Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie
Civilitechnician?
sorenbarrett said:
Our progress in technology has far outstripped our progress in humanity or social development. Nicely written
June 16th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
Our progress in technology has far outstripped our progress in humanity or social development. Nicely written
June 16th, 2025 04:08
They still walk among us
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a sociopolitical feel and this is personalized in the main character of the poem. who sees what is naturally right as superseding man made law . Nicely done
June 12th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a sociopolitical feel and this is personalized in the main character of the poem. who sees what is naturally right as superseding man made law . Nicely done
June 12th, 2025 04:11
A shaman’s dinner table
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like the drug induced journey of an altered state of consciousness, a spiritual trip. Very nicely written
June 8th, 2025 13:55
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like the drug induced journey of an altered state of consciousness, a spiritual trip. Very nicely written
June 8th, 2025 13:55
A god’s cure for amnesia
RSM0812 said:
This poem reminds me of peace and meditation. Nice write. The words explain the thought provoking emotions very well.
June 8th, 2025 09:48
RSM0812 said:
This poem reminds me of peace and meditation. Nice write. The words explain the thought provoking emotions very well.
June 8th, 2025 09:48
From whence
sorenbarrett said:
Deep thoughts in a universe, a metaverse, another dimension thought provoking and a fun read
June 7th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Deep thoughts in a universe, a metaverse, another dimension thought provoking and a fun read
June 7th, 2025 04:09
Cryptic erotica
sorenbarrett said:
A great write that is too true to be fun and too fun to be true. Loved it
June 6th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
A great write that is too true to be fun and too fun to be true. Loved it
June 6th, 2025 03:58
Rome, Africa’s disobedient child
Mutley Ravishes said:
This inverted world we live in. The more I try to find out (at least some of) what happened the less I know!
June 6th, 2025 01:00
Mutley Ravishes said:
This inverted world we live in. The more I try to find out (at least some of) what happened the less I know!
June 6th, 2025 01:00
Rome, Africa’s disobedient child
Doggerel Dave said:
Ignorance is not bliss, is it really? There are truths there, particularly the latter half, once you part the rhymes; truths more solid then those thin papyruses.
June 5th, 2025 18:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Ignorance is not bliss, is it really? There are truths there, particularly the latter half, once you part the rhymes; truths more solid then those thin papyruses.
June 5th, 2025 18:14
Rome, Africa’s disobedient child
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem to read with all of its internal rhyme. Very nice
June 5th, 2025 13:28
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem to read with all of its internal rhyme. Very nice
June 5th, 2025 13:28
This is not the Lords house
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in mystic metaphor speaks of history, religion, myth and sociopolitical facts in one short rhymed piece. Good enough for a fave
June 5th, 2025 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in mystic metaphor speaks of history, religion, myth and sociopolitical facts in one short rhymed piece. Good enough for a fave
June 5th, 2025 04:44
Chemically, still bucking
Doggerel Dave said:
Engenders much controversy. Any advice I would want to give would be: stay yourself: avoid self immolation.
June 3rd, 2025 20:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Engenders much controversy. Any advice I would want to give would be: stay yourself: avoid self immolation.
June 3rd, 2025 20:31
Chemically, still bucking
sorenbarrett said:
Confusing isn\'t it? In a world of sex we have become so preoccupied with it that we have to categorize it label it dissect it examine it under a microscope, project it for all to see on the screen and smear it all over social media. After all there is nothing more interesting than pornography. A poignant write set in good metaphor. Well done
June 3rd, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Confusing isn\'t it? In a world of sex we have become so preoccupied with it that we have to categorize it label it dissect it examine it under a microscope, project it for all to see on the screen and smear it all over social media. After all there is nothing more interesting than pornography. A poignant write set in good metaphor. Well done
June 3rd, 2025 04:30
A starship in our atmosphere
Doggerel Dave said:
Phew! Objectification beyond......Fantasy plus..... It\'s fantasy \'cos getting her out of that suit would require more than I have in my toolbox.......
May 30th, 2025 17:23
Doggerel Dave said:
Phew! Objectification beyond......Fantasy plus..... It\'s fantasy \'cos getting her out of that suit would require more than I have in my toolbox.......
