Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie
Return war mongers to their caves
sorenbarrett said:
War is a bloody business and politics is a dirty business. The interests of any nation are exclusive where the religion of man is murder of his brother.
April 5th, 2026 19:46
sorenbarrett said:
War is a bloody business and politics is a dirty business. The interests of any nation are exclusive where the religion of man is murder of his brother.
April 5th, 2026 19:46
Covert but still there
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a rap flow to it with its rhyme scheme. Nicely said it gives its message well
April 3rd, 2026 16:19
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a rap flow to it with its rhyme scheme. Nicely said it gives its message well
April 3rd, 2026 16:19
Who’s next to take a bullet
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely beyond my level of awareness, this one. I\'ll be back after I\'ve sussed out any background I can find...
April 1st, 2026 23:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely beyond my level of awareness, this one. I\'ll be back after I\'ve sussed out any background I can find...
April 1st, 2026 23:22
Who’s next to take a bullet
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic social commentary in this poem that speak of who can you trust. Well done
April 1st, 2026 19:01
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic social commentary in this poem that speak of who can you trust. Well done
April 1st, 2026 19:01
Crimes against our Hu’manity
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great write. I hope that all the peoples of those nations are not confused with the global criminals.
March 29th, 2026 19:02
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great write. I hope that all the peoples of those nations are not confused with the global criminals.
March 29th, 2026 19:02
Crimes against our Hu’manity
sorenbarrett said:
Strong words fill this piece where it is asked that we be more truthful in our self evaluation. Seeing our own greed and arrogance for what it is and not be hypocritical. Nicely said
March 29th, 2026 18:04
sorenbarrett said:
Strong words fill this piece where it is asked that we be more truthful in our self evaluation. Seeing our own greed and arrogance for what it is and not be hypocritical. Nicely said
March 29th, 2026 18:04
More Questions
Doggerel Dave said:
The net result of all those questions is a blinding headache IMO. My answer (and I repeat this often) is: We\'re here because we\'re here.
March 28th, 2026 18:33
Doggerel Dave said:
The net result of all those questions is a blinding headache IMO. My answer (and I repeat this often) is: We\'re here because we\'re here.
March 28th, 2026 18:33
More Questions
2781 said:
I suppose God can be whoever he wants to be...he did say - I AM THAT I AM.
March 28th, 2026 08:24
2781 said:
I suppose God can be whoever he wants to be...he did say - I AM THAT I AM.
March 28th, 2026 08:24
More Questions
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great quest-ions! You`re on a roll. May it continue. Forever.
March 28th, 2026 06:58
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great quest-ions! You`re on a roll. May it continue. Forever.
March 28th, 2026 06:58
More Questions
sorenbarrett said:
Questions we all have had and all have different answers for. A lovely write that bounces from one possibility to another. Well done
March 28th, 2026 06:56
sorenbarrett said:
Questions we all have had and all have different answers for. A lovely write that bounces from one possibility to another. Well done
March 28th, 2026 06:56
Angelic knights on the battlefield
sorenbarrett said:
A clever weaving of internal rhyme makes the fabric of this poem of wartime disaster. Nicely done
March 24th, 2026 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
A clever weaving of internal rhyme makes the fabric of this poem of wartime disaster. Nicely done
March 24th, 2026 04:48
Our own phantom zone
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed so true our reality is our invention and it just so happens that at times our realities overlap others and we come to agreements at others they don\'t and wars occur. Well said.
March 20th, 2026 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed so true our reality is our invention and it just so happens that at times our realities overlap others and we come to agreements at others they don\'t and wars occur. Well said.
March 20th, 2026 04:01
Vibrations
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem about spooky science as Einstein called it quantum theory, string theory and what the universe is made of, multi dimensions past present and future all in one and strings what are they made of some say poetic love. Well done
March 19th, 2026 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem about spooky science as Einstein called it quantum theory, string theory and what the universe is made of, multi dimensions past present and future all in one and strings what are they made of some say poetic love. Well done
March 19th, 2026 04:48
Glimpse into the eye of a needle
2781 said:
Dyslexia kicked in again - I thought the first line read - wants and needs is fertiliser for weeds..
It\'s good to have peace, as we age...
March 18th, 2026 06:31
2781 said:
Dyslexia kicked in again - I thought the first line read - wants and needs is fertiliser for weeds..
It\'s good to have peace, as we age...
March 18th, 2026 06:31
Glimpse into the eye of a needle
Doggerel Dave said:
Existential wasting away....
March 18th, 2026 06:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Existential wasting away....
