Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie
What the Generals see
Doggerel Dave said:
Not too sure about that - I still go with the Military Industrial Complex and a bunch of brain dead idiots...
May 11th, 2026 04:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Not too sure about that - I still go with the Military Industrial Complex and a bunch of brain dead idiots...
May 11th, 2026 04:41
What the Generals see
sorenbarrett said:
Well written with rhyme as well and the question becomes who runs the CIA
May 11th, 2026 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
Well written with rhyme as well and the question becomes who runs the CIA
May 11th, 2026 04:28
Iranian choices
Mutley Ravishes said:
It`s been said that a certain group have had their headquarters in Persia since way back. I hope Zoroaster makes a comeback, soon!
May 5th, 2026 06:40
Mutley Ravishes said:
It`s been said that a certain group have had their headquarters in Persia since way back. I hope Zoroaster makes a comeback, soon!
May 5th, 2026 06:40
Iranian choices
sorenbarrett said:
A definite political stand in poetic rhyme well done
May 5th, 2026 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
A definite political stand in poetic rhyme well done
May 5th, 2026 03:53
It’s levels to salvation
sorenbarrett said:
Mechanical adjustment of the psyche in a meditation that boils. Well written with internal rhyme
May 2nd, 2026 19:01
sorenbarrett said:
Mechanical adjustment of the psyche in a meditation that boils. Well written with internal rhyme
May 2nd, 2026 19:01
It’s levels to salvation
ms.divine said:
Make they destiny burn like a fryer called karma
May 2nd, 2026 18:50
ms.divine said:
Make they destiny burn like a fryer called karma
May 2nd, 2026 18:50
It’s levels to salvation
ms.divine said:
Yea when u reach that level and u not meditating spirit team always whooping ass when you not meditating too get you back alined like a hot dryer
May 2nd, 2026 18:49
ms.divine said:
Yea when u reach that level and u not meditating spirit team always whooping ass when you not meditating too get you back alined like a hot dryer
May 2nd, 2026 18:49
Planet Africa
sorenbarrett said:
I like the feel of this poem its darkness and its mythical sense of origin. It feels mysterious and grounded in the mists of history. Nicely done
April 30th, 2026 04:52
sorenbarrett said:
I like the feel of this poem its darkness and its mythical sense of origin. It feels mysterious and grounded in the mists of history. Nicely done
April 30th, 2026 04:52
Babies with powers
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how babies and parrots show the manners of their parents and owners. Had a neighbor at the end of the street that could never have the pastor over because of the language of the parrot. A fun read and cute as well
April 25th, 2026 20:42
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how babies and parrots show the manners of their parents and owners. Had a neighbor at the end of the street that could never have the pastor over because of the language of the parrot. A fun read and cute as well
April 25th, 2026 20:42
The chameleon effect
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great message in rhyme where what is false is not easily discerned even one\'s ego. Well said and a fave
April 18th, 2026 15:39
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great message in rhyme where what is false is not easily discerned even one\'s ego. Well said and a fave
April 18th, 2026 15:39
Spirits whisper at Herod’s Masada
Doggerel Dave said:
Where are you coming from? I get it, then I don\'t then i think I\'ve found it again...
April 17th, 2026 16:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Where are you coming from? I get it, then I don\'t then i think I\'ve found it again...
April 17th, 2026 16:57
Spirits whisper at Herod’s Masada
sorenbarrett said:
It is funny how beliefs color our vision. This poem speaks of one view. Nicely painted
April 17th, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
It is funny how beliefs color our vision. This poem speaks of one view. Nicely painted
April 17th, 2026 04:17
Return war mongers to their caves
sorenbarrett said:
War is a bloody business and politics is a dirty business. The interests of any nation are exclusive where the religion of man is murder of his brother.
April 5th, 2026 19:46
sorenbarrett said:
War is a bloody business and politics is a dirty business. The interests of any nation are exclusive where the religion of man is murder of his brother.
