Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie
Meditation over prayer
sorenbarrett said:
Nice internal rhyme within this write. It breaths as it speaks. Logic and reason are hard bed companions for children that would prefer a fairy tale.
July 27th, 2025 13:42
sorenbarrett said:
Nice internal rhyme within this write. It breaths as it speaks. Logic and reason are hard bed companions for children that would prefer a fairy tale.
July 27th, 2025 13:42
Life has been a slow crucifixion
sorenbarrett said:
Rap like this poem rocks but with a dark and bumpy road. Well done
July 19th, 2025 08:25
sorenbarrett said:
Rap like this poem rocks but with a dark and bumpy road. Well done
July 19th, 2025 08:25
Whose playbook is this
Priya Tomar said:
Last line very impressive.....
Very well....
July 18th, 2025 09:21
Priya Tomar said:
Last line very impressive.....
Very well....
July 18th, 2025 09:21
Knocked out
sorenbarrett said:
Never give up. Fighting from the canvas and in dreamland is a good example. There was a nice flow to the write.
July 17th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
Never give up. Fighting from the canvas and in dreamland is a good example. There was a nice flow to the write.
July 17th, 2025 04:05
A rising star
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly worded and mystical this poem works its miracle revealing its cryptic mystery of power. Lovely
July 13th, 2025 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly worded and mystical this poem works its miracle revealing its cryptic mystery of power. Lovely
July 13th, 2025 05:09
I want out
sorenbarrett said:
Time passes but little changes. So true it is and well stated.
July 12th, 2025 11:15
sorenbarrett said:
Time passes but little changes. So true it is and well stated.
July 12th, 2025 11:15
A Prison town
sorenbarrett said:
A thought provoking piece that puts a whole new twist on the term gangster. Interesting and something to think about
July 6th, 2025 09:43
sorenbarrett said:
A thought provoking piece that puts a whole new twist on the term gangster. Interesting and something to think about
July 6th, 2025 09:43
A spontaneous piece of light
Poetic Licence said:
A very interesting write of seeing god in today\'s world in a much different light, nicely Crafted write, enjoyed the read
July 3rd, 2025 05:45
Poetic Licence said:
A very interesting write of seeing god in today\'s world in a much different light, nicely Crafted write, enjoyed the read
July 3rd, 2025 05:45
A spontaneous piece of light
sorenbarrett said:
A most thought provoking write that equates God with light which is an old view but now in a new perspective as refracted different colored and bent it gives new meaning. Most creative and well written,
July 3rd, 2025 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
A most thought provoking write that equates God with light which is an old view but now in a new perspective as refracted different colored and bent it gives new meaning. Most creative and well written,
July 3rd, 2025 05:30
The Anunnaki crash
sorenbarrett said:
A fanciful poem, could it be a metaphor? Well written
July 1st, 2025 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
A fanciful poem, could it be a metaphor? Well written
July 1st, 2025 05:47
A mirror at the end of a dark corridor
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write with deep meaning, as they say if you have your health you are the richest man in the world, enjoyed the read
June 30th, 2025 23:48
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write with deep meaning, as they say if you have your health you are the richest man in the world, enjoyed the read
June 30th, 2025 23:48
A mirror at the end of a dark corridor
sorenbarrett said:
There is depth in this poem. Nicely worded and composed it speaks of gratitude and being content. Lovely
June 30th, 2025 18:33
sorenbarrett said:
There is depth in this poem. Nicely worded and composed it speaks of gratitude and being content. Lovely
June 30th, 2025 18:33
Peace God
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a mantra and a myth beautifully casting the wonder of poetry itself in the magic of words. Beautiful
June 29th, 2025 15:08
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a mantra and a myth beautifully casting the wonder of poetry itself in the magic of words. Beautiful
June 29th, 2025 15:08
Whose playbook is this
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing like an external war to keep the population in line with a heady brew of Patriotism Nationalism and Jingoism.
June 28th, 2025 17:20
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing like an external war to keep the population in line with a heady brew of Patriotism Nationalism and Jingoism.
