Comments received on poems by 2781



River
sorenbarrett said:

Many biblical references here (the river, tree of life, fruit, God as light)I always thought it interesting that Alpha and Omega are Greek terms not Hebrew. A nice flow to this piece.

June 14th, 2024 09:52

River
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

June 14th, 2024 07:49

River
Manslick said:

Can\'t get here fast enough for me.
Nice poem.

June 14th, 2024 06:17

River
orchidee said:

Hope I don\'t forget the river is in the middle of the street and fall in it! Will there be bridges? lol.

June 14th, 2024 04:18

Donkey
Thomas W Case said:

Tongue and cheek and powerful.

June 13th, 2024 11:22

Donkey
orchidee said:

A prayer book had a typo - what is a \'convenant\'?! Spell-checker don\'t like it. lol.

June 12th, 2024 04:01

Relations
Doggerel Dave said:

Depends on whether he feels under any obligation to \'strengthen relations\'.



June 11th, 2024 06:25

Science
Goldfinch60 said:

God isn\'t science either 2781.

Andy

June 10th, 2024 01:41

Science
Doggerel Dave said:

I wouldn\'t call it controversial........ Not going to respond in any depth.... just don\'t put science and God ( if you have to believe in such) in opposition - they are not mutually exclusive.

June 9th, 2024 19:46

Science
orchidee said:

If grain by grain, they will find out in about 500 million years! lol.

June 9th, 2024 13:14

Science
Sunita said:

Interesting topic, very well written!

June 9th, 2024 13:00

Starlink
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

June 9th, 2024 10:34

Starlink
2781 said:

There is NBN but not reliable enough, so they say.

June 8th, 2024 09:19

Starlink
Doggerel Dave said:

Wot no NBN?
Sounds like a painful business all round.

June 8th, 2024 07:51

Companion
Goldfinch60 said:

Another good time in your life 2781, keep it going.

Andy

June 7th, 2024 01:14

Companion
peto said:

Always enjoy a good rhyme
And this is a very good rhyme

June 6th, 2024 12:15

Companion
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful.

June 6th, 2024 07:37

Moving forward
Goldfinch60 said:

Always one step at a time will take us on the journey to glory 2781.

Andy

June 6th, 2024 01:41

Moving forward
Manslick said:

lovely

June 5th, 2024 06:22

Moving forward
orchidee said:

Now - I wondered why I wasn\'t getting far. I was walking backwards! lol.

June 5th, 2024 02:17

Fentanyl
Neville said:


when used correctly & in the write hands, it can be a life saver .. sadly tho\' it is also very much and easily abused .. this must be one of your best to date .. Neville

June 5th, 2024 01:55

Productivity
Neville said:



simple and very much to the point ..

June 5th, 2024 01:53

Productivity
Goldfinch60 said:

We are all allegedly learning each day 2781.

Andy

June 5th, 2024 01:25

Productivity
2781 said:

It seems to me that the system has created a society that doesn\'t really want to work, and then complain about falling productivity. It\'s hard to find anyone to move a brick, and AI can\'t help, as far as I can see.

June 4th, 2024 16:42

Productivity
sorenbarrett said:

Thought provoking. If productivity is the ultimate goal the there should be unlimited production from no effort and cutting costs in man power is part of the answer the next step is cutting the cost of AI itself and eliminating it as well.

June 4th, 2024 12:56

Productivity
orchidee said:

We\'ve all sorts of stuff in the UK, in the lead-up to a General Election in early July.
Is it as the papers say? Balderdash, rubbish, garbage, all sorts of spoutings, none of it true?

June 4th, 2024 09:48

Productivity
Thomas W Case said:

AI freaks me out. Good work. Powerful.

June 4th, 2024 09:39

Productivity
Cassie58 said:

All in the name of profit. We live in a greedy world. Enjoyed the brevity.

June 4th, 2024 06:41

Fentanyl
Thomas W Case said:

Wow. You paint this picture well. Powerful work.

June 3rd, 2024 04:10

Fentanyl
orchidee said:

Who is fentanyl? (lol).

June 3rd, 2024 04:09



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