Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie
Abuse of powers
sorenbarrett said:
Contradictions in everything is addressed in this poem of irony and maybe satire. A intellectual read.
October 19th, 2025 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
Contradictions in everything is addressed in this poem of irony and maybe satire. A intellectual read.
October 19th, 2025 04:44
We lie around truths
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, We\'re here because we\'re here is all we will ever know - the rest is interesting embroidery,
Good to see it put out there.
October 18th, 2025 16:49
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, We\'re here because we\'re here is all we will ever know - the rest is interesting embroidery,
Good to see it put out there.
October 18th, 2025 16:49
We lie around truths
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
These are powerful questions no one has answer for yet... Nicely done.
October 18th, 2025 12:59
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
These are powerful questions no one has answer for yet... Nicely done.
October 18th, 2025 12:59
We lie around truths
sorenbarrett said:
It is the message that gets the fave in this poem that weaves rhyme with reason. Deep it its philosophy it may be taken at different levels and in different ways with a question that has been asked by so many, with so many answers and none final. Well done
October 18th, 2025 08:41
sorenbarrett said:
It is the message that gets the fave in this poem that weaves rhyme with reason. Deep it its philosophy it may be taken at different levels and in different ways with a question that has been asked by so many, with so many answers and none final. Well done
October 18th, 2025 08:41
An evil book deified
sorenbarrett said:
The mind is a powerful influence on outcome good or bad if there is such a thing as good and bad except in the mind. Never the less a controller over actions it is.
October 13th, 2025 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
The mind is a powerful influence on outcome good or bad if there is such a thing as good and bad except in the mind. Never the less a controller over actions it is.
October 13th, 2025 04:01
Spiritual deformities
sorenbarrett said:
Everything must be the maximum, super sized so to speak. Why must we always be the biggest, best, first. That old survival instinct of never content spawning greed. Well written
October 12th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Everything must be the maximum, super sized so to speak. Why must we always be the biggest, best, first. That old survival instinct of never content spawning greed. Well written
October 12th, 2025 04:22
Sister mediator
Doggerel Dave said:
Standing, arm out at ninety degrees, hand up and open, attempt to keep thumb below palm level. Six? Eight? Had to be left hand - right preserved for writing, otherwise more trouble....
Kids saved - doesn\'t have to be intergenerational.
Not sure I can thank you for reviving that memory....
Great write, though đź‘Ť
October 3rd, 2025 20:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Standing, arm out at ninety degrees, hand up and open, attempt to keep thumb below palm level. Six? Eight? Had to be left hand - right preserved for writing, otherwise more trouble....
Kids saved - doesn\'t have to be intergenerational.
Not sure I can thank you for reviving that memory....
Great write, though đź‘Ť
October 3rd, 2025 20:25
Sister mediator
sorenbarrett said:
Past trauma prevents corporal punishment in this poem. I remember when in grade school the BOARD OF EDUCATION a large paddle with holes drilled in it
October 3rd, 2025 13:15
sorenbarrett said:
Past trauma prevents corporal punishment in this poem. I remember when in grade school the BOARD OF EDUCATION a large paddle with holes drilled in it
October 3rd, 2025 13:15
Can my brother be my keeper
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful set of rhyme in this poem intricate and flowing it makes sense. A very nice write
September 30th, 2025 19:07
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful set of rhyme in this poem intricate and flowing it makes sense. A very nice write
September 30th, 2025 19:07
The making of a sociopath
Keeter C said:
The only one who made it to heaven is he that came from it. The rest have yet to happen. Don’t give up.
September 27th, 2025 12:40
Keeter C said:
The only one who made it to heaven is he that came from it. The rest have yet to happen. Don’t give up.
September 27th, 2025 12:40
The making of a sociopath
Doggerel Dave said:
Sociopath? Feels pretty right to me..............
September 22nd, 2025 16:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Sociopath? Feels pretty right to me..............
September 22nd, 2025 16:47
The making of a sociopath
sorenbarrett said:
The poem speaks of religious doubts and lack of proof. Nicely written.
September 22nd, 2025 11:13
sorenbarrett said:
The poem speaks of religious doubts and lack of proof. Nicely written.
September 22nd, 2025 11:13
Incoming Destructive Design
Doggerel Dave said:
It\'s the comet, I find when I sussed it out - you\'re way ahead of me. But a brilliant Five line crit of the state of our \'civilization\' . And if it did hit the president\'s mattress plus President the state would have a difficult time executing that one.
September 15th, 2025 18:37
Doggerel Dave said:
It\'s the comet, I find when I sussed it out - you\'re way ahead of me. But a brilliant Five line crit of the state of our \'civilization\' . And if it did hit the president\'s mattress plus President the state would have a difficult time executing that one.
