Comments received on poems by 2781



The sword
orchidee said:

Meanwhile - I feared under the sword of Damocles (do you know the guy? lol). Thankfully it was blunt! heehee.

August 8th, 2024 02:01

The sword
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words 2781 but there appears to be nobody who can save the world.

Andy

August 8th, 2024 01:48

The sword
Mutley Ravishes said:

How strange to be alive
As the Iron Age slides
Into……?!

August 7th, 2024 23:41

The sword
ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ said:

Great job

August 7th, 2024 19:59

The sword
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

August 7th, 2024 19:09

The sword
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting write thought provoking.

August 7th, 2024 18:22

Polarisation
Goldfinch60 said:

Maybe those bats are more intelligent than those ruining (running) the world 2781.

Andy

August 7th, 2024 01:21

Forever living
Thad Wilk said:

Awesome poem,
a captivating write! ✍️ 👍
Great rhyme, rhythm
and flow AND
a treat to recite!! ✌️
Best regards Thad

August 6th, 2024 19:25

Forever living
orchidee said:

And yet if a church is dull, we may feel like shouting out \'Anyone alive in \'ere?!\' lol.

August 6th, 2024 07:24

Forever living
sorenbarrett said:

Liked the playfulness of the rhyme in this piece. It carried me on to the end like a wave.

August 6th, 2024 05:31

Polarisation
Neville said:


I think its a negatively happening world at the moment and an increasingly dodgy place to live ..

August 5th, 2024 13:35

Polarisation
sorenbarrett said:

Politics always an amusing fight between left and right. Nicely done

August 5th, 2024 07:18

Beggars
Neville said:


I work with many individual who have for various reasons fallen upon hard time .. fortunes can come and go in the blink of an eye .. I never judge .. no one ever sets out to become homeless, penniless or addicted to anything .. I think sorenbarrett sums it all up well in his earlier review .. a real good poem too .. Neville

August 4th, 2024 13:18

Beggars
Bella Shepard said:

We tend to judge a book by its cover all too often, never realizing the story that lies within, and everyone\'s life is a story. Good write!

August 4th, 2024 11:52

Beggars
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful message in this poem. So many judge the poor and unfortunate thinking it is their fault or that they could do better. Many are mentally ill, addicts and orphans uneducated and their but for the grace of God go I.

August 4th, 2024 06:27

Twisted
Cassie58 said:

The opening ceremony of the games certainly caused controversy. It seems to have offended so many! I found the whole thing weird. A topical write. Happy Saturday.

August 3rd, 2024 08:52

Twisted
sorenbarrett said:

Sad when any group of people single out another group for any reason

August 3rd, 2024 08:50

Middle feast
Bella Shepard said:

Hopefully the day will come when we may love all, and accept responsibility for what we do. In that instance, I think the creator, whatever ever your belief, will be very proud of us. A fine write my friend!

August 2nd, 2024 09:17

Middle feast
Goldfinch60 said:

Man is the problem but I was always told that god would sort it out and bring peace to our world, if that is the case where is he/she!!

Andy

August 2nd, 2024 01:43

Middle feast
orchidee said:

You know old Jehoshaphat? heehee.

August 1st, 2024 14:17

Middle feast
sorenbarrett said:

Taking this from a different view I see man as bringing on his own defeat. Nicely written with rhyme.

August 1st, 2024 07:40

Middle feast
Neville said:


I am obviously of a different faith but admire your beliefs & respect many of them also .. Neville

August 1st, 2024 06:58

How to
sorenbarrett said:

A call to God and for people to seek him

July 31st, 2024 06:25

So what
orchidee said:

A fine write 2.

July 30th, 2024 08:54

So what
bongobenny said:

There’s no high like the most high

July 30th, 2024 07:34

So what
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of faith and belief. Nicely written

July 30th, 2024 06:23

My people
sorenbarrett said:

Armageddon you say? A powerful peace of death and destruction. Well written

July 29th, 2024 10:04

My people
Mutley Ravishes said:

The iron age is melting. Thank God!

July 29th, 2024 07:44

Ceremony
bongobenny said:

Love your work here… the horsemen, gotta be careful. Their crossiants are to dine for.

July 28th, 2024 06:54

Scriptures
sorenbarrett said:

A fun read of prophesies of things to come. Nice

July 28th, 2024 06:00



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