Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
A Walk Into Town
sorenbarrett said:
Quite descriptive in its imagery it seems a literal poetic painting yet something nags at my mind asking about the possible metaphor involved in this picture. Fallen tree, narrow passage, society on the other side, could there be?
November 1st, 2025 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
Quite descriptive in its imagery it seems a literal poetic painting yet something nags at my mind asking about the possible metaphor involved in this picture. Fallen tree, narrow passage, society on the other side, could there be?
November 1st, 2025 04:21
A Walk Into Town
orchidee said:
I\'ve had to turn back on walks sometimes - trees that have fallen, and I cannot get over nor under them.
November 1st, 2025 02:52
orchidee said:
I\'ve had to turn back on walks sometimes - trees that have fallen, and I cannot get over nor under them.
November 1st, 2025 02:52
Let Me Write
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LET ME WRITE. A-friggin\'-men! Man, I cannot tell you how much I needed to read this tonight. Thank you, my friend. A fave for sure! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 31st, 2025 20:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LET ME WRITE. A-friggin\'-men! Man, I cannot tell you how much I needed to read this tonight. Thank you, my friend. A fave for sure! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 31st, 2025 20:11
Let Me Write
sorenbarrett said:
I feel like that some times and like the way you blend the languages to keep the rhyme
October 31st, 2025 16:18
sorenbarrett said:
I feel like that some times and like the way you blend the languages to keep the rhyme
October 31st, 2025 16:18
In My Crosshairs
NafisaSB said:
So explicitly detailed I can almost visualize it
October 29th, 2025 12:13
NafisaSB said:
So explicitly detailed I can almost visualize it
October 29th, 2025 12:13
80s Action (Part.2)
NafisaSB said:
my son was a huge fan, so can understand where this comes from...
October 29th, 2025 07:31
NafisaSB said:
my son was a huge fan, so can understand where this comes from...
October 29th, 2025 07:31
Epiphany
orchidee said:
This could be titled \'January 6th\' - the festival of the Epiphany. lol. Rhyming with relevance - yes what rhymes with \'vunce\'? lol. You seen many vunces around?
A puzzle is: What rhymes with \'orange\'? Something \'inge\' (sounds like part of hinge). lol
Do shut up now, you\'re rambling, says my talking dog Fido to me!
October 27th, 2025 09:19
orchidee said:
This could be titled \'January 6th\' - the festival of the Epiphany. lol. Rhyming with relevance - yes what rhymes with \'vunce\'? lol. You seen many vunces around?
A puzzle is: What rhymes with \'orange\'? Something \'inge\' (sounds like part of hinge). lol
Do shut up now, you\'re rambling, says my talking dog Fido to me!
October 27th, 2025 09:19
Epiphany
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Read and read and still need to read. Amen to that! Wonderful write, Shawn. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 27th, 2025 09:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Read and read and still need to read. Amen to that! Wonderful write, Shawn. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 27th, 2025 09:14
Epiphany
sorenbarrett said:
For the first time ever I\'m giving a fave for a just two lines of wordplay and difficult word rhyme
(Artificial intelligence will rule with an iron fist but no real relevance,
While the elites pack their trunks up and move away like elephants.)
The double meaning on trunk and its application to the previous line in elephant and to the present line elite packing makes this charming but this is added to by the difficulty in rhyming the word elephant. For that feat along a fave my friend
October 27th, 2025 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
For the first time ever I\'m giving a fave for a just two lines of wordplay and difficult word rhyme
(Artificial intelligence will rule with an iron fist but no real relevance,
While the elites pack their trunks up and move away like elephants.)
The double meaning on trunk and its application to the previous line in elephant and to the present line elite packing makes this charming but this is added to by the difficulty in rhyming the word elephant. For that feat along a fave my friend
October 27th, 2025 04:50
80s Action (Part.2)
rhmn_7 said:
80s movies were a different breed weren\'t they! Nice poem Shaun, waiting for No.3
October 26th, 2025 15:44
rhmn_7 said:
80s movies were a different breed weren\'t they! Nice poem Shaun, waiting for No.3
October 26th, 2025 15:44
It\'s Time For Payback
orchidee said:
Someone\'s nice surely, not a monster - you knows the outer-space guy, got two initials, dunno what his real name is. Might be Ed Ted! lol.
October 26th, 2025 10:55
orchidee said:
Someone\'s nice surely, not a monster - you knows the outer-space guy, got two initials, dunno what his real name is. Might be Ed Ted! lol.
