Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
An Open Letter To Jay-Z
orchidee said:
Oh, I don\'t know the guy much. Should I get to know him more? Or is he shifty and dodgy? lol.
December 5th, 2025 04:05
orchidee said:
Oh, I don\'t know the guy much. Should I get to know him more? Or is he shifty and dodgy? lol.
December 5th, 2025 04:05
Random Rhyming (Part.6)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love Tron...but would not want to be stuck in its world! LOL! Well done on this, my friend!
December 4th, 2025 17:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love Tron...but would not want to be stuck in its world! LOL! Well done on this, my friend!
December 4th, 2025 17:19
Random Rhyming (Part.6)
sorenbarrett said:
They already have us in that matrix not knowing what to believe is it fake is it real what is real anyway. Do I believe them do I believe me, do I believe nothing. What is fake, real or CGI. Falsified pictures, invented stories I can\'t even believe what I see with my own eyes. There they got us confused and uncertain. Well written.
December 4th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
They already have us in that matrix not knowing what to believe is it fake is it real what is real anyway. Do I believe them do I believe me, do I believe nothing. What is fake, real or CGI. Falsified pictures, invented stories I can\'t even believe what I see with my own eyes. There they got us confused and uncertain. Well written.
December 4th, 2025 04:29
Random Rhyming (Part.6)
orchidee said:
Is ALL wrestling fixed?! heehee. Good write SM.
December 4th, 2025 03:21
orchidee said:
Is ALL wrestling fixed?! heehee. Good write SM.
December 4th, 2025 03:21
Eye Contact
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Who is that guy staring at me. No, I\'m not seeing things I tell you! He\'s there...above! No, I am not making it up! See...look 👆 🤣
Sorry, I saw Orchi was the first commenter and I felt pressure to be silly! It\'s all his fault! LOL! Seriously, though, loved this poem and, as a TWD fan, loved the Negan/Lucille reference!
December 3rd, 2025 18:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Who is that guy staring at me. No, I\'m not seeing things I tell you! He\'s there...above! No, I am not making it up! See...look 👆 🤣
Sorry, I saw Orchi was the first commenter and I felt pressure to be silly! It\'s all his fault! LOL! Seriously, though, loved this poem and, as a TWD fan, loved the Negan/Lucille reference!
December 3rd, 2025 18:47
Eye Contact
sorenbarrett said:
This poem contains several statements that like the beginning seems strange, but given enough thought become evident. A wonderful combination in poetic form.
December 3rd, 2025 12:19
sorenbarrett said:
This poem contains several statements that like the beginning seems strange, but given enough thought become evident. A wonderful combination in poetic form.
December 3rd, 2025 12:19
Our Fates
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This reads and rhymes like rap, my friend., Absolutely love the flow of this one! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 2nd, 2025 10:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This reads and rhymes like rap, my friend., Absolutely love the flow of this one! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 2nd, 2025 10:40
Our Fates
orchidee said:
An aside, or a distraction from me! In reading of stages of team-building I wrote this. I\'m gonna rap! lol:
\'Ohh there are stages of team-forming
There\'s a-forming and a-storming (storming can include arguments - ooh!)
Then a-norming and a-performing (norming is becoming \'normal\', whatever that is!)
Then when all\'s done, there\'s an-adjourning\'.
December 2nd, 2025 10:03
orchidee said:
An aside, or a distraction from me! In reading of stages of team-building I wrote this. I\'m gonna rap! lol:
\'Ohh there are stages of team-forming
There\'s a-forming and a-storming (storming can include arguments - ooh!)
Then a-norming and a-performing (norming is becoming \'normal\', whatever that is!)
Then when all\'s done, there\'s an-adjourning\'.
December 2nd, 2025 10:03
Our Fates
sorenbarrett said:
A rap indeed this poem spins and spits its message from beginning to end. Well done
December 2nd, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
A rap indeed this poem spins and spits its message from beginning to end. Well done
December 2nd, 2025 04:42
Industry Plants
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this lands clean and honest…the Babel line, the shrinking candle, the emptiness behind the posing. You cut through the illusion of celebrity with sharp precision. Obviously, not all stars are the same...but man that seems to be much of what one sees coming out of Hollywood. Cheers, Shaun! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 1st, 2025 17:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this lands clean and honest…the Babel line, the shrinking candle, the emptiness behind the posing. You cut through the illusion of celebrity with sharp precision. Obviously, not all stars are the same...but man that seems to be much of what one sees coming out of Hollywood. Cheers, Shaun! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 1st, 2025 17:54
Impenetrable Sky
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes, an impenetrable sky indeed. There\'s so much that seems impenetrable about it! Great title, great poem. Well done. my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 1st, 2025 17:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes, an impenetrable sky indeed. There\'s so much that seems impenetrable about it! Great title, great poem. Well done. my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 1st, 2025 17:34
Industry Plants
sorenbarrett said:
The road to fame not all it\'s cracked up to be. A poem that calls for reflection upon one\'s goals and the costs involved. Nicely done
December 1st, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
The road to fame not all it\'s cracked up to be. A poem that calls for reflection upon one\'s goals and the costs involved. Nicely done
December 1st, 2025 04:46
Industry Plants
orchidee said:
Good write SM. If the Tower of Babel did reach to heaven, it would need an awfully wide base, then all those storeys. How many miles was it (or: is it) to Heaven? Could they have taken the no.7 bus there instead?! lol.
