Comments received on poems by Gg_a_poet
I am human
Cassie58 said:
Sadly there are many out there who don’t value the important things. Just looking for kicks. You know that and have a wise head on young shoulders. Kick them in to touch. Someone worthwhile will no doubt sweep you off your feet in the future. Someone who loves your mind first. Your lines brought out the maternal in me.
January 17th, 2024 21:15
Cassie58 said:
Sadly there are many out there who don’t value the important things. Just looking for kicks. You know that and have a wise head on young shoulders. Kick them in to touch. Someone worthwhile will no doubt sweep you off your feet in the future. Someone who loves your mind first. Your lines brought out the maternal in me.
January 17th, 2024 21:15
She had to
Cherryz said:
i cannot describe how much i love this poem. Its so..real. I\'d love to read more, its really amazing!^^
January 7th, 2024 02:28
Cherryz said:
i cannot describe how much i love this poem. Its so..real. I\'d love to read more, its really amazing!^^
January 7th, 2024 02:28
She had to
Rocky Lagou said:
This poem is great. I love the parallelism and the contrasting ideas/emotions. This poem does a good job in capturing the complexity of love and heartbreak. Stay safe.
January 7th, 2024 01:27
Rocky Lagou said:
This poem is great. I love the parallelism and the contrasting ideas/emotions. This poem does a good job in capturing the complexity of love and heartbreak. Stay safe.
January 7th, 2024 01:27
A mask
vividvoid14 said:
The world may see a smile upon my face
Yet deep within, its turmoil I embrace . This words have me goosebumps you rlly are bright
January 6th, 2024 22:04
vividvoid14 said:
The world may see a smile upon my face
Yet deep within, its turmoil I embrace . This words have me goosebumps you rlly are bright
January 6th, 2024 22:04
Dear mom and dad
vividvoid14 said:
This is outstanding your words really hit me .10/10
January 6th, 2024 21:58
vividvoid14 said:
This is outstanding your words really hit me .10/10
January 6th, 2024 21:58
Unexpected love
novaa said:
Reminds one of a new and young love. Favorite lines: \'Like a whisper in the wind unseen
It sneaks up softly, Gentle and Serene\'.....loved the metaphor
October 16th, 2023 08:44
novaa said:
Reminds one of a new and young love. Favorite lines: \'Like a whisper in the wind unseen
It sneaks up softly, Gentle and Serene\'.....loved the metaphor
October 16th, 2023 08:44
Unexpected love
Pop64 said:
Sometimes it\'s that unexpected, never looking for, love that turns out to be the greatest of them all, as evident in this write. Sounds like you got it bad. Beautiful write.
October 16th, 2023 07:40
Pop64 said:
Sometimes it\'s that unexpected, never looking for, love that turns out to be the greatest of them all, as evident in this write. Sounds like you got it bad. Beautiful write.
October 16th, 2023 07:40
Heartbreak
Bobby O said:
Ooops. I didn’t realize you were so young. Sure can’t tell from your writes. Anyway, im sorry for the profs bc e word. I should be more careful. Please forgive??
August 14th, 2023 21:01
Bobby O said:
Ooops. I didn’t realize you were so young. Sure can’t tell from your writes. Anyway, im sorry for the profs bc e word. I should be more careful. Please forgive??
August 14th, 2023 21:01
Heartbreak
Bobby O said:
I love the last line. It’s perfect cuz I was drawn in by the situation described and feeling pathos through the journey and wondering a bit if the weight will make it tough for you to see an escape. But WHOA, worry not, that poem finished with proof you will feel but not be defeated cuz you did the perfect move, make it like he don’t matter. Period. Props!
August 14th, 2023 13:46
Bobby O said:
I love the last line. It’s perfect cuz I was drawn in by the situation described and feeling pathos through the journey and wondering a bit if the weight will make it tough for you to see an escape. But WHOA, worry not, that poem finished with proof you will feel but not be defeated cuz you did the perfect move, make it like he don’t matter. Period. Props!
August 14th, 2023 13:46
Depression
ForeverAbi said:
Absolutely love this poem. It\'s so intricately written and gives the read a glimpse of hope. Keep writing. : )
March 23rd, 2023 15:25
ForeverAbi said:
Absolutely love this poem. It\'s so intricately written and gives the read a glimpse of hope. Keep writing. : )
March 23rd, 2023 15:25
Dear mom and dad
Gg_a_poet said:
this was an assignment i had to do i was suposed to write a letter but i decided to write a poem
February 16th, 2023 22:19
Gg_a_poet said:
this was an assignment i had to do i was suposed to write a letter but i decided to write a poem
February 16th, 2023 22:19
Blind
mvvenkataraman said:
I read the poem fully,
In this world, none loves,
Mercy is totally absent,
People love only ragging,
They are fascinated by it,
So, we must cautiously move,
And we can surely gain peace,
By staying calm with prayers,
We must overcome fear wisely
And recover to be ever happy,
I understand your feelings!
February 2nd, 2023 06:55
mvvenkataraman said:
I read the poem fully,
In this world, none loves,
Mercy is totally absent,
People love only ragging,
They are fascinated by it,
So, we must cautiously move,
And we can surely gain peace,
By staying calm with prayers,
We must overcome fear wisely
And recover to be ever happy,
I understand your feelings!
February 2nd, 2023 06:55
Blind
mvvenkataraman said:
Nice couplet of course,
Could have been given
In an acceptable format
As that would surely
Increase its beauty
To induce all to read,
Nice rhyme scheme!
February 2nd, 2023 06:51
mvvenkataraman said:
Nice couplet of course,
Could have been given
In an acceptable format
As that would surely
Increase its beauty
To induce all to read,
Nice rhyme scheme!
February 2nd, 2023 06:51
