Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Sober Rhymes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shawn, this is a strong piece...sober honesty, candid lines, and a prayer woven in. The struggle, the humor, the growth all walk together here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 30th, 2025 17:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shawn, this is a strong piece...sober honesty, candid lines, and a prayer woven in. The struggle, the humor, the growth all walk together here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 30th, 2025 17:42
Sober Rhymes
sorenbarrett said:
In transition from one stage of development to another I get these feelings a type of metamorphosis. Nicely put to poetic verse and rhyme
September 30th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
In transition from one stage of development to another I get these feelings a type of metamorphosis. Nicely put to poetic verse and rhyme
September 30th, 2025 04:10
Sober Rhymes
orchidee said:
Ooh, it\'s educational on \'ere, ya know, not any ole rubbish. lol. Had to check that aspartame, wot it is. It\'s got phenylalanine in it, which is in some diluted drinks.
September 30th, 2025 02:16
orchidee said:
Ooh, it\'s educational on \'ere, ya know, not any ole rubbish. lol. Had to check that aspartame, wot it is. It\'s got phenylalanine in it, which is in some diluted drinks.
September 30th, 2025 02:16
Destructo Mode
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ooh so do I get Destructo Mode. Well done, mate!
September 29th, 2025 15:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ooh so do I get Destructo Mode. Well done, mate!
September 29th, 2025 15:03
Destructo Mode
sorenbarrett said:
Some days that type of mood sets in and it seems that what ever one does results in destruction. A fun read
September 29th, 2025 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
Some days that type of mood sets in and it seems that what ever one does results in destruction. A fun read
September 29th, 2025 03:46
Digital ID For All
Doggerel Dave said:
Since 1945 this issue has a grand history of attempted introduction and set backs. Let\'s see how this one goes. Given the current social/political climate, it will probably succeed in being introduced. A sad indictment of the state of the nation.
September 28th, 2025 18:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Since 1945 this issue has a grand history of attempted introduction and set backs. Let\'s see how this one goes. Given the current social/political climate, it will probably succeed in being introduced. A sad indictment of the state of the nation.
September 28th, 2025 18:57
Digital ID For All
sorenbarrett said:
Not sure of the details but the implications are dire. As populations and technology have grown so also the need to monitor and control. Loss of privacy and now digital identity. Frightening all we are is a number. This began in the USA with social security numbers way back now digital chips in passports soon will be under our literal skin. Well written
September 28th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
Not sure of the details but the implications are dire. As populations and technology have grown so also the need to monitor and control. Loss of privacy and now digital identity. Frightening all we are is a number. This began in the USA with social security numbers way back now digital chips in passports soon will be under our literal skin. Well written
September 28th, 2025 04:08
I Need To Write
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for your wonderful contribution to the fushion
September 28th, 2025 01:54
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for your wonderful contribution to the fushion
September 28th, 2025 01:54
I Need To Write
Tristan Robert Lange said:
AI Poetry? Not that I\'ve seen! 🤣 Some may try, but AI is the worst at poetry! Seriously, this poem really resonated, my friend! I need to write too, so this resonated! Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 27th, 2025 07:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
AI Poetry? Not that I\'ve seen! 🤣 Some may try, but AI is the worst at poetry! Seriously, this poem really resonated, my friend! I need to write too, so this resonated! Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 27th, 2025 07:50
My Mind\'s Been Hijacked!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent wording, as always, my friend. Fun read! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 27th, 2025 07:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent wording, as always, my friend. Fun read! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 27th, 2025 07:44
I Need To Write
sorenbarrett said:
Congratulations on your most prolific work. Keep up the writing.
September 27th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
Congratulations on your most prolific work. Keep up the writing.
September 27th, 2025 04:10
My Mind\'s Been Hijacked!
sorenbarrett said:
A hijacking of the mind usually is a high jacking of the mind with some very powerful stuff. This is a fun read with great wording.
September 26th, 2025 10:43
sorenbarrett said:
A hijacking of the mind usually is a high jacking of the mind with some very powerful stuff. This is a fun read with great wording.