April 5th, 2026 19:46
Covert but still there
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a rap flow to it with its rhyme scheme. Nicely said it gives its message well
April 3rd, 2026 16:19
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a rap flow to it with its rhyme scheme. Nicely said it gives its message well
April 3rd, 2026 16:19
Who’s next to take a bullet
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely beyond my level of awareness, this one. I\'ll be back after I\'ve sussed out any background I can find...
April 1st, 2026 23:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely beyond my level of awareness, this one. I\'ll be back after I\'ve sussed out any background I can find...
April 1st, 2026 23:22
Who’s next to take a bullet
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic social commentary in this poem that speak of who can you trust. Well done
April 1st, 2026 19:01
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic social commentary in this poem that speak of who can you trust. Well done
April 1st, 2026 19:01
Crimes against our Hu’manity
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great write. I hope that all the peoples of those nations are not confused with the global criminals.
March 29th, 2026 19:02
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great write. I hope that all the peoples of those nations are not confused with the global criminals.
March 29th, 2026 19:02
Crimes against our Hu’manity
sorenbarrett said:
Strong words fill this piece where it is asked that we be more truthful in our self evaluation. Seeing our own greed and arrogance for what it is and not be hypocritical. Nicely said
March 29th, 2026 18:04
sorenbarrett said:
Strong words fill this piece where it is asked that we be more truthful in our self evaluation. Seeing our own greed and arrogance for what it is and not be hypocritical. Nicely said
March 29th, 2026 18:04
More Questions
Doggerel Dave said:
The net result of all those questions is a blinding headache IMO. My answer (and I repeat this often) is: We\'re here because we\'re here.
March 28th, 2026 18:33
Doggerel Dave said:
The net result of all those questions is a blinding headache IMO. My answer (and I repeat this often) is: We\'re here because we\'re here.
March 28th, 2026 18:33
More Questions
2781 said:
I suppose God can be whoever he wants to be...he did say - I AM THAT I AM.
March 28th, 2026 08:24
2781 said:
I suppose God can be whoever he wants to be...he did say - I AM THAT I AM.
March 28th, 2026 08:24
More Questions
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great quest-ions! You`re on a roll. May it continue. Forever.
March 28th, 2026 06:58
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great quest-ions! You`re on a roll. May it continue. Forever.
March 28th, 2026 06:58
More Questions
sorenbarrett said:
Questions we all have had and all have different answers for. A lovely write that bounces from one possibility to another. Well done
March 28th, 2026 06:56
sorenbarrett said:
Questions we all have had and all have different answers for. A lovely write that bounces from one possibility to another. Well done
March 28th, 2026 06:56
Angelic knights on the battlefield
sorenbarrett said:
A clever weaving of internal rhyme makes the fabric of this poem of wartime disaster. Nicely done
March 24th, 2026 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
A clever weaving of internal rhyme makes the fabric of this poem of wartime disaster. Nicely done
March 24th, 2026 04:48
Our own phantom zone
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed so true our reality is our invention and it just so happens that at times our realities overlap others and we come to agreements at others they don\'t and wars occur. Well said.
March 20th, 2026 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed so true our reality is our invention and it just so happens that at times our realities overlap others and we come to agreements at others they don\'t and wars occur. Well said.
March 20th, 2026 04:01
Vibrations
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem about spooky science as Einstein called it quantum theory, string theory and what the universe is made of, multi dimensions past present and future all in one and strings what are they made of some say poetic love. Well done
March 19th, 2026 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem about spooky science as Einstein called it quantum theory, string theory and what the universe is made of, multi dimensions past present and future all in one and strings what are they made of some say poetic love. Well done
March 19th, 2026 04:48
Glimpse into the eye of a needle
2781 said:
Dyslexia kicked in again - I thought the first line read - wants and needs is fertiliser for weeds..
It\'s good to have peace, as we age...
March 18th, 2026 06:31
2781 said:
Dyslexia kicked in again - I thought the first line read - wants and needs is fertiliser for weeds..
It\'s good to have peace, as we age...
March 18th, 2026 06:31
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