Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Storm Amy
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds so familiar I am sure that Deja vu exists. Good read
October 5th, 2025 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds so familiar I am sure that Deja vu exists. Good read
October 5th, 2025 04:19
Indoctrinated
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indoctrination is the name of the human game. Whether it is religion (and I am a person of faith, so no slight there), politics, education, etc. We are indoctrinated at every turn from breath one. Fantastic write...and great album drop too! Love it! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 4th, 2025 08:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indoctrination is the name of the human game. Whether it is religion (and I am a person of faith, so no slight there), politics, education, etc. We are indoctrinated at every turn from breath one. Fantastic write...and great album drop too! Love it! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 4th, 2025 08:37
Indoctrinated
sorenbarrett said:
We think that the present is a time of indoctrination but it has always been with us. The history I was never taught, the prejudice they tried to teach, the belief that only your god existed so many beliefs of false news from the past. Good write made me think
October 4th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
We think that the present is a time of indoctrination but it has always been with us. The history I was never taught, the prejudice they tried to teach, the belief that only your god existed so many beliefs of false news from the past. Good write made me think
October 4th, 2025 04:29
Twisted Metal Season 2
sorenbarrett said:
I can smell the fumes in the air. This poem brims with excitement and energy. Nicely done
October 3rd, 2025 06:20
sorenbarrett said:
I can smell the fumes in the air. This poem brims with excitement and energy. Nicely done
October 3rd, 2025 06:20
An Aura (Part.2)
sorenbarrett said:
Love this poem\'s presentation of a point of view that I thought had died out. People do have that type of glow that is identifiable and one calls an aura. Nicely written
October 2nd, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Love this poem\'s presentation of a point of view that I thought had died out. People do have that type of glow that is identifiable and one calls an aura. Nicely written
October 2nd, 2025 04:11
Dystopian Rap
Doggerel Dave said:
Nobody can say they weren\'t warned.... well warned, Sir!
Neatly put, Shaun.
October 1st, 2025 21:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Nobody can say they weren\'t warned.... well warned, Sir!
Neatly put, Shaun.
October 1st, 2025 21:22
Dystopian Rap
sorenbarrett said:
I remember reading Brave New World, 1984 and they at the time seemed so foreign now a dark prophesy that is unfolding. A good write.
October 1st, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
I remember reading Brave New World, 1984 and they at the time seemed so foreign now a dark prophesy that is unfolding. A good write.
October 1st, 2025 04:13
Dystopian Rap
Paul Bell said:
Who would have thought in Britain you could get arrested for free speech.
The world sure is on edge and the worse is still to come.
October 1st, 2025 03:36
Paul Bell said:
Who would have thought in Britain you could get arrested for free speech.
The world sure is on edge and the worse is still to come.
October 1st, 2025 03:36
Dystopian Rap
orchidee said:
Well, some said the end of the world was gonna be 1914 - but we\'re still \'ere! lol.
October 1st, 2025 02:20
orchidee said:
Well, some said the end of the world was gonna be 1914 - but we\'re still \'ere! lol.
October 1st, 2025 02:20
Sober Rhymes
Doggerel Dave said:
A marker describing precisely where you are at now?
Interesting to see where you go after that.
So well written.
September 30th, 2025 18:03
Doggerel Dave said:
A marker describing precisely where you are at now?
Interesting to see where you go after that.
So well written.
September 30th, 2025 18:03
Sober Rhymes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shawn, this is a strong piece...sober honesty, candid lines, and a prayer woven in. The struggle, the humor, the growth all walk together here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 30th, 2025 17:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shawn, this is a strong piece...sober honesty, candid lines, and a prayer woven in. The struggle, the humor, the growth all walk together here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 30th, 2025 17:42
Sober Rhymes
sorenbarrett said:
In transition from one stage of development to another I get these feelings a type of metamorphosis. Nicely put to poetic verse and rhyme
September 30th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
In transition from one stage of development to another I get these feelings a type of metamorphosis. Nicely put to poetic verse and rhyme
September 30th, 2025 04:10
Sober Rhymes
orchidee said:
Ooh, it\'s educational on \'ere, ya know, not any ole rubbish. lol. Had to check that aspartame, wot it is. It\'s got phenylalanine in it, which is in some diluted drinks.
