Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
This Arrangement
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s a real urgency in this…like you’re trying to wake someone up mid-thought. The question about who benefits from distraction is what really stays with me…it opens the piece beyond itself. I’ve sat in that same tension before, between questioning and being told what’s true. You brought that to the surface here. Strong piece, Shaun. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 28th, 2026 06:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s a real urgency in this…like you’re trying to wake someone up mid-thought. The question about who benefits from distraction is what really stays with me…it opens the piece beyond itself. I’ve sat in that same tension before, between questioning and being told what’s true. You brought that to the surface here. Strong piece, Shaun. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 28th, 2026 06:07
This Arrangement
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic questions well asked. Motive is behind all behavior. Nicely written
April 28th, 2026 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic questions well asked. Motive is behind all behavior. Nicely written
April 28th, 2026 04:50
Nuka-Cola (A Fallout Poem)
NafisaSB said:
different from your usual verse - enjoyed it..
April 27th, 2026 07:08
NafisaSB said:
different from your usual verse - enjoyed it..
April 27th, 2026 07:08
Tock-Tick
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, that final clock line really sticks…there’s urgency in it, like everything you’re pointing at is speeding toward something unavoidable. That pressure carries. And yeah…ever notice patriarchal governments love large phallic symbols? 🤔 Strong finish. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 27th, 2026 06:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, that final clock line really sticks…there’s urgency in it, like everything you’re pointing at is speeding toward something unavoidable. That pressure carries. And yeah…ever notice patriarchal governments love large phallic symbols? 🤔 Strong finish. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 27th, 2026 06:10
Tock-Tick
sorenbarrett said:
A modern Nostradamus in a write of symbols well done
April 27th, 2026 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
A modern Nostradamus in a write of symbols well done
April 27th, 2026 04:59
Expedition 33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, that mention of Lumiere falling into something darker really sticks. It sets the tone right away…like the world itself is shifting under their feet. That detail gives everything weight. Beautifully done...both poem and video. Sounds like the game rocked too.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 26th, 2026 09:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, that mention of Lumiere falling into something darker really sticks. It sets the tone right away…like the world itself is shifting under their feet. That detail gives everything weight. Beautifully done...both poem and video. Sounds like the game rocked too.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 26th, 2026 09:17
Expedition 33
sorenbarrett said:
A gamer\'s poem with some rhyme that ties it together this pome has good flow
April 26th, 2026 06:28
sorenbarrett said:
A gamer\'s poem with some rhyme that ties it together this pome has good flow
April 26th, 2026 06:28
Too Much Alcohol Equals Demonic Possession
sorenbarrett said:
Nice rhyme and meter to this poem on temperance and well worded as well
April 25th, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Nice rhyme and meter to this poem on temperance and well worded as well
April 25th, 2026 04:19
Too Much Alcohol Equals Demonic Possession
orchidee said:
Good write SM. I can\'t say that looks like E.T. in that pic! heehee.
April 25th, 2026 02:43
orchidee said:
Good write SM. I can\'t say that looks like E.T. in that pic! heehee.
April 25th, 2026 02:43
Nuka-Cola (A Fallout Poem)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this carries that chaotic survival vibe with a wink…bartering, grinding, scraping by, all stitched together with those in-world details that make it click. It feels like a snapshot mid-journey, not polished, just real. This clicks. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 24th, 2026 12:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this carries that chaotic survival vibe with a wink…bartering, grinding, scraping by, all stitched together with those in-world details that make it click. It feels like a snapshot mid-journey, not polished, just real. This clicks. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 24th, 2026 12:26
Nuka-Cola (A Fallout Poem)
sorenbarrett said:
This is pop poetry at its best bright and boisterous with flash imagery and meter beat. Well done
April 24th, 2026 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
This is pop poetry at its best bright and boisterous with flash imagery and meter beat. Well done
April 24th, 2026 04:43
Working Up A Sweat
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Like \"Sweatin\' to the Oldies\". 🤣 RIP Richard. Shaun, this carries that everyday joy of movement and stepping away from the noise…trading traffic for something real and physical. That little humor at the end ties it together nicely. I’ve had those same moments…where the walk becomes the best part of the day. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 23rd, 2026 08:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Like \"Sweatin\' to the Oldies\". 🤣 RIP Richard. Shaun, this carries that everyday joy of movement and stepping away from the noise…trading traffic for something real and physical. That little humor at the end ties it together nicely. I’ve had those same moments…where the walk becomes the best part of the day. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 23rd, 2026 08:53
Working Up A Sweat
sorenbarrett said:
Shaun this poem is energized and activates the reader. Well done
April 23rd, 2026 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
Shaun this poem is energized and activates the reader. Well done
April 23rd, 2026 04:35
Life On Earth Is Such A Bloody Chore
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, Happy Earth (chore?) Day! 🤣😅 This has that raw, walking-through-it-all feeling…just going about your day while everything underneath is turning over. That Tesco scene stayed with me…simple on the surface, but there’s more going on. I’ve felt that kind of tension too. Strong, honest write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 22nd, 2026 09:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, Happy Earth (chore?) Day! 🤣😅 This has that raw, walking-through-it-all feeling…just going about your day while everything underneath is turning over. That Tesco scene stayed with me…simple on the surface, but there’s more going on. I’ve felt that kind of tension too. Strong, honest write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 22nd, 2026 09:18
Life On Earth Is Such A Bloody Chore
sorenbarrett said:
Now how did masonry get into this poem. A most interesting combination of an order and boredom. secrecy revealed. Nice
April 22nd, 2026 05:46
sorenbarrett said:
Now how did masonry get into this poem. A most interesting combination of an order and boredom. secrecy revealed. Nice
April 22nd, 2026 05:46
Life On Earth Is Such A Bloody Chore
orchidee said:
What\'s a chore and a bore to me, is the contestants on some shows, and the bit about their backgrounds, etc. They\'ll get their photo albums out next! lol.
April 22nd, 2026 03:09
orchidee said:
What\'s a chore and a bore to me, is the contestants on some shows, and the bit about their backgrounds, etc. They\'ll get their photo albums out next! lol.
April 22nd, 2026 03:09
Got Instrumentals
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this feels like a declaration…there’s that steady rhythm of pulling away from what drags you down while leaning into something higher and more intentional. It’s grounded but reaching at the same time, and that balance works. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 21st, 2026 09:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this feels like a declaration…there’s that steady rhythm of pulling away from what drags you down while leaning into something higher and more intentional. It’s grounded but reaching at the same time, and that balance works. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 21st, 2026 09:05
Got Instrumentals
sorenbarrett said:
Here the author breaks out the atmosphere and it is more party than not. Nicely written
April 21st, 2026 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
Here the author breaks out the atmosphere and it is more party than not. Nicely written
April 21st, 2026 04:46
On Edge (Never Good Enough)
NafisaSB said:
Agree with you. Some folks / bosses (maybe parents and teachers too) are hard to please
April 21st, 2026 03:55
NafisaSB said:
Agree with you. Some folks / bosses (maybe parents and teachers too) are hard to please
April 21st, 2026 03:55
Nick Cannon Questions Stories In The Bible
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this has a sharp, provocative edge to it…you’re clearly not holding back here. It comes through direct and unfiltered, which gives it a certain punch. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 20th, 2026 10:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shaun, this has a sharp, provocative edge to it…you’re clearly not holding back here. It comes through direct and unfiltered, which gives it a certain punch. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 20th, 2026 10:29
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