Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Black Hearted Narcissists
sorenbarrett said:
Such an interesting combination black hearted and narcissism that recipe seem to be antisocial or what we used to call a psychopath. A good read
December 22nd, 2025 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Such an interesting combination black hearted and narcissism that recipe seem to be antisocial or what we used to call a psychopath. A good read
December 22nd, 2025 04:19
Born Anew
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this reads like a confession in motion. Anger, doubt, resolve, and longing all coexist, circling the idea of being “born anew” not as a finish line but as a slow, unfinished process. That honesty is its strength. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 21st, 2025 12:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this reads like a confession in motion. Anger, doubt, resolve, and longing all coexist, circling the idea of being “born anew” not as a finish line but as a slow, unfinished process. That honesty is its strength. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 21st, 2025 12:40
Born Anew
orchidee said:
Yet we are born anew - or \'born from above\' or \'born again\' - once we receive the Holy Spirit. This can come at the same time as accepting salvation or may come at a separate time. This is how I see it. I suppose one knows they are born, that they are alive - even a certain character who has gone home could know this. We knows him. lol.
December 21st, 2025 11:13
orchidee said:
Yet we are born anew - or \'born from above\' or \'born again\' - once we receive the Holy Spirit. This can come at the same time as accepting salvation or may come at a separate time. This is how I see it. I suppose one knows they are born, that they are alive - even a certain character who has gone home could know this. We knows him. lol.
December 21st, 2025 11:13
Born Anew
sorenbarrett said:
This poem uses the term born in a religious manner that then would make sense in the terms of feeling different since born. Nicely written
December 21st, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
This poem uses the term born in a religious manner that then would make sense in the terms of feeling different since born. Nicely written
December 21st, 2025 04:37
God, Please
orchidee said:
I fell by the wayside, then fell over the clllliiiifffffffffffff - do ya hear me falling?! lol. I was The Birdman.
December 20th, 2025 10:37
orchidee said:
I fell by the wayside, then fell over the clllliiiifffffffffffff - do ya hear me falling?! lol. I was The Birdman.
December 20th, 2025 10:37
God, Please
Tristan Robert Lange said:
God please, indeed. Well written and relatable, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 20th, 2025 09:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
God please, indeed. Well written and relatable, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 20th, 2025 09:20
God, Please
sorenbarrett said:
This poem deals with temptations that like sugar rot the teeth. Heath resides in the strength to resist the urge. Well written
December 20th, 2025 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
This poem deals with temptations that like sugar rot the teeth. Heath resides in the strength to resist the urge. Well written
December 20th, 2025 05:04
I Feel For Those Suffering
NinjaGirl said:
How angry do we have to be before we do something about it? How many of us have to be mad before change happens? The comfortable never fight back. Fantastic message in a poem, well written!
December 15th, 2025 22:53
NinjaGirl said:
How angry do we have to be before we do something about it? How many of us have to be mad before change happens? The comfortable never fight back. Fantastic message in a poem, well written!
December 15th, 2025 22:53
I Feel For Those Suffering
orchidee said:
Is that why a certain alien went home? heehee.
December 15th, 2025 15:41
orchidee said:
Is that why a certain alien went home? heehee.
December 15th, 2025 15:41
I Feel For Those Suffering
Paul Bell said:
Complacency, indifference, we\'re all guilty.
The world is changing at a rate of knots we can\'t keep up with, so we end up in limbo.
December 15th, 2025 11:31
Paul Bell said:
Complacency, indifference, we\'re all guilty.
The world is changing at a rate of knots we can\'t keep up with, so we end up in limbo.
