Comments received on poems by 2781



She
Dan Williams said:

I have to presume you are Bob. Very nice.

August 13th, 2024 00:33

Look
sorenbarrett said:

A most comforting thought put to rhyme. Nicely done.

August 12th, 2024 05:58

She
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous.

August 11th, 2024 10:26

She
Thoughtless said:

We never know who we\'ll find will be our strength.

August 11th, 2024 10:01

She
Tony36 said:

Love it

August 11th, 2024 09:42

She
sorenbarrett said:

Quite a tribute and well put in words. Nicely done

August 11th, 2024 09:31

The spirit
hannahrei said:

My favourite!

August 11th, 2024 02:23

The spirit
Goldfinch60 said:

My Spirit will go onto eternity 2781.

Andy

August 11th, 2024 01:36

The spirit
orchidee said:

Now my next poem: The Whisky (a spirit). lol.

August 10th, 2024 12:06

The spirit
Bella Shepard said:

Beautifully said dear poet, we should nurture and love the spirit in all of us.

August 10th, 2024 09:47

The spirit
sorenbarrett said:

Well defined. The spirit nicely explained.

August 10th, 2024 09:05

Wilma!
Goldfinch60 said:

Great fun write 2781.

Andy

August 10th, 2024 01:15

Numbers
sorenbarrett said:

Numbers, numerology, all have meaning to some: one creation, two evil, three the trinity, four elements and directions, five feminine, six a double three twice the trinity, seven one of luck and on and on till 22 the master magician double 11 Then there are just us obsessive counters. a fun write my friend.

August 9th, 2024 11:40

Try
sorenbarrett said:

A cover by Bob Dylan Jokerman comes through. Love music too, it brightens the day and can set any mood. Loved the poem that also brightens the day. Nicely done

August 9th, 2024 05:44

Try
Mutley Ravishes said:

I am glad
The Shepherd is
Slightly mad

August 9th, 2024 05:43

Wilma!
sorenbarrett said:

A most fun read with some play on words in this poem. Loved it

August 9th, 2024 05:13

Wilma!
Cassie58 said:

You know I loved the Flintstones. Your final line is ace. Much enjoyed. Happy Friday.

August 9th, 2024 03:03

Try
orchidee said:

Baaa! But not Baah humbug!

August 9th, 2024 02:33

The sword
orchidee said:

Meanwhile - I feared under the sword of Damocles (do you know the guy? lol). Thankfully it was blunt! heehee.

August 8th, 2024 02:01

The sword
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words 2781 but there appears to be nobody who can save the world.

Andy

August 8th, 2024 01:48

The sword
Mutley Ravishes said:

How strange to be alive
As the Iron Age slides
Into……?!

August 7th, 2024 23:41

The sword
Mackenz said:

Great job

August 7th, 2024 19:59

The sword
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

August 7th, 2024 19:09

The sword
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting write thought provoking.

August 7th, 2024 18:22

Polarisation
Goldfinch60 said:

Maybe those bats are more intelligent than those ruining (running) the world 2781.

Andy

August 7th, 2024 01:21

Forever living
Thad Wilk said:

Awesome poem,
a captivating write! ✍️ 👍
Great rhyme, rhythm
and flow AND
a treat to recite!! ✌️
Best regards Thad

August 6th, 2024 19:25

Forever living
orchidee said:

And yet if a church is dull, we may feel like shouting out \'Anyone alive in \'ere?!\' lol.

August 6th, 2024 07:24

Forever living
sorenbarrett said:

Liked the playfulness of the rhyme in this piece. It carried me on to the end like a wave.

August 6th, 2024 05:31

Polarisation
Neville said:


I think its a negatively happening world at the moment and an increasingly dodgy place to live ..

August 5th, 2024 13:35

Polarisation
sorenbarrett said:

Politics always an amusing fight between left and right. Nicely done

August 5th, 2024 07:18



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