Comments received on poems by ironmaiden_81186
mother
mvvenkataraman said:
Dear respected ironmaiden_81186,
Your love for your mother is revealed
Here I understand your great anxiety
Of course, not seeing mother is tragic
I appeal to God to show you a way
Please find a way to meet her
At least once in a month dear
As mother only made us come
We must try to go very close
Your poem is indeed well-written
Depicting a mother's greatness
Thanks for this really touching one
May the Almighty do the needful.
With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly,
mvvenkataraman
November 16th, 2011 12:14
mvvenkataraman said:
Dear respected ironmaiden_81186,
Your love for your mother is revealed
Here I understand your great anxiety
Of course, not seeing mother is tragic
I appeal to God to show you a way
Please find a way to meet her
At least once in a month dear
As mother only made us come
We must try to go very close
Your poem is indeed well-written
Depicting a mother's greatness
Thanks for this really touching one
May the Almighty do the needful.
With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly,
mvvenkataraman
November 16th, 2011 12:14
mother
Anna said:
I'm so sorry you haven't been able to see your mum for eight months :( I hope you'll get the chance soon! Beautiful poem, by the way...!
July 29th, 2011 20:02
Anna said:
I'm so sorry you haven't been able to see your mum for eight months :( I hope you'll get the chance soon! Beautiful poem, by the way...!
July 29th, 2011 20:02
mother
ironmaiden_81186 said:
thank you for understanding the pain...thank you so very much
January 10th, 2011 09:43
ironmaiden_81186 said:
thank you for understanding the pain...thank you so very much
January 10th, 2011 09:43
mother
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. It is sweet....and a fascinating perspective on our relationships with our loving mothers. I am so very sorry you have to be away from yours....mine is my best friend and I get to see her daily, thankfully....it is as Isabella says, deep, and also bittersweet for its longing. It is so sad....I wish in vain to comfort you.
January 7th, 2011 22:45
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. It is sweet....and a fascinating perspective on our relationships with our loving mothers. I am so very sorry you have to be away from yours....mine is my best friend and I get to see her daily, thankfully....it is as Isabella says, deep, and also bittersweet for its longing. It is so sad....I wish in vain to comfort you.
January 7th, 2011 22:45
riverside luminance
ironmaiden_81186 said:
thanks you guys for the kind comments..
December 20th, 2010 02:47
ironmaiden_81186 said:
thanks you guys for the kind comments..
December 20th, 2010 02:47
riverside luminance
dbremner said:
Without any doubt top marks for this. The first line is an excellent line beginning an excellent poem.
December 19th, 2010 16:23
dbremner said:
Without any doubt top marks for this. The first line is an excellent line beginning an excellent poem.
December 19th, 2010 16:23
riverside luminance
Cheeky Missy said:
I like the picture and it fits nicely. You've well-described the delight "nature" offers to so many of us. We lose ourselves and griefs momentarily and breathe free. This is a very nice piece and well done. I enjoyed it!
December 19th, 2010 15:30
Cheeky Missy said:
I like the picture and it fits nicely. You've well-described the delight "nature" offers to so many of us. We lose ourselves and griefs momentarily and breathe free. This is a very nice piece and well done. I enjoyed it!
December 19th, 2010 15:30
back to times of splendor..
ironmaiden_81186 said:
thanks a lot both you guys....
December 19th, 2010 00:48
ironmaiden_81186 said:
thanks a lot both you guys....
December 19th, 2010 00:48
back to times of splendor..
dbremner said:
I like this poem a great deal. It is well written.
December 17th, 2010 15:30
dbremner said:
I like this poem a great deal. It is well written.
December 17th, 2010 15:30
back to times of splendor..
Cheeky Missy said:
Yeah, you, sometimes me, and how many others?! Those carefree days were sweet....and back then we didn't really know. All the things you expressed described those years nicely. I like this poem very well!
December 17th, 2010 12:15
Cheeky Missy said:
Yeah, you, sometimes me, and how many others?! Those carefree days were sweet....and back then we didn't really know. All the things you expressed described those years nicely. I like this poem very well!
December 17th, 2010 12:15
light up....
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, thank you very much for this piece! It is an interesting expose on an unknown (to wee me) world. Very fascinating.
December 16th, 2010 12:08
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, thank you very much for this piece! It is an interesting expose on an unknown (to wee me) world. Very fascinating.
December 16th, 2010 12:08
war pigs
ironmaiden_81186 said:
i know cheeky...it aint a good label, but as it turns out , these soldiers are treated just like that, like pawns in a game of chess......for a few political goals these soldiers are sacrificed...and so its sad and frustrating....
December 10th, 2010 00:15
ironmaiden_81186 said:
i know cheeky...it aint a good label, but as it turns out , these soldiers are treated just like that, like pawns in a game of chess......for a few political goals these soldiers are sacrificed...and so its sad and frustrating....
