Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie



Meditation over prayer
sorenbarrett said:

Nice internal rhyme within this write. It breaths as it speaks. Logic and reason are hard bed companions for children that would prefer a fairy tale.

July 27th, 2025 13:42

Life has been a slow crucifixion
sorenbarrett said:

Rap like this poem rocks but with a dark and bumpy road. Well done

July 19th, 2025 08:25

Whose playbook is this
Priya Tomar said:

Last line very impressive.....
Very well....

July 18th, 2025 09:21

Knocked out
sorenbarrett said:

Never give up. Fighting from the canvas and in dreamland is a good example. There was a nice flow to the write.

July 17th, 2025 04:05

A rising star
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

July 13th, 2025 07:37

A rising star
sorenbarrett said:

Cleverly worded and mystical this poem works its miracle revealing its cryptic mystery of power. Lovely

July 13th, 2025 05:09

I want out
sorenbarrett said:

Time passes but little changes. So true it is and well stated.

July 12th, 2025 11:15

A Prison town
sorenbarrett said:

A thought provoking piece that puts a whole new twist on the term gangster. Interesting and something to think about

July 6th, 2025 09:43

A spontaneous piece of light
Poetic Licence said:

A very interesting write of seeing god in today\'s world in a much different light, nicely Crafted write, enjoyed the read

July 3rd, 2025 05:45

A spontaneous piece of light
sorenbarrett said:

A most thought provoking write that equates God with light which is an old view but now in a new perspective as refracted different colored and bent it gives new meaning. Most creative and well written,

July 3rd, 2025 05:30

The Anunnaki crash
sorenbarrett said:

A fanciful poem, could it be a metaphor? Well written

July 1st, 2025 05:47

A mirror at the end of a dark corridor
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely write with deep meaning, as they say if you have your health you are the richest man in the world, enjoyed the read

June 30th, 2025 23:48

A mirror at the end of a dark corridor
sorenbarrett said:

There is depth in this poem. Nicely worded and composed it speaks of gratitude and being content. Lovely

June 30th, 2025 18:33

Peace God
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of a mantra and a myth beautifully casting the wonder of poetry itself in the magic of words. Beautiful

June 29th, 2025 15:08

Whose playbook is this
Doggerel Dave said:

Nothing like an external war to keep the population in line with a heady brew of Patriotism Nationalism and Jingoism.


June 28th, 2025 17:20

Whose playbook is this
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of political and social comment over current events and biblical implications. Well written

June 28th, 2025 11:35

Did nature just breed a cereal killer
Mutley Ravishes said:

I found seeing history through the lens of the four Hindu Yugas or Greek Ages (gold, silver, bronze, iron) to give a context as to what\'s happening now. What do you think?

June 25th, 2025 05:50

Did nature just breed a cereal killer
sorenbarrett said:

Being human is nothing to be proud of. Makes a person wonder what it would have been like if something else had evolved in our place. Nice write

June 24th, 2025 17:05

A slave’s last master is his history
sorenbarrett said:

Rhyme that provokes thought. Reflections in poetry. Nicely done

June 24th, 2025 04:11

Celebrate to build or build to celebrate
sorenbarrett said:

Some great use of metaphor here (Punishments don\'t remove their crimes) A nicely penned piece

June 22nd, 2025 04:04

The artificial take over
sorenbarrett said:

A great line (enjoyed the food but didn\'t ask to see the recipe) A most thought provoking poem well written

June 18th, 2025 05:22

Civilitechnician?
sorenbarrett said:

Our progress in technology has far outstripped our progress in humanity or social development. Nicely written

June 16th, 2025 04:08

They still walk among us
Tony36 said:

Great write

June 12th, 2025 09:23

They still walk among us
sorenbarrett said:

This poem has a sociopolitical feel and this is personalized in the main character of the poem. who sees what is naturally right as superseding man made law . Nicely done

June 12th, 2025 04:11

A shaman’s dinner table
sorenbarrett said:

This sounds like the drug induced journey of an altered state of consciousness, a spiritual trip. Very nicely written

June 8th, 2025 13:55

A god’s cure for amnesia
RSM0812 said:

This poem reminds me of peace and meditation. Nice write. The words explain the thought provoking emotions very well.

June 8th, 2025 09:48

From whence
sorenbarrett said:

Deep thoughts in a universe, a metaverse, another dimension thought provoking and a fun read

June 7th, 2025 04:09

Cryptic erotica
sorenbarrett said:

A great write that is too true to be fun and too fun to be true. Loved it

June 6th, 2025 03:58

Rome, Africa’s disobedient child
Mutley Ravishes said:

This inverted world we live in. The more I try to find out (at least some of) what happened the less I know!

June 6th, 2025 01:00

Rome, Africa’s disobedient child
Doggerel Dave said:

Ignorance is not bliss, is it really? There are truths there, particularly the latter half, once you part the rhymes; truths more solid then those thin papyruses.

June 5th, 2025 18:14

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