Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie
Explicable descent
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that showed multiple rhymes and a running meter. Nicely done.
November 30th, 2025 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that showed multiple rhymes and a running meter. Nicely done.
November 30th, 2025 03:53
Is it seppuku
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write of internal processes involved in the process (at least this one) Nicely written
November 29th, 2025 16:25
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write of internal processes involved in the process (at least this one) Nicely written
November 29th, 2025 16:25
God’s flaws
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and well worded this poem reflects on mankind and God and the relationship between the two. A lovely write.
November 27th, 2025 14:07
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and well worded this poem reflects on mankind and God and the relationship between the two. A lovely write.
November 27th, 2025 14:07
Of equal minds
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this write with its cleverly woven meaning in metaphor. The conflict between the religious and scientific mind. Nicely done and a fave
November 24th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this write with its cleverly woven meaning in metaphor. The conflict between the religious and scientific mind. Nicely done and a fave
November 24th, 2025 04:16
Power hungry
2781 said:
It makes me think of that golden rule - do unto others as you would have other do unto you.
Unfortunately hypocrisy has its way.
November 22nd, 2025 09:14
2781 said:
It makes me think of that golden rule - do unto others as you would have other do unto you.
Unfortunately hypocrisy has its way.
November 22nd, 2025 09:14
Power hungry
sorenbarrett said:
Here we have a poetic write of balance and its justification. Nicely said there must be a balance in all things although human eye does not always perceive it. Nicely done
November 22nd, 2025 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
Here we have a poetic write of balance and its justification. Nicely said there must be a balance in all things although human eye does not always perceive it. Nicely done
November 22nd, 2025 03:51
Born Helper or hinderer
Demar Desu said:
Being conscious while you dream… Lucid poem
November 18th, 2025 05:00
Demar Desu said:
Being conscious while you dream… Lucid poem
November 18th, 2025 05:00
Born Helper or hinderer
sorenbarrett said:
The awesome spectacle of being human and mere existence. The very being of being a human being. Lovely
November 17th, 2025 20:53
sorenbarrett said:
The awesome spectacle of being human and mere existence. The very being of being a human being. Lovely
November 17th, 2025 20:53
Infinity in its infancy
Soman Ragavan said:
I am impressed by the expressions English-speaking people come up with sometimes. “Infinity in its infancy” implies that infinity has just started. We can recall the song “Total eclipse of the heart” by Bonnie Tyler, with the words “Forever is going to start tonight…” Another example in the poem : “Spontaneous spontaneity…”
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November 10th, 2025 22:12
Soman Ragavan said:
I am impressed by the expressions English-speaking people come up with sometimes. “Infinity in its infancy” implies that infinity has just started. We can recall the song “Total eclipse of the heart” by Bonnie Tyler, with the words “Forever is going to start tonight…” Another example in the poem : “Spontaneous spontaneity…”
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November 10th, 2025 22:12
Infinity in its infancy
sorenbarrett said:
A great write of a view from our limited perspective where there are only three dimensions or four if you count time. Nicely done
November 10th, 2025 21:13
sorenbarrett said:
A great write of a view from our limited perspective where there are only three dimensions or four if you count time. Nicely done
November 10th, 2025 21:13
Religious Parasite
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - \'useful confusion\' is the order of the day, and swathes of the population are in that very condition.
October 21st, 2025 19:55
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - \'useful confusion\' is the order of the day, and swathes of the population are in that very condition.
October 21st, 2025 19:55
Religious Parasite
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording woven around a poignant theme with a difficult word to rhyme or even near rhyme. All together this makes for a most interesting, entertaining and educational poem regarding the present state of affairs in the world. It could well be a rap. Nicely done
October 21st, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording woven around a poignant theme with a difficult word to rhyme or even near rhyme. All together this makes for a most interesting, entertaining and educational poem regarding the present state of affairs in the world. It could well be a rap. Nicely done
October 21st, 2025 04:42
Abuse of powers
sorenbarrett said:
Contradictions in everything is addressed in this poem of irony and maybe satire. A intellectual read.
October 19th, 2025 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
Contradictions in everything is addressed in this poem of irony and maybe satire. A intellectual read.
October 19th, 2025 04:44
We lie around truths
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, We\'re here because we\'re here is all we will ever know - the rest is interesting embroidery,
Good to see it put out there.
October 18th, 2025 16:49
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, We\'re here because we\'re here is all we will ever know - the rest is interesting embroidery,
Good to see it put out there.
October 18th, 2025 16:49
We lie around truths
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
These are powerful questions no one has answer for yet... Nicely done.
October 18th, 2025 12:59
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
These are powerful questions no one has answer for yet... Nicely done.
