Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie
intern, patient confrontation
Parisab said:
You told ‘his’ story vividly-I see this in those personally and professionally who f@$& with the people to shock ‘even if they have lost or given up on the conventional reality’ and are our all time truth tellers-I can’t say enough about this or your poem-thank you poet friend!
September 4th, 2023 12:22
Parisab said:
You told ‘his’ story vividly-I see this in those personally and professionally who f@$& with the people to shock ‘even if they have lost or given up on the conventional reality’ and are our all time truth tellers-I can’t say enough about this or your poem-thank you poet friend!
September 4th, 2023 12:22
Crippling effects of power
L. B. Mek said:
so true wise Poet
the cruellest word in humanity\'s annals
must be \'more\'
what forgotten atrocities, are remembered
by the sands of Time
all because to most, power
represent their right, to \'more\'
...
Nietzsche was mistaken the \'Overman\'
can never represent humanity\'s peak idyll
as that same title, comes with a curse
and a very short, shelf life..
August 25th, 2023 01:49
L. B. Mek said:
so true wise Poet
the cruellest word in humanity\'s annals
must be \'more\'
what forgotten atrocities, are remembered
by the sands of Time
all because to most, power
represent their right, to \'more\'
...
Nietzsche was mistaken the \'Overman\'
can never represent humanity\'s peak idyll
as that same title, comes with a curse
and a very short, shelf life..
August 25th, 2023 01:49
Butterflies in my attic
Doggerel Dave said:
Not like you - nature done with a new flavour. Great.
August 24th, 2023 18:40
Doggerel Dave said:
Not like you - nature done with a new flavour. Great.
August 24th, 2023 18:40
Butterflies in my attic
Pop64 said:
This is a wonderful read! Love the descriptive quality and tones, as they detail not only the beauty and color, but the actions as well. Terrific read!
August 24th, 2023 12:21
Pop64 said:
This is a wonderful read! Love the descriptive quality and tones, as they detail not only the beauty and color, but the actions as well. Terrific read!
August 24th, 2023 12:21
Astral projection
2781 said:
The flesh profits nothing, the words I speak (not me), they are Spirit and they are life.
August 21st, 2023 08:19
2781 said:
The flesh profits nothing, the words I speak (not me), they are Spirit and they are life.
August 21st, 2023 08:19
Astral projection
Bobby O said:
That is a cool way to repair and complete a self image that needed to be tweaked just a bit.
Nice write good read
August 21st, 2023 02:05
Bobby O said:
That is a cool way to repair and complete a self image that needed to be tweaked just a bit.
Nice write good read
August 21st, 2023 02:05
Misguided loyalists
Doggerel Dave said:
And why? because economics, the lack of alternative safe accommodation does not allow escape. As for the rest - that\'s your territory, man.
August 19th, 2023 20:19
Doggerel Dave said:
And why? because economics, the lack of alternative safe accommodation does not allow escape. As for the rest - that\'s your territory, man.
August 19th, 2023 20:19
My God, your god, their god; check the spelling
Bobby O said:
Incisive commentary is tricky to present without judgement or personal bias. Lo, this you have achieved and I salute.
August 19th, 2023 00:24
Bobby O said:
Incisive commentary is tricky to present without judgement or personal bias. Lo, this you have achieved and I salute.
August 19th, 2023 00:24
My God, your god, their god; check the spelling
evenwheniLie said:
People have to agree on one god or no god at all…
August 18th, 2023 11:48
evenwheniLie said:
People have to agree on one god or no god at all…
August 18th, 2023 11:48
My God, your god, their god; check the spelling
2781 said:
Spirits becoming the nuisance.
August 18th, 2023 09:08
2781 said:
Spirits becoming the nuisance.
August 18th, 2023 09:08
My God, your god, their god; check the spelling
Doggerel Dave said:
Nah - just become an atheist and agnostic, then continue with your life while you have it.....
August 18th, 2023 05:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Nah - just become an atheist and agnostic, then continue with your life while you have it.....
August 18th, 2023 05:25
It’s just another superhero movie
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m definitely letting Cremation Mary go first - clean up the joint before I get there. There\'s been moments in my life that, if I\'d known her, she would have been quite handy. Situations perhaps not quite as extreme as, but human pollutants come in various strengths.....
August 10th, 2023 19:25
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m definitely letting Cremation Mary go first - clean up the joint before I get there. There\'s been moments in my life that, if I\'d known her, she would have been quite handy. Situations perhaps not quite as extreme as, but human pollutants come in various strengths.....
August 10th, 2023 19:25
It’s just another superhero movie
Parisab said:
I’m already a fan of Cremation Mary and I will order a ‘Gucci plus Covid mask’! Love the Coltrane reference! Entertaining read and thanks evenwheniLie!
August 10th, 2023 17:37
Parisab said:
I’m already a fan of Cremation Mary and I will order a ‘Gucci plus Covid mask’! Love the Coltrane reference! Entertaining read and thanks evenwheniLie!
August 10th, 2023 17:37
Escaping the devil’s system
vividvoid14 said:
i like the way u use your words. its amazing
August 9th, 2023 14:22
vividvoid14 said:
i like the way u use your words. its amazing
August 9th, 2023 14:22
These damn flies
Doggerel Dave said:
🤣I live in Australia. Is it you who keeps on sending them over to us?
Dispose of them over there - don\'t keep on exporting them.
