\'s ok, if sometimes
we look for more
and hope, for something magical
to grace our lives..
(sorry for waffling on
but I connected with your words
and couldn\'t help myself)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
July 18th, 2022 02:47
Philadelphia, or Philly
Raven333 said:
I have never been to Philly but it was nice to hear about it and your younger years. Was another great write and your rhyme was very tight.
July 15th, 2022 11:54
Raven333 said:
I have never been to Philly but it was nice to hear about it and your younger years. Was another great write and your rhyme was very tight.
July 15th, 2022 11:54
Philadelphia, or Philly
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
a true ode, with effortless flow
such a great read
thanks for introducing me
to your beloved Philly
July 15th, 2022 03:39
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
a true ode, with effortless flow
such a great read
thanks for introducing me
to your beloved Philly
July 15th, 2022 03:39
Philadelphia, or Philly
evenwheniLie said:
I will always remember growing up in philly as a child, racing popsicle sticks down the street by the curb in the fire hydrant water, my grandmother magically making my pro kid sneakers look brand new with white shoe polish when I only thought it came in black or brown. Slap boxing, racing up and down the street, playing with our matchbox cars, reading the latest comic books, etc., if I could do it all again I would a thousand times. I hope it’s a reality that awaits me after I die, it is surely my heaven every time I close my eyes and meditate on it.
July 15th, 2022 02:21
evenwheniLie said:
I will always remember growing up in philly as a child, racing popsicle sticks down the street by the curb in the fire hydrant water, my grandmother magically making my pro kid sneakers look brand new with white shoe polish when I only thought it came in black or brown. Slap boxing, racing up and down the street, playing with our matchbox cars, reading the latest comic books, etc., if I could do it all again I would a thousand times. I hope it’s a reality that awaits me after I die, it is surely my heaven every time I close my eyes and meditate on it.
July 15th, 2022 02:21
They dumbing us down
Raven333 said:
Dam they dumbing us down, I loved it. I really enjoy reading your stuff.
July 14th, 2022 13:52
Raven333 said:
Dam they dumbing us down, I loved it. I really enjoy reading your stuff.
July 14th, 2022 13:52
These meats is killing me
Raven333 said:
I loved that.. I do agree with you though to much dam chemicals. By the way, I loved your Rhyme.
July 14th, 2022 13:37
Raven333 said:
I loved that.. I do agree with you though to much dam chemicals. By the way, I loved your Rhyme.
July 14th, 2022 13:37
They dumbing us down
Doggerel Dave said:
They dumb down only willing subjects.
I do like your stuff, even if it\'s not me, and will call in when I can.
July 13th, 2022 20:11
Doggerel Dave said:
They dumb down only willing subjects.
I do like your stuff, even if it\'s not me, and will call in when I can.
July 13th, 2022 20:11
Hyper-Hypocrisy
Doggerel Dave said:
Got you......I think..... You are a hard case - so just keep on berating - some of it will penetrate, even to a cynic like ....me!
July 11th, 2022 04:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Got you......I think..... You are a hard case - so just keep on berating - some of it will penetrate, even to a cynic like ....me!
July 11th, 2022 04:53
LGBTQ friend or foe
evenwheniLie said:
Thanks wordsillneversay, I think it’s a nice conversation piece the black and the LGBTQ communities should have.
July 9th, 2022 12:29
evenwheniLie said:
Thanks wordsillneversay, I think it’s a nice conversation piece the black and the LGBTQ communities should have.
July 9th, 2022 12:29
Damnation
Raven333 said:
This poem definitely gets you thinking, it has a really good flow to it. Keep Writing!!!
July 3rd, 2022 13:25
Raven333 said:
This poem definitely gets you thinking, it has a really good flow to it. Keep Writing!!!
July 3rd, 2022 13:25
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