Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Not A Religious Fanatic
orchidee said:
Erm, a bit like ET there, but he\'s no demon! heehee.
February 28th, 2026 04:05
orchidee said:
Erm, a bit like ET there, but he\'s no demon! heehee.
February 28th, 2026 04:05
A Pyramid Prison
Poetic Licence said:
I found this quite thought provoking, a pyramid prison implies we are all just being sold a jail cell, which is possible. Atrocities should be punished but in this world it appears to just gain the perpetrators more power and control, going unchallenged. Those who side with these people should have tarnished souls, but will they have regret , I am not sure they would, enjoyed the read
February 27th, 2026 20:06
Poetic Licence said:
I found this quite thought provoking, a pyramid prison implies we are all just being sold a jail cell, which is possible. Atrocities should be punished but in this world it appears to just gain the perpetrators more power and control, going unchallenged. Those who side with these people should have tarnished souls, but will they have regret , I am not sure they would, enjoyed the read
February 27th, 2026 20:06
Living On The Wrong Side Of Time?
Poetic Licence said:
I found an interesting write, they every dog has it\'s day, maybe we have had ours and ballsed it up royally, so now it\'s the machines turn to finish what we started, a frightening world we live in on many levels, enjoyed the read
February 27th, 2026 17:57
Poetic Licence said:
I found an interesting write, they every dog has it\'s day, maybe we have had ours and ballsed it up royally, so now it\'s the machines turn to finish what we started, a frightening world we live in on many levels, enjoyed the read
February 27th, 2026 17:57
Living On The Wrong Side Of Time?
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Thanks for the great comment.
February 27th, 2026 14:56
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Thanks for the great comment.
February 27th, 2026 14:56
Living On The Wrong Side Of Time?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this reads like a cultural inventory that crescendos into metaphysics. The rhyme keeps it playful, but the closing question opens something deeper. Philosophically, what even is “the wrong side”? If time is linear, cyclical, or even held outside itself by God, perhaps no side is wrong…only inhabited. That tension gives the piece weight beyond the humor. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 27th, 2026 11:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this reads like a cultural inventory that crescendos into metaphysics. The rhyme keeps it playful, but the closing question opens something deeper. Philosophically, what even is “the wrong side”? If time is linear, cyclical, or even held outside itself by God, perhaps no side is wrong…only inhabited. That tension gives the piece weight beyond the humor. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 27th, 2026 11:02
Living On The Wrong Side Of Time?
orchidee said:
Well, I\'m past my sell by date, so........... lol.
February 27th, 2026 08:32
orchidee said:
Well, I\'m past my sell by date, so........... lol.
February 27th, 2026 08:32
Living On The Wrong Side Of Time?
sorenbarrett said:
A question posed and valid too. These times of rapid change are frightening when we can only guess the outcome. With AI that can do better what any person can do why try anymore, just sit back and watch. Will we fall into detached indifference? A good write
February 27th, 2026 06:20
sorenbarrett said:
A question posed and valid too. These times of rapid change are frightening when we can only guess the outcome. With AI that can do better what any person can do why try anymore, just sit back and watch. Will we fall into detached indifference? A good write
February 27th, 2026 06:20
A Pyramid Prison
Paul Bell said:
I\'ve always noticed that people who sacrifice things, never sacrifice themselves.
Assume sacrificing gives them some sort of deranged power they covet.
February 26th, 2026 12:03
Paul Bell said:
I\'ve always noticed that people who sacrifice things, never sacrifice themselves.
Assume sacrificing gives them some sort of deranged power they covet.
February 26th, 2026 12:03
A Pyramid Prison
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is confrontational in a purposeful way. The pyramid metaphor frames the critique, and the invocation of darker symbols pushes it into spiritual territory. It’s less about shock and more about consequence. “Dealing with demons leaves a soul tarnished and with regret.” closes it with gravity. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 26th, 2026 10:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is confrontational in a purposeful way. The pyramid metaphor frames the critique, and the invocation of darker symbols pushes it into spiritual territory. It’s less about shock and more about consequence. “Dealing with demons leaves a soul tarnished and with regret.” closes it with gravity. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 26th, 2026 10:34
A Pyramid Prison
sorenbarrett said:
The last two lines are most catchy in their rhyme and the message comes through. Nicely written
February 26th, 2026 06:18
sorenbarrett said:
The last two lines are most catchy in their rhyme and the message comes through. Nicely written
February 26th, 2026 06:18
Touloungeaphobia
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this rides the line between parody and confession. The jabs, the tongue imagery, the mock outrage…then suddenly that final prayer. “God please wash away bad energy, we need a miracle, alright!” shifts it from sarcasm to something human. And for the record…I love that Stones album. It was total provocation and pageantry...not pentagrams. As for your poem, bold, funny, and layered, my friend. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
February 25th, 2026 19:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this rides the line between parody and confession. The jabs, the tongue imagery, the mock outrage…then suddenly that final prayer. “God please wash away bad energy, we need a miracle, alright!” shifts it from sarcasm to something human. And for the record…I love that Stones album. It was total provocation and pageantry...not pentagrams. As for your poem, bold, funny, and layered, my friend. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
February 25th, 2026 19:02
Touloungeaphobia
orchidee said:
He speak with forked tongue?! lol. And why is it ton-gwee - tongue, and not town-gew - tounge? And why am I talking rubbish?! lol.
February 25th, 2026 10:09
orchidee said:
He speak with forked tongue?! lol. And why is it ton-gwee - tongue, and not town-gew - tounge? And why am I talking rubbish?! lol.