August 7th, 2023 06:34
Doggerel Dave said:
🤣I live in Australia. Is it you who keeps on sending them over to us?
Dispose of them over there - don\'t keep on exporting them.
August 7th, 2023 06:34
How deep is the corruption
Bobby O said:
Underneath it all is the string pull of bravery
Nice write good read
August 6th, 2023 00:31
Bobby O said:
Underneath it all is the string pull of bravery
Nice write good read
August 6th, 2023 00:31
God machine
L. B. Mek said:
two thousand different gods
so having a deity, seems to have been
a graduation of societal evolution
once,
now,
we\'re on the other side of the cliff
where we reject the very notion
of a deity, in the west
while we\'re all happy to talk about our demons and satanic influences
...
no sci-fi or fantasy book
can ever write the absurdities
our species, live...
(a questing write
pondering the limits of our intangibles)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
August 4th, 2023 06:16
L. B. Mek said:
two thousand different gods
so having a deity, seems to have been
a graduation of societal evolution
once,
now,
we\'re on the other side of the cliff
where we reject the very notion
of a deity, in the west
while we\'re all happy to talk about our demons and satanic influences
...
no sci-fi or fantasy book
can ever write the absurdities
our species, live...
(a questing write
pondering the limits of our intangibles)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
August 4th, 2023 06:16
Tripping over the past
Beth K said:
Love, love LOVE your poem!! I felt like I was part of your family reading it. Awesome imagery, and what a gift you have for bringing words to life (or is it life to words?!). Thank you ❤️
July 29th, 2023 20:01
Beth K said:
Love, love LOVE your poem!! I felt like I was part of your family reading it. Awesome imagery, and what a gift you have for bringing words to life (or is it life to words?!). Thank you ❤️
July 29th, 2023 20:01
Admirable Admiral
L. B. Mek said:
\'but none that will jam though.\'
now that\'s flow!
so much fun as well, thank you!
July 24th, 2023 04:44
L. B. Mek said:
\'but none that will jam though.\'
now that\'s flow!
so much fun as well, thank you!
July 24th, 2023 04:44
The News!
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(personally, its gotten to the point
I truly believe
if something\'s in the news
best believe, someone
rich
somewhere, is profiting from it
the more vile, the subject matter
the more accurately this applies..)
just check out
the week of that 2nd titanic \'spontaneous\' implosion
then check all the news that was covered up
by people being distracted by that news
6 billion to ukraine
a sitting president\'s cocaine crimes quashed
and so much more, we will be lucky
to find out in our lifetime
now
for a real treat, trace back the original
titanic sinking
and the timely last minute absence of Rockefeller
then match it
to all the people who opposed his and Rothchild\'s fed reserve push
dying on board of that \'accidental\' collision..
news, utilised
to distract and confuse
(
https://kreately.in/why-do-people-think-that-the-federal-reserve-was-created-by-the-rothschilds-and-the-rockefellers/
)
July 21st, 2023 05:48
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(personally, its gotten to the point
I truly believe
if something\'s in the news
best believe, someone
rich
somewhere, is profiting from it
the more vile, the subject matter
the more accurately this applies..)
just check out
the week of that 2nd titanic \'spontaneous\' implosion
then check all the news that was covered up
by people being distracted by that news
6 billion to ukraine
a sitting president\'s cocaine crimes quashed
and so much more, we will be lucky
to find out in our lifetime
now
for a real treat, trace back the original
titanic sinking
and the timely last minute absence of Rockefeller
then match it
to all the people who opposed his and Rothchild\'s fed reserve push
dying on board of that \'accidental\' collision..
news, utilised
to distract and confuse
(
https://kreately.in/why-do-people-think-that-the-federal-reserve-was-created-by-the-rothschilds-and-the-rockefellers/
)
July 21st, 2023 05:48
The News!
2781 said:
There\'s an Aussie comedian named Steve Hughes who covers the topic...
My wife says, \"there they go again, spreading the good news!\"
July 21st, 2023 02:17
2781 said:
There\'s an Aussie comedian named Steve Hughes who covers the topic...
My wife says, \"there they go again, spreading the good news!\"
July 21st, 2023 02:17
What’s my niche?
Parisab said:
And now that’s a rap and grabbed my attention-on a different note I attempted at writing a lyrical rap “midlife rap” if you care to read it
July 6th, 2023 20:40
Parisab said:
And now that’s a rap and grabbed my attention-on a different note I attempted at writing a lyrical rap “midlife rap” if you care to read it
July 6th, 2023 20:40
Crazy bastard with a Gun
Parisab said:
It must have been hard practice to write this while imagining the psychopathy of a mass shooter-thanks for the write and I send my condolences to your beautiful city and the people of Philadelphia.
July 6th, 2023 00:47
Parisab said:
It must have been hard practice to write this while imagining the psychopathy of a mass shooter-thanks for the write and I send my condolences to your beautiful city and the people of Philadelphia.
July 6th, 2023 00:47
The features of Cain
evenwheniLie said:
It’s very hard not to point out the hypocrisy of mankind, it lies at the bottom of all our problems; self centered and delusional should be our name.
June 30th, 2023 09:36
evenwheniLie said:
It’s very hard not to point out the hypocrisy of mankind, it lies at the bottom of all our problems; self centered and delusional should be our name.
June 30th, 2023 09:36
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