Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie
That inner voice
sorenbarrett said:
Ah such a mind provoking write. Lies are no more than deluding oneself or others about something you know to be otherwise. Everyone from advertisers to politicians to preachers do the same and don\'t we too when we say (nice to meet you, what a lovely dress, have a nice day)? A wonderful write.
March 25th, 2025 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
Ah such a mind provoking write. Lies are no more than deluding oneself or others about something you know to be otherwise. Everyone from advertisers to politicians to preachers do the same and don\'t we too when we say (nice to meet you, what a lovely dress, have a nice day)? A wonderful write.
March 25th, 2025 04:04
Just a step away
sorenbarrett said:
The death of someone only occurs when they are forgotten and all traces of them disappear. Even then their ripples continue to influence others. Yet we all put our parents to death as we metamorphosize out of their shell into our own individual and butterfly. A deeper poem than appears on the surface. Nicely written.
March 15th, 2025 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
The death of someone only occurs when they are forgotten and all traces of them disappear. Even then their ripples continue to influence others. Yet we all put our parents to death as we metamorphosize out of their shell into our own individual and butterfly. A deeper poem than appears on the surface. Nicely written.
March 15th, 2025 05:16
Is culture, culture
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic rhyme in this poem gives it its strength. The rhyme is internal as well as end line. This poem makes a powerful statement.
March 13th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic rhyme in this poem gives it its strength. The rhyme is internal as well as end line. This poem makes a powerful statement.
March 13th, 2025 04:02
In recent news
sorenbarrett said:
The future doesn\'t look too bright. A good write
March 10th, 2025 18:09
sorenbarrett said:
The future doesn\'t look too bright. A good write
March 10th, 2025 18:09
Memories of a bully
sorenbarrett said:
What some people do to get noticed. A fun read.
March 5th, 2025 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
What some people do to get noticed. A fun read.
March 5th, 2025 05:45
Is this our plan of attack?
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read with many rhymes inside this piece
March 3rd, 2025 20:27
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read with many rhymes inside this piece
March 3rd, 2025 20:27
Flesh and bones for the fire
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has an ominous feel to it. It shows anger and resentment. There seems to be a look for justice. Well written
March 2nd, 2025 15:10
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has an ominous feel to it. It shows anger and resentment. There seems to be a look for justice. Well written
March 2nd, 2025 15:10
Nyuk Nyuk Nyuk
Tony36 said:
BRAVO, wonderful tribute to one of the finest Curly
February 25th, 2025 08:23
Tony36 said:
BRAVO, wonderful tribute to one of the finest Curly
February 25th, 2025 08:23
Nyuk Nyuk Nyuk
sorenbarrett said:
Ah Curly my favorite of the three. A bit smarter than the present president he would do just fine better than the last 47. I used to think some were great until I learned about each. Oh well I guess we all have our faults even if history tries to gloss over them for the privileged few.
February 25th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
Ah Curly my favorite of the three. A bit smarter than the present president he would do just fine better than the last 47. I used to think some were great until I learned about each. Oh well I guess we all have our faults even if history tries to gloss over them for the privileged few.
February 25th, 2025 04:10
Wear your wig bleach your skin
sorenbarrett said:
Words that I can feel although I am not black. This poem is powerful, emotional and motivational. It talks to all people because it is not only black but any difference that can be felt in this poem. Masterfully written in a most poetic way. This is a fave
February 23rd, 2025 11:20
sorenbarrett said:
Words that I can feel although I am not black. This poem is powerful, emotional and motivational. It talks to all people because it is not only black but any difference that can be felt in this poem. Masterfully written in a most poetic way. This is a fave
February 23rd, 2025 11:20
In my dreams I’m a master
sorenbarrett said:
In meditation all things are possible and vision is enhanced. A lovely poem of that vision.
February 18th, 2025 06:59
sorenbarrett said:
In meditation all things are possible and vision is enhanced. A lovely poem of that vision.
February 18th, 2025 06:59
Confused and dying
sorenbarrett said:
Very well rhymed internally with great flow an very nice write
February 17th, 2025 13:42
sorenbarrett said:
Very well rhymed internally with great flow an very nice write
February 17th, 2025 13:42
Who is more civilized
sorenbarrett said:
With the rhyme and internal rhym as well as the meter it again sound so rap. Love it.
February 16th, 2025 19:00
sorenbarrett said:
With the rhyme and internal rhym as well as the meter it again sound so rap. Love it.
February 16th, 2025 19:00
Who’s behind the stereotypes
sorenbarrett said:
A rap indeed nicely poetic it gets its message across. A fun read
February 14th, 2025 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
A rap indeed nicely poetic it gets its message across. A fun read
February 14th, 2025 05:42
A reflection from behind
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great flow.
I admit
I don\'t know
What you are saying
I\'ll re-read it!
February 12th, 2025 18:42
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great flow.
I admit
I don\'t know
What you are saying
I\'ll re-read it!
February 12th, 2025 18:42
A reflection from behind
sorenbarrett said:
This poem\'s cadence struck me as a rap and rap it did. Very nicely written
February 12th, 2025 07:38
sorenbarrett said:
This poem\'s cadence struck me as a rap and rap it did. Very nicely written
February 12th, 2025 07:38
A reflection from behind
teardrop said:
I really enjoyed reading this and it put a smile on my face. Thank you for the read.
February 12th, 2025 01:34
teardrop said:
I really enjoyed reading this and it put a smile on my face. Thank you for the read.
February 12th, 2025 01:34
When sleeping gods awaken
Mutley Ravishes said:
I sometimes wonder, if \"God\" is an all knowing Being then why would It need a universe(s?!) to \"know\" Itself? A teacher once said that one needs a mirror to know oneself. So, do we have a Being that is all-knowing and at the same time doesn\'t know Itself?! I have no idea!
I remember another teacher saying that this universe is the 84th in a series of 112. He was then asked what is the outcome of number 112? He answered that 112 will be \"fully conscious.\" If that is true then we have a long ways to go!
Mind-opening rhyme!
January 20th, 2025 19:10
Mutley Ravishes said:
I sometimes wonder, if \"God\" is an all knowing Being then why would It need a universe(s?!) to \"know\" Itself? A teacher once said that one needs a mirror to know oneself. So, do we have a Being that is all-knowing and at the same time doesn\'t know Itself?! I have no idea!
I remember another teacher saying that this universe is the 84th in a series of 112. He was then asked what is the outcome of number 112? He answered that 112 will be \"fully conscious.\" If that is true then we have a long ways to go!
Mind-opening rhyme!
January 20th, 2025 19:10
Power over power?
Mutley Ravishes said:
That guy was babbling. Ignorance reigns supreme.
Great work!
January 10th, 2025 18:41
Mutley Ravishes said:
That guy was babbling. Ignorance reigns supreme.
Great work!
January 10th, 2025 18:41
Power over power?
Poetic Licence said:
It is easier for them to make excuses rather than take any positive action, well expressed
January 10th, 2025 13:19
Poetic Licence said:
It is easier for them to make excuses rather than take any positive action, well expressed
January 10th, 2025 13:19
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