December 10th, 2010 00:15
labyrinth of a mind's eye
Anna said:
Mesmerizing... I can't say anything other than that... O.O
December 9th, 2010 15:50
Anna said:
Mesmerizing... I can't say anything other than that... O.O
December 9th, 2010 15:50
war pigs
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow, thank you very much for this tribute. It was a bit of an eye-opener. I wonder why they are "war pigs" though....it is not a nice label, nor laudable, you know?
December 9th, 2010 15:10
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow, thank you very much for this tribute. It was a bit of an eye-opener. I wonder why they are "war pigs" though....it is not a nice label, nor laudable, you know?
December 9th, 2010 15:10
WHO AM I ??
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting "reflection." The picture is excellently fitting. The contemplation is a fascinatingly sorrowful poetic meditation and assessment. And the question is echoed by so very many people.
December 4th, 2010 07:47
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting "reflection." The picture is excellently fitting. The contemplation is a fascinatingly sorrowful poetic meditation and assessment. And the question is echoed by so very many people.
December 4th, 2010 07:47
carpathian fog
Cheeky Missy said:
The picture sets the stage beautifully....and the poem is contemplatively fitting, yet with its delightful symbolism, intriguing. I read it now a couple times....I like it very well for its imagery and not making total sense of it, still catch a feel of something sorrowful and yet too vague to lay hold on, so like the mists integral to this piece. I like it very well!
December 2nd, 2010 12:36
Cheeky Missy said:
The picture sets the stage beautifully....and the poem is contemplatively fitting, yet with its delightful symbolism, intriguing. I read it now a couple times....I like it very well for its imagery and not making total sense of it, still catch a feel of something sorrowful and yet too vague to lay hold on, so like the mists integral to this piece. I like it very well!
December 2nd, 2010 12:36
labyrinth of a mind's eye
Cheeky Missy said:
I like this perspective on it. 'Tis a fascinating subject with all it variencies....ya, unexplainable, and perhaps largely directed by our deparately wicked deceitful hearts and therefore we cannot pin down the wherefore.
November 30th, 2010 09:21
Cheeky Missy said:
I like this perspective on it. 'Tis a fascinating subject with all it variencies....ya, unexplainable, and perhaps largely directed by our deparately wicked deceitful hearts and therefore we cannot pin down the wherefore.
November 30th, 2010 09:21
social anarchy
Cheeky Missy said:
I enjoyed how you presented it....very interesting and I think well put. Helpless and hopeless if this is all there is. I quite liked this piece.
November 29th, 2010 16:41
Cheeky Missy said:
I enjoyed how you presented it....very interesting and I think well put. Helpless and hopeless if this is all there is. I quite liked this piece.
November 29th, 2010 16:41
Draped in darkness
ironmaiden_81186 said:
hey...i don't know how it came in just one paragraph...
its structure is pretty much the same as in the rest of the poems that i ve posted
how to get it in that format...help me
neway thnx for the appreciation cheeky :)
November 22nd, 2010 08:54
ironmaiden_81186 said:
hey...i don't know how it came in just one paragraph...
its structure is pretty much the same as in the rest of the poems that i ve posted
how to get it in that format...help me
neway thnx for the appreciation cheeky :)
November 22nd, 2010 08:54
Draped in darkness
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting.....the symbolism you used is fascinating. "Love" is such a passionate thing, we can so easily be crushed or crush by our longings or those of our rejected would-be lovers. In light of all that, this is a good sorrowful portrait from the rejected lover.
November 22nd, 2010 08:51
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting.....the symbolism you used is fascinating. "Love" is such a passionate thing, we can so easily be crushed or crush by our longings or those of our rejected would-be lovers. In light of all that, this is a good sorrowful portrait from the rejected lover.
November 22nd, 2010 08:51
am I dead yet
ironmaiden_81186 said:
I knw cheeky...its meant to creep ppl out...:)
November 12th, 2010 10:15
ironmaiden_81186 said:
I knw cheeky...its meant to creep ppl out...:)
November 12th, 2010 10:15
am I dead yet
Cheeky Missy said:
I'll say, whoa, creepy!....of course, you know, folk can read deeper into it and come up with...?...I'd have to think awhile to figure out what the deeper meaning might be....
November 12th, 2010 09:10
Cheeky Missy said:
I'll say, whoa, creepy!....of course, you know, folk can read deeper into it and come up with...?...I'd have to think awhile to figure out what the deeper meaning might be....
November 12th, 2010 09:10
winter aurora
mikeal said:
beautiful reading it feels like i can see it truly smazing
November 11th, 2010 19:14
mikeal said:
beautiful reading it feels like i can see it truly smazing
November 11th, 2010 19:14
winter aurora
jvl narasimha rao said:
I love the poem for its beauty and rated it with a 10
JVL NARASIMHA RAO
November 11th, 2010 10:54
jvl narasimha rao said:
I love the poem for its beauty and rated it with a 10
JVL NARASIMHA RAO
November 11th, 2010 10:54
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