September 15th, 2025 18:37
Incoming Destructive Design
sorenbarrett said:
Hubris greatest sin of the gods is also ours. A lovely write.
September 15th, 2025 15:44
sorenbarrett said:
Hubris greatest sin of the gods is also ours. A lovely write.
September 15th, 2025 15:44
I have thresholds to cross
sorenbarrett said:
Some individuals have achieved unbelievable control over many autonomic and involuntary systems but it is far easier if you can see what you are controlling. Biofeedback works for some, some are able to achieve it with meditation and relaxation training. A great read.
September 5th, 2025 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
Some individuals have achieved unbelievable control over many autonomic and involuntary systems but it is far easier if you can see what you are controlling. Biofeedback works for some, some are able to achieve it with meditation and relaxation training. A great read.
September 5th, 2025 04:07
Amayla
sorenbarrett said:
Babies cuteness from evolution, they can not be resisted. A lovely poem about bundles of joy. Wonderfully done
September 4th, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
Babies cuteness from evolution, they can not be resisted. A lovely poem about bundles of joy. Wonderfully done
September 4th, 2025 04:57
A life long friend
sorenbarrett said:
A dedication to one I assume lost. Well done
August 24th, 2025 13:37
sorenbarrett said:
A dedication to one I assume lost. Well done
August 24th, 2025 13:37
A shiny rock called inclusion
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a criticism of change and development in society. Well written
August 21st, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a criticism of change and development in society. Well written
August 21st, 2025 04:38
Who can put U.S., out
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of outrage at the state of the nation and the divide that is inflicted on its citizens. Nicely done
August 16th, 2025 14:04
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of outrage at the state of the nation and the divide that is inflicted on its citizens. Nicely done
August 16th, 2025 14:04
Consciousness or cyborg
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly worded and rhymed this poem contains tongue in cheek questions that really are valid concerns about AI and future robotics. Very nicely done and a fave.
August 13th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly worded and rhymed this poem contains tongue in cheek questions that really are valid concerns about AI and future robotics. Very nicely done and a fave.
August 13th, 2025 04:30
Meditation over prayer
sorenbarrett said:
Nice internal rhyme within this write. It breaths as it speaks. Logic and reason are hard bed companions for children that would prefer a fairy tale.
July 27th, 2025 13:42
sorenbarrett said:
Nice internal rhyme within this write. It breaths as it speaks. Logic and reason are hard bed companions for children that would prefer a fairy tale.
July 27th, 2025 13:42
Life has been a slow crucifixion
sorenbarrett said:
Rap like this poem rocks but with a dark and bumpy road. Well done
July 19th, 2025 08:25
sorenbarrett said:
Rap like this poem rocks but with a dark and bumpy road. Well done
July 19th, 2025 08:25
Whose playbook is this
Priya Tomar said:
Last line very impressive.....
Very well....
July 18th, 2025 09:21
Priya Tomar said:
Last line very impressive.....
Very well....
July 18th, 2025 09:21
Knocked out
sorenbarrett said:
Never give up. Fighting from the canvas and in dreamland is a good example. There was a nice flow to the write.
July 17th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
Never give up. Fighting from the canvas and in dreamland is a good example. There was a nice flow to the write.
July 17th, 2025 04:05
A rising star
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly worded and mystical this poem works its miracle revealing its cryptic mystery of power. Lovely
July 13th, 2025 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly worded and mystical this poem works its miracle revealing its cryptic mystery of power. Lovely
July 13th, 2025 05:09
I want out
sorenbarrett said:
Time passes but little changes. So true it is and well stated.
July 12th, 2025 11:15
sorenbarrett said:
Time passes but little changes. So true it is and well stated.
July 12th, 2025 11:15
A Prison town
sorenbarrett said:
A thought provoking piece that puts a whole new twist on the term gangster. Interesting and something to think about
July 6th, 2025 09:43
sorenbarrett said:
A thought provoking piece that puts a whole new twist on the term gangster. Interesting and something to think about
July 6th, 2025 09:43
A spontaneous piece of light
Poetic Licence said:
A very interesting write of seeing god in today\'s world in a much different light, nicely Crafted write, enjoyed the read
July 3rd, 2025 05:45
Poetic Licence said:
A very interesting write of seeing god in today\'s world in a much different light, nicely Crafted write, enjoyed the read
July 3rd, 2025 05:45
A spontaneous piece of light
sorenbarrett said:
A most thought provoking write that equates God with light which is an old view but now in a new perspective as refracted different colored and bent it gives new meaning. Most creative and well written,
July 3rd, 2025 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
A most thought provoking write that equates God with light which is an old view but now in a new perspective as refracted different colored and bent it gives new meaning. Most creative and well written,
July 3rd, 2025 05:30
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