Comments received on poems by 2781



Hmm
sorenbarrett said:

The most interesting poem that is black and white, just like the print on the page. Nicely stated.

November 27th, 2024 08:11

Hmm
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 26th, 2024 10:42

Pulling strings
sorenbarrett said:

This sounds reminiscent of a second coming. It has religious overtones and feels almost scriptural.

November 25th, 2024 15:53

Roller coaster
sorenbarrett said:

Nostalgic memories of old parks frequented in my youth

November 25th, 2024 04:56

Roller coaster
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Excellent poem. I’ve heard about your lows on tbe rollercoaster, and I know I am not a fan of my lows, they indeed scare the shit out of me. This poem captured that brilliantly. The entire poem
Feels like a rollercoaster ride and the message well-delivered! 👏🌹❤️

November 24th, 2024 15:38

Give me
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 23rd, 2024 11:56

Give me
arqios said:

The things we go through to accomplish a gesture! This would make a perfect short film for Tropfest!

November 23rd, 2024 08:31

Who gives
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful.

November 22nd, 2024 15:22

Who gives
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 22nd, 2024 13:47

Who gives
arqios said:

Songs in the night brings visions of chains scaling off and prison walls and bars disintegrating. Thanks for the uplift!

November 22nd, 2024 08:48

What good
rin said:

There\'s your shape in the emptiness
There is a shape of you outside of my empty heart
When people see you, they say it looks like you
The shape that I don\'t understand is
Looks like an alien
Looks like a saint
It\'s like a god
It\'s like a devil
No one really knows

November 21st, 2024 07:18

What good
arqios said:

Appears on the surface to observe a superficiality of societal norms and the lack of genuine glory or purpose in the prescribed roles and actions. There is a palpable frustration with the monotony and the futility of being \"spoon-fed\" stories and routines that lack substance or deliverance. But the change we see in ourselves- the you in me, may just be the turn around point for each individual whole and the world entire.

November 21st, 2024 06:50

What good
sorenbarrett said:

Porn of hopelessness and regret I feel sadness here

November 21st, 2024 04:23

See
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous truth.

November 18th, 2024 16:10

Seven
NafisaSB said:

good and knowledgeable post - got to know some more items associated with the number

November 18th, 2024 08:45

See
Tristan Robert Lange said:

That is a fact. Well done, friend! Truth!

November 18th, 2024 08:09

See
arqios said:

Sobering thoughts on reality splayed openly.

November 18th, 2024 07:00

See
sorenbarrett said:

Church not the evening not judged. A good message sent her and agreed to.

November 18th, 2024 05:43

Seven
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Truthfully, the most beautiful expression of seven and God\'s glory I\'ve read on this side of the Bible! Well done friend! An instant fave! ✝️🐑

November 17th, 2024 16:24

Seven
sorenbarrett said:

Seven days in a week, seven always a lucky number. A most fun read

November 17th, 2024 06:32

Seven
Maplespal said:

7 is a movie released in 1995 featuring Brad Pitt.

November 17th, 2024 06:19

Seven
arqios said:

Utter completion, ultimate comprehensiveness, when the time of the given is complete…. Oh what a reckoning and resolution there shall be!

November 17th, 2024 05:51

Power
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 16th, 2024 12:42

Power
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Indeed, words hold much power and careful tongues are needed in using words. Great write
Friend. Very wise, indeed! Well done! 👏🌹🖤❤️🖤

November 16th, 2024 11:26

Power
sorenbarrett said:

In the beginning was the word and the word was God. The word has more power than most grant. Good write

November 16th, 2024 08:52

Power
arqios said:

Idle power, the workhouse of the power of the devil.

November 16th, 2024 07:14

Power
Doggerel Dave said:

With you at \"Money is power, wealth a defence\". After that I was a little lost....

Felt it though....

November 16th, 2024 05:07

Dippy slip
Cheeky Missy said:

This is charming on the surface, yet so true and heartbreaking, I maunt but resonate, feebly. Very beautifully rendered with such perfect poignancy and imagery. Thank you muchly for sharing.

November 14th, 2024 02:17

Run around
Cheeky Missy said:

You\'ve lost me somewhere in the translation, the beauty of its rendering rather captivating as the lines trip down the page, tantalizing. Intriguing, and vaguely elusive. Thank you for sharing.

November 14th, 2024 02:02

Dippy slip
sorenbarrett said:

A poem asking for help from a higher power. The sense of needing greater strength than that contained within. Nicely written in poetic form.

November 12th, 2024 14:41



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