Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie
A beautiful dark heart
Cassie58 said:
A fun write. I enjoyed the humour. All the best.
August 9th, 2024 15:10
Cassie58 said:
A fun write. I enjoyed the humour. All the best.
August 9th, 2024 15:10
A beautiful dark heart
sorenbarrett said:
Lilith before Eve great add in here. The poem brings to mind Joseph Conrad \"The heart of darkness\" A most interesting write.
August 9th, 2024 14:20
sorenbarrett said:
Lilith before Eve great add in here. The poem brings to mind Joseph Conrad \"The heart of darkness\" A most interesting write.
August 9th, 2024 14:20
Our God
sorenbarrett said:
\" sin protected by bodies are but mere sacrifices for those who wish to be saved\" a great line in a fine write
July 29th, 2024 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
\" sin protected by bodies are but mere sacrifices for those who wish to be saved\" a great line in a fine write
July 29th, 2024 09:39
Trump for president
Jerry Reynolds said:
To be all talk
and no listen
is not amazing grace
July 19th, 2024 07:05
Jerry Reynolds said:
To be all talk
and no listen
is not amazing grace
July 19th, 2024 07:05
Trump for president
sorenbarrett said:
These two choices, is this the best that America has. We are in trouble.
July 19th, 2024 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
These two choices, is this the best that America has. We are in trouble.
July 19th, 2024 05:28
Trump for president
Mutley Ravishes said:
Trump or Biden
Take your pick
If democracy isn\'t a scam
Then I am sick!
July 19th, 2024 00:22
Mutley Ravishes said:
Trump or Biden
Take your pick
If democracy isn\'t a scam
Then I am sick!
July 19th, 2024 00:22
The mob at a politician’s door
Doggerel Dave said:
Promises, promises... A man for all seasons bullshit. Well writ.
July 18th, 2024 19:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Promises, promises... A man for all seasons bullshit. Well writ.
July 18th, 2024 19:19
Take me to your leader
evenwheniLie said:
…..pointing out the obvious holes in mans various philosophies, and onto theologies; the mind with all of its selfish ideologies are but mere reflections of the self, we formulate and postulate our theories in such directions to give value and spiritual weight to what some psychiatrist deem essentially schizophrenic in nature, although not clinically speaking they and there impact are the same.
July 7th, 2024 23:26
evenwheniLie said:
…..pointing out the obvious holes in mans various philosophies, and onto theologies; the mind with all of its selfish ideologies are but mere reflections of the self, we formulate and postulate our theories in such directions to give value and spiritual weight to what some psychiatrist deem essentially schizophrenic in nature, although not clinically speaking they and there impact are the same.
July 7th, 2024 23:26
Take me to your leader
2781 said:
The Lord is nigh unto them with a broken heart; and saveth such as be of a contrite spirit.
July 7th, 2024 17:56
2781 said:
The Lord is nigh unto them with a broken heart; and saveth such as be of a contrite spirit.
July 7th, 2024 17:56
Evil intended
Parisab said:
Indeed to recognize “the good in men comes best when “life unfolds”… it takes patience and faith indeed…
July 5th, 2024 11:33
Parisab said:
Indeed to recognize “the good in men comes best when “life unfolds”… it takes patience and faith indeed…
July 5th, 2024 11:33
Gargoyle and or guard
Mutley Ravishes said:
Two salesmen, selling nothing! Playing out a script, it\'s laughable!
With your rhyme it was like I was in a rap. Great work.
July 2nd, 2024 18:43
Mutley Ravishes said:
Two salesmen, selling nothing! Playing out a script, it\'s laughable!
With your rhyme it was like I was in a rap. Great work.
July 2nd, 2024 18:43
Gargoyle and or guard
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning
much enjoyed
my friend!! 😎
Great rhyme,
rhythm, flow
and blend!
Rock on!
Best regards ✌️. Thad
July 2nd, 2024 17:39
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning
much enjoyed
my friend!! 😎
Great rhyme,
rhythm, flow
and blend!
Rock on!