June 28th, 2025 17:20
Whose playbook is this
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of political and social comment over current events and biblical implications. Well written
June 28th, 2025 11:35
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of political and social comment over current events and biblical implications. Well written
June 28th, 2025 11:35
Did nature just breed a cereal killer
Mutley Ravishes said:
I found seeing history through the lens of the four Hindu Yugas or Greek Ages (gold, silver, bronze, iron) to give a context as to what\'s happening now. What do you think?
June 25th, 2025 05:50
Mutley Ravishes said:
I found seeing history through the lens of the four Hindu Yugas or Greek Ages (gold, silver, bronze, iron) to give a context as to what\'s happening now. What do you think?
June 25th, 2025 05:50
Did nature just breed a cereal killer
sorenbarrett said:
Being human is nothing to be proud of. Makes a person wonder what it would have been like if something else had evolved in our place. Nice write
June 24th, 2025 17:05
sorenbarrett said:
Being human is nothing to be proud of. Makes a person wonder what it would have been like if something else had evolved in our place. Nice write
June 24th, 2025 17:05
A slave’s last master is his history
sorenbarrett said:
Rhyme that provokes thought. Reflections in poetry. Nicely done
June 24th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Rhyme that provokes thought. Reflections in poetry. Nicely done
June 24th, 2025 04:11
Celebrate to build or build to celebrate
sorenbarrett said:
Some great use of metaphor here (Punishments don\'t remove their crimes) A nicely penned piece
June 22nd, 2025 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
Some great use of metaphor here (Punishments don\'t remove their crimes) A nicely penned piece
June 22nd, 2025 04:04
The artificial take over
sorenbarrett said:
A great line (enjoyed the food but didn\'t ask to see the recipe) A most thought provoking poem well written
June 18th, 2025 05:22
sorenbarrett said:
A great line (enjoyed the food but didn\'t ask to see the recipe) A most thought provoking poem well written
June 18th, 2025 05:22
Civilitechnician?
sorenbarrett said:
Our progress in technology has far outstripped our progress in humanity or social development. Nicely written
June 16th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
Our progress in technology has far outstripped our progress in humanity or social development. Nicely written
June 16th, 2025 04:08
They still walk among us
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a sociopolitical feel and this is personalized in the main character of the poem. who sees what is naturally right as superseding man made law . Nicely done
June 12th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a sociopolitical feel and this is personalized in the main character of the poem. who sees what is naturally right as superseding man made law . Nicely done
June 12th, 2025 04:11
A shaman’s dinner table
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like the drug induced journey of an altered state of consciousness, a spiritual trip. Very nicely written
June 8th, 2025 13:55
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like the drug induced journey of an altered state of consciousness, a spiritual trip. Very nicely written
June 8th, 2025 13:55
A god’s cure for amnesia
RSM0812 said:
This poem reminds me of peace and meditation. Nice write. The words explain the thought provoking emotions very well.
June 8th, 2025 09:48
RSM0812 said:
This poem reminds me of peace and meditation. Nice write. The words explain the thought provoking emotions very well.
June 8th, 2025 09:48
From whence
sorenbarrett said:
Deep thoughts in a universe, a metaverse, another dimension thought provoking and a fun read
June 7th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Deep thoughts in a universe, a metaverse, another dimension thought provoking and a fun read
June 7th, 2025 04:09
Cryptic erotica
sorenbarrett said:
A great write that is too true to be fun and too fun to be true. Loved it
June 6th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
A great write that is too true to be fun and too fun to be true. Loved it
June 6th, 2025 03:58
Rome, Africa’s disobedient child
Mutley Ravishes said:
This inverted world we live in. The more I try to find out (at least some of) what happened the less I know!
June 6th, 2025 01:00
Mutley Ravishes said:
This inverted world we live in. The more I try to find out (at least some of) what happened the less I know!
June 6th, 2025 01:00
Rome, Africa’s disobedient child
Doggerel Dave said:
Ignorance is not bliss, is it really? There are truths there, particularly the latter half, once you part the rhymes; truths more solid then those thin papyruses.
June 5th, 2025 18:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Ignorance is not bliss, is it really? There are truths there, particularly the latter half, once you part the rhymes; truths more solid then those thin papyruses.
June 5th, 2025 18:14
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