Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Fitness Freak
sorenbarrett said:
Brings memories of the old days. This poem pumped with energy has meter that runs. Nicely put together in rhyme it has power. Well done Shaun
August 31st, 2026 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
Brings memories of the old days. This poem pumped with energy has meter that runs. Nicely put together in rhyme it has power. Well done Shaun
August 31st, 2026 04:29
Fitness Freak
orchidee said:
Ahh, we can become too fit and overdo things. Good write SM.
August 31st, 2026 03:39
orchidee said:
Ahh, we can become too fit and overdo things. Good write SM.
August 31st, 2026 03:39
Be Aware
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this one has that unmistakable sense of spiritual and cultural alarm running through it. It feels like a warning siren aimed at complacency…especially around accountability and discernment. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 30th, 2026 21:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this one has that unmistakable sense of spiritual and cultural alarm running through it. It feels like a warning siren aimed at complacency…especially around accountability and discernment. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 30th, 2026 21:31
Be Aware
orchidee said:
In a soap serial: \'Who dies in the accident?\' Dunno! But if there\'s a fire, they\'ll all turn to ashes, cos they\'re made of wood - in their acting. Now they\'ve revived old episodes of \'Neighbours\' too This is too much for us, too horrific! lol.
August 30th, 2026 07:54
orchidee said:
In a soap serial: \'Who dies in the accident?\' Dunno! But if there\'s a fire, they\'ll all turn to ashes, cos they\'re made of wood - in their acting. Now they\'ve revived old episodes of \'Neighbours\' too This is too much for us, too horrific! lol.
August 30th, 2026 07:54
Be Aware
sorenbarrett said:
Cast in metaphoric symbols this poem speaks of chaos and the modern world. Those angel trumpets might be taken two ways. Well done Shaun
August 30th, 2026 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
Cast in metaphoric symbols this poem speaks of chaos and the modern world. Those angel trumpets might be taken two ways. Well done Shaun
August 30th, 2026 04:00
Disorientating Dreams
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vivid dreams can leave such a strange emotional hangover, Shaun...almost as though we have returned from somewhere rather than merely awakened. And yes, the Nolan jab landed! 🤣 Great write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 29th, 2026 07:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vivid dreams can leave such a strange emotional hangover, Shaun...almost as though we have returned from somewhere rather than merely awakened. And yes, the Nolan jab landed! 🤣 Great write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 29th, 2026 07:52
Disorientating Dreams
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a haunting quality and feels a bit sinister itself. Inception had several good points that I could identify with and have experienced in dreams just enough to make the rest believable. Lovely
August 29th, 2026 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a haunting quality and feels a bit sinister itself. Inception had several good points that I could identify with and have experienced in dreams just enough to make the rest believable. Lovely
August 29th, 2026 03:45
Disorientating Dreams
orchidee said:
I dream of a certain one - we knows him, he\'s gone home! lol.
August 29th, 2026 02:28
orchidee said:
I dream of a certain one - we knows him, he\'s gone home! lol.
August 29th, 2026 02:28
Take No Oaths And Bow Down To No False Gods
NafisaSB said:
Agree with your assessment
August 29th, 2026 00:19
NafisaSB said:
Agree with your assessment
August 29th, 2026 00:19
Random Rhyming (Part.10)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, I certainly share the feeling that something has gone deeply wrong with modern society, even when we may interpret the details differently. The anger and revulsion driving this are unmistakable. Strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 28th, 2026 17:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, I certainly share the feeling that something has gone deeply wrong with modern society, even when we may interpret the details differently. The anger and revulsion driving this are unmistakable. Strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 28th, 2026 17:30
Random Rhyming (Part.10)
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a diversity there my friend. Well done
August 28th, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a diversity there my friend. Well done
August 28th, 2026 04:19
Random Rhyming (Part.10)
orchidee said:
Yes, they should be like nice E.T.! lol.
August 28th, 2026 02:03
orchidee said:
Yes, they should be like nice E.T.! lol.
August 28th, 2026 02:03
Dolly\'s Dead
sorenbarrett said:
A woman dedicated to giving to others that never forgot her humble start and could not go on without her husband neglecting her own health in the end. Musician, singer, song writer, business woman an icon a country singer inducted into the rock and roll hall of fame declining saying give the votes to someone that sings rock and roll not me but finally convinced to accept. Well written
August 27th, 2026 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
A woman dedicated to giving to others that never forgot her humble start and could not go on without her husband neglecting her own health in the end. Musician, singer, song writer, business woman an icon a country singer inducted into the rock and roll hall of fame declining saying give the votes to someone that sings rock and roll not me but finally convinced to accept. Well written
August 27th, 2026 04:00
Dolly\'s Dead
orchidee said:
I don\'t know that much about her. But I know a lot about..... oh, we knows him! lol.
August 27th, 2026 02:23
orchidee said:
I don\'t know that much about her. But I know a lot about..... oh, we knows him! lol.
August 27th, 2026 02:23
A Black Cloud
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this carries a lot of grit. There’s weariness, suspicion, and determination all moving together, and that gives the piece real bite. One heck of a write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 26th, 2026 14:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this carries a lot of grit. There’s weariness, suspicion, and determination all moving together, and that gives the piece real bite. One heck of a write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 26th, 2026 14:54
A Black Cloud
sorenbarrett said:
Where does caution end and paranoia begin is the question and in a world where everyone is out to get you the line becomes a difficult one to see. Well written Shaun
August 26th, 2026 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Where does caution end and paranoia begin is the question and in a world where everyone is out to get you the line becomes a difficult one to see. Well written Shaun
August 26th, 2026 04:11
A Black Cloud
orchidee said:
Good write Robert, erm, Shaun. lol. I\'m not Robert Langdon. I\'m, e.g. Eddie Taylor, that initialled guy in disguise (geddit? lol).
