Comments received on poems by 2781



Hmm
Neville said:



I am curious, why is this marked for the eyes of those who have attained the age of eighteen years or more .. many thanks in anticipation of a speedy resolve to my curiosity .. Neville

November 28th, 2024 08:06

Bold
arqios said:

And that wisdom can’t be conjured up but received!

November 27th, 2024 15:00

Hmm
sorenbarrett said:

The most interesting poem that is black and white, just like the print on the page. Nicely stated.

November 27th, 2024 08:11

Hmm
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 26th, 2024 10:42

Pulling strings
sorenbarrett said:

This sounds reminiscent of a second coming. It has religious overtones and feels almost scriptural.

November 25th, 2024 15:53

Roller coaster
sorenbarrett said:

Nostalgic memories of old parks frequented in my youth

November 25th, 2024 04:56

Roller coaster
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Excellent poem. I’ve heard about your lows on tbe rollercoaster, and I know I am not a fan of my lows, they indeed scare the shit out of me. This poem captured that brilliantly. The entire poem
Feels like a rollercoaster ride and the message well-delivered! 👏🌹❤️

November 24th, 2024 15:38

Give me
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 23rd, 2024 11:56

Give me
arqios said:

The things we go through to accomplish a gesture! This would make a perfect short film for Tropfest!

November 23rd, 2024 08:31

Who gives
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful.

November 22nd, 2024 15:22

Who gives
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 22nd, 2024 13:47

Who gives
arqios said:

Songs in the night brings visions of chains scaling off and prison walls and bars disintegrating. Thanks for the uplift!

November 22nd, 2024 08:48

What good
rin said:

There\'s your shape in the emptiness
There is a shape of you outside of my empty heart
When people see you, they say it looks like you
The shape that I don\'t understand is
Looks like an alien
Looks like a saint
It\'s like a god
It\'s like a devil
No one really knows

November 21st, 2024 07:18

What good
arqios said:

Appears on the surface to observe a superficiality of societal norms and the lack of genuine glory or purpose in the prescribed roles and actions. There is a palpable frustration with the monotony and the futility of being \"spoon-fed\" stories and routines that lack substance or deliverance. But the change we see in ourselves- the you in me, may just be the turn around point for each individual whole and the world entire.

November 21st, 2024 06:50

What good
sorenbarrett said:

Porn of hopelessness and regret I feel sadness here

November 21st, 2024 04:23

See
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous truth.

November 18th, 2024 16:10

Seven
NafisaSB said:

good and knowledgeable post - got to know some more items associated with the number

November 18th, 2024 08:45

See
Tristan Robert Lange said:

That is a fact. Well done, friend! Truth!

November 18th, 2024 08:09

See
arqios said:

Sobering thoughts on reality splayed openly.

November 18th, 2024 07:00

See
sorenbarrett said:

Church not the evening not judged. A good message sent her and agreed to.

November 18th, 2024 05:43

Seven
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Truthfully, the most beautiful expression of seven and God\'s glory I\'ve read on this side of the Bible! Well done friend! An instant fave! ✝️🐑

November 17th, 2024 16:24

Seven
sorenbarrett said:

Seven days in a week, seven always a lucky number. A most fun read

November 17th, 2024 06:32

Seven
Maplespal said:

7 is a movie released in 1995 featuring Brad Pitt.

November 17th, 2024 06:19

Seven
arqios said:

Utter completion, ultimate comprehensiveness, when the time of the given is complete…. Oh what a reckoning and resolution there shall be!

November 17th, 2024 05:51

Power
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 16th, 2024 12:42

Power
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Indeed, words hold much power and careful tongues are needed in using words. Great write
Friend. Very wise, indeed! Well done! 👏🌹🖤❤️🖤

November 16th, 2024 11:26

Power
sorenbarrett said:

In the beginning was the word and the word was God. The word has more power than most grant. Good write

November 16th, 2024 08:52

Power
arqios said:

Idle power, the workhouse of the power of the devil.

November 16th, 2024 07:14

Power
Doggerel Dave said:

With you at \"Money is power, wealth a defence\". After that I was a little lost....

Felt it though....

November 16th, 2024 05:07

Dippy slip
Cheeky Missy said:

This is charming on the surface, yet so true and heartbreaking, I maunt but resonate, feebly. Very beautifully rendered with such perfect poignancy and imagery. Thank you muchly for sharing.

November 14th, 2024 02:17



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