December 1st, 2025 02:58
orchidee said:
Good write SM. If the Tower of Babel did reach to heaven, it would need an awfully wide base, then all those storeys. How many miles was it (or: is it) to Heaven? Could they have taken the no.7 bus there instead?! lol.
December 1st, 2025 02:58
Impenetrable Sky
orchidee said:
Did I spot a certain alien in that pic there? We knows him! lol.
November 30th, 2025 15:00
orchidee said:
Did I spot a certain alien in that pic there? We knows him! lol.
November 30th, 2025 15:00
Impenetrable Sky
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed no longer able to be off the grid we all are under an impenetrable sky imprisoned by society and a violent one at that. Good write
November 30th, 2025 12:40
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed no longer able to be off the grid we all are under an impenetrable sky imprisoned by society and a violent one at that. Good write
November 30th, 2025 12:40
Immortalised Life
orchidee said:
Yes, Maccabees \'relegated\' to the Apocrypha - where some unsure, spurious, maybe \'dodgy\' etc verses and texts are - though a good read.
I can\'t remember. I have a separate copy of the Apocrypha - is E.T. in it? heehee.
November 28th, 2025 12:47
orchidee said:
Yes, Maccabees \'relegated\' to the Apocrypha - where some unsure, spurious, maybe \'dodgy\' etc verses and texts are - though a good read.
I can\'t remember. I have a separate copy of the Apocrypha - is E.T. in it? heehee.
November 28th, 2025 12:47
Immortalised Life
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hits with conviction…the Apocrypha reference nails a truth people overlook, and I’ve felt that same pull toward what was erased. Martin Luther did some pretty important things, but separating and demoting the Apocrypha was a total “oopsie” on his part! LOL! Anywho, bold, sharp, and spiritually unfiltered. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 28th, 2025 10:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hits with conviction…the Apocrypha reference nails a truth people overlook, and I’ve felt that same pull toward what was erased. Martin Luther did some pretty important things, but separating and demoting the Apocrypha was a total “oopsie” on his part! LOL! Anywho, bold, sharp, and spiritually unfiltered. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 28th, 2025 10:33
Immortalised Life
Doggerel Dave said:
Mate, you are getting very heavy lately. I like it, but feel I\'m being left way behind....
November 28th, 2025 05:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Mate, you are getting very heavy lately. I like it, but feel I\'m being left way behind....
November 28th, 2025 05:01
Immortalised Life
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting blend of the religious and the metaphysical and apocryphal. Nicely worded
November 28th, 2025 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting blend of the religious and the metaphysical and apocryphal. Nicely worded
November 28th, 2025 03:56
Immortalised Life
orchidee said:
Nope, not magic or hocus-pocus, but a spot of slap and tickle? Yes?! lol.
November 28th, 2025 03:37
orchidee said:
Nope, not magic or hocus-pocus, but a spot of slap and tickle? Yes?! lol.
November 28th, 2025 03:37
Why Is Nobody Angry?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am all for socially responsible policies, and sometimes such policies are a lesser \"evil\" than all out good. What amazes me is how black and white people have become on it. Either you are all-in or all-out. That thinking kills on both ends of it. I think we saw that with Covid-19. Social distancing, wearing masks, etc. are all not new things. They\'ve happened as long as viruses have been killing. That said, to deny the effects of such social distancing...and to carry it on well past when it should have been carried? What\'s more, and I think this is the heart of the poem and the problem in society...who can we actually trust? Power structures abuse power, those vying for power misinform to get their way, and people are all left to figure it out...or not...for themselves. An important poem, Shaun. Glad you expressed it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 27th, 2025 07:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am all for socially responsible policies, and sometimes such policies are a lesser \"evil\" than all out good. What amazes me is how black and white people have become on it. Either you are all-in or all-out. That thinking kills on both ends of it. I think we saw that with Covid-19. Social distancing, wearing masks, etc. are all not new things. They\'ve happened as long as viruses have been killing. That said, to deny the effects of such social distancing...and to carry it on well past when it should have been carried? What\'s more, and I think this is the heart of the poem and the problem in society...who can we actually trust? Power structures abuse power, those vying for power misinform to get their way, and people are all left to figure it out...or not...for themselves. An important poem, Shaun. Glad you expressed it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 27th, 2025 07:23
Why Is Nobody Angry?
Doggerel Dave said:
Seems covid was the excuse for many nefarious political dealings which has left the general population yet more oppressed. Thanks for the write.
November 27th, 2025 06:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Seems covid was the excuse for many nefarious political dealings which has left the general population yet more oppressed. Thanks for the write.
November 27th, 2025 06:02
Why Is Nobody Angry?
sorenbarrett said:
I was angry and in my anger was rebellious but found it diluted by the deluded. A good write about mass control by the powerful and misinformed.
November 27th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
I was angry and in my anger was rebellious but found it diluted by the deluded. A good write about mass control by the powerful and misinformed.
November 27th, 2025 04:17
Why Is Nobody Angry?
orchidee said:
A certain alien had gone home by then. He didn\'t experience it (heehee for him).
November 27th, 2025 03:30
orchidee said:
A certain alien had gone home by then. He didn\'t experience it (heehee for him).
November 27th, 2025 03:30
The Fastest Man Alive
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love, love, love The Flash...a fave from me, mate!
November 26th, 2025 11:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love, love, love The Flash...a fave from me, mate!
November 26th, 2025 11:23
The Fastest Man Alive
sorenbarrett said:
A poem straight from the comics adventure filled it runs right on by. A fun read
November 26th, 2025 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
A poem straight from the comics adventure filled it runs right on by. A fun read
November 26th, 2025 05:03
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