Comments received on poems by 2781



Puzzle
Goldfinch60 said:

Once you awake from that sleep 2781 all wilbe in place again.

Andy

May 18th, 2024 00:57

Tentacles
Goldfinch60 said:

Indeed 2781, when will it end.

Andy

May 17th, 2024 01:13

Tentacles
Doggerel Dave said:

Good write - the structure and rhyme does it for me as does the message. But forget the \'we\' will ya......

May 16th, 2024 20:06

Tentacles
2781 said:

It a bizarre thing, evil kills evil.
He\'s very clever.

May 16th, 2024 09:19

Tentacles
orchidee said:

Yes, the Psalmists seems to \'rant\' in places. But evil has to be overcome for good to triumph.

May 16th, 2024 09:11

Tentacles
2781 said:

If we were to judge ourselves we wouldn\'t be judged.


May 16th, 2024 06:12

Tentacles
sorenbarrett said:

So it appears. When we look for the cause we only need to look in a mirror. A most poignant write done with power in rhyme

May 16th, 2024 06:10

Wimps
Neville said:



I suggest you get a new inbox and some disinfectant wipes

May 14th, 2024 09:52

Dilly-dally
Goldfinch60 said:

Dilly dally all the way 2781, we will make it in the end\'

Andy

May 14th, 2024 01:22

Dilly-dally
Thomas W Case said:

Good stuff. Relatable.

May 13th, 2024 10:40

Dilly-dally
2781 said:

Yes, and others that rhyme with it.....

May 13th, 2024 08:16

Dilly-dally
orchidee said:

A bit of procrasti-wotsit there. Oh, I can\'t say very long words. lol.

May 13th, 2024 07:47

Dilly-dally
sorenbarrett said:

Been there done that. I can feel this one as if it were a mirror and a reflection within. Putting off things I think we all do at times. A most fun read.

May 13th, 2024 03:56

Ten days
Neville said:


I stopped by because these words looked downcast and lonely

May 13th, 2024 02:42

Scribble
Goldfinch60 said:

This does happen sometimes but it will come back 2781\'

Andy

May 13th, 2024 01:10

Scribble
Neville said:



that\'s just the way it is sometimes

May 12th, 2024 15:53

Scribble
orchidee said:

Good write 2.

May 12th, 2024 13:49

Scribble
sorenbarrett said:

Been there and probably will be there again. Liked the playfulness of this piece.

May 12th, 2024 11:11

Scribble
Thomas W Case said:

Intriguing.

May 12th, 2024 11:04

Life after death
orchidee said:

I blame you there for producing \'Neighbours\' and inflicting it on the UK\'. lol. There\'s no one alive in that - they\'re all made of wood - wooden acting. lol.

May 11th, 2024 09:42

Life after death
Lorenz said:

Is there a death before life ?

May 11th, 2024 09:17

Life after death
2781 said:

That\'s a problem. we set our expectations way to low.

May 11th, 2024 05:54

Life after death
Neville said:



I shall keep an open mind for the time being but would like to come back as me again, but taller ..


May 11th, 2024 05:45

What\'s it
Goldfinch60 said:

Good question 2781 it is like the question I often ask \"What if....?\"

Andy

May 11th, 2024 01:16

Death spiral
Mutley Ravishes said:

The iron age is trial and a half isn\'t it?!
The struggle not to identify with the fear. I\'m working on changing the gears of imagination.
Wishing you all the best.

May 10th, 2024 07:07

Death spiral
sorenbarrett said:

I like the feel of spiraling out of control in this poem and subject. More than anything I like the way it is left at the end, being our choice.

May 10th, 2024 01:55

Death spiral
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful writing.

May 9th, 2024 20:22

Death spiral
Neville said:



I am a great believer in what will be will be

May 9th, 2024 11:18

Death spiral
Lorenz said:

Blessed be you cursed !

May 9th, 2024 10:04

Two who
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

May 8th, 2024 09:17



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