Comments received on poems by 2781



Pretension
David Wakeling said:

This raises the ultimate doubt we all live with.Made me think.Well done.

June 20th, 2024 17:38

Briers and thorns
Thad Wilk said:

Awesome penning!
Very evocative and
thought provoking. 🤔
Great rhyme, flow
and blend, much enjoyed. 👍
Best regards. ✌️. Thad

June 20th, 2024 16:18

Pretension
sorenbarrett said:

If it doesn\'t ask for money it\'s your friend. Good write

June 20th, 2024 13:33

The child
2781 said:

My wife lives in hope.

June 20th, 2024 10:03

Redemption call
Thad Wilk said:

A captivating
poem indeed! 👍
Great rhyme
and flow,
way to go.
Thanks for
sharing
my pleasure
to read!
Best regards, ✌️
Thad

June 20th, 2024 09:18

Redemption call
Goldfinch60 said:

May we all go on to eternity 2781.

Andy

June 20th, 2024 01:26

Redemption call
orchidee said:

Good write 2.

June 19th, 2024 11:30

Redemption call
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful.

June 19th, 2024 10:05

Redemption call
2781 said:

Much more subtle, Lie suspect.

June 19th, 2024 06:27

Redemption call
sorenbarrett said:

Redemption to buy back. A ransom paid. The question being how was it lost, stolen or kidnaped?

June 19th, 2024 06:02

Redemption call
2781 said:

I am definitely the first!

June 19th, 2024 05:42

Redemption call
Alan R said:

Simple yet profound!

June 19th, 2024 05:37

The child
Goldfinch60 said:

We can often return to those things we enjoyed in our previous lives 2781.

Andy

June 19th, 2024 01:12

The child
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work.

June 18th, 2024 15:05

The child
Tony36 said:

Beautiful write

June 18th, 2024 08:54

The child
NafisaSB said:

lovely poem. like the conversion bit - one enjoys life when young, then realizes what life could mean; and the turnabout occurs - mostly gradually or through a life changing event - inspired poetry

June 18th, 2024 08:27

Starlink
sorenbarrett said:

I feel the pain and can identify with promises made that sometimes come through but more often not. Then try to get your money back.

June 18th, 2024 08:10

Briers and thorns
sorenbarrett said:

Some see briars and thorns other see butter and honey it depends on who you are and how you see it. Good write Valianstar

June 18th, 2024 04:33

Briers and thorns
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent. Truth.

June 17th, 2024 10:11

Briers and thorns
orchidee said:

Good write 2.

June 17th, 2024 09:47

Swords and spears
orchidee said:

Doh! What am I going to plow with? I beat my plowshare into a sword.
And what am I going to prune with? I beat my pruning hook into a spear!
I\'m a confused laddie. lol.

June 16th, 2024 11:08

Swords and spears
Neville said:



while sticks and stones may break my bones but words will ne\'er harm me ..

June 16th, 2024 06:58

Swords and spears
sorenbarrett said:

\"Hear a little
Their a little
The little understand...\"
A great play on the language as the Sumerians did who started the image of man being created from the rib of Enki.
Indeed \"hear a little\" and from the little understand Good write with hidden meaning.

June 16th, 2024 06:53

Hmm
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write 2781, did you have too much wine that night. LOL

Andy

June 16th, 2024 01:13

Hmm
2781 said:

Thanks, but is should have been it!

June 15th, 2024 21:11

Hmm
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

June 15th, 2024 20:58

Hmm
orchidee said:

Well, I\'m not often me. Who am I? lol.

June 15th, 2024 09:29

Hmm
sorenbarrett said:

A write I could identify with since when I looked at my listing on the net I found another\'s face in place of mine. Stolen identity at another level.
Good write my friend

June 15th, 2024 08:29

Hmm
Tony36 said:

Great write

June 15th, 2024 07:14

River
2781 said:

It\'s an interpretation of the final chapter.

June 14th, 2024 10:13



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