Comments received on poems by 2781



Generational
Bella Shepard said:

You state beautifully, with this wonderful metaphor of seed and generation, that we are the product of those who came before, and what should be our commitment to those who will come after. Excellent poem!!

July 24th, 2024 12:44

Generational
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

July 24th, 2024 07:08

Generational
sorenbarrett said:

Grist for the mill. Good write

July 24th, 2024 06:46

Where is it?
sorenbarrett said:

Hope no one plants any bombs there. Good write my friend

July 24th, 2024 05:44

Where is it?
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes it is within our hearts 2781.

Andy

July 24th, 2024 01:51

Where is it?
sorenbarrett said:

Good question it surely has little peace.

July 23rd, 2024 05:51

Where is it?
orchidee said:

It comes down from heaven. Hope no bricks fall on your head when it arrives! lol.

July 23rd, 2024 03:17

Batteries
Neville said:



You just hit the proverbial nail squarely on its proverbial head ..

July 23rd, 2024 02:05

Batteries
Goldfinch60 said:

Such very true words 2781, nothing seems to be repairable these days,

Andy

July 23rd, 2024 01:49

Batteries
Bella Shepard said:

Honest, to the point and oh so true. Cheers to you, so well done!

July 22nd, 2024 13:52

Batteries
Doggerel Dave said:

I cannot find anything to add to that. Great summary of the shit values which control our lives.

July 22nd, 2024 06:57

Do I
Goldfinch60 said:

True words 2781.

Andy

July 22nd, 2024 01:20

Do I
Bella Shepard said:

Making sense of anything is a 50/50 shot, do we trust ourselves to choose wisely. Wonderfully described, thoughtfully written!

July 21st, 2024 15:23

Do I
sorenbarrett said:

So true it is all about you. A great message. Loved it.

July 21st, 2024 13:11

What\'s up doc
Thad Wilk said:


I agree with
what Neville said too! 😁
Great brevity
much enjoyed thank you!
Best regards ✌️. Thad

July 21st, 2024 10:01

Numbers
Goldfinch60 said:

Numbers can rule our lives 2781 but at my age they are not so important.

Andy

July 20th, 2024 01:22

Is anybody out there?
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write 2781 showing that life may be OK in the end.

Andy

July 20th, 2024 01:08

Is anybody out there?
Dan Williams said:

I\'m going to presume you are at least reacting to screwed up politics in this country. If so, may I add, how sad is it that of the more thana billion people in this land. this is the choice we get. Oh, woe is us. Nice work.

July 19th, 2024 23:49

Is anybody out there?
Bella Shepard said:

I think you have tapped succinctly into the mood of the many. Kudos for saying it.

July 19th, 2024 13:54

Is anybody out there?
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

July 19th, 2024 09:54

Is anybody out there?
Weep little lion girl said:

The way you use your imagery is incredible. and I love the combination of religious imagery and modern politics!

July 19th, 2024 07:50

Is anybody out there?
Doggerel Dave said:

I can easily read that without religious connotations; and having read can leave satisfied.

July 19th, 2024 07:47

Is anybody out there?
sorenbarrett said:

A fun write merging todays politics with religious belief. Nicely done

July 19th, 2024 05:15

Is anybody out there?
orchidee said:

Boo! I\'m easy to find! I hang around like a bad - penny, apple, smell... or whatever?

July 19th, 2024 04:09

The gospel according to Paul
Cassie58 said:

You know I was very pleasantly surprised by this write. The title had me thinking something else altogether. Sounds like the show was a very enjoyable experience. Pleased I stopped by.

July 18th, 2024 10:26

The gospel according to Paul
sorenbarrett said:

Loved the story in this. Yes I\'m a softy for ballads or stories. A most fun read.

July 18th, 2024 05:51

The gospel according to Paul
Doggerel Dave said:

Two points: I very nearly gave this a miss because I’ve been dealing with Orchi and had enough of biblical references for one day. Glad I didn’t.
I missed the show, which was disappointing, but since I know the scene character and place very well, it was very rich for me.
Thanks for that.


July 18th, 2024 02:47

The gospel according to Paul
orchidee said:

Godo write 2. Spotted me in this.
Ahh, a terrible singer then, but good words?! lol

July 18th, 2024 01:44

Hope
Goldfinch60 said:

The people in their high castles do not care for others 2781.

Andy

July 17th, 2024 01:46

Hope
orchidee said:

I\'ve not seen a lot of moles, bats, or rats lately!

July 16th, 2024 14:55



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