December 15th, 2025 11:31
I Feel For Those Suffering
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line that gives chills. Complacency is the great villain and the turning of the head not wanting to see or get involved. There is not enough support for the good Samaritan instead they are drug into a nightmare of red tape and publicity that ruins their day if not life. A sad poem
December 15th, 2025 11:12
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line that gives chills. Complacency is the great villain and the turning of the head not wanting to see or get involved. There is not enough support for the good Samaritan instead they are drug into a nightmare of red tape and publicity that ruins their day if not life. A sad poem
December 15th, 2025 11:12
Noisy Neighbours
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LOL! Fight fire with fire! Great Metallica song! Not sure it\'s wise advice, but a killer song off a killer album! LOL! Love this, my friend! Very relatable, indeed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 14th, 2025 09:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LOL! Fight fire with fire! Great Metallica song! Not sure it\'s wise advice, but a killer song off a killer album! LOL! Love this, my friend! Very relatable, indeed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 14th, 2025 09:09
Noisy Neighbours
sorenbarrett said:
Identifiable yes in a world of crowed people where each lives their life in disregard. Well worded it makes its noise
December 14th, 2025 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
Identifiable yes in a world of crowed people where each lives their life in disregard. Well worded it makes its noise
December 14th, 2025 05:19
Good And Evil
Tristan Robert Lange said:
George Washington was a freemason too. I\'m wondering, do freemasons do masonry for free? I\'m in need of a brick wall. 🤣 Of course, one could always join the Knights of Columbus! 🤣 All that silliness aside, this was a fun poem, mate. You really rock with rhythm. I can hear the poem as I am reading it. You\'re truly talented. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 13th, 2025 13:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
George Washington was a freemason too. I\'m wondering, do freemasons do masonry for free? I\'m in need of a brick wall. 🤣 Of course, one could always join the Knights of Columbus! 🤣 All that silliness aside, this was a fun poem, mate. You really rock with rhythm. I can hear the poem as I am reading it. You\'re truly talented. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 13th, 2025 13:17
Good And Evil
orchidee said:
Good write SM. I shouldn\'t think a certain alien is evil. We knows him! lol.
December 13th, 2025 12:16
orchidee said:
Good write SM. I shouldn\'t think a certain alien is evil. We knows him! lol.
December 13th, 2025 12:16
Good And Evil
sorenbarrett said:
This poem incorporates a bit of fantasy with a bit of reality and the merger gives pleasure to the poem
December 13th, 2025 08:09
sorenbarrett said:
This poem incorporates a bit of fantasy with a bit of reality and the merger gives pleasure to the poem
December 13th, 2025 08:09
Sean Combs: The Reckoning
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that calls for justice for a story not believed. Well written
December 11th, 2025 15:51
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that calls for justice for a story not believed. Well written
December 11th, 2025 15:51
New Rhymes
orchidee said:
You know that Mr Fat?! lol. Sounds like one of The Mister Men.
December 11th, 2025 03:46
orchidee said:
You know that Mr Fat?! lol. Sounds like one of The Mister Men.
December 11th, 2025 03:46
New Rhymes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Chow Yun Fat! Wow! A name I have not heard in quite some time. Great write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 10th, 2025 19:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Chow Yun Fat! Wow! A name I have not heard in quite some time. Great write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 10th, 2025 19:00
New Rhymes
sorenbarrett said:
If you put that all together it is frightening where does the time go? A good write
December 10th, 2025 17:28
sorenbarrett said:
If you put that all together it is frightening where does the time go? A good write
December 10th, 2025 17:28
What Happened? (Part.2)
sorenbarrett said:
A sad situation where the world has to walk on egg shells and where people are backstabbing and ignoring. Well written my friend
December 7th, 2025 09:30
sorenbarrett said:
A sad situation where the world has to walk on egg shells and where people are backstabbing and ignoring. Well written my friend
December 7th, 2025 09:30
What Happened? (Part.2)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Good question in the opening line. Fun fact, we all know what happened after 2016. 🍊😱 Forgive the indulgence! 🤣 Couldn\'t resist. 🤷♂️ But yeah, the shite is going down the toilet it seems, anymore! And the pandemic DID NOT help...though it was not the start of it. Great write with great questions, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 7th, 2025 09:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Good question in the opening line. Fun fact, we all know what happened after 2016. 🍊😱 Forgive the indulgence! 🤣 Couldn\'t resist. 🤷♂️ But yeah, the shite is going down the toilet it seems, anymore! And the pandemic DID NOT help...though it was not the start of it. Great write with great questions, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 7th, 2025 09:13
What Happened? (Part.2)
orchidee said:
Erm, yes, I knew a hostile guy (did I? lol). I said Hello to him. he replied \'What do you mean hello? I\'ll punch you on the nose for that!\' (lol).
