Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie
I have thresholds to cross
sorenbarrett said:
Some individuals have achieved unbelievable control over many autonomic and involuntary systems but it is far easier if you can see what you are controlling. Biofeedback works for some, some are able to achieve it with meditation and relaxation training. A great read.
September 5th, 2025 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
Some individuals have achieved unbelievable control over many autonomic and involuntary systems but it is far easier if you can see what you are controlling. Biofeedback works for some, some are able to achieve it with meditation and relaxation training. A great read.
September 5th, 2025 04:07
Amayla
sorenbarrett said:
Babies cuteness from evolution, they can not be resisted. A lovely poem about bundles of joy. Wonderfully done
September 4th, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
Babies cuteness from evolution, they can not be resisted. A lovely poem about bundles of joy. Wonderfully done
September 4th, 2025 04:57
A life long friend
sorenbarrett said:
A dedication to one I assume lost. Well done
August 24th, 2025 13:37
sorenbarrett said:
A dedication to one I assume lost. Well done
August 24th, 2025 13:37
A shiny rock called inclusion
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a criticism of change and development in society. Well written
August 21st, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a criticism of change and development in society. Well written
August 21st, 2025 04:38
Who can put U.S., out
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of outrage at the state of the nation and the divide that is inflicted on its citizens. Nicely done
August 16th, 2025 14:04
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of outrage at the state of the nation and the divide that is inflicted on its citizens. Nicely done
August 16th, 2025 14:04
Consciousness or cyborg
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly worded and rhymed this poem contains tongue in cheek questions that really are valid concerns about AI and future robotics. Very nicely done and a fave.
August 13th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly worded and rhymed this poem contains tongue in cheek questions that really are valid concerns about AI and future robotics. Very nicely done and a fave.
August 13th, 2025 04:30
Meditation over prayer
sorenbarrett said:
Nice internal rhyme within this write. It breaths as it speaks. Logic and reason are hard bed companions for children that would prefer a fairy tale.
July 27th, 2025 13:42
sorenbarrett said:
Nice internal rhyme within this write. It breaths as it speaks. Logic and reason are hard bed companions for children that would prefer a fairy tale.
July 27th, 2025 13:42
Life has been a slow crucifixion
sorenbarrett said:
Rap like this poem rocks but with a dark and bumpy road. Well done
July 19th, 2025 08:25
sorenbarrett said:
Rap like this poem rocks but with a dark and bumpy road. Well done
July 19th, 2025 08:25
Whose playbook is this
Priya Tomar said:
Last line very impressive.....
Very well....
July 18th, 2025 09:21
Priya Tomar said:
Last line very impressive.....
Very well....
July 18th, 2025 09:21
Knocked out
sorenbarrett said:
Never give up. Fighting from the canvas and in dreamland is a good example. There was a nice flow to the write.
July 17th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
Never give up. Fighting from the canvas and in dreamland is a good example. There was a nice flow to the write.
July 17th, 2025 04:05
A rising star
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly worded and mystical this poem works its miracle revealing its cryptic mystery of power. Lovely
July 13th, 2025 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly worded and mystical this poem works its miracle revealing its cryptic mystery of power. Lovely
July 13th, 2025 05:09
I want out
sorenbarrett said:
Time passes but little changes. So true it is and well stated.
July 12th, 2025 11:15
sorenbarrett said:
Time passes but little changes. So true it is and well stated.
