Comments received on poems by 2781



Something
orchidee said:

Now me next poem - \'Something Else\'. lol

January 6th, 2024 03:05

Recipe
arqios said:

Yum! The poetry of the culinary experience is hard to compete with!

January 5th, 2024 18:45

Recipe
orchidee said:

Can I pop round for dinner 2?

January 5th, 2024 02:49

Plunder
sorenbarrett said:

Karma? What goes around comes around. This seems old testament the new would be turn the other cheek. Nice

January 4th, 2024 06:23

Plunder
arqios said:

Of the promise of old the Emmanuel is the one to Whom we flee…

January 4th, 2024 06:23

Plunder
orchidee said:

Good write 2.

January 4th, 2024 02:07

I am
orchidee said:

Good write 2.
My next poem is the gramatically incorrect poem: \'I Is\'. heehee.

January 3rd, 2024 03:08

I think
arqios said:

Happy new year mate!

January 2nd, 2024 09:44

I think
Neville said:


Sounds like either
1) A plan
2) An excuse to get stoned
3) An advertisement for an Israeli open-bolt, blowback-operated submachine gun

Neville

January 2nd, 2024 05:05

I think
2781 said:

I suppose it depends on if we\'re cornered

January 2nd, 2024 03:50

I think
orchidee said:

I\'m in a cage. I\'m a wild beast - or just a pussy cat?! lol.

January 2nd, 2024 03:18

Not
Neville said:


This is very Masonic if you don\'t mind me saying so .. and was also very much enjoyed .. 👁️ Neville


January 1st, 2024 10:12

Not
sorenbarrett said:

Seven a magical number like three, eleven and twenty two. I take it there is a good deal of symbolism here. The Mason\'s tool of the plumb, the mention of stone foundation, olive branches for peace. Then there is the balance between good and evil but not heaven or hell. Nice

January 1st, 2024 09:02

Not
orchidee said:

Good write 2.
You missed out some words in the title? - in brackets here: [To be or] not [to be]? lol.

January 1st, 2024 08:44

To be
orchidee said:

Good write 2.
A somewhat unoriginal joke from me now follows: \'Now, me next poem will of course be entitled, ....or not to be!\' lol.


December 31st, 2023 07:47

Horns
2781 said:

Not yet

December 30th, 2023 10:48

Repair
sorenbarrett said:

The national anthem of most nations. But it may go deeper as a metaphor for people as well. Nicely done.

December 30th, 2023 10:34

Repair
orchidee said:

Good write 2.

December 30th, 2023 08:46

Repair
Cassie58 said:

Oh yes, the foundations need a great deal of attention for sure. Meaningful poetry. Well penned.

December 30th, 2023 06:57

Repair
Neville said:



excellent ink and so very well spilt

December 30th, 2023 05:06

Laces
2781 said:

When I was attempting to join I wanted to call myself a name but got rejected so I tried the numbers and \"bingo.\"
I was in.


December 29th, 2023 10:53

Laces
orchidee said:

Good write 2.
You promoted to 2780 yet, if number 0001 is the top?! lol.

December 29th, 2023 10:47

Raise
Neville said:


got my foot tapping on its own accord ..

December 29th, 2023 09:13

Raise
sorenbarrett said:

This prayer or poem, which ever you wish, is a plea for acceptance and recognition well written.

December 28th, 2023 09:04

Raise
orchidee said:

Well, it fits to 9.6.6. 6.6.9. if I amended line 2 of stanza 1, which has 8 syllables at present.
But it\'s a tricky one - I can\'t think of any hymns with that meter.

December 28th, 2023 03:00

Raise
orchidee said:

This feels liek it could be set to a hymn-tune. Shall I, if one comes to mind?
Maybe it\'s an 8.8.8.8. or a 3.8.5.6. or 32.34.95.68. or summat like that. Depends how many syllables in each line.

December 28th, 2023 02:58

Horns
Bobby O said:

It’s historical and timely and mysterious ??

December 27th, 2023 23:56

Horns
orchidee said:

Good write 2.

December 27th, 2023 12:53

Get it
Accidental Poet said:

Very well put 2781.

December 27th, 2023 11:58

Horns
Neville said:

Sadly this could very easily apply to the dreadful things that are being allowed to happen in Gaza .. a timely and most impressive poem indeed .. Neville

December 27th, 2023 08:55



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