Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie



A spontaneous piece of light
Poetic Licence said:

A very interesting write of seeing god in today\'s world in a much different light, nicely Crafted write, enjoyed the read

July 3rd, 2025 05:45

A spontaneous piece of light
sorenbarrett said:

A most thought provoking write that equates God with light which is an old view but now in a new perspective as refracted different colored and bent it gives new meaning. Most creative and well written,

July 3rd, 2025 05:30

The Anunnaki crash
sorenbarrett said:

A fanciful poem, could it be a metaphor? Well written

July 1st, 2025 05:47

A mirror at the end of a dark corridor
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely write with deep meaning, as they say if you have your health you are the richest man in the world, enjoyed the read

June 30th, 2025 23:48

A mirror at the end of a dark corridor
sorenbarrett said:

There is depth in this poem. Nicely worded and composed it speaks of gratitude and being content. Lovely

June 30th, 2025 18:33

Peace God
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of a mantra and a myth beautifully casting the wonder of poetry itself in the magic of words. Beautiful

June 29th, 2025 15:08

Whose playbook is this
Doggerel Dave said:

Nothing like an external war to keep the population in line with a heady brew of Patriotism Nationalism and Jingoism.


June 28th, 2025 17:20

Whose playbook is this
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of political and social comment over current events and biblical implications. Well written

June 28th, 2025 11:35

Did nature just breed a cereal killer
Mutley Ravishes said:

I found seeing history through the lens of the four Hindu Yugas or Greek Ages (gold, silver, bronze, iron) to give a context as to what\'s happening now. What do you think?

June 25th, 2025 05:50

Did nature just breed a cereal killer
sorenbarrett said:

Being human is nothing to be proud of. Makes a person wonder what it would have been like if something else had evolved in our place. Nice write

June 24th, 2025 17:05

A slave’s last master is his history
sorenbarrett said:

Rhyme that provokes thought. Reflections in poetry. Nicely done

June 24th, 2025 04:11

Celebrate to build or build to celebrate
sorenbarrett said:

Some great use of metaphor here (Punishments don\'t remove their crimes) A nicely penned piece

June 22nd, 2025 04:04

The artificial take over
sorenbarrett said:

A great line (enjoyed the food but didn\'t ask to see the recipe) A most thought provoking poem well written

June 18th, 2025 05:22

Civilitechnician?
sorenbarrett said:

Our progress in technology has far outstripped our progress in humanity or social development. Nicely written

June 16th, 2025 04:08

They still walk among us
Tony36 said:

Great write

June 12th, 2025 09:23

They still walk among us
sorenbarrett said:

This poem has a sociopolitical feel and this is personalized in the main character of the poem. who sees what is naturally right as superseding man made law . Nicely done

June 12th, 2025 04:11

A shaman’s dinner table
sorenbarrett said:

This sounds like the drug induced journey of an altered state of consciousness, a spiritual trip. Very nicely written

June 8th, 2025 13:55

A god’s cure for amnesia
RSM0812 said:

This poem reminds me of peace and meditation. Nice write. The words explain the thought provoking emotions very well.

June 8th, 2025 09:48

From whence
sorenbarrett said:

Deep thoughts in a universe, a metaverse, another dimension thought provoking and a fun read

June 7th, 2025 04:09

Cryptic erotica
sorenbarrett said:

A great write that is too true to be fun and too fun to be true. Loved it

June 6th, 2025 03:58

Rome, Africa’s disobedient child
Mutley Ravishes said:

This inverted world we live in. The more I try to find out (at least some of) what happened the less I know!

June 6th, 2025 01:00

Rome, Africa’s disobedient child
Doggerel Dave said:

Ignorance is not bliss, is it really? There are truths there, particularly the latter half, once you part the rhymes; truths more solid then those thin papyruses.

June 5th, 2025 18:14

Rome, Africa’s disobedient child
sorenbarrett said:

A fun poem to read with all of its internal rhyme. Very nice

June 5th, 2025 13:28

This is not the Lords house
sorenbarrett said:

This poem in mystic metaphor speaks of history, religion, myth and sociopolitical facts in one short rhymed piece. Good enough for a fave

June 5th, 2025 04:44

Chemically, still bucking
Doggerel Dave said:

Engenders much controversy. Any advice I would want to give would be: stay yourself: avoid self immolation.

June 3rd, 2025 20:31

Chemically, still bucking
sorenbarrett said:

Confusing isn\'t it? In a world of sex we have become so preoccupied with it that we have to categorize it label it dissect it examine it under a microscope, project it for all to see on the screen and smear it all over social media. After all there is nothing more interesting than pornography. A poignant write set in good metaphor. Well done

June 3rd, 2025 04:30

A starship in our atmosphere
Doggerel Dave said:

Phew! Objectification beyond......Fantasy plus..... It\'s fantasy \'cos getting her out of that suit would require more than I have in my toolbox.......

May 30th, 2025 17:23

A starship in our atmosphere
sorenbarrett said:

Quite the depiction of a trip to the club in the sky. Well painted this starship dancer. Lovely

May 30th, 2025 04:29

A starship in our atmosphere
Poetic Licence said:

A very well crafted write, enjoyed the read

May 30th, 2025 02:38

A starship in our atmosphere
Mutley Ravishes said:

I can\'t think of anything to say except \"that was......\" Nope, I give up. I can\'t find the right word! Great write.

May 30th, 2025 01:51

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