July 12th, 2025 11:15
A Prison town
sorenbarrett said:
A thought provoking piece that puts a whole new twist on the term gangster. Interesting and something to think about
July 6th, 2025 09:43
sorenbarrett said:
A thought provoking piece that puts a whole new twist on the term gangster. Interesting and something to think about
July 6th, 2025 09:43
A spontaneous piece of light
Poetic Licence said:
A very interesting write of seeing god in today\'s world in a much different light, nicely Crafted write, enjoyed the read
July 3rd, 2025 05:45
Poetic Licence said:
A very interesting write of seeing god in today\'s world in a much different light, nicely Crafted write, enjoyed the read
July 3rd, 2025 05:45
A spontaneous piece of light
sorenbarrett said:
A most thought provoking write that equates God with light which is an old view but now in a new perspective as refracted different colored and bent it gives new meaning. Most creative and well written,
July 3rd, 2025 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
A most thought provoking write that equates God with light which is an old view but now in a new perspective as refracted different colored and bent it gives new meaning. Most creative and well written,
July 3rd, 2025 05:30
The Anunnaki crash
sorenbarrett said:
A fanciful poem, could it be a metaphor? Well written
July 1st, 2025 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
A fanciful poem, could it be a metaphor? Well written
July 1st, 2025 05:47
A mirror at the end of a dark corridor
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write with deep meaning, as they say if you have your health you are the richest man in the world, enjoyed the read
June 30th, 2025 23:48
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write with deep meaning, as they say if you have your health you are the richest man in the world, enjoyed the read
June 30th, 2025 23:48
A mirror at the end of a dark corridor
sorenbarrett said:
There is depth in this poem. Nicely worded and composed it speaks of gratitude and being content. Lovely
June 30th, 2025 18:33
sorenbarrett said:
There is depth in this poem. Nicely worded and composed it speaks of gratitude and being content. Lovely
June 30th, 2025 18:33
Peace God
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a mantra and a myth beautifully casting the wonder of poetry itself in the magic of words. Beautiful
June 29th, 2025 15:08
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a mantra and a myth beautifully casting the wonder of poetry itself in the magic of words. Beautiful
June 29th, 2025 15:08
Whose playbook is this
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing like an external war to keep the population in line with a heady brew of Patriotism Nationalism and Jingoism.
June 28th, 2025 17:20
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing like an external war to keep the population in line with a heady brew of Patriotism Nationalism and Jingoism.
June 28th, 2025 17:20
Whose playbook is this
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of political and social comment over current events and biblical implications. Well written
June 28th, 2025 11:35
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of political and social comment over current events and biblical implications. Well written
June 28th, 2025 11:35
Did nature just breed a cereal killer
Mutley Ravishes said:
I found seeing history through the lens of the four Hindu Yugas or Greek Ages (gold, silver, bronze, iron) to give a context as to what\'s happening now. What do you think?
June 25th, 2025 05:50
Mutley Ravishes said:
I found seeing history through the lens of the four Hindu Yugas or Greek Ages (gold, silver, bronze, iron) to give a context as to what\'s happening now. What do you think?
June 25th, 2025 05:50
Did nature just breed a cereal killer
sorenbarrett said:
Being human is nothing to be proud of. Makes a person wonder what it would have been like if something else had evolved in our place. Nice write
June 24th, 2025 17:05
sorenbarrett said:
Being human is nothing to be proud of. Makes a person wonder what it would have been like if something else had evolved in our place. Nice write
June 24th, 2025 17:05
A slave’s last master is his history
sorenbarrett said:
Rhyme that provokes thought. Reflections in poetry. Nicely done
June 24th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Rhyme that provokes thought. Reflections in poetry. Nicely done
June 24th, 2025 04:11
Celebrate to build or build to celebrate
sorenbarrett said:
Some great use of metaphor here (Punishments don\'t remove their crimes) A nicely penned piece
June 22nd, 2025 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
Some great use of metaphor here (Punishments don\'t remove their crimes) A nicely penned piece
June 22nd, 2025 04:04
The artificial take over
sorenbarrett said:
A great line (enjoyed the food but didn\'t ask to see the recipe) A most thought provoking poem well written
June 18th, 2025 05:22
sorenbarrett said:
A great line (enjoyed the food but didn\'t ask to see the recipe) A most thought provoking poem well written
June 18th, 2025 05:22
Civilitechnician?
sorenbarrett said:
Our progress in technology has far outstripped our progress in humanity or social development. Nicely written
June 16th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
Our progress in technology has far outstripped our progress in humanity or social development. Nicely written
June 16th, 2025 04:08
They still walk among us
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a sociopolitical feel and this is personalized in the main character of the poem. who sees what is naturally right as superseding man made law . Nicely done
June 12th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a sociopolitical feel and this is personalized in the main character of the poem. who sees what is naturally right as superseding man made law . Nicely done
June 12th, 2025 04:11
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