September 30th, 2025 02:16
orchidee said:
Ooh, it\'s educational on \'ere, ya know, not any ole rubbish. lol. Had to check that aspartame, wot it is. It\'s got phenylalanine in it, which is in some diluted drinks.
September 30th, 2025 02:16
Destructo Mode
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ooh so do I get Destructo Mode. Well done, mate!
September 29th, 2025 15:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ooh so do I get Destructo Mode. Well done, mate!
September 29th, 2025 15:03
Destructo Mode
sorenbarrett said:
Some days that type of mood sets in and it seems that what ever one does results in destruction. A fun read
September 29th, 2025 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
Some days that type of mood sets in and it seems that what ever one does results in destruction. A fun read
September 29th, 2025 03:46
Digital ID For All
Doggerel Dave said:
Since 1945 this issue has a grand history of attempted introduction and set backs. Let\'s see how this one goes. Given the current social/political climate, it will probably succeed in being introduced. A sad indictment of the state of the nation.
September 28th, 2025 18:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Since 1945 this issue has a grand history of attempted introduction and set backs. Let\'s see how this one goes. Given the current social/political climate, it will probably succeed in being introduced. A sad indictment of the state of the nation.
September 28th, 2025 18:57
Digital ID For All
sorenbarrett said:
Not sure of the details but the implications are dire. As populations and technology have grown so also the need to monitor and control. Loss of privacy and now digital identity. Frightening all we are is a number. This began in the USA with social security numbers way back now digital chips in passports soon will be under our literal skin. Well written
September 28th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
Not sure of the details but the implications are dire. As populations and technology have grown so also the need to monitor and control. Loss of privacy and now digital identity. Frightening all we are is a number. This began in the USA with social security numbers way back now digital chips in passports soon will be under our literal skin. Well written
September 28th, 2025 04:08
I Need To Write
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for your wonderful contribution to the fushion
September 28th, 2025 01:54
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for your wonderful contribution to the fushion
September 28th, 2025 01:54
I Need To Write
Tristan Robert Lange said:
AI Poetry? Not that I\'ve seen! 🤣 Some may try, but AI is the worst at poetry! Seriously, this poem really resonated, my friend! I need to write too, so this resonated! Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 27th, 2025 07:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
AI Poetry? Not that I\'ve seen! 🤣 Some may try, but AI is the worst at poetry! Seriously, this poem really resonated, my friend! I need to write too, so this resonated! Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 27th, 2025 07:50
My Mind\'s Been Hijacked!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent wording, as always, my friend. Fun read! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 27th, 2025 07:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent wording, as always, my friend. Fun read! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 27th, 2025 07:44
I Need To Write
sorenbarrett said:
Congratulations on your most prolific work. Keep up the writing.
September 27th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
Congratulations on your most prolific work. Keep up the writing.
September 27th, 2025 04:10
My Mind\'s Been Hijacked!
sorenbarrett said:
A hijacking of the mind usually is a high jacking of the mind with some very powerful stuff. This is a fun read with great wording.
September 26th, 2025 10:43
sorenbarrett said:
A hijacking of the mind usually is a high jacking of the mind with some very powerful stuff. This is a fun read with great wording.
September 26th, 2025 10:43
Fresh Breeze
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A walked out on a sunny day
To feel the gentle, fall breeze,
It was sunny out, kind of gay,
When out of nowhere—a sneeze—
So hard, it blew me off the way,
I fell backwards—my ass to pay;
Sat on a hornets nest—OUCH—jeez!
I loved your poem, Shawn...and being plagued with allergies...yes...they be high where I am! LOL! Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 23rd, 2025 07:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A walked out on a sunny day
To feel the gentle, fall breeze,
It was sunny out, kind of gay,
When out of nowhere—a sneeze—
So hard, it blew me off the way,
I fell backwards—my ass to pay;
Sat on a hornets nest—OUCH—jeez!
I loved your poem, Shawn...and being plagued with allergies...yes...they be high where I am! LOL! Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 23rd, 2025 07:39
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