February 25th, 2026 10:09
Touloungeaphobia
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read about imagery familiar and well remembered. Nicely penned
February 25th, 2026 06:06
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read about imagery familiar and well remembered. Nicely penned
February 25th, 2026 06:06
Preach Forgiveness
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this carries real urgency. The rhyme drives it forward like you’re pushing through something heavy. “Spiritual warfare, armour got a dent” lands with grit…it feels lived, not just said. There’s tension here that doesn’t pretend to be polished. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 23rd, 2026 09:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this carries real urgency. The rhyme drives it forward like you’re pushing through something heavy. “Spiritual warfare, armour got a dent” lands with grit…it feels lived, not just said. There’s tension here that doesn’t pretend to be polished. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 23rd, 2026 09:54
Preach Forgiveness
sorenbarrett said:
Such an interesting concept in the first lines where it is emphasized that any errors or even procrastination can be forgiven. The concept that repentance redeems all errors makes it so easy to say to hell with today I\'ll do it tomorrow. Is that the dent in spiritual armor? A most interesting write
February 22nd, 2026 09:47
sorenbarrett said:
Such an interesting concept in the first lines where it is emphasized that any errors or even procrastination can be forgiven. The concept that repentance redeems all errors makes it so easy to say to hell with today I\'ll do it tomorrow. Is that the dent in spiritual armor? A most interesting write
February 22nd, 2026 09:47
James Van Der Beek
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes! RIP, James. So sad to hear. Wonderful tribute, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 21st, 2026 10:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes! RIP, James. So sad to hear. Wonderful tribute, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 21st, 2026 10:54
James Van Der Beek
sorenbarrett said:
A nice tribute to an actor that I am not familiar with or at least don\'t remember. Well done
February 21st, 2026 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
A nice tribute to an actor that I am not familiar with or at least don\'t remember. Well done
February 21st, 2026 04:13
James Van Der Beek
orchidee said:
A sensitive write SM.
Meanwhile - you seen ET lately? lol.
February 21st, 2026 03:20
orchidee said:
A sensitive write SM.
Meanwhile - you seen ET lately? lol.
February 21st, 2026 03:20
Burning Effigy\'s Of Baal
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is direct and unfiltered…apocalyptic imagery meeting present tension with no attempt to soften the edges. The rhythm feels chant-like, almost rallying in tone. It’s bold, charged, and meant to spark reaction. Strong energy throughout. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 11:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is direct and unfiltered…apocalyptic imagery meeting present tension with no attempt to soften the edges. The rhythm feels chant-like, almost rallying in tone. It’s bold, charged, and meant to spark reaction. Strong energy throughout. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 11:22
Burning Effigy\'s Of Baal
orchidee said:
I was reading this standing on me head - some sort of yoga pose (was I? lol.) I thought you meant the 999 games. lol.
February 20th, 2026 10:00
orchidee said:
I was reading this standing on me head - some sort of yoga pose (was I? lol.) I thought you meant the 999 games. lol.
February 20th, 2026 10:00
Burning Effigy\'s Of Baal
sorenbarrett said:
An image cast and thoughts follow. Well written
February 20th, 2026 07:26
sorenbarrett said:
An image cast and thoughts follow. Well written
February 20th, 2026 07:26
Stand On What\'s Sacred
NafisaSB said:
i stand beside you on this issue - and hope it turns true one day
February 17th, 2026 23:47
NafisaSB said:
i stand beside you on this issue - and hope it turns true one day
February 17th, 2026 23:47
James Bond 007egacy
NafisaSB said:
have seen some of 007 films, and do agree with most of your views.
February 17th, 2026 01:07
NafisaSB said:
have seen some of 007 films, and do agree with most of your views.
February 17th, 2026 01:07
I Can\'t Stand Liars
Iam1ItchyLizzard said:
Such a perfect time for this poem
February 15th, 2026 04:35
Iam1ItchyLizzard said:
Such a perfect time for this poem
February 15th, 2026 04:35
God
NafisaSB said:
agree wholeheartedly with this wonderful message - thanks for sharing
February 15th, 2026 00:42
NafisaSB said:
agree wholeheartedly with this wonderful message - thanks for sharing
February 15th, 2026 00:42
Stand On What\'s Sacred
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, I’ve felt that frustration with systems and distractions pulling focus from what matters. Your poem channels that intensity without softening it. There’s a desire here to cut through noise and stand on something sacred. That conviction comes through clearly. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 14th, 2026 10:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, I’ve felt that frustration with systems and distractions pulling focus from what matters. Your poem channels that intensity without softening it. There’s a desire here to cut through noise and stand on something sacred. That conviction comes through clearly. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 14th, 2026 10:39
Stand On What\'s Sacred
orchidee said:
ET wants to come back but he can\'t find the key to that prison door. Doh!
February 14th, 2026 10:11
orchidee said:
ET wants to come back but he can\'t find the key to that prison door. Doh!
February 14th, 2026 10:11
Stand On What\'s Sacred
sorenbarrett said:
Cynical this poem sends its message that is dark. Well written
February 14th, 2026 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
Cynical this poem sends its message that is dark. Well written
February 14th, 2026 04:58
God
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, I appreciate how unapologetic this is. The repetition gives it that chant-like strength, and the crown image at the end adds warmth and dignity. It feels like faith spoken plainly, without layers or disguise. There’s power in that kind of clarity. Well said. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 13th, 2026 12:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, I appreciate how unapologetic this is. The repetition gives it that chant-like strength, and the crown image at the end adds warmth and dignity. It feels like faith spoken plainly, without layers or disguise. There’s power in that kind of clarity. Well said. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 13th, 2026 12:05
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