August 26th, 2026 02:19
orchidee said:
Good write Robert, erm, Shaun. lol. I\'m not Robert Langdon. I\'m, e.g. Eddie Taylor, that initialled guy in disguise (geddit? lol).
August 26th, 2026 02:19
Puppet Faces
sorenbarrett said:
A harsh attack at suspected abuse in the selection process. Nicely worded in rhyme. Well done Shaun
August 25th, 2026 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
A harsh attack at suspected abuse in the selection process. Nicely worded in rhyme. Well done Shaun
August 25th, 2026 04:40
Antipsychotics For 18 Months
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a raw and honest piece, my friend. You capture the brutal contradiction of receiving treatment only to feel increasingly disconnected from your own body and humanity. Having experienced that relentless leg agitation myself, this landed personally too. Powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 24th, 2026 08:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a raw and honest piece, my friend. You capture the brutal contradiction of receiving treatment only to feel increasingly disconnected from your own body and humanity. Having experienced that relentless leg agitation myself, this landed personally too. Powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 24th, 2026 08:06
Antipsychotics For 18 Months
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks to the side effects of medication and how sometimes the side effects can be more dangerous and worse than what they are treating. the marketing and greed of pharmacology. Well written
August 24th, 2026 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks to the side effects of medication and how sometimes the side effects can be more dangerous and worse than what they are treating. the marketing and greed of pharmacology. Well written
August 24th, 2026 04:42
Antipsychotics For 18 Months
orchidee said:
Good write SM. I only take tablets if I really need them. All have some side effects, I suppose, though they can have positive uses.
Does E.T. take any medications? Doh! I just had to say that. lol.
August 24th, 2026 02:25
orchidee said:
Good write SM. I only take tablets if I really need them. All have some side effects, I suppose, though they can have positive uses.
Does E.T. take any medications? Doh! I just had to say that. lol.
August 24th, 2026 02:25
Through The Eyes Of God
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this captures the anxiety many people carry when imagining how God regards them. For me, grace means that divine sight reaches beyond every failure and recognizes the whole person with mercy rather than disgust. Thought-provoking work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 12:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this captures the anxiety many people carry when imagining how God regards them. For me, grace means that divine sight reaches beyond every failure and recognizes the whole person with mercy rather than disgust. Thought-provoking work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 12:46
Through The Eyes Of God
Cheeky Missy said:
Psalm 139:1-4, \"O LORD, Thou hast searched me, and known me. Thou knowest my downsitting and mine uprising, Thou understandest my thought afar off. Thou compassest my path and my lying down, and art acquainted with all my ways. For there is not a word in my tongue, but, lo, O LORD, Thou knowest it altogether.\"
August 23rd, 2026 07:32
Cheeky Missy said:
Psalm 139:1-4, \"O LORD, Thou hast searched me, and known me. Thou knowest my downsitting and mine uprising, Thou understandest my thought afar off. Thou compassest my path and my lying down, and art acquainted with all my ways. For there is not a word in my tongue, but, lo, O LORD, Thou knowest it altogether.\"
August 23rd, 2026 07:32
Through The Eyes Of God
sorenbarrett said:
Behind this poem is an interesting philosophical point, if he does know all then my actions are predetermined and therefore I can not be held responsible for them since I have no choice. There fore a just God can not punish me for them. Otherwise he does not know what I will do and there for does not know all and is not God. A mind provoking read.
August 23rd, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Behind this poem is an interesting philosophical point, if he does know all then my actions are predetermined and therefore I can not be held responsible for them since I have no choice. There fore a just God can not punish me for them. Otherwise he does not know what I will do and there for does not know all and is not God. A mind provoking read.
August 23rd, 2026 04:19
Through The Eyes Of God
orchidee said:
E.T. knows just about everything! lol.
August 23rd, 2026 02:02
orchidee said:
E.T. knows just about everything! lol.
August 23rd, 2026 02:02
Hayden Panettiere
orchidee said:
It\'s sad in a way, yet often - who\'s got time for their antics? The ones that are alive, that is! Doh!
August 22nd, 2026 12:45
orchidee said:
It\'s sad in a way, yet often - who\'s got time for their antics? The ones that are alive, that is! Doh!
August 22nd, 2026 12:45
Hayden Panettiere
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayden deserved far better from an industry that placed her before cameras as a child, Shaun. That deserves serious examination. I’m not following the murder or ritual sacrifice angle; I simply don’t see evidence for that. Besides...tragedy, sin, and evil don’t need all of that to affect people in real time. Still, I’m glad you wrote about it, my friend, as her death has been weighing heavily on my heart...and I am certainly keeping her family and loved ones in my prayers. An awful tragedy. 😢🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 22nd, 2026 11:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hayden deserved far better from an industry that placed her before cameras as a child, Shaun. That deserves serious examination. I’m not following the murder or ritual sacrifice angle; I simply don’t see evidence for that. Besides...tragedy, sin, and evil don’t need all of that to affect people in real time. Still, I’m glad you wrote about it, my friend, as her death has been weighing heavily on my heart...and I am certainly keeping her family and loved ones in my prayers. An awful tragedy. 😢🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 22nd, 2026 11:13
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