October 26th, 2025 10:55
It\'s Time For Payback
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soical commentary with a prophetic edge. My cup of tea! Love this Shawn! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 26th, 2025 08:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Soical commentary with a prophetic edge. My cup of tea! Love this Shawn! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 26th, 2025 08:03
It\'s Time For Payback
sorenbarrett said:
I take this as a sociopolitical statement in poetic form with rhyme. Well done
October 26th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
I take this as a sociopolitical statement in poetic form with rhyme. Well done
October 26th, 2025 04:18
The Heaviness Of Halloween
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well written Shawn. Philosophically/Theologically, what would the light be without the darkness? Horror has always been some of the more moralistic tales, the Bible is loaded with it, and Halloween happens to be this Christian’s favorite holiday. Truth is, apart from the sun we all sit in night eternal...and the same could be said spiritually too. So I say embrace it…Jesus did...and let your light shine all the more. Big Ol\' Jack-O\'-Lantern certainly helps with the light shining too. 🎃 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 24th, 2025 07:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well written Shawn. Philosophically/Theologically, what would the light be without the darkness? Horror has always been some of the more moralistic tales, the Bible is loaded with it, and Halloween happens to be this Christian’s favorite holiday. Truth is, apart from the sun we all sit in night eternal...and the same could be said spiritually too. So I say embrace it…Jesus did...and let your light shine all the more. Big Ol\' Jack-O\'-Lantern certainly helps with the light shining too. 🎃 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 24th, 2025 07:53
The Heaviness Of Halloween
sorenbarrett said:
A most seasonal poem written with a bit of darkness and some cynicism that shines through. Well done
October 24th, 2025 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
A most seasonal poem written with a bit of darkness and some cynicism that shines through. Well done
October 24th, 2025 04:41
The Heaviness Of Halloween
orchidee said:
It\'s horrible in a way - a worldly celebration, with darkness. Some churches have \'Light Parties\' that evening instead.
October 24th, 2025 02:39
orchidee said:
It\'s horrible in a way - a worldly celebration, with darkness. Some churches have \'Light Parties\' that evening instead.
October 24th, 2025 02:39
80s Action (Part.2)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Idk, there were these whole subcultures of music back then Glam and Hair Metal, New Wave, and Goth. Rocky Horror Picture Show. Plenty of makeup and nail polish to be worn by guys back then! 🤣 This was a fun nostalgic piece. Loved the image too. Almost grew a beard looking at it. If only hair on top of my head would grow! 😂 I\'ll stop rambling and just say, well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 23rd, 2025 18:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Idk, there were these whole subcultures of music back then Glam and Hair Metal, New Wave, and Goth. Rocky Horror Picture Show. Plenty of makeup and nail polish to be worn by guys back then! 🤣 This was a fun nostalgic piece. Loved the image too. Almost grew a beard looking at it. If only hair on top of my head would grow! 😂 I\'ll stop rambling and just say, well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 23rd, 2025 18:35
80s Action (Part.2)
orchidee said:
I\'m becoming boring - and predictable. Erm, none of those characters look like E.T. lol.
October 23rd, 2025 11:51
orchidee said:
I\'m becoming boring - and predictable. Erm, none of those characters look like E.T. lol.
October 23rd, 2025 11:51
In My Crosshairs
RSM0812 said:
A frightening incident for sure. You dont want to mess with a bear. Lol
October 23rd, 2025 10:45
RSM0812 said:
A frightening incident for sure. You dont want to mess with a bear. Lol
October 23rd, 2025 10:45
80s Action (Part.2)
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem. For the younger generation nostalgia for me my middle age. Another place another time well written with great images to represent the era. Loved it
October 23rd, 2025 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem. For the younger generation nostalgia for me my middle age. Another place another time well written with great images to represent the era. Loved it
October 23rd, 2025 03:54
In My Crosshairs
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, too civilized looking to be a politician at least. He\'s a bit flat-footed! Smart move to duck and run! 🤣 A fun read, my friend!
October 22nd, 2025 20:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, too civilized looking to be a politician at least. He\'s a bit flat-footed! Smart move to duck and run! 🤣 A fun read, my friend!
October 22nd, 2025 20:30
In My Crosshairs
orchidee said:
Well, it doesn\'t look like it\'s E.T. to me! lol.
October 22nd, 2025 10:17
orchidee said:
Well, it doesn\'t look like it\'s E.T. to me! lol.
October 22nd, 2025 10:17
In My Crosshairs
Doggerel Dave said:
\"Discretion is the better part of valour\"
October 22nd, 2025 09:48
Doggerel Dave said:
\"Discretion is the better part of valour\"
October 22nd, 2025 09:48
In My Crosshairs
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read and although it seems just good fun underneath there is a message a hidden metaphor for courage or lack there of. Well done in good rhyme.
October 22nd, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read and although it seems just good fun underneath there is a message a hidden metaphor for courage or lack there of. Well done in good rhyme.
October 22nd, 2025 04:37
The Pain Prolonger
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh I\'m a bit with orchi here - NPCs? Slightly lost with this one.
BTW that geezer who heads your work here - needs an urgent dental appointment: he\'ll never pass muster in today\'s society without a set of pearly whites.....
October 17th, 2025 16:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh I\'m a bit with orchi here - NPCs? Slightly lost with this one.
BTW that geezer who heads your work here - needs an urgent dental appointment: he\'ll never pass muster in today\'s society without a set of pearly whites.....
October 17th, 2025 16:50
The Pain Prolonger
sorenbarrett said:
Non playable characters fill the stands. This poem has a dark and dystopian feel. Well written
October 17th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Non playable characters fill the stands. This poem has a dark and dystopian feel. Well written
October 17th, 2025 04:25
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