October 18th, 2025 12:59
We lie around truths
sorenbarrett said:
It is the message that gets the fave in this poem that weaves rhyme with reason. Deep it its philosophy it may be taken at different levels and in different ways with a question that has been asked by so many, with so many answers and none final. Well done
October 18th, 2025 08:41
sorenbarrett said:
It is the message that gets the fave in this poem that weaves rhyme with reason. Deep it its philosophy it may be taken at different levels and in different ways with a question that has been asked by so many, with so many answers and none final. Well done
October 18th, 2025 08:41
An evil book deified
sorenbarrett said:
The mind is a powerful influence on outcome good or bad if there is such a thing as good and bad except in the mind. Never the less a controller over actions it is.
October 13th, 2025 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
The mind is a powerful influence on outcome good or bad if there is such a thing as good and bad except in the mind. Never the less a controller over actions it is.
October 13th, 2025 04:01
Spiritual deformities
sorenbarrett said:
Everything must be the maximum, super sized so to speak. Why must we always be the biggest, best, first. That old survival instinct of never content spawning greed. Well written
October 12th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Everything must be the maximum, super sized so to speak. Why must we always be the biggest, best, first. That old survival instinct of never content spawning greed. Well written
October 12th, 2025 04:22
Sister mediator
Doggerel Dave said:
Standing, arm out at ninety degrees, hand up and open, attempt to keep thumb below palm level. Six? Eight? Had to be left hand - right preserved for writing, otherwise more trouble....
Kids saved - doesn\'t have to be intergenerational.
Not sure I can thank you for reviving that memory....
Great write, though 👍
October 3rd, 2025 20:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Standing, arm out at ninety degrees, hand up and open, attempt to keep thumb below palm level. Six? Eight? Had to be left hand - right preserved for writing, otherwise more trouble....
Kids saved - doesn\'t have to be intergenerational.
Not sure I can thank you for reviving that memory....
Great write, though 👍
October 3rd, 2025 20:25
Sister mediator
sorenbarrett said:
Past trauma prevents corporal punishment in this poem. I remember when in grade school the BOARD OF EDUCATION a large paddle with holes drilled in it
October 3rd, 2025 13:15
sorenbarrett said:
Past trauma prevents corporal punishment in this poem. I remember when in grade school the BOARD OF EDUCATION a large paddle with holes drilled in it
October 3rd, 2025 13:15
Can my brother be my keeper
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful set of rhyme in this poem intricate and flowing it makes sense. A very nice write
September 30th, 2025 19:07
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful set of rhyme in this poem intricate and flowing it makes sense. A very nice write
September 30th, 2025 19:07
The making of a sociopath
Keeter C said:
The only one who made it to heaven is he that came from it. The rest have yet to happen. Don’t give up.
September 27th, 2025 12:40
Keeter C said:
The only one who made it to heaven is he that came from it. The rest have yet to happen. Don’t give up.
September 27th, 2025 12:40
The making of a sociopath
Doggerel Dave said:
Sociopath? Feels pretty right to me..............
September 22nd, 2025 16:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Sociopath? Feels pretty right to me..............
September 22nd, 2025 16:47
The making of a sociopath
sorenbarrett said:
The poem speaks of religious doubts and lack of proof. Nicely written.
September 22nd, 2025 11:13
sorenbarrett said:
The poem speaks of religious doubts and lack of proof. Nicely written.
September 22nd, 2025 11:13
Incoming Destructive Design
Doggerel Dave said:
It\'s the comet, I find when I sussed it out - you\'re way ahead of me. But a brilliant Five line crit of the state of our \'civilization\' . And if it did hit the president\'s mattress plus President the state would have a difficult time executing that one.
September 15th, 2025 18:37
Doggerel Dave said:
It\'s the comet, I find when I sussed it out - you\'re way ahead of me. But a brilliant Five line crit of the state of our \'civilization\' . And if it did hit the president\'s mattress plus President the state would have a difficult time executing that one.
September 15th, 2025 18:37
Incoming Destructive Design
sorenbarrett said:
Hubris greatest sin of the gods is also ours. A lovely write.
September 15th, 2025 15:44
sorenbarrett said:
Hubris greatest sin of the gods is also ours. A lovely write.
September 15th, 2025 15:44
I have thresholds to cross
sorenbarrett said:
Some individuals have achieved unbelievable control over many autonomic and involuntary systems but it is far easier if you can see what you are controlling. Biofeedback works for some, some are able to achieve it with meditation and relaxation training. A great read.
September 5th, 2025 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
Some individuals have achieved unbelievable control over many autonomic and involuntary systems but it is far easier if you can see what you are controlling. Biofeedback works for some, some are able to achieve it with meditation and relaxation training. A great read.
September 5th, 2025 04:07
Amayla
sorenbarrett said:
Babies cuteness from evolution, they can not be resisted. A lovely poem about bundles of joy. Wonderfully done
September 4th, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
Babies cuteness from evolution, they can not be resisted. A lovely poem about bundles of joy. Wonderfully done
September 4th, 2025 04:57
A life long friend
sorenbarrett said:
A dedication to one I assume lost. Well done
August 24th, 2025 13:37
sorenbarrett said:
A dedication to one I assume lost. Well done
August 24th, 2025 13:37
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