Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Fight The Power
sorenbarrett said:
I was brought up in public schools and was brainwashed only now at seventy five has some of it fallen away but private schools seem even more of a brainwashing (maybe in a different way) and theirs seems more of a tattoo than a washing it is permanent. Those that do not defer to conformity are crushed in either system, what we consider the free world is an illusion little different than that of communism or any fascist regimen or religion dominated state. Well written
July 14th, 2026 03:22
sorenbarrett said:
I was brought up in public schools and was brainwashed only now at seventy five has some of it fallen away but private schools seem even more of a brainwashing (maybe in a different way) and theirs seems more of a tattoo than a washing it is permanent. Those that do not defer to conformity are crushed in either system, what we consider the free world is an illusion little different than that of communism or any fascist regimen or religion dominated state. Well written
July 14th, 2026 03:22
Fight The Power
orchidee said:
Let\'s not fight ALL aliens - not the friendly two-initialled guy. lol.
July 14th, 2026 02:03
orchidee said:
Let\'s not fight ALL aliens - not the friendly two-initialled guy. lol.
July 14th, 2026 02:03
Super-Natural and Para-Normal
orchidee said:
Certainly a bad hair day there! lol.
July 13th, 2026 08:51
orchidee said:
Certainly a bad hair day there! lol.
July 13th, 2026 08:51
Super-Natural and Para-Normal
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is unapologetic from the first line to the last. I especially enjoyed how the poem keeps its focus on challenging assumptions while expressing your own experience without hesitation. It leaves the reader with something to wrestle with, and I always appreciate poetry that sparks reflection. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 13th, 2026 08:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is unapologetic from the first line to the last. I especially enjoyed how the poem keeps its focus on challenging assumptions while expressing your own experience without hesitation. It leaves the reader with something to wrestle with, and I always appreciate poetry that sparks reflection. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 13th, 2026 08:43
Super-Natural and Para-Normal
sorenbarrett said:
Social and political commentary thinly clothed in demons in this write. Well done my friend
July 13th, 2026 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
Social and political commentary thinly clothed in demons in this write. Well done my friend
July 13th, 2026 04:31
Your Best Friend Jippy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this was a fun read. I smiled as soon as Jippy\'s name came up, and the Bandcamp nod at the end tied it together nicely. Always good to see artists getting a little well-deserved appreciation. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 12th, 2026 07:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this was a fun read. I smiled as soon as Jippy\'s name came up, and the Bandcamp nod at the end tied it together nicely. Always good to see artists getting a little well-deserved appreciation. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 12th, 2026 07:34
Lord Jamar Entertains Me
rhmn_7 said:
I liked this mind-bending commentary. Nice poem shaun!
July 12th, 2026 07:24
rhmn_7 said:
I liked this mind-bending commentary. Nice poem shaun!
July 12th, 2026 07:24
Your Best Friend Jippy
orchidee said:
I of course don\'t know these folks! lol. I only know.......... Eric Taylor is it? (the initialled guy. lol) and a few other folk.
July 12th, 2026 02:59
orchidee said:
I of course don\'t know these folks! lol. I only know.......... Eric Taylor is it? (the initialled guy. lol) and a few other folk.
July 12th, 2026 02:59
Lord Jamar Entertains Me
orchidee said:
Good write SM. Awww, why some people say E.T. never existed? heehee.
July 11th, 2026 09:30
orchidee said:
Good write SM. Awww, why some people say E.T. never existed? heehee.
July 11th, 2026 09:30
Lord Jamar Entertains Me
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is an engaging piece. It captures the fascination of hearing ideas that challenge the mainstream and invites readers to wrestle with them for themselves. Whether people agree or disagree, it certainly gets the conversation started. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 11th, 2026 08:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this is an engaging piece. It captures the fascination of hearing ideas that challenge the mainstream and invites readers to wrestle with them for themselves. Whether people agree or disagree, it certainly gets the conversation started. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 11th, 2026 08:00
It\'s A New Day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this has a real conversational energy to it...like you\'re just saying exactly what\'s been on your mind without dressing it up. I especially appreciate where you land in the end...trying to rise above the noise instead of feeding it. Great write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 11th, 2026 07:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this has a real conversational energy to it...like you\'re just saying exactly what\'s been on your mind without dressing it up. I especially appreciate where you land in the end...trying to rise above the noise instead of feeding it. Great write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 11th, 2026 07:30
Lord Jamar Entertains Me
sorenbarrett said:
Subtle ending rhyme to a poem that entertains gives flavor. All conspiracy theories have to make just enough sense to make one think or they can not be accepted as viable. The conspiracy theory about conspiracy theories is that the real plots and intrigues are clever enough to not make sense and therefore never become conspiracy theories.
July 11th, 2026 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
Subtle ending rhyme to a poem that entertains gives flavor. All conspiracy theories have to make just enough sense to make one think or they can not be accepted as viable. The conspiracy theory about conspiracy theories is that the real plots and intrigues are clever enough to not make sense and therefore never become conspiracy theories.
July 11th, 2026 04:47
It\'s A New Day
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a commentary on modern day society. Well written it casts a shadow on where we are. Well done
July 10th, 2026 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems a commentary on modern day society. Well written it casts a shadow on where we are. Well done
July 10th, 2026 04:05
World Weary
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, that image of people lifting their eyes instead of keeping them fixed on their phones really stood out to me. Whatever else someone takes from the poem, that alone is a worthwhile reminder. Great job on this, my friend. Love the MC Ren reference! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 9th, 2026 21:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, that image of people lifting their eyes instead of keeping them fixed on their phones really stood out to me. Whatever else someone takes from the poem, that alone is a worthwhile reminder. Great job on this, my friend. Love the MC Ren reference! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 9th, 2026 21:47
World Weary
orchidee said:
Now I can\'t say either of those in the pic look like E.T. lol.
July 9th, 2026 11:45
orchidee said:
Now I can\'t say either of those in the pic look like E.T. lol.
July 9th, 2026 11:45
World Weary
sorenbarrett said:
Love the references in this poem from Ren to Jesus from Trump to the devil all the players.
July 9th, 2026 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
Love the references in this poem from Ren to Jesus from Trump to the devil all the players.
July 9th, 2026 04:55
Red Alert
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this carries real fire. There’s a fierce protectiveness running through this…you’re speaking straight to anyone who’s ever been made to feel small, and you mean every word of it. Great job on this! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 8th, 2026 19:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this carries real fire. There’s a fierce protectiveness running through this…you’re speaking straight to anyone who’s ever been made to feel small, and you mean every word of it. Great job on this! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 8th, 2026 19:25
80s Baby (Masculinity Is Not Toxic)
orchidee said:
A bad hair day for Elliot! lol.
July 7th, 2026 09:37
orchidee said:
A bad hair day for Elliot! lol.
July 7th, 2026 09:37
80s Baby (Masculinity Is Not Toxic)
sorenbarrett said:
A pushback against over feminization of the male gender. I hear what is wrong with masculinity as the theme and would have to agree in Viva la difference. Well written
July 7th, 2026 06:06
sorenbarrett said:
A pushback against over feminization of the male gender. I hear what is wrong with masculinity as the theme and would have to agree in Viva la difference. Well written
July 7th, 2026 06:06
An Uneasy Calm
NafisaSB said:
A write that tempts one to wonder what would have happened next.
Maybe the next poem will have the answer 🤔
July 6th, 2026 11:57
NafisaSB said:
A write that tempts one to wonder what would have happened next.
Maybe the next poem will have the answer 🤔
July 6th, 2026 11:57
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