Comments received on poems by Robert Isaacs Chiwala
Yet You Leave Again
Goldfinch60 said:
You must always follow your heart Robert it will not let you down.
Andy
August 7th, 2022 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
You must always follow your heart Robert it will not let you down.
Andy
August 7th, 2022 01:32
I Like Your Violence
L. B. Mek said:
\'Such bitterness can snare
Tomorrow\'s fate to be similar\'..
indeed, dear Poet
a lot of us, curate the troubles
waiting for us tomorrow
by stubbornly, refusing
to learn from our mistakes, today
all
because we assume, intimacy
means another
doing what we think they will do
every time, when
initially what attracted us, was how
that individual, acted
like
an individual..
August 4th, 2022 04:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'Such bitterness can snare
Tomorrow\'s fate to be similar\'..
indeed, dear Poet
a lot of us, curate the troubles
waiting for us tomorrow
by stubbornly, refusing
to learn from our mistakes, today
all
because we assume, intimacy
means another
doing what we think they will do
every time, when
initially what attracted us, was how
that individual, acted
like
an individual..
August 4th, 2022 04:05
I Never Left
L. B. Mek said:
it\'s too late for the dead
to write..
that\'s why what we do in life
is so important..
for these words have to be
woven into our actions and words
while alive..
(still
this could be comforting to read
for some)..
thanks for sharing
August 2nd, 2022 04:58
L. B. Mek said:
it\'s too late for the dead
to write..
that\'s why what we do in life
is so important..
for these words have to be
woven into our actions and words
while alive..
(still
this could be comforting to read
for some)..
thanks for sharing
August 2nd, 2022 04:58
She Is A Patient Woman
L. B. Mek said:
(unrequited love, takes immense patience
to transmute into a realised, requited
relationship;
and the lady\'s, those true strong ones
do it time-n-again)
while most, weak-willed men
simply jump from flavour to flavour
trying to escape the truth of their heart\'s
(a great read, so relatable
thanks for sharing)
August 1st, 2022 03:13
L. B. Mek said:
(unrequited love, takes immense patience
to transmute into a realised, requited
relationship;
and the lady\'s, those true strong ones
do it time-n-again)
while most, weak-willed men
simply jump from flavour to flavour
trying to escape the truth of their heart\'s
(a great read, so relatable
thanks for sharing)
August 1st, 2022 03:13
Love Aversion
L. B. Mek said:
I get it, \'you\' as in specific
to point it out, as in
only \'you, are my love aversion..\'
that\'s a healthy mindset, I think
not to carry over one relationship\'s
experience, into another
good or bad..
give each connection, a clean slate
a fair chance..
a good message
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 29th, 2022 03:51
L. B. Mek said:
I get it, \'you\' as in specific
to point it out, as in
only \'you, are my love aversion..\'
that\'s a healthy mindset, I think
not to carry over one relationship\'s
experience, into another
good or bad..
give each connection, a clean slate
a fair chance..
a good message
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 29th, 2022 03:51
Is It For Real
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, in the club
our innocent attraction
is warped into something predatory
and the smiles we think
we glimpse, at second glance
has a clownish taint to it..
which is why
dancing in daylight, and approaching
under the transparent sunshine
is the best way to go
if the feeling, is sincere...
lol
but what do I know!
a thought provoking read
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 28th, 2022 03:12
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, in the club
our innocent attraction
is warped into something predatory
and the smiles we think
we glimpse, at second glance
has a clownish taint to it..
which is why
dancing in daylight, and approaching
under the transparent sunshine
is the best way to go
if the feeling, is sincere...
lol
but what do I know!
a thought provoking read
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 28th, 2022 03:12
Is It For Real
evenwheniLie said:
Very poetic and filled with life experiences, very good.
July 28th, 2022 01:04
evenwheniLie said:
Very poetic and filled with life experiences, very good.
July 28th, 2022 01:04
Spring Of Love
L. B. Mek said:
dear poet
did you ever consider, as you searched
from one change of weather
to another
between the breeze, that foreshadows
a change in weather
maybe, you
and we, all
were too busy to hear, that whisper
guiding us, asking us to wait
stay
because love, itself
is on its way, to us...
lol
(have you seen a film called
\'sliding doors\'
if not, check it out
the theme of your poem
is so in sync, with the films
theme)
again, another lovely read
thank you! dear Poet
July 26th, 2022 04:04
L. B. Mek said:
dear poet
did you ever consider, as you searched
from one change of weather
to another
between the breeze, that foreshadows
a change in weather
maybe, you
and we, all
were too busy to hear, that whisper
guiding us, asking us to wait
stay
because love, itself
is on its way, to us...
lol
(have you seen a film called
\'sliding doors\'
if not, check it out
the theme of your poem
is so in sync, with the films
theme)
again, another lovely read
thank you! dear Poet
July 26th, 2022 04:04
True Love
L. B. Mek said:
\'So honesty is the love we share
That cannot be questionable, no secrets
Sometimes like a game truth or dare
Hope of tomorrow testing a life of no regrets\'..
a beautiful analogy, of how loyalty
is constructed and maintained
in an equal relationship..
(again, a lovely read
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
July 25th, 2022 04:16
L. B. Mek said:
\'So honesty is the love we share
That cannot be questionable, no secrets
Sometimes like a game truth or dare
Hope of tomorrow testing a life of no regrets\'..
a beautiful analogy, of how loyalty
is constructed and maintained
in an equal relationship..
(again, a lovely read
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
July 25th, 2022 04:16
Hold Me For Real
L. B. Mek said:
\'Let my head to lay on your breast
As my ears to your heart I lend\'..
listening, truly
is a key component of communication
and communication
is the anchor, to every
relationship..!
(48 to go
something, reassures me
they\'ll each be as good
as your first two
lol)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
July 22nd, 2022 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
\'Let my head to lay on your breast
As my ears to your heart I lend\'..
listening, truly
is a key component of communication
and communication
is the anchor, to every
relationship..!
(48 to go
something, reassures me
they\'ll each be as good
as your first two
lol)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
July 22nd, 2022 04:51
Beats From Eavesdropping Street
L. B. Mek said:
ok, i\'ll just assume
you\'ll be sharing those fifty poems
in the days to come
and this is merely your prologue
introduction, helping
to set the \'scene\'..
lol
thanks for sharing
(I champion your profession)
July 21st, 2022 02:02
L. B. Mek said:
ok, i\'ll just assume
you\'ll be sharing those fifty poems
in the days to come
and this is merely your prologue
introduction, helping
to set the \'scene\'..
lol
thanks for sharing
(I champion your profession)
July 21st, 2022 02:02
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