Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie
A Hollywood motivated future
Mutley Ravishes said:
Obi Wan
Would\'ve liked
This song!
December 18th, 2024 21:38
Mutley Ravishes said:
Obi Wan
Would\'ve liked
This song!
December 18th, 2024 21:38
A Hollywood motivated future
TobaniNataiella said:
Dealing with an issue that should be a concern for all and we have not heard the last of it, nicely written and strongly put.
December 18th, 2024 18:34
TobaniNataiella said:
Dealing with an issue that should be a concern for all and we have not heard the last of it, nicely written and strongly put.
December 18th, 2024 18:34
A bag of lies
TobaniNataiella said:
The old saying Keep your friends close, Your Enemies even closer, Thank you for the read
December 14th, 2024 01:24
TobaniNataiella said:
The old saying Keep your friends close, Your Enemies even closer, Thank you for the read
December 14th, 2024 01:24
After the brainwashing is done
sorenbarrett said:
This point makes its point. Nazis stand for and represent all that Americans should not like. Nevertheless, freedom of speech allows them to make their home in this place of freedom. Freedom is a loose word and means whatever the person that speaks to wants it to mean. Well written.
December 13th, 2024 09:58
sorenbarrett said:
This point makes its point. Nazis stand for and represent all that Americans should not like. Nevertheless, freedom of speech allows them to make their home in this place of freedom. Freedom is a loose word and means whatever the person that speaks to wants it to mean. Well written.
December 13th, 2024 09:58
After the brainwashing is done
MR.apocalypse said:
Words like Nazi and racist will lose their meaning if we don\'t use them correctly. It has already started to take on it\'s new form
December 13th, 2024 02:08
MR.apocalypse said:
Words like Nazi and racist will lose their meaning if we don\'t use them correctly. It has already started to take on it\'s new form
December 13th, 2024 02:08
The created
TobaniNataiella said:
A enjoyable and entertaining read, raises questions i am not sure we will ever know the answers to, to be fact, Thank you
December 12th, 2024 03:53
TobaniNataiella said:
A enjoyable and entertaining read, raises questions i am not sure we will ever know the answers to, to be fact, Thank you
December 12th, 2024 03:53
The created
Mutley Ravishes said:
You pack so much into your rhymes. And then there\'s the flow.
I guess the Cylons are coming, though their time will be short....?!
December 12th, 2024 02:15
Mutley Ravishes said:
You pack so much into your rhymes. And then there\'s the flow.
I guess the Cylons are coming, though their time will be short....?!
December 12th, 2024 02:15
A stubbed toe is criminal
TobaniNataiella said:
A serious message conveyed in a satirical way, enjoyed the read
December 11th, 2024 03:35
TobaniNataiella said:
A serious message conveyed in a satirical way, enjoyed the read
December 11th, 2024 03:35
How long is this chain
TobaniNataiella said:
Another powerful piece of writing, dealing with a very real issue, Thank you
December 10th, 2024 04:18
TobaniNataiella said:
Another powerful piece of writing, dealing with a very real issue, Thank you
December 10th, 2024 04:18
Egypt and Sumer were babies
TobaniNataiella said:
I like the message written within this poem, and i love the line Adams calender was our Big Ben, enjoyable read, Thank you
December 8th, 2024 17:29
TobaniNataiella said:
I like the message written within this poem, and i love the line Adams calender was our Big Ben, enjoyable read, Thank you
December 8th, 2024 17:29
Egypt and Sumer were babies
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the flow of this poem as well as the direction it took. On the surface light hearted but more profound underneath. Lovely
December 8th, 2024 15:48
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the flow of this poem as well as the direction it took. On the surface light hearted but more profound underneath. Lovely
December 8th, 2024 15:48
Purposeful denial is a science
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"the universe inside can be more demanding.\" Great line (and the title, too). I\'ve been thinking lately that the \"devils\" inside are the truly demanding ones, and not The Creator!
December 8th, 2024 04:30
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"the universe inside can be more demanding.\" Great line (and the title, too). I\'ve been thinking lately that the \"devils\" inside are the truly demanding ones, and not The Creator!
December 8th, 2024 04:30
Purposeful denial is a science
sorenbarrett said:
This poem was clever and its rhyme scheme while at the same time imparting a bit of wisdom. Very nicely done.
December 7th, 2024 14:11
sorenbarrett said:
This poem was clever and its rhyme scheme while at the same time imparting a bit of wisdom. Very nicely done.
December 7th, 2024 14:11
Purposeful denial is a science
sorenbarrett said:
This poem was clever and its rhyme scheme while at the same time in parting a bit of wisdom. Very nicely done.
December 7th, 2024 14:10
sorenbarrett said:
This poem was clever and its rhyme scheme while at the same time in parting a bit of wisdom. Very nicely done.
December 7th, 2024 14:10
Possessed by a poet
Doggerel Dave said:
That\'s the kind of poetry I like - truth and clarity. Well put.
December 7th, 2024 07:49
Doggerel Dave said:
That\'s the kind of poetry I like - truth and clarity. Well put.
December 7th, 2024 07:49
Mother Nature is not innocent
Doggerel Dave said:
Lovely piece of rhetoric, but really BS. The world evolved as did humans and the rest. Humans adapted to whatever environment was presented, then over time fucked it up.
December 6th, 2024 07:12
Doggerel Dave said:
Lovely piece of rhetoric, but really BS. The world evolved as did humans and the rest. Humans adapted to whatever environment was presented, then over time fucked it up.
December 6th, 2024 07:12
One of Life’s soliders hidden in the brush
sorenbarrett said:
The beat of each rhyming word is like the throb of one’s pulse. This poem runs along toward its end with a chug of a locomotive. Nicely written.
December 4th, 2024 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
The beat of each rhyming word is like the throb of one’s pulse. This poem runs along toward its end with a chug of a locomotive. Nicely written.
December 4th, 2024 05:18
What’s in the box; torture
Mutley Ravishes said:
The Mosquito Mafia
Got a lot to answer for
And their lieutenants
From Europe and Africa
To say nothing of Arabia
It’s been said that way back in the day
The European boreal forests
Were hunted for slaves
By ones from the South
Thank heavens
There is a beginning, middle,
And end
To everything except awareness
Of Being
November 29th, 2024 19:03
Mutley Ravishes said:
The Mosquito Mafia
Got a lot to answer for
And their lieutenants
From Europe and Africa
To say nothing of Arabia
It’s been said that way back in the day
The European boreal forests
Were hunted for slaves
By ones from the South
Thank heavens
There is a beginning, middle,
And end
To everything except awareness
Of Being
November 29th, 2024 19:03
What’s in the box; torture
sorenbarrett said:
A dark poem with beautiful internal rhymes. This poem screams out for vengeance and justice.
November 29th, 2024 12:12
sorenbarrett said:
A dark poem with beautiful internal rhymes. This poem screams out for vengeance and justice.
November 29th, 2024 12:12
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