December 7th, 2025 08:01
orchidee said:
Erm, yes, I knew a hostile guy (did I? lol). I said Hello to him. he replied \'What do you mean hello? I\'ll punch you on the nose for that!\' (lol).
December 7th, 2025 08:01
What Happened? (Part.2)
Paul Bell said:
Yes, the freedom of speech now has permissions attached to it, this is called, Starmers law.
One must be careful saying hello now in case it causes offence, and definitely shouldn\'t make comments on FB which can get you jailed.
However, you can pretend to be selling cryptocurrency and get away with it.
December 7th, 2025 07:27
Paul Bell said:
Yes, the freedom of speech now has permissions attached to it, this is called, Starmers law.
One must be careful saying hello now in case it causes offence, and definitely shouldn\'t make comments on FB which can get you jailed.
However, you can pretend to be selling cryptocurrency and get away with it.
December 7th, 2025 07:27
An Open Letter To Jay-Z
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I wish these creeps would just leave poor Baphomet alone. It\'s bad enough his existence was created to burn opponents of the Pope to the stake, but now he\'s got to be hangng in creep cribs too? He just wants to friggin\' retire and find his creator, like the creature in Mary Shelley\'s Frankenstein, or a Modern Prometheus🤣. All jokes aside, the whole Diddy thing is so messed up, baby oil and all, that yikes...I wouldn\'t want to be anyone within a 50 million miles of his orbit, let alone how close Jay-Z was. Anyway, well written, my friend. I am not sure who did or didn\'t do what, but let justice roll on anyone doing evil.
December 5th, 2025 10:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I wish these creeps would just leave poor Baphomet alone. It\'s bad enough his existence was created to burn opponents of the Pope to the stake, but now he\'s got to be hangng in creep cribs too? He just wants to friggin\' retire and find his creator, like the creature in Mary Shelley\'s Frankenstein, or a Modern Prometheus🤣. All jokes aside, the whole Diddy thing is so messed up, baby oil and all, that yikes...I wouldn\'t want to be anyone within a 50 million miles of his orbit, let alone how close Jay-Z was. Anyway, well written, my friend. I am not sure who did or didn\'t do what, but let justice roll on anyone doing evil.
December 5th, 2025 10:56
An Open Letter To Jay-Z
sorenbarrett said:
A call out poem and very well worded and laid out. A good read
December 5th, 2025 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
A call out poem and very well worded and laid out. A good read
December 5th, 2025 04:21
An Open Letter To Jay-Z
orchidee said:
Oh, I don\'t know the guy much. Should I get to know him more? Or is he shifty and dodgy? lol.
December 5th, 2025 04:05
orchidee said:
Oh, I don\'t know the guy much. Should I get to know him more? Or is he shifty and dodgy? lol.
December 5th, 2025 04:05
Random Rhyming (Part.6)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love Tron...but would not want to be stuck in its world! LOL! Well done on this, my friend!
December 4th, 2025 17:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love Tron...but would not want to be stuck in its world! LOL! Well done on this, my friend!
December 4th, 2025 17:19
Random Rhyming (Part.6)
sorenbarrett said:
They already have us in that matrix not knowing what to believe is it fake is it real what is real anyway. Do I believe them do I believe me, do I believe nothing. What is fake, real or CGI. Falsified pictures, invented stories I can\'t even believe what I see with my own eyes. There they got us confused and uncertain. Well written.
December 4th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
They already have us in that matrix not knowing what to believe is it fake is it real what is real anyway. Do I believe them do I believe me, do I believe nothing. What is fake, real or CGI. Falsified pictures, invented stories I can\'t even believe what I see with my own eyes. There they got us confused and uncertain. Well written.
December 4th, 2025 04:29
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