Best regards ✌️. Thad
July 2nd, 2024 17:39
Stabilizing live’s
Mutley Ravishes said:
What a rhyme! Great work.
Mineral>Plant>Animal>Human>?
Or back down the ladder. Again?!
June 11th, 2024 18:30
Mutley Ravishes said:
What a rhyme! Great work.
Mineral>Plant>Animal>Human>?
Or back down the ladder. Again?!
June 11th, 2024 18:30
Resurrection of a slave
Mutley Ravishes said:
What if mankind has been here before? What if the present humanity is the fifth one to have existed on this planet?
What if we are not the body and the thoughts?
What if you, me, and everybody has committed spiritual crimes at some point in our past? (and how far back does that past really go?!)
May 23rd, 2024 18:28
Mutley Ravishes said:
What if mankind has been here before? What if the present humanity is the fifth one to have existed on this planet?
What if we are not the body and the thoughts?
What if you, me, and everybody has committed spiritual crimes at some point in our past? (and how far back does that past really go?!)
May 23rd, 2024 18:28
Let’s play Jakes
2781 said:
\"Beware of the leaven of the Pharisees, which is hypocrisy.\"
May 22nd, 2024 04:59
2781 said:
\"Beware of the leaven of the Pharisees, which is hypocrisy.\"
May 22nd, 2024 04:59
Smoldering flames
NafisaSB said:
agree with your message - keep composing - well done
May 17th, 2024 00:28
NafisaSB said:
agree with your message - keep composing - well done
May 17th, 2024 00:28
Life is just an episode
aDarkerMind said:
very good indeed...
enjoyed every word.
May 11th, 2024 12:22
aDarkerMind said:
very good indeed...
enjoyed every word.
May 11th, 2024 12:22
Mad enough to kill
Doggerel Dave said:
If that\'s the process, and I have a feeling in my vitals that it is, then gun control is the only answer.
May 10th, 2024 19:49
Doggerel Dave said:
If that\'s the process, and I have a feeling in my vitals that it is, then gun control is the only answer.
May 10th, 2024 19:49
What did Malcolm say
Doggerel Dave said:
The tictoc Of Malcom X: He made much sense.
Your piece: About power and direct abuse?
Can\'t quite make the connection.
May 4th, 2024 00:30
Doggerel Dave said:
The tictoc Of Malcom X: He made much sense.
Your piece: About power and direct abuse?
Can\'t quite make the connection.
May 4th, 2024 00:30
Heavenly nightmare
2781 said:
I form light, and create darkness: I make peace, and create evil; I the Lord do all these things.
Crazy scriptures but that\'s what I got.
April 26th, 2024 23:57
2781 said:
I form light, and create darkness: I make peace, and create evil; I the Lord do all these things.
Crazy scriptures but that\'s what I got.
April 26th, 2024 23:57
America withdraw
evenwheniLie said:
America should withdraw, close its borders to certain countries (Israel should be one) to work on particular issues, take the gloves off the scientific community a bit more, revamp our society for the better, get out off conflicts and the U.N., stop policing the world and mind our business, work on space travel (cause we’re going to need it) convert nuclear weapons to cheap or free power for its citizens… etc, etc, etc…. P.S., find new ways to get power from the oceans and sun, create aircraft carrier size farms out to sea, for extra farmland… let’s blast off,, make Americans and America great!!!!!
March 23rd, 2024 11:06
evenwheniLie said:
America should withdraw, close its borders to certain countries (Israel should be one) to work on particular issues, take the gloves off the scientific community a bit more, revamp our society for the better, get out off conflicts and the U.N., stop policing the world and mind our business, work on space travel (cause we’re going to need it) convert nuclear weapons to cheap or free power for its citizens… etc, etc, etc…. P.S., find new ways to get power from the oceans and sun, create aircraft carrier size farms out to sea, for extra farmland… let’s blast off,, make Americans and America great!!!!!
March 23rd, 2024 11:06
America withdraw
2781 said:
I fear it\'s list it\'s way, and taken many with it.
March 22nd, 2024 23:14
2781 said:
I fear it\'s list it\'s way, and taken many with it.
March 22nd, 2024 23:14
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