Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Self-entitled
orchidee said:
I not seen any flying books! heehee. A Carry On film has a naughty line:\' A couple are annoyed with their cat who has taken up a chair. They say they call the cat \'Cooking Fat\'. Oops! (geddit?).
September 13th, 2026 09:17
orchidee said:
I not seen any flying books! heehee. A Carry On film has a naughty line:\' A couple are annoyed with their cat who has taken up a chair. They say they call the cat \'Cooking Fat\'. Oops! (geddit?).
September 13th, 2026 09:17
Self-entitled
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and most respectful but totally recognizable. A fun read it speaks to me and a fave
September 13th, 2026 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and most respectful but totally recognizable. A fun read it speaks to me and a fave
September 13th, 2026 04:00
Life Is A Learning Curve
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is one hell of a ride! ๐ Health problems, delayed deliveries, divine agency, and questionable carbohydrates all collide in six gloriously unpredictable lines. Thoroughly entertaining, my friend! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
September 12th, 2026 09:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is one hell of a ride! ๐ Health problems, delayed deliveries, divine agency, and questionable carbohydrates all collide in six gloriously unpredictable lines. Thoroughly entertaining, my friend! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
September 12th, 2026 09:17
Life Is A Learning Curve
sorenbarrett said:
You are so right some things are not meant to go together. Nicely written
September 12th, 2026 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
You are so right some things are not meant to go together. Nicely written
September 12th, 2026 04:04
A Spiritual Cost
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A strong, necessary piece, my friend. Character is revealed in how we treat people from whom we have nothing to gain. Cruelty always diminishes the person delivering it...whether consequences arrive visibly or not. Excellent write. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
September 11th, 2026 09:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A strong, necessary piece, my friend. Character is revealed in how we treat people from whom we have nothing to gain. Cruelty always diminishes the person delivering it...whether consequences arrive visibly or not. Excellent write. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
September 11th, 2026 09:09
A Spiritual Cost
sorenbarrett said:
Disdain has always bothered me and I thought should be included in one of the seven deadly sins as it requires judging others and a sense of arrogance. Well written my friend
September 11th, 2026 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
Disdain has always bothered me and I thought should be included in one of the seven deadly sins as it requires judging others and a sense of arrogance. Well written my friend
September 11th, 2026 04:20
A Spiritual Cost
orchidee said:
I can\'t say either of those two look like....... we knows him! e.g. Eddie Taylor. lol.
September 11th, 2026 01:33
orchidee said:
I can\'t say either of those two look like....... we knows him! e.g. Eddie Taylor. lol.
September 11th, 2026 01:33
Don\'t Catch Feelings
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this captures the battle between remaining openhearted and surviving repeated betrayal. The anger sounds resolute, but the pain underneath gives the poem its real power...those defenses were earned. Excellent write. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
September 10th, 2026 21:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this captures the battle between remaining openhearted and surviving repeated betrayal. The anger sounds resolute, but the pain underneath gives the poem its real power...those defenses were earned. Excellent write. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
September 10th, 2026 21:31
Don\'t Catch Feelings
sorenbarrett said:
A nice write of what we give up and what we sell or trade for pleasure. Well written Shaun
September 10th, 2026 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
A nice write of what we give up and what we sell or trade for pleasure. Well written Shaun
September 10th, 2026 04:04
Writing Is My Therapy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is raw as hell. The struggle is real, the faith is hard-won, and writing becomes the place where you reclaim your own voice. I felt the fight throughout this, bro...and I relate, writing has helped me reclaim my voice too. Powerful work! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
September 9th, 2026 08:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is raw as hell. The struggle is real, the faith is hard-won, and writing becomes the place where you reclaim your own voice. I felt the fight throughout this, bro...and I relate, writing has helped me reclaim my voice too. Powerful work! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
September 9th, 2026 08:17
Writing Is My Therapy
sorenbarrett said:
Some things don\'t change like cement once set. Nicely written
September 9th, 2026 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
Some things don\'t change like cement once set. Nicely written
September 9th, 2026 04:39
Obsession (Contains Spoilers)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dark and unsettling, my friend! You capture the point where longing becomes control and another personโs humanity gets erased. That violation of agency is far more frightening than the supernatural device itself. Nicely done, Shaunmatthewcpoetry! My oldest daughter has seen this and said it is really good. Will be checking it out myself. Looks scary af. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
September 8th, 2026 08:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dark and unsettling, my friend! You capture the point where longing becomes control and another personโs humanity gets erased. That violation of agency is far more frightening than the supernatural device itself. Nicely done, Shaunmatthewcpoetry! My oldest daughter has seen this and said it is really good. Will be checking it out myself. Looks scary af. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
September 8th, 2026 08:49
Obsession (Contains Spoilers)
orchidee said:
I don\'t know the movie. Won\'t have to watch it now, seeing as you\'ve \'spoilt\' it for us! lol.
