Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie



Lost papers of a troubled man
Parisab said:

“cultural dystrophy that serves as a trophy to victims trying to be wolves, but still serving that master with hooves.“

Only relief that comes from him not being among us, witnessing the affairs of the day…

Powerful and sensitive poem…

March 1st, 2024 11:11

Save the children
evenwheniLie said:

Hopefully you enjoyed it?

February 28th, 2024 00:59

Save the children
hotidris said:

Shocking poem about a little boy finding the N word under his grandfather\'s dresser.

February 28th, 2024 00:09

I’ve seen the future
Doggerel Dave said:

😂Like it, Mr Futurologist Spaceman.

February 25th, 2024 18:41

The power of alone
Doggerel Dave said:

Aloneness is fine most of the time....at least I can hear myself think.

Great stuff.

February 23rd, 2024 08:47

A house at the end of town
hotidris said:

That\'s a wonderful poem about a beautiful house.

February 22nd, 2024 19:07

A house at the end of town
vividvoid14 said:

love this its an amazing poem keep writting

February 21st, 2024 09:43

The culture behind the culture
hotidris said:

Sensational poem about someone using our culture to make noises.

February 20th, 2024 23:50

What a difference a role makes
evenwheniLie said:

Thanks

February 17th, 2024 01:39

What a difference a role makes
hotidris said:

Nice poem about how picking incompetence can be a tool.

February 16th, 2024 23:34

No one lives alone
hotidris said:

Nice poem about your inner thoughts being someone else\'s.

February 14th, 2024 17:55

No one lives alone
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

February 14th, 2024 00:13

No one lives alone
Shetonya Latryce said:

Love this. Easy to read, understand and relate to. Thank you for your candid clarity.

February 13th, 2024 16:48

A message from the graves of slaves
Teddy.15 said:

Incredibly powerful, I come from a town where no one of any colour were ever different or identified so. How the world can change so fast in just a generation. I now live it Italy and it\'s different. 🌹

February 12th, 2024 05:12

Inward to the lord of power
hotidris said:

Nice poem about how the power of the gun is inside someone.

February 9th, 2024 23:24

Is it really just another odyssey
hotidris said:

Excellent poem about dimensions.

February 8th, 2024 12:03

The most conquered
Parisab said:

Great flow with messages, sourced by the ancient winds! Ugliest storms in history, but best not forgotten.

February 4th, 2024 12:21

America love her or leave her
hotidris said:

Nice poem about American history.

February 3rd, 2024 23:08

America love her or leave her
2781 said:

Ye will revolt more and more: the whole head is sick, and the whole heart faint. From the sole of the foot even unto the head there is no soundness in it; but wounds, and bruises, and putrifying sores: they have not been closed, neither bond up, neither mollified with ointment.

February 3rd, 2024 22:28

Who built the bodies
2781 said:

Need solid foundations.

January 30th, 2024 07:10

In or out?
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful. Great flow.

January 23rd, 2024 19:47

Our truth is a lie
hotidris said:

Fantastic poem about how our perceptions have to be rectified.

January 23rd, 2024 00:25

The eye of a master
hotidris said:

Neat poem about how the self must be exposed.

January 21st, 2024 00:25

The eye of a master
hzugman said:

Well done, E.

January 20th, 2024 12:48

Expulsion explosion
Doggerel Dave said:

This is difficult to unpick, actually.
• I know nothing much about specifically crack, but generally believe that the War On Drugs is a pathetic project and needs reevaluation. Unlikely as too many interests are committed to it (wot would police do without their overtime fer instance…🤣)
• But why couple this with Incel (the picture). More pathetic shits would be hard to find. Hate women because they are not getting their share of sex? Gather together to feed and reinforce their hatred? Oh please!
I don’t get the connection from your POV. From mine I see both as the symptoms of the economic system, which is screwing everyone down but the rich, who are multiplying like rabbits…..


January 19th, 2024 21:43

Expulsion explosion
2781 said:

I remember growing up when people sat on porches and had gardens out the front. Always said hello, could spend time talking over a drink or cup of tea.
Now it\'s double door garages, no time for pleasantries.

January 19th, 2024 14:55

Identity crisis
2781 said:

That was mind bending.

January 17th, 2024 07:54

Where’s George Carlin
hotidris said:

Fantastic poem about humor.

January 16th, 2024 19:46

What the devil say
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful write.

January 12th, 2024 17:57

Don’t fall watch your step
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic flow. Powerful and poignant.

January 10th, 2024 17:56

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