Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie
In my dreams I’m a master
sorenbarrett said:
In meditation all things are possible and vision is enhanced. A lovely poem of that vision.
February 18th, 2025 06:59
sorenbarrett said:
In meditation all things are possible and vision is enhanced. A lovely poem of that vision.
February 18th, 2025 06:59
Confused and dying
sorenbarrett said:
Very well rhymed internally with great flow an very nice write
February 17th, 2025 13:42
sorenbarrett said:
Very well rhymed internally with great flow an very nice write
February 17th, 2025 13:42
Who is more civilized
sorenbarrett said:
With the rhyme and internal rhym as well as the meter it again sound so rap. Love it.
February 16th, 2025 19:00
sorenbarrett said:
With the rhyme and internal rhym as well as the meter it again sound so rap. Love it.
February 16th, 2025 19:00
Who’s behind the stereotypes
sorenbarrett said:
A rap indeed nicely poetic it gets its message across. A fun read
February 14th, 2025 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
A rap indeed nicely poetic it gets its message across. A fun read
February 14th, 2025 05:42
A reflection from behind
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great flow.
I admit
I don\'t know
What you are saying
I\'ll re-read it!
February 12th, 2025 18:42
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great flow.
I admit
I don\'t know
What you are saying
I\'ll re-read it!
February 12th, 2025 18:42
A reflection from behind
sorenbarrett said:
This poem\'s cadence struck me as a rap and rap it did. Very nicely written
February 12th, 2025 07:38
sorenbarrett said:
This poem\'s cadence struck me as a rap and rap it did. Very nicely written
February 12th, 2025 07:38
A reflection from behind
teardrop said:
I really enjoyed reading this and it put a smile on my face. Thank you for the read.
February 12th, 2025 01:34
teardrop said:
I really enjoyed reading this and it put a smile on my face. Thank you for the read.
February 12th, 2025 01:34
When sleeping gods awaken
Mutley Ravishes said:
I sometimes wonder, if \"God\" is an all knowing Being then why would It need a universe(s?!) to \"know\" Itself? A teacher once said that one needs a mirror to know oneself. So, do we have a Being that is all-knowing and at the same time doesn\'t know Itself?! I have no idea!
I remember another teacher saying that this universe is the 84th in a series of 112. He was then asked what is the outcome of number 112? He answered that 112 will be \"fully conscious.\" If that is true then we have a long ways to go!
Mind-opening rhyme!
January 20th, 2025 19:10
Mutley Ravishes said:
I sometimes wonder, if \"God\" is an all knowing Being then why would It need a universe(s?!) to \"know\" Itself? A teacher once said that one needs a mirror to know oneself. So, do we have a Being that is all-knowing and at the same time doesn\'t know Itself?! I have no idea!
I remember another teacher saying that this universe is the 84th in a series of 112. He was then asked what is the outcome of number 112? He answered that 112 will be \"fully conscious.\" If that is true then we have a long ways to go!
Mind-opening rhyme!
January 20th, 2025 19:10
Power over power?
Mutley Ravishes said:
That guy was babbling. Ignorance reigns supreme.
Great work!
January 10th, 2025 18:41
Mutley Ravishes said:
That guy was babbling. Ignorance reigns supreme.
Great work!
January 10th, 2025 18:41
Power over power?
Poetic Licence said:
It is easier for them to make excuses rather than take any positive action, well expressed
January 10th, 2025 13:19
Poetic Licence said:
It is easier for them to make excuses rather than take any positive action, well expressed
January 10th, 2025 13:19
How far behind are we
Mutley Ravishes said:
It\'s been said that long distance space travel is denied to folks at a certain \"level of consciousness.\" Lets hope that\'s true!
Great write.
January 6th, 2025 01:08
Mutley Ravishes said:
It\'s been said that long distance space travel is denied to folks at a certain \"level of consciousness.\" Lets hope that\'s true!
Great write.
January 6th, 2025 01:08
The one in us all
Mutley Ravishes said:
Manjushri’s wielding his sword!
Great write.
December 31st, 2024 19:05
Mutley Ravishes said:
Manjushri’s wielding his sword!
Great write.
December 31st, 2024 19:05
Christmas at mom’s house
Mutley Ravishes said:
Beautifully written.
What if the Santa story is hinting at something, i.e beliefs and receiving presents?!
Merry Christmas!
December 24th, 2024 18:40
Mutley Ravishes said:
Beautifully written.
What if the Santa story is hinting at something, i.e beliefs and receiving presents?!
Merry Christmas!
December 24th, 2024 18:40
Christmas at mom’s house
sorenbarrett said:
A seasonal poem blended with fond memories and relationships. Love the internal rhymes and general flow of the poem. Merry Christmas to you
December 24th, 2024 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
A seasonal poem blended with fond memories and relationships. Love the internal rhymes and general flow of the poem. Merry Christmas to you
December 24th, 2024 14:38
Christmas at mom’s house
Poetic Licence said:
Lovely memories of a loving Mother, nicely worded.
December 24th, 2024 14:19
Poetic Licence said:
Lovely memories of a loving Mother, nicely worded.
December 24th, 2024 14:19
It’s only two ways out
sorenbarrett said:
Rapid fire rhymes spit fire and some good ones too. Nicely done
December 24th, 2024 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
Rapid fire rhymes spit fire and some good ones too. Nicely done
December 24th, 2024 03:40
It’s only two ways out
rin said:
I want to be able to live cheerfully even in chaos, but it\'s difficult.
``Tenderness to You\\\\\\\'\\\\\\\' After reading this, I want you to post these words in the comments of other poems and spread them around like chain mail.
December 24th, 2024 01:23
rin said:
I want to be able to live cheerfully even in chaos, but it\'s difficult.
``Tenderness to You\\\\\\\'\\\\\\\' After reading this, I want you to post these words in the comments of other poems and spread them around like chain mail.
December 24th, 2024 01:23
A Hollywood motivated future
Mutley Ravishes said:
Obi Wan
Would\'ve liked
This song!
December 18th, 2024 21:38
Mutley Ravishes said:
Obi Wan
Would\'ve liked
This song!
December 18th, 2024 21:38
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