September 8th, 2026 08:46
orchidee said:
I don\'t know the movie. Won\'t have to watch it now, seeing as you\'ve \'spoilt\' it for us! lol.
September 8th, 2026 08:46
Obsession (Contains Spoilers)
sorenbarrett said:
A good movie review in poetic form. Loved it
September 8th, 2026 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
A good movie review in poetic form. Loved it
September 8th, 2026 04:02
The Fruit Of The Spirit (Self Control)
orchidee said:
Good write SM, but I don\'t think demons look like that. Neither does..... oh, we know him! lol.
September 7th, 2026 09:08
orchidee said:
Good write SM, but I don\'t think demons look like that. Neither does..... oh, we know him! lol.
September 7th, 2026 09:08
The Fruit Of The Spirit (Self Control)
sorenbarrett said:
Looking for a little outside help this poem speaks of angels and demons as outside forces. Nicely written with rhyme.
September 7th, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Looking for a little outside help this poem speaks of angels and demons as outside forces. Nicely written with rhyme.
September 7th, 2026 04:19
The Backwards Man (Part.2)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
One heck of a follow-up, Shaun. The absurdity keeps it fun, but underneath it thereโs a real refusal to surrender judgment to politicians, crowds, or received wisdom. Heel to toe indeed. ๐ Really enjoyed this, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
September 6th, 2026 13:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
One heck of a follow-up, Shaun. The absurdity keeps it fun, but underneath it thereโs a real refusal to surrender judgment to politicians, crowds, or received wisdom. Heel to toe indeed. ๐ Really enjoyed this, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
September 6th, 2026 13:05
The Backwards Man (Part.2)
sorenbarrett said:
There is definite discontentment in this write and a challenge to others to think about the present situation. Well said
September 6th, 2026 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
There is definite discontentment in this write and a challenge to others to think about the present situation. Well said
September 6th, 2026 05:01
The Backwards Man (Part.2)
orchidee said:
Good write SM. You know sensei Sam? Is he related to - oh, we knows him, a certain guy! lol.
September 6th, 2026 03:11
orchidee said:
Good write SM. You know sensei Sam? Is he related to - oh, we knows him, a certain guy! lol.
September 6th, 2026 03:11
I\'ve Got Rhymes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this comes charging out of the gate. Thereโs defiance, humor, recovery, and a whole lot of attitude packed into a relatively short spaceโฆdefinitely one with some teeth. Strong write, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
September 5th, 2026 20:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this comes charging out of the gate. Thereโs defiance, humor, recovery, and a whole lot of attitude packed into a relatively short spaceโฆdefinitely one with some teeth. Strong write, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
September 5th, 2026 20:13
Just Let It Go Over Your Head
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Strong piece, Shaun. Thereโs a blunt wisdom in this that works really wellโฆkeeping your peace instead of handing someone else control of your mood is easier said than done, but worth learning. Great job on this, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
September 5th, 2026 19:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Strong piece, Shaun. Thereโs a blunt wisdom in this that works really wellโฆkeeping your peace instead of handing someone else control of your mood is easier said than done, but worth learning. Great job on this, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
September 5th, 2026 19:47
I\'ve Got Rhymes
orchidee said:
Good write SM. I thought this was gonna be about the re-showing of Neighbours on telly: Return of the living dead.... lol. Is Bouncer the dog in it still? The only non-wooden actor in it. lol.
September 5th, 2026 04:43
orchidee said:
Good write SM. I thought this was gonna be about the re-showing of Neighbours on telly: Return of the living dead.... lol. Is Bouncer the dog in it still? The only non-wooden actor in it. lol.
September 5th, 2026 04:43
I\'ve Got Rhymes
sorenbarrett said:
I really like the bars in this poem Shaun the fit well and have good flow it gets a fave my friend
September 5th, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
I really like the bars in this poem Shaun the fit well and have good flow it gets a fave my friend
September 5th, 2026 04:19
Just Let It Go Over Your Head
orchidee said:
That E.T. surfing over your head there?! lol.
September 4th, 2026 07:52
orchidee said:
That E.T. surfing over your head there?! lol.
September 4th, 2026 07:52
Just Let It Go Over Your Head
sorenbarrett said:
Good words of advice in this poem that sends it message of take it easy and don\'t let other upset us. Nicely said Shaun
September 4th, 2026 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
Good words of advice in this poem that sends it message of take it easy and don\'t let other upset us. Nicely said Shaun
September 4th, 2026 03:41
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