Comments received on poems by 2781
Not
orchidee said:
Good write 2.
You missed out some words in the title? - in brackets here: [To be or] not [to be]? lol.
January 1st, 2024 08:44
orchidee said:
Good write 2.
You missed out some words in the title? - in brackets here: [To be or] not [to be]? lol.
January 1st, 2024 08:44
To be
orchidee said:
Good write 2.
A somewhat unoriginal joke from me now follows: \'Now, me next poem will of course be entitled, ....or not to be!\' lol.
December 31st, 2023 07:47
orchidee said:
Good write 2.
A somewhat unoriginal joke from me now follows: \'Now, me next poem will of course be entitled, ....or not to be!\' lol.
December 31st, 2023 07:47
Repair
sorenbarrett said:
The national anthem of most nations. But it may go deeper as a metaphor for people as well. Nicely done.
December 30th, 2023 10:34
sorenbarrett said:
The national anthem of most nations. But it may go deeper as a metaphor for people as well. Nicely done.
December 30th, 2023 10:34
Repair
Cassie58 said:
Oh yes, the foundations need a great deal of attention for sure. Meaningful poetry. Well penned.
December 30th, 2023 06:57
Cassie58 said:
Oh yes, the foundations need a great deal of attention for sure. Meaningful poetry. Well penned.
December 30th, 2023 06:57
Laces
2781 said:
When I was attempting to join I wanted to call myself a name but got rejected so I tried the numbers and \"bingo.\"
I was in.
December 29th, 2023 10:53
2781 said:
When I was attempting to join I wanted to call myself a name but got rejected so I tried the numbers and \"bingo.\"
I was in.
December 29th, 2023 10:53
Laces
orchidee said:
Good write 2.
You promoted to 2780 yet, if number 0001 is the top?! lol.
December 29th, 2023 10:47
orchidee said:
Good write 2.
You promoted to 2780 yet, if number 0001 is the top?! lol.
December 29th, 2023 10:47
Raise
sorenbarrett said:
This prayer or poem, which ever you wish, is a plea for acceptance and recognition well written.
December 28th, 2023 09:04
sorenbarrett said:
This prayer or poem, which ever you wish, is a plea for acceptance and recognition well written.
December 28th, 2023 09:04
Raise
orchidee said:
Well, it fits to 9.6.6. 6.6.9. if I amended line 2 of stanza 1, which has 8 syllables at present.
But it\'s a tricky one - I can\'t think of any hymns with that meter.
December 28th, 2023 03:00
orchidee said:
Well, it fits to 9.6.6. 6.6.9. if I amended line 2 of stanza 1, which has 8 syllables at present.
But it\'s a tricky one - I can\'t think of any hymns with that meter.
December 28th, 2023 03:00
Raise
orchidee said:
This feels liek it could be set to a hymn-tune. Shall I, if one comes to mind?
Maybe it\'s an 8.8.8.8. or a 3.8.5.6. or 32.34.95.68. or summat like that. Depends how many syllables in each line.
December 28th, 2023 02:58
orchidee said:
This feels liek it could be set to a hymn-tune. Shall I, if one comes to mind?
Maybe it\'s an 8.8.8.8. or a 3.8.5.6. or 32.34.95.68. or summat like that. Depends how many syllables in each line.
December 28th, 2023 02:58
Horns
Neville said:
Sadly this could very easily apply to the dreadful things that are being allowed to happen in Gaza .. a timely and most impressive poem indeed .. Neville
December 27th, 2023 08:55
Neville said:
Sadly this could very easily apply to the dreadful things that are being allowed to happen in Gaza .. a timely and most impressive poem indeed .. Neville
December 27th, 2023 08:55
Law
2781 said:
As the song goes-Ooh baby do you know what that\'s worth?
Ooh, heaven is a place on earth
They say in heaven, love comes first
We\'ll make heaven a place on earth...
December 23rd, 2023 13:39
2781 said:
As the song goes-Ooh baby do you know what that\'s worth?
Ooh, heaven is a place on earth
They say in heaven, love comes first
We\'ll make heaven a place on earth...
December 23rd, 2023 13:39
Law
orchidee said:
That day(s) will only surely come in Heaven/Paradise! Laws are needed for now. Though it could be \'now\', where God\'s will is done, and His kingdom is coming, in areas, situations, etc on this earth.
December 23rd, 2023 09:46
orchidee said:
That day(s) will only surely come in Heaven/Paradise! Laws are needed for now. Though it could be \'now\', where God\'s will is done, and His kingdom is coming, in areas, situations, etc on this earth.
December 23rd, 2023 09:46
In the
orchidee said:
Some titles for books of the Bible may seem unoriginal, taken from the first couple of words at the beginning, e.g. translating to, e.g. \'And then.....\', or \'The words that....\', etc.
December 22nd, 2023 03:06
orchidee said:
Some titles for books of the Bible may seem unoriginal, taken from the first couple of words at the beginning, e.g. translating to, e.g. \'And then.....\', or \'The words that....\', etc.
December 22nd, 2023 03:06
In the
orchidee said:
Good write 2.
My next poem will be \'Not in the\'. lol.
December 22nd, 2023 03:04
orchidee said:
Good write 2.
My next poem will be \'Not in the\'. lol.
December 22nd, 2023 03:04
In the
Cassie58 said:
When the world is topsy turvey, having a strong faith must be helpful. I am envious at times of those who have strong beliefs. A meaningful write here.
December 22nd, 2023 01:53
Cassie58 said:
When the world is topsy turvey, having a strong faith must be helpful. I am envious at times of those who have strong beliefs. A meaningful write here.
December 22nd, 2023 01:53
Many
Nicholas Browning said:
Very good! A quick punch to the face never hurt anyone. (Saying I was punched, for clarity\'s sake lmao)
December 21st, 2023 09:34
Nicholas Browning said:
Very good! A quick punch to the face never hurt anyone. (Saying I was punched, for clarity\'s sake lmao)
December 21st, 2023 09:34
Many
orchidee said:
Can ya guess the tile of my next poem, inspired by this one? It\'s ....... \'Few!\' lol.
December 21st, 2023 03:10
orchidee said:
Can ya guess the tile of my next poem, inspired by this one? It\'s ....... \'Few!\' lol.
December 21st, 2023 03:10
So much
orchidee said:
Good write 2, hope you\'re not too long blue - that rhymes there! lol.
December 20th, 2023 03:05
orchidee said:
Good write 2, hope you\'re not too long blue - that rhymes there! lol.
December 20th, 2023 03:05
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