Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry



Belligerent Bullies On The School Bus
Parisab said:

I like the reference to the Lost Boys of the Peter Pan-Alas some never grew up

July 1st, 2023 01:07

Belligerent Bullies On The School Bus
L. B. Mek said:

\'trapped
in the world of the wilfully ignorant
where inconsideration is the most
prevalent
and kindness deemed an irrelevant
curse\'
(still we can but hope, dear poet
what a horrid experience
you had to live through
especially so young, crazy)

June 30th, 2023 06:43

Belligerent Bullies On The School Bus
orchidee said:

If it wasn\'t serious, that\'s one heck of a bad hair day in that pic! lol.

June 30th, 2023 04:34

Belligerent Bullies On The School Bus
Bobby O said:

Some grow out of it and some have set a pattern gif life. I couldn’t guess at the split with any accuracy. 70pct probably stay Jagoffs I think it’s worthwhile to get us all thinking about this. Nice Cool. Real nice

June 30th, 2023 03:34

996 BAPHOMET (AS ABOVE, SO BELOW)
2781 said:

Sharp eyed coolcuk

June 29th, 2023 05:44

996 BAPHOMET (AS ABOVE, SO BELOW)
orchidee said:

I don\'t know the fella. Does he look like a flying goat?! lol.
Some guy predicted his own death - then it happened. Doh! A dodgy path to travel.

June 29th, 2023 01:42

996 BAPHOMET (AS ABOVE, SO BELOW)
Bobby O said:

I loved this even though I’m a little slow with smart and the triangle reference. People should just call you cool!!

June 29th, 2023 01:33

The Imploding Submarine And Musk Vs Zuckerberg
2781 said:

Monkeys thrown nuts...love it.
Were they millionaires or billionaires?
I here say: \"who cares.\"

June 27th, 2023 06:25

Who Do You Believe In? (Stop Daydreamin\')
lostmoon said:

Materialism is so extreme nowadays, what exactly makes someone who has money qualified for respect? Often those are the people who are the most corrupt (though of course, not all rich people). And being grateful for what you have is a virtue, we shouldn\'t forget.

June 26th, 2023 08:14

Who Do You Believe In? (Stop Daydreamin\')
L. B. Mek said:

just sad,
from myth heroes
to greed\'s envoys
lacking so much awareness
because their world is now
luxury and excess
yet, they too once felt
the misery
of the mass unprivileged, forced
to watch-on
as the fortunate, callously
parade their indifference
to the suffering of the world
this isn\'t a culture, things
it\'s just the inhumanity of those
too self-evolved
to check themselves, and
surrounded by too many, pilfering
yes men
to get checked for their bull sht!

June 26th, 2023 04:35

Who Do You Believe In? (Stop Daydreamin\')
2781 said:

I might even get a Louis one day,
If I am a good boy!

June 26th, 2023 02:00

Who Do You Believe In? (Stop Daydreamin\')
2781 said:

I take hand me downs.
Dressed by the \"House of Dunn\" for the last 5 years.

June 26th, 2023 01:53

Who Do You Believe In? (Stop Daydreamin\')
orchidee said:

I bought a bag rom Poundland. It was very expensive, costing me £1. I could have got it cheaper from the 99p Shop! heehee. Call me Scrooge.

June 26th, 2023 01:33

The Unspeakable Truth (Magnifying Glass)
orchidee said:

If it wasn\'t such a serious subject, I would say - that\'s a bit drastic punishment - a bad hair day. Doh!

June 25th, 2023 01:33

The Unspeakable Truth (Magnifying Glass)
Goldfinch60 said:

I get very angry when children are hurt and abused, I want to see the perpetrators hung by their balls from a bridge and let the crows have them.

Andy

June 25th, 2023 01:30

Push On (Never Be Gone)
orchidee said:

I never met a talking monkey or ape - Planet of the Apes! lol.
Was we in that fil? Inside them ape costumes? heehee.

June 24th, 2023 11:27

Push On (Never Be Gone)
2781 said:

Or find safety under the wings.

June 24th, 2023 09:41

Push On (Never Be Gone)
Bobby O said:

Anything with indirect Grim Reaper Reference softly hits me like the summer wind , like faded kites

June 24th, 2023 03:20

Shitbag Sheep Won\'t Speak (Strengthen)
Bobby O said:

Too blinded by the pyramids peak… freaking cool and who wouldn’t be blinded , a fucking sharp ass triangular point perfectly designed to damage even a dinosaurs eye. I mean who could argue and who else could make that salient POINT. ??

June 23rd, 2023 14:07

Shitbag Sheep Won\'t Speak (Strengthen)
Jays said:

This could go hard as a rap

June 23rd, 2023 09:36

Shitbag Sheep Won\'t Speak (Strengthen)
orchidee said:

Who is this sheep? lol.

June 23rd, 2023 09:20

DEMOLITION MAN
orchidee said:

That\'s more than folk can bear - two episodes or more of The Brady Bunch. lol. And one episode leaves us mentally deranged.

June 22nd, 2023 05:16

The Army Of Darkness (Evil Dead 3)
orchidee said:

A bad hair day for some! lol.
I wish folk would use chain saws for proper purposes. Doh!

June 21st, 2023 02:17

Brightness Is Sure To Beckon
orchidee said:

I will help with the survey, but not after 11pm, as you say! lol.

June 19th, 2023 10:49

Brightness Is Sure To Beckon
L. B. Mek said:

some people fight to curate their reality
rest of us, realise early enough
better to invest in those dream
escapades...
what\'s the point of a heaven
for a child, which died
after a single breath of life
or another who was abused
till forced to take their own life
..
how about we shelve heaven
and settle for a reality
devoid of child cruelty!
for fck sake

June 19th, 2023 04:06

EMP TWP (Electromagnetic Pulse The Whole Planet)
orchidee said:

I feel the vibes .... far out, man! Or not so far, if it\'s our own planet! lol.

June 18th, 2023 07:23

Fake Chains
orchidee said:

I got special diamond-encrusted phone. It don\'t go \'ring ring\'. It goes \'bling bling\'! heehee.

June 17th, 2023 12:29

Legacies Ending In Flames (50 Years Of Hip-Hop)
Parisab said:

We have to keep the flames alive: thanks for giving props to some of the legends of the past hip-hop-‘mess with it … but don’t abuse it’ indeed, poet friend-I’m afraid most of the art form is ‘bougie’ now-I wonder what you think of what you think of my new publish here named Midlife Rap

June 16th, 2023 09:14

Legacies Ending In Flames (50 Years Of Hip-Hop)
L. B. Mek said:

when all the noise started this year
I was waiting, I knew you would deliver
off the fcking charts!
dear Rap-God poet, bars for days
best open a chain!
\'If hip-hop started out in the park
Why does every new MC look like a government narc?\'

\'I reach for my pad and begin to slowly jot
More complex rhymes than all the albums some dropped\'

\'At the very top who turned rap music pop
Execs dictating the future and it shows\'

still, while KRS, Talib, Raekwon, Nas
and the rest of Rap\'s true legits
draw breath, we can hope
they\'ll inspire a renaissance resurgence
cost contra \'esque\'!

June 16th, 2023 04:23

King Of Kings
orchidee said:

Will that be the penultimate doorbell I hear? Is that you at me front foor?! lol.

June 15th, 2023 01:57



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