Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie
The God scope
Mutley Ravishes said:
That`s the kind of questing I like!
Your writing is going up and up (imo).
November 18th, 2024 21:35
Mutley Ravishes said:
That`s the kind of questing I like!
Your writing is going up and up (imo).
November 18th, 2024 21:35
The God scope
Doggerel Dave said:
We\'re here because we\'re here - That\'s all we can possibly know for sure.
November 18th, 2024 00:39
Doggerel Dave said:
We\'re here because we\'re here - That\'s all we can possibly know for sure.
November 18th, 2024 00:39
Does god need God
Mutley Ravishes said:
Tell it to `em!
This fifth sun race
We need a slap in the face!
\"The real man is a magnificent Imagination.\"
N.G
November 13th, 2024 18:49
Mutley Ravishes said:
Tell it to `em!
This fifth sun race
We need a slap in the face!
\"The real man is a magnificent Imagination.\"
N.G
November 13th, 2024 18:49
What the dying see
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great contemplation
Beautifully written
Thanks a million!
November 11th, 2024 19:34
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great contemplation
Beautifully written
Thanks a million!
November 11th, 2024 19:34
Protect the babies
Doggerel Dave said:
I still remain totally uncomprehending as to why people choose to bring a new human into the world whom it is pretty certain will live a life during which they will be unable to achieve their full potential.
November 10th, 2024 05:17
Doggerel Dave said:
I still remain totally uncomprehending as to why people choose to bring a new human into the world whom it is pretty certain will live a life during which they will be unable to achieve their full potential.
November 10th, 2024 05:17
Life’s slight of hand
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great work. Are you thinking of setting it to some music?!
October 16th, 2024 20:57
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great work. Are you thinking of setting it to some music?!
October 16th, 2024 20:57
Those black jobs
Dan Williams said:
Still one step above robots. Monkeys will create no SkyNet.
October 8th, 2024 00:04
Dan Williams said:
Still one step above robots. Monkeys will create no SkyNet.
October 8th, 2024 00:04
Those black jobs
jarcher54 said:
This is what poetry is about. Brave and dangerous. Sharp like razor wire tearing your flesh. Unapologetic.
October 6th, 2024 10:44
jarcher54 said:
This is what poetry is about. Brave and dangerous. Sharp like razor wire tearing your flesh. Unapologetic.
October 6th, 2024 10:44
America’s glass jaw
Doggerel Dave said:
Am I to take it that you are not too happy with the situation right now?🙃
September 13th, 2024 06:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Am I to take it that you are not too happy with the situation right now?🙃
September 13th, 2024 06:05
My post is traumatic
sorenbarrett said:
Whatever you call it, Shellshock or post traumatic stress disorder it is all the same. Misinterpretations high levels of anxiety and even paranoia. A powerful piece.
September 5th, 2024 13:45
sorenbarrett said:
Whatever you call it, Shellshock or post traumatic stress disorder it is all the same. Misinterpretations high levels of anxiety and even paranoia. A powerful piece.
September 5th, 2024 13:45
My Dothraki doctor
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly worded this poem is a fun read. It smacks of humor, but also has a serious side and I believe the message is more serious than one would believe.
September 4th, 2024 05:44
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly worded this poem is a fun read. It smacks of humor, but also has a serious side and I believe the message is more serious than one would believe.
September 4th, 2024 05:44
Jack in a box
sorenbarrett said:
I could hear the rap in this one that had some bars. Very nice
August 28th, 2024 06:44
sorenbarrett said:
I could hear the rap in this one that had some bars. Very nice
August 28th, 2024 06:44
Diary of a cruel child
sorenbarrett said:
Recognition of errors is the first step the question becomes what now? Raw and powerful
August 22nd, 2024 16:09
sorenbarrett said:
Recognition of errors is the first step the question becomes what now? Raw and powerful
August 22nd, 2024 16:09
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