Comments received on poems by 2781
Beggars
Neville said:
I work with many individual who have for various reasons fallen upon hard time .. fortunes can come and go in the blink of an eye .. I never judge .. no one ever sets out to become homeless, penniless or addicted to anything .. I think sorenbarrett sums it all up well in his earlier review .. a real good poem too .. Neville
August 4th, 2024 13:18
Neville said:
I work with many individual who have for various reasons fallen upon hard time .. fortunes can come and go in the blink of an eye .. I never judge .. no one ever sets out to become homeless, penniless or addicted to anything .. I think sorenbarrett sums it all up well in his earlier review .. a real good poem too .. Neville
August 4th, 2024 13:18
Beggars
Bella Shepard said:
We tend to judge a book by its cover all too often, never realizing the story that lies within, and everyone\'s life is a story. Good write!
August 4th, 2024 11:52
Bella Shepard said:
We tend to judge a book by its cover all too often, never realizing the story that lies within, and everyone\'s life is a story. Good write!
August 4th, 2024 11:52
Beggars
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message in this poem. So many judge the poor and unfortunate thinking it is their fault or that they could do better. Many are mentally ill, addicts and orphans uneducated and their but for the grace of God go I.
August 4th, 2024 06:27
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message in this poem. So many judge the poor and unfortunate thinking it is their fault or that they could do better. Many are mentally ill, addicts and orphans uneducated and their but for the grace of God go I.
August 4th, 2024 06:27
Twisted
Cassie58 said:
The opening ceremony of the games certainly caused controversy. It seems to have offended so many! I found the whole thing weird. A topical write. Happy Saturday.
August 3rd, 2024 08:52
Cassie58 said:
The opening ceremony of the games certainly caused controversy. It seems to have offended so many! I found the whole thing weird. A topical write. Happy Saturday.
August 3rd, 2024 08:52
Twisted
sorenbarrett said:
Sad when any group of people single out another group for any reason
August 3rd, 2024 08:50
sorenbarrett said:
Sad when any group of people single out another group for any reason
August 3rd, 2024 08:50
Middle feast
Bella Shepard said:
Hopefully the day will come when we may love all, and accept responsibility for what we do. In that instance, I think the creator, whatever ever your belief, will be very proud of us. A fine write my friend!
August 2nd, 2024 09:17
Bella Shepard said:
Hopefully the day will come when we may love all, and accept responsibility for what we do. In that instance, I think the creator, whatever ever your belief, will be very proud of us. A fine write my friend!
August 2nd, 2024 09:17
Middle feast
Goldfinch60 said:
Man is the problem but I was always told that god would sort it out and bring peace to our world, if that is the case where is he/she!!
Andy
August 2nd, 2024 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Man is the problem but I was always told that god would sort it out and bring peace to our world, if that is the case where is he/she!!
Andy
August 2nd, 2024 01:43
Middle feast
sorenbarrett said:
Taking this from a different view I see man as bringing on his own defeat. Nicely written with rhyme.
August 1st, 2024 07:40
sorenbarrett said:
Taking this from a different view I see man as bringing on his own defeat. Nicely written with rhyme.
August 1st, 2024 07:40
Middle feast
Neville said:
I am obviously of a different faith but admire your beliefs & respect many of them also .. Neville
August 1st, 2024 06:58
Neville said:
I am obviously of a different faith but admire your beliefs & respect many of them also .. Neville
August 1st, 2024 06:58
My people
sorenbarrett said:
Armageddon you say? A powerful peace of death and destruction. Well written
July 29th, 2024 10:04
sorenbarrett said:
Armageddon you say? A powerful peace of death and destruction. Well written
July 29th, 2024 10:04
Ceremony
bongobenny said:
Love your work here… the horsemen, gotta be careful. Their crossiants are to dine for.
July 28th, 2024 06:54
bongobenny said:
Love your work here… the horsemen, gotta be careful. Their crossiants are to dine for.
July 28th, 2024 06:54
Scriptures
Mutley Ravishes said:
J.R.R Tolkien knew that an ancient civilization made war on The Creator. And went down. Here we go again! Oh well…
July 28th, 2024 04:48
Mutley Ravishes said:
J.R.R Tolkien knew that an ancient civilization made war on The Creator. And went down. Here we go again! Oh well…
July 28th, 2024 04:48
Ceremony
Dan Williams said:
OK, you stumped me with \"obsurite\" and \"SOLENNITE\" on the way to a great read. And yes, out of 341,814,420 we get these. How sad.
July 28th, 2024 00:26
Dan Williams said:
OK, you stumped me with \"obsurite\" and \"SOLENNITE\" on the way to a great read. And yes, out of 341,814,420 we get these. How sad.
July 28th, 2024 00:26
Ceremony
orchidee said:
It was me sank the Titanic. The real story is that I made a hole of the bottom before it set off! lol.
July 27th, 2024 09:04
orchidee said:
It was me sank the Titanic. The real story is that I made a hole of the bottom before it set off! lol.
July 27th, 2024 09:04
Ceremony
sorenbarrett said:
\"If USA could find four hundred and fifty, they could call elite..
How come they could only find two loonies for the presidential seat?
Just my final word with the lighting of the flame,
Reminded me of the Hindenburg.
My wife thinks I\'m insane.\"
This stanza or two made me laugh and that is the mark of greatness. Loved it.
July 27th, 2024 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
\"If USA could find four hundred and fifty, they could call elite..
How come they could only find two loonies for the presidential seat?
Just my final word with the lighting of the flame,
Reminded me of the Hindenburg.
My wife thinks I\'m insane.\"
This stanza or two made me laugh and that is the mark of greatness. Loved it.
July 27th, 2024 06:21
Unoriginal
Doggerel Dave said:
Well, if an old joke , I\'ve never heard it before....so I\'ve got to keep on living...there\'s more to learn yet....
...and I did get a good laugh even as the impropriety ........
July 25th, 2024 08:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Well, if an old joke , I\'ve never heard it before....so I\'ve got to keep on living...there\'s more to learn yet....
...and I did get a good laugh even as the impropriety ........
July 25th, 2024 08:31
Unoriginal
sorenbarrett said:
A most fun read with a great punch line or hook. Well done
July 25th, 2024 05:59
sorenbarrett said:
A most fun read with a great punch line or hook. Well done
July 25th, 2024 05:59
Generational
Bella Shepard said:
You state beautifully, with this wonderful metaphor of seed and generation, that we are the product of those who came before, and what should be our commitment to those who will come after. Excellent poem!!
July 24th, 2024 12:44
Bella Shepard said:
You state beautifully, with this wonderful metaphor of seed and generation, that we are the product of those who came before, and what should be our commitment to those who will come after. Excellent poem!!
July 24th, 2024 12:44
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