Comments received on poems by Jasmine Swift



Call Of A Small Town\'s Girl
Jerry Reynolds said:

\"Evil comes and goodness goes.
Forever, the river of tribulation flows.\" Love this line.

February 16th, 2024 09:57

How Am I To Trust?
Bobby O said:

I won’t actually ask but a certain question admittedly briefly crossed my mind.

May 27th, 2023 18:17

Just Friends
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

A lovely happy poem of love and comfort, superbly rhymed wow. Kudos!

Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

May 26th, 2023 12:15

Why Would A Mother Hate?
Ann33 said:

I hug you very much! Such experiences, despite they\'re tough, open a heart. That are for a reason. Lots of love to you! ❤️

April 23rd, 2023 16:31

Just Friends
Eileen Clark said:

Hi, I love this and I\'ve been there...often!

February 26th, 2023 15:21

Why Do You Go?
Ok Waleed said:

Thank you for sharing i enjoyed the rhymes

January 30th, 2023 01:40

Two Hearts, Two Homes
L. B. Mek said:

such warmth, lovely imagery
thanks for sharing

December 23rd, 2022 07:39

Two Hearts, Two Homes
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

‘ falling into a lavender haze ‘ lovely line and nice poem 🙂

December 23rd, 2022 01:55

I Stand For Everyone
LexiLou said:

I enjoyed this piece ! Great message !

August 12th, 2022 11:53

I Stand For Everyone
L. B. Mek said:

I echo everything, wise
Teddy.15 already said
thanks for sharing, great passion
good luck in life

August 12th, 2022 03:42

Why Would A Mother Hate?
L. B. Mek said:

\'What a mother could change, and a father could stay\'

\'I put my makeup on, and my heart on the shelf.\'
(there is so much, raw
unwavering passion, imbued
in this powerful write! it a credit
to the Fight, in You
and that wondrousness of life
where, out of so much strife
and hurt
can bud, a soul so - so
beautifully, adamant and fierce
a volition, so untameable & loud
it curates, Hope
out of ashes and broken promises!
it is a privilege
to read these war cry of a poem
stay Strong! dear Poet)
thank you!
for choosing to share your wonderful talent

August 8th, 2022 03:08

Why Would A Mother Hate?
jazzwa30 said:

great poem you allowed you reader to feel the hurt

August 7th, 2022 16:48