May 30th, 2025 17:23
A starship in our atmosphere
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the depiction of a trip to the club in the sky. Well painted this starship dancer. Lovely
May 30th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the depiction of a trip to the club in the sky. Well painted this starship dancer. Lovely
May 30th, 2025 04:29
A starship in our atmosphere
Poetic Licence said:
A very well crafted write, enjoyed the read
May 30th, 2025 02:38
Poetic Licence said:
A very well crafted write, enjoyed the read
May 30th, 2025 02:38
A starship in our atmosphere
Mutley Ravishes said:
I can\'t think of anything to say except \"that was......\" Nope, I give up. I can\'t find the right word! Great write.
May 30th, 2025 01:51
Mutley Ravishes said:
I can\'t think of anything to say except \"that was......\" Nope, I give up. I can\'t find the right word! Great write.
May 30th, 2025 01:51
Do our presence mean they survived
sorenbarrett said:
The depth of the implications of this poem are intriguing. It is highly philosophical and yet powerful as a meta metaphor. Lovely and a fave
May 29th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
The depth of the implications of this poem are intriguing. It is highly philosophical and yet powerful as a meta metaphor. Lovely and a fave
May 29th, 2025 04:27
It was only death
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem that vacillates from serious to humorous. A fun read
May 28th, 2025 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem that vacillates from serious to humorous. A fun read
May 28th, 2025 05:27
A god’s cure for amnesia
sorenbarrett said:
This poem requires meditation. Finding oneself call it existential if you will. A life\'s quest. Very nice
May 27th, 2025 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
This poem requires meditation. Finding oneself call it existential if you will. A life\'s quest. Very nice
May 27th, 2025 05:12
A god’s cure for amnesia
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of we as people sometimes forget what we are here for and understand the purpose of our life, enjoyed the read
May 27th, 2025 02:24
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of we as people sometimes forget what we are here for and understand the purpose of our life, enjoyed the read
May 27th, 2025 02:24
Are we sure of our role
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"A\" God indeed! (That\'s a whole other line of investigation, as I\'m sure you know). I like all the \"wes\" and \"ours\" in this rhyme. Great flow, deep reflections!
May 26th, 2025 19:05
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"A\" God indeed! (That\'s a whole other line of investigation, as I\'m sure you know). I like all the \"wes\" and \"ours\" in this rhyme. Great flow, deep reflections!
May 26th, 2025 19:05
Are we sure of our role
sorenbarrett said:
Clever with the use of Latin ending words in rhyme and casting the spell in rhyme internal and external it weaves its magic and gets a fave
May 26th, 2025 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
Clever with the use of Latin ending words in rhyme and casting the spell in rhyme internal and external it weaves its magic and gets a fave
May 26th, 2025 04:44
Are we sure of our role
Hollow Enigma said:
Im taken here man! To not be vulgar here all i can say wow. Very cool patterns and good for you in not taking easy rhymes. First part little aqward but then boom its flows so so so well. Keep it up man thanks for sharing!
May 26th, 2025 03:06
Hollow Enigma said:
Im taken here man! To not be vulgar here all i can say wow. Very cool patterns and good for you in not taking easy rhymes. First part little aqward but then boom its flows so so so well. Keep it up man thanks for sharing!
May 26th, 2025 03:06
The Wrong Talents
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and well worded this poem is an inspiration to aspiring individuals in all areas. Lovely
May 25th, 2025 14:52
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and well worded this poem is an inspiration to aspiring individuals in all areas. Lovely
May 25th, 2025 14:52
Gold digger
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this poem it reads so well and tells its tail which I am not sure to take humorously of more metaphorically. A fun read none the less. Loved it
May 24th, 2025 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this poem it reads so well and tells its tail which I am not sure to take humorously of more metaphorically. A fun read none the less. Loved it
May 24th, 2025 12:57
Bruce Lee
sorenbarrett said:
I remember well Bruce Lee a major star in my younger days. Watched his movies and was shocked and saddened at his death. He remains a model for the martial arts and particularly in movies. Nicely done
May 23rd, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
I remember well Bruce Lee a major star in my younger days. Watched his movies and was shocked and saddened at his death. He remains a model for the martial arts and particularly in movies. Nicely done
May 23rd, 2025 04:46
Bruce Lee
Poetic Licence said:
Blimey spent hours as a kid trying to do what he did, a true master, enjoyed the read
May 23rd, 2025 02:27
Poetic Licence said:
Blimey spent hours as a kid trying to do what he did, a true master, enjoyed the read
May 23rd, 2025 02:27
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