March 18th, 2026 06:13
Glimpse into the eye of a needle
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of feeling overwhelmed with too many demands comes through in this poem of the everyday rush. Well said
March 18th, 2026 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of feeling overwhelmed with too many demands comes through in this poem of the everyday rush. Well said
March 18th, 2026 04:48
How old is creations
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and clever wording and the use of metaphor fill this poem punctuated with rhyme as well it has a rap beat that works well for the more modern style. Nicely done
March 17th, 2026 03:27
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and clever wording and the use of metaphor fill this poem punctuated with rhyme as well it has a rap beat that works well for the more modern style. Nicely done
March 17th, 2026 03:27
Effectively impacted
Doggerel Dave said:
I bounce around all over the place on this one.....There are times when I view the young as witless wonders controlled by that thingy they hold in the palm of their hand (and I\'m not talking young fellas and their habits here...lol) plus a political system down the gurgler, and think this is just a function of my old age, and then, again via that same old age and experience, I\'ve known times which were better...
March 16th, 2026 18:38
Doggerel Dave said:
I bounce around all over the place on this one.....There are times when I view the young as witless wonders controlled by that thingy they hold in the palm of their hand (and I\'m not talking young fellas and their habits here...lol) plus a political system down the gurgler, and think this is just a function of my old age, and then, again via that same old age and experience, I\'ve known times which were better...
March 16th, 2026 18:38
Effectively impacted
sorenbarrett said:
Here we have a wonderfully internal rhymed piece that reflects the views of each generation. I remember having to fight my parents for long hair, for loud music and what they considered sexually provocative images on album covers and books. I busted heads over religion and politics as well as drugs. As a species we haven\'t come far each generation finding ways to piss off the last. A good write.
March 16th, 2026 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
Here we have a wonderfully internal rhymed piece that reflects the views of each generation. I remember having to fight my parents for long hair, for loud music and what they considered sexually provocative images on album covers and books. I busted heads over religion and politics as well as drugs. As a species we haven\'t come far each generation finding ways to piss off the last. A good write.
March 16th, 2026 08:43
Universal silhouettes
sorenbarrett said:
The you, the brain, the soul or spirt is spoken of in this poem as an integral whole not to be scattered. Well done
March 14th, 2026 09:42
sorenbarrett said:
The you, the brain, the soul or spirt is spoken of in this poem as an integral whole not to be scattered. Well done
March 14th, 2026 09:42
A generational gap
sorenbarrett said:
A good poem in a rap form that talks of generational differences. These seem to have been evolving for several generation due to societal changes and changes in parenting and family structure. Well written
March 11th, 2026 03:19
sorenbarrett said:
A good poem in a rap form that talks of generational differences. These seem to have been evolving for several generation due to societal changes and changes in parenting and family structure. Well written
March 11th, 2026 03:19
My last supper
Doggerel Dave said:
Frosted Flakes weren\'t your last meal, were it? Reassure.
Don\'t know who this guy is, but his skin tone would be provocative touch for some......
March 9th, 2026 04:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Frosted Flakes weren\'t your last meal, were it? Reassure.
Don\'t know who this guy is, but his skin tone would be provocative touch for some......
March 9th, 2026 04:46
My last supper
sorenbarrett said:
Somewhat surreal and using near rhyme internally as well as ending this poem drives a wild story right into the bowl. Well done
March 9th, 2026 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
Somewhat surreal and using near rhyme internally as well as ending this poem drives a wild story right into the bowl. Well done
March 9th, 2026 03:41
Supervillain
sorenbarrett said:
Now is this a supervillain we know? Some how sounds familiar. Nicely done
February 24th, 2026 17:48
sorenbarrett said:
Now is this a supervillain we know? Some how sounds familiar. Nicely done
February 24th, 2026 17:48
Too small to see
Mutley Ravishes said:
What a great question. As for why civilizations are routinely ravaged, there`s a historical researcher/chronologist on a Youtube channel called \"Archaix\" that has gleaned some ideas!
February 23rd, 2026 18:47
Mutley Ravishes said:
What a great question. As for why civilizations are routinely ravaged, there`s a historical researcher/chronologist on a Youtube channel called \"Archaix\" that has gleaned some ideas!
February 23rd, 2026 18:47
Too small to see
sorenbarrett said:
Life spontaneous, a flash in the pan, an existential dilema. Well written.
February 22nd, 2026 10:32
sorenbarrett said:
Life spontaneous, a flash in the pan, an existential dilema. Well written.
February 22nd, 2026 10:32
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