September 26th, 2025 10:43
Fresh Breeze
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A walked out on a sunny day
To feel the gentle, fall breeze,
It was sunny out, kind of gay,
When out of nowhere—a sneeze—
So hard, it blew me off the way,
I fell backwards—my ass to pay;
Sat on a hornets nest—OUCH—jeez!
I loved your poem, Shawn...and being plagued with allergies...yes...they be high where I am! LOL! Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 23rd, 2025 07:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A walked out on a sunny day
To feel the gentle, fall breeze,
It was sunny out, kind of gay,
When out of nowhere—a sneeze—
So hard, it blew me off the way,
I fell backwards—my ass to pay;
Sat on a hornets nest—OUCH—jeez!
I loved your poem, Shawn...and being plagued with allergies...yes...they be high where I am! LOL! Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 23rd, 2025 07:39
Fresh Breeze
sorenbarrett said:
A light airy and bright poem of nature and emotion. Nicely done
September 23rd, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
A light airy and bright poem of nature and emotion. Nicely done
September 23rd, 2025 04:17
Fresh Breeze
orchidee said:
Dang chilly breeze sometimes! lol. Some bees and wasps still around. Oohh!
September 23rd, 2025 02:36
orchidee said:
Dang chilly breeze sometimes! lol. Some bees and wasps still around. Oohh!
September 23rd, 2025 02:36
Demon In The Bottle (Part.4)
sorenbarrett said:
A good write on the effects of too much drinking. Nicely done
September 22nd, 2025 09:51
sorenbarrett said:
A good write on the effects of too much drinking. Nicely done
September 22nd, 2025 09:51
Reading Some Of Matthew 5, Keeps Me Alive
orchidee said:
Yes, it may start off nice, those \'Beatitudes\', then we may wish they ended before the \'persecution\' bit.
But meanwhile - Ohh, I not got the hang of it - Give us ya cash, cos it says \'Blessed are the poor (in spirit)\'. But then I won\'t be blessed as I\'ll be rich!\' Doh!
September 22nd, 2025 03:09
orchidee said:
Yes, it may start off nice, those \'Beatitudes\', then we may wish they ended before the \'persecution\' bit.
But meanwhile - Ohh, I not got the hang of it - Give us ya cash, cos it says \'Blessed are the poor (in spirit)\'. But then I won\'t be blessed as I\'ll be rich!\' Doh!
September 22nd, 2025 03:09
Reading Some Of Matthew 5, Keeps Me Alive
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You and me both. In fact, all of Matthew 5-7. That Sermon on the Mount is jam packed with life and the umph to stay alive! Love this poem, my friend! Amen! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 21st, 2025 18:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You and me both. In fact, all of Matthew 5-7. That Sermon on the Mount is jam packed with life and the umph to stay alive! Love this poem, my friend! Amen! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 21st, 2025 18:55
Reading Some Of Matthew 5, Keeps Me Alive
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of belief and faith and a declaration for others. Nicely done
September 21st, 2025 14:37
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of belief and faith and a declaration for others. Nicely done
September 21st, 2025 14:37
The Devil\'s Daughter
Paul Bell said:
Everyone wants a devil in their life at some point.
Though when the woman finds out, Only god can help you.
September 21st, 2025 12:35
Paul Bell said:
Everyone wants a devil in their life at some point.
Though when the woman finds out, Only god can help you.
September 21st, 2025 12:35
The Devil\'s Daughter
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oooh...devilish is she? LOL! Fun poem, mate!
September 20th, 2025 19:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oooh...devilish is she? LOL! Fun poem, mate!
September 20th, 2025 19:18
The Devil\'s Daughter
RSM0812 said:
I feel like this entire poem has another metaphorical reality. I cant put my finger on it though. Decisions in life? Never trust loose women? Am i getting close?
September 20th, 2025 08:09
RSM0812 said:
I feel like this entire poem has another metaphorical reality. I cant put my finger on it though. Decisions in life? Never trust loose women? Am i getting close?
September 20th, 2025 08:09
The Devil\'s Daughter
sorenbarrett said:
Jobs are hard to find have to take what you can get. Poetry won\'t pay the bills. A fun read that tickles the fancy. Well done
September 20th, 2025 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
Jobs are hard to find have to take what you can get. Poetry won\'t pay the bills. A fun read that tickles the fancy. Well